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Vampire Soul #1

Midnight Customer

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Long cold nights working at a trucker's diner makes sassy waitress Misty pine for something more. She gets her wish when rumors spread about strange creatures seen in the night, and one of the regular diners tells her a haunting story.

Misty offers to help him, and before she knows it one trouble leads to another and she's entwined in a web of death and undeath. The undeath is a handsome and mysterious stranger, and the death might be her own. She'll have to use all her wits to get her out of this mess, and with most of her blood intact.

Check out the other books in the series:
Midnight Customer
Trouble For Two: Coming soon!

64 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 16, 2015

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Mac Flynn

343 books287 followers
A seductress of sensual words and a lover of paranormal plots, Mac enjoys writing thrilling paranormal stories filled with naughty fun and hilarious hijinks. She is the author of numerous paranormal series that weave suspense, adventure and a good joke into a one-of-a-kind experience that readers are guaranteed to enjoy. From long adventure novels to tasty little short-story treats, there’s a size and adventure for everyone.

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Profile Image for Jennie Damron.
656 reviews78 followers
June 11, 2018
Ok

The story was entertaining and I loved Misty. She is tough, sassy, but has heart. I didn't enjoy the errors in editing that made some of the reading experience a bit tedious. All in all I liked the story.
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1,502 reviews59 followers
April 5, 2018
I really really loved this book. It was very edgy.
Profile Image for Katherine.
952 reviews179 followers
December 15, 2021
I loved this book. It was fabulous. When I first started it was slow and felt a little bit dragged but then it became quite hilarious.

Misty, a sassy,funny and fluent in sarcasm was a waitress in a diner. Her shift mostly consists of serving truckers and listening to their nonstop chatter about strange happenings.
And when a vampire needs her help to protect a mysterious box all she wants to do is douse herself in garlic and run as far as possible from the dark and alluring Roland who happens to be the most charming and polite vampire. That box was an object of treasure for all vampires but it contained something that solely belonged to Roland.

Midnight Customer is the first book in the series. I really liked Misty, her thoughts and the way she evaluate her emotions verbally made me laugh like mad. I love when the character have a sarcastic look/approach towards every situation no matter how serious or dangerous it appears. It was definitely one of the good humorous read and I'll pick it up for a reread soon.😀
Profile Image for Bonnie Drummond.
921 reviews19 followers
November 16, 2020
I really like reading short Paranormal Mysteries but I have to say this series has me intrigued in the way Mac Flynn pulls you into the story. I was chilled by the first couple of pages as the mystery slowly starts to unfold and as all the characters you feel like you are really there in that trucker dive of a restaurant and at the apartment and at the old house were the vampire sleeps. What got me is how the Vampire pleas for help from a frightened truck driver that wants no part in it at all to a gutsy waitress that will help said Vampire to protect the one thing that means so much to the Vampire and that other bad Night Creatures want it just as badly. Question: How Will They Both Keep this BOX THING PROTECTED and stay safe them selves.
Profile Image for Denise Weldon-siviy.
378 reviews6 followers
February 23, 2017
Short but satisfying

Very nice witty bite-size vampire story. Pun completely intended.

I look forward to reading the next installment. Off to download it now.
Profile Image for J. Kahele.
Author 15 books439 followers
September 26, 2015
I sure hope there is more

Misty works nights as a waitress at a restaurant. While working her shift she sees one of her regular customers, sitting quieter than usually and naturally she asks him, why he is so quiet. He explains a story about a man that visited his semi truck while he was sleeping and how the man kept knocking asking to come in.
After hearing other customers telling stories about a mysterious man, who at night was visiting houses, scratching and knocking on windows, she becomes suspicious after Charlie's story. The one thing Charlie did not do was lie. Who was this man?

