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150 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 2015
The village was a depressing sight. The houses sagged with moist, rotting wood and the walkways were narrow and cramped and also moist. Elevated paths between houses were made from dusty planks of wood that had been reclaimed from haunted orphanages. One man was casually kicking week old offal at a cat while the cat contemplated suicide. It was super bleak.It's that "It really felt like a video game" line that does it, I think. Both in the aesthetics--I'm sure you can think of games where the color palette is done in black and brown and grey and charcoal and slate and tan--and in the typical gameplay. You may insert a comic of Link smashing pots in people's houses here, if you wish.
The group mostly kept their heads down, and the rest of their bodies down, to avoid detection by the cursed villagers. They made their way down back alleys, side alleys and front alleys. Also, alleys that are on the other side from the first side alleys. They ducked in and out of houses with no respect for property rights, let alone The Castle Doctrine. Maya was ecstatic. It really felt like a video game.