Putting you in the picture
I read a lot of David Lodge's novels, and greatly enjoyed them, when I was younger. I was about to buy a copy of this, his first novel (published in 1960), for my daughter's birthday before I checked my shelves and discovered we already had a copy. I've just read (or maybe re-read - I can't recall) it, and found it compelling in its depiction of a bye-gone age - both physically (a post-war London suburb) and spiritually (the Catholic church prior to the modernizations of the Second Vatican Council).
The author assembles a varied cast of characters, describing them succinctly - e.g., the father of a large family moves "despite his evident exhaustion, with the grace that characterized all his actions" [p49] - and sets them moving in a recognisable landscapes, both internal and external - e.g. his daughter gravitates towards "the grimy little park [where she] watched with agreeable melancholy the duckpond tirelessly forming circles under ceaseless battery of the rain" [p133]. Lodge is good at this sort of description - later on, the hero recalls a street whose yellow sodium lamps have "that delicate rosy glow for the first few minutes after they are switched on" which, against the dark blue sky, look like "fabulous lantern plants in a land of faerie" [p177]. And his observations about his characters' thoughts can be directly apposite - thinking adolescent suffering touching because "their sins and neuroses, like babies' excrement, gave no offence" [p168]. Elsewhere, he quotes the apophthegm "a good Catholic is a man whose wife goes to church" [p126], which, given the age of this book, might be one of its early appearances in print.
The Catholic aspects of this story include a priest who fulminates against the distractions of the cinema, and a hero who travels from cynicism to spirituality (aided by participating in the Student Cross pilgrimage, with which I was very familiar) whilst his girlfriend is going in the opposite direction - from faith to worldly passion. Some of the characters (e.g. Harry the Teddy boy) might appear to have been added to the cast for didactic reasons, and the various endings might appear a little too contrived. In addition, I detected some minor issues - for example, the musical genre is written as Rock 'n Roll [p208], and someone is referred to as a "geyser" rather than - as I think was intended - "geezer" on p233.
Finally, on p104, Fr Kipling starts to read the Epistle after Fr Francis has read the Gospel; this is an abstruse technical point, but these two parts of the Mass are the wrong way around. Spotting this reminded me of when I detected a similar error in one of Lodge's later books, and - like the priggish, nitpicking character Damien in this story - wrote to the author to point it out, receiving a gracious reply.
Despite straining at these gnats, I greatly enjoyed this tale. Recommended.
Originally reviewed 15 October 2024