I really like Misty. She was very funny and the way she talked and acted made her real to life.
Profile Image for Crystal.
1,098 reviews28 followers
January 1, 2018
Good vampire story without a bite. This was my first story by this author and I admit, I want more. Misty is the overnight waitress at the local truck stop. One night, she notices that one of the regulars just isn’t acting like himself. After hearing his tale, she invites him back to her place so that he can get some sleep. It seems that he’d been visited one night while he was sleeping in his semi and hasn’t been able to sleep since.
In her second story apartment that night, Misty and Charlie are visited by a vampire looking in her window. Being the smart woman she is, she did not invite him in. The story only gets more interesting from that point.
The characters are all personable, even the curmudgeon of a boss, Ralph. You’ve got both good and bad characters and they are play their part well. I can’t wait to read the next book!!
Profile Image for Anuj.
6 reviews7 followers
December 27, 2017
It deserves 2.5 stars out of the 5. The word "quipped" is used too many times in the book, that made it a really annoying reading experience. It contains some very good humor in it. The premise of the series seems good but the female protagonist (waitress) sometimes went too overboard in supplying of her witty remarks to the text.
Profile Image for Amanda.
924 reviews4 followers
February 6, 2020
Interesting

A different take on the classic vampire books. In this one a vampire seems to be trying to rescue his soul from the devil and is in need of a human to help him protect it until he figures out how. Not what I was expecting when I downloaded this book but I'm definitely interested. Will be buying the rest of the series.
Profile Image for Neerja.
508 reviews2 followers
June 7, 2018
The book was interesting but was way too short for my liking. It was just the first part consisting of only eight chapters. Though it was short but was fun to read nonetheless. For me, it was a good book to read.
Profile Image for Jamie Testa.
60 reviews1 follower
November 8, 2017
Has me hooked

This was a very interesting short story and has me hooked so now I want to read the rest of the series
4 reviews
December 20, 2018
Definitely Check it out!

Fast quick read. Fun and witty leaves you wanting the next installment. Will definitely be looking for it. A great traditional start.
Profile Image for Dee.
99 reviews
January 1, 2019
Not too shabby.....

Humorous and full of witty come backs. this book contains a ton of grammatical errors. Proofreading a book this short is not that hard to do.
2,205 reviews
May 31, 2020
Cute beginning of a series. Did not end on a cliffhanger but wasn't really a complete story either. Still the main character is fun and at times funny and the set up was good.
Profile Image for Cheri.
416 reviews
February 28, 2017
1.5 stars, its not really fair to call this a book, it's only about 40 pages and it ends in a cliff hanger.
Profile Image for T. Giachetti.
141 reviews2 followers
February 21, 2017
Humorous Read

Great story telling ability with an amble sprinkling of gritty humor. I can't wait to read the rest of the series!
Author 19 books9 followers
January 18, 2016
I picked up this book because it came through my twitter feed and it was free. Also, the cover art is adorable. I really liked the plot line but it moved so fast that I didn't have enough time to develop any attachment to the characters. It was, however, cute and kinda fun. Worth a look.
627 reviews3 followers
January 3, 2017
Too short,

I actually enjoy Mac Flynn's work but I disappointed that the book series he is introducing has o my approximately 50 pages for $2.99 each. I may not be rocket scientist but this ends up adding up to quite a bit more than many of the top sellers.
Profile Image for Lisa Clark.
390 reviews23 followers
January 16, 2017
Teaser

I did enjoy this book, it was short and quick. The story was just a
teaser, because you have to read the next book in order to find out what happens. This was just an introduction. I did enjoy what I read, just expecting more.
3 reviews5 followers
October 5, 2015
Witty, refreshing, and original!

I read this book straight through in one sitting. Miss Mac Flynn has made an uber fan out of me.
Profile Image for Anna.
644 reviews
October 13, 2015
Interest to read great storyline throughout the series
Profile Image for Lindsay♫SingerOfStories♫.
1,073 reviews120 followers
December 31, 2015
Meh, decent read. Not altogether impressed. However, the short ended just as it was getting interesting so if the second segment is free somewhere, I might take the time to read it.
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802 reviews
October 30, 2016
Short read that leaves you hanging. It was just starting to get interesting when it ended. I thought it was a stand alone, but just can't see reading 7 more of the short story to finish the series.
838 reviews
November 8, 2016
Not what I typically read but entertaining. Way too short though I can't complain much as I got it for free. I probably won't be reading any more of the books in the series. Just not that interested.
Profile Image for Elizabeth.
806 reviews5 followers
January 31, 2017
This book was short and free but I loved it enough to continue reading. Love a good vampire love story
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