My mum bought this book absolutely years ago but it was one that went onto the shelf and has never been touched again. She gave it to me when she moved house and it has since sat on my shelf for years. I have never heard of this author before, which is probably why I didn't ever reach for it until now.
There wasn't much given away in the blurb so I didn't quite know what to expect. My pre-reading opinion was that it wasn't going to be the best written book in the world, but this was mainly built on the fact that in all my years of reading, I'd never heard of Olga Bicos or seen one of her books before.
The prologue changed my negative opinion almost immediately. Though it wasn't the most action-packed of prologues, it left me with a lot of unanswered questions. Not in a terrible, they've not told me anything way, but because so much about that incident was unknown. I raced to the main chapters hoping for more of the slow building tension and the reveal of answers.
Unfortunately I just couldn't quite make it to finish this book because the main content just wasn't the same level as the prologue.
In the prologue, Ryan had been a mysterious character but clearly had history and facets. His personality was defined and I 'got a feel' for him immediately. Yet, Holly was written as this insipid character with few personality traits. She lacked passion, she lacked verve. She let people embarrass her, talk down to her and outright stalk her without once saying a word. She seemed naïve with regard to both business and people. She resolutely believes that Emma will be her friend, though the woman is nothing but rude to her the first time that they meet. She refuses to question her new boss about his reasons for selecting her as his designer and for throwing her a glitzy party before she had even started, or for his crazy design themes. She was so flat that reading about her was boring, and I kept finding myself looking for distractions. I mean, I almost watched football willingly, just to avoid reading.
Yet, the plot wasn't entirely uneventful. The opening party clearly continued from the prologue, though some years down the line, and increased my interest in Ryan, his life and the plot surrounding him in this novel. Ryan seemed unable to leave Holly alone, and his protective stance intrigued me, and I may have continued reading, had Holly been even a bit better.
The writing style was overly - something that I can't think of the right word to describe - wordy? Literary? Metaphorical?.
Essentially, it felt like an English creative writing task from school where you had to write something using similes and metaphors. I noticed this while reading the paragraph in the prologue about Ryan tapping his fingers on the coffee stained table. It contained metaphors, similes and adjectives but it painted such a vivid picture, that I thought, how lovely!
But I suppose that there is a reason that authors don't tend to use this level of technique in their books, because after a while you get bogged down by the detail and what happens is, 50 pages into the book, you can describe a coffee table in detail but there have been no major events and your lead character is a wet sack. Review metaphor. Bonus point.
I reached well over 50 pages in the end but I was really dragging my feet in reading and kept looking for other distractions. It wasn't holding my interest at all, and I think this was mostly due to the writing style and Holly/characterisation in general. I eventually stopped because I didn't see me getting over Holly unless she suddenly grew a backbone and it didn’t look very likely.