The reviews by Vintage and StMargarets cover the plot well so just some rants...
The h actually consulted a decent attorney about her parental rights regarding their secret son... About time a heroine did that! She also had a doctorate and a good job. (Rounding up a star.)
I’m not normally a fan of the secret baby but he was such an a** it was impossible to feel sorry for his lost time. He did every manipulative thing he could (short of kidnapping the baby, thank goodness). He did seem to genuinely like the son when he was with him (those were the good scenes), but his treatment of her was pathetic for a large percentage of the book. He was thoroughly selfish, and barely likable by the Epilogue.
It took him until the *very* end to express regret that he’d missed her pregnancy and the first nine months or more of his son’s life. Even then, he never expressed interest in how she had coped, her health, how she felt, how her labor had gone... none of it. Zero interest. He was all about him from start to end.
She was aggressively argumentative for the first half, but considering his manipulative actions and power, I couldn’t fault her being fearful and cautious. She had to stand her ground with him (at times annoyingly). She did better than most HP heroines (esp for LG) but what was disappointing was the “he’s so gorgeous” inner monologues while he’s treating her like crap.
The good news is, both of them seemed to grow throughout the book.
I always find it hard to believe the “I’ve been in love with you for so long” line from the H when he has clearly been bedding anyone (everyone) he wanted all along. He wasn’t faithful after their ONS and I am not positive he was faithful the entire time after meeting up with her again. Absolutely nothing about him indicated he was respectful of her in that regard and his consistent speeches to her about never answering to any woman not only made him seem untrustworthy, it belied his so-called “love” for her. He really did nothing to make her feel secure or valued.
I know I’m supposed to believe he was suddenly a faithful, loving, committed husband, but I’m not as sold as I’d like to be. This is another story where the impression is that if there were no baby, he’d still be single partying on a yacht. Because while he claimed to have all these feelings for her, he really made no effort until he saw her again two years later at an event.
Still, there was a lot more depth to this story than most. Their interactions were always interesting and they kept moving the story forward. LG absolutely brings the heroine’s emotions to life in a way that is truly outstanding. The fact that you can reread this multiple times makes it a standout.