I won this book through a goodreads contest. This book is very readable; good descriptions that evoke a clear sense of time and setting. There is potential for this to be a good book. That is the best thing I can say about it.
I generally like books that cover 2 or more generations as you get to see what effects the choices of the parents and grandparents have on the children. I do wish that the author had added more depth or detail in certain places and made the book longer. I didn't like the transitions from this being a story about Hannah, then a story about Sofie, and finally a story about Madeleine. I think that the story would benefit from keeping each character's depth even when the focus of the story changes generations.
I liked Hannah and felt empathy for her when the story was about her. But when the focus changed to Sophie, Hannah became a flat character who was mean and bitter. I lost all feeling of connection with her. And the same with Sophie. She changed from a woman who wanted to make sure her children never felt as unloved, as she did while growing up, into an unfeeling mother. Maybe some self awareness on her part would have helped - such as showing that she knew she was turning into her mother, but felt powerless to stop because she was so overwhelmed by children, business, and her husband's depression. All of those circumstances were written about, but I wanted to see Sophie as being more in tune with what was happening. It became hard to relate to her.
I never connected with the Madeleine part of the book. Maybe because I thought her character would follow the same path of being relatable only to turn into a caricature. The best part of the Madeleine story was when she was a child, but I was surprised that there wasn't really any mention of how she was affected by Adam trying to drown her or all of the other things he probably did to her. There could be an entire book written just about the family dynamics of those 4 children.
And I was unhappy with the ending. I must admit that I like happy endings and unhappy endings that make you think. Again, I think this part sounded like an entire book should be written about it instead of it being the ending to this story. I wanted the children to meet Ellen and tie up some loose ends. Instead this is a new loose end.
A few small items that caused me to lose my reading flow: Chapter 34 - Sophie and Connie go to visit Dotty and Ruby. Then suddenly it is Dotty waiting with Sophie for the other girls to meet them at the train station. Then Ruby and Dotty get out of the car and run up to the waiting girls... When they arrive at Dotty's and Ruby's room it is Sophie and Dotty that have to drape their clothes over the desks. Poor Connie got forgotten and Dotty had to play the part of two girls.
Part Three, with its super short chapters and almost a timeline synopsis felt rushed, like the author had lost any passion for the book and was rushing to just get it done and over.
I am hoping this book is still a work in progress and a new, improved version will come out.