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The Keeper and the Rulership
In a world where both magic and mathematics are forbidden, Raneh is growing magic and she can't seem to stop. She'll face the death penalty if anybody catches her, so she hides it in the weeds of her family's land, pretending to be a typical eighteen-year-old heir. And it works.
Until the Ruler comes to visit.
Until the Ruler comes to visit.
262 pages, Paperback
First published September 1, 2015
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January 4, 2017
I loved this story in equal parts for its fun characters and its imaginative world-concept. In this world, status is more than just an abstraction; it's an actual (ethereal) substance that the landowning class possesses. When they're looking good and doing good, others send status their way; when they're behaving badly, people take some of their status away. The downside to being a landowner is that you're forbidden to use magic ... or to do mathematics. There are some pretty funny scenes showing the landowning characters' extreme ignorance of numbers. Those prohibitions aren't just whimsical, though; they're a way, among other things, of distributing power, and if you ride along with the story, the logic begins to be explained.
Then there are the characters: protagonist Raneh, who is the Freshgrown family's heir; her shrewd, somewhat gluttonous younger brother Hurik; her impulsive, beautiful little sister Yaika; and a number of suitors who all have significant drawbacks. I really enjoyed all the characters: there was something good-natured about everyone and about how they interacted--which isn't to say that there weren't conflicts among them, just that the conflicts weren't lacerating or soul crushing, the way they can be in some books. Raneh narrates the story, and her voice is conversational, confessional, and appealing.
The first half of the book (approximately) establishes Raneh in her home situation and introduces her secret, possibly deadly problem: she can work magic. Several interesting additional plot problems come up (who Raneh will choose as a suitor, if anyone, what Hurik's going to do with himself, whether the family can survive Yaika's impulsivity and self-promotion), but the novel veers away from most of those in the second half to focus on the meaning and consequences of Raneh's magic ability. I found this fascinating, but it's also highly conceptual. If you like stories that play with ideas, you'll probably enjoy it--you may still have quibbles with various details (I did), but those are enjoyable quibbles, the kind that come from being engaged with the ideas the author's exploring. Even if you do enjoy it, you may yearn a little for the richness of characters and interactions of the first half of the book, but we don't lose the home-y, familial feel of the first part entirely. The last line of the story belongs to Yaika, and it's a great one.
There's a sequel that I'm looking forward to reading. It's going to focus on Raneh, but I hope Yaika will get some airtime too.
Then there are the characters: protagonist Raneh, who is the Freshgrown family's heir; her shrewd, somewhat gluttonous younger brother Hurik; her impulsive, beautiful little sister Yaika; and a number of suitors who all have significant drawbacks. I really enjoyed all the characters: there was something good-natured about everyone and about how they interacted--which isn't to say that there weren't conflicts among them, just that the conflicts weren't lacerating or soul crushing, the way they can be in some books. Raneh narrates the story, and her voice is conversational, confessional, and appealing.
The first half of the book (approximately) establishes Raneh in her home situation and introduces her secret, possibly deadly problem: she can work magic. Several interesting additional plot problems come up (who Raneh will choose as a suitor, if anyone, what Hurik's going to do with himself, whether the family can survive Yaika's impulsivity and self-promotion), but the novel veers away from most of those in the second half to focus on the meaning and consequences of Raneh's magic ability. I found this fascinating, but it's also highly conceptual. If you like stories that play with ideas, you'll probably enjoy it--you may still have quibbles with various details (I did), but those are enjoyable quibbles, the kind that come from being engaged with the ideas the author's exploring. Even if you do enjoy it, you may yearn a little for the richness of characters and interactions of the first half of the book, but we don't lose the home-y, familial feel of the first part entirely. The last line of the story belongs to Yaika, and it's a great one.
There's a sequel that I'm looking forward to reading. It's going to focus on Raneh, but I hope Yaika will get some airtime too.
April 10, 2016
A wonderful read, from start to finish!
The Keeper and the Rulership is a one-of-a-kind story set in a completely fictional world filled with magic and power. I can safely say that I have never read anything like this, and the author does an amazing job at bringing such a world to life.
Raneh has chosen to take the oath of status, with plans to one day own her own land and take on her own vassals. But she’s hiding a secret – although she didn’t take the oath of magic, she is able to do magic. Using a normally despised plant to absorb her magic, Raneh manages to keep her magic a secret, this avoiding execution for breaking such a punishable law. But her secret becomes harder and harder to hide, especially when a Ruler begins to take an interest in Raneh’s younger sister...
Yeah, my summary does not do the book justice, at all. Sorry about that.
I don’t remember the exact means in which I managed to pick up this book to review, but there must have been some sort of cosmic force that made sure this book got into my hands. As cliché as this sounds, I couldn’t put it down. We are thrown right into the story without too much “explanation” for this dystopian/steampunk-type world (honestly, I don’t know how to characterize it because it’s so unique), but it was in no means confusing or difficult to follow. The pacing of the story was perfect – slow enough so that you knew everything you needed to know, but fast enough to keep the story flowing smoothly without a single full moment.
I feel like I would be stretching if I tried to find something negative to say about this book. How about this: at first I thought the ending (consisting of the last two or three chapters) was a little bit rushed, but then it all came together nicely in the conclusion and probably would have been too drawn out if done any other way. The author definitely knew what she was doing! Oh, wait, look at that. That ended up being a positive, after all. I still couldn’t come up with anything negative!
The cover of the book gives off a vibe of a sort of childish, playful, whimsical story, but it’s actually so much more than that. There are issues of family, politics, social status, social rules, fantasy, history, and so much more. Plus, it’s just a generally awesome story. I definitely recommend this book to YA lovers!
The Keeper and the Rulership is a one-of-a-kind story set in a completely fictional world filled with magic and power. I can safely say that I have never read anything like this, and the author does an amazing job at bringing such a world to life.
Raneh has chosen to take the oath of status, with plans to one day own her own land and take on her own vassals. But she’s hiding a secret – although she didn’t take the oath of magic, she is able to do magic. Using a normally despised plant to absorb her magic, Raneh manages to keep her magic a secret, this avoiding execution for breaking such a punishable law. But her secret becomes harder and harder to hide, especially when a Ruler begins to take an interest in Raneh’s younger sister...
Yeah, my summary does not do the book justice, at all. Sorry about that.
I don’t remember the exact means in which I managed to pick up this book to review, but there must have been some sort of cosmic force that made sure this book got into my hands. As cliché as this sounds, I couldn’t put it down. We are thrown right into the story without too much “explanation” for this dystopian/steampunk-type world (honestly, I don’t know how to characterize it because it’s so unique), but it was in no means confusing or difficult to follow. The pacing of the story was perfect – slow enough so that you knew everything you needed to know, but fast enough to keep the story flowing smoothly without a single full moment.
I feel like I would be stretching if I tried to find something negative to say about this book. How about this: at first I thought the ending (consisting of the last two or three chapters) was a little bit rushed, but then it all came together nicely in the conclusion and probably would have been too drawn out if done any other way. The author definitely knew what she was doing! Oh, wait, look at that. That ended up being a positive, after all. I still couldn’t come up with anything negative!
The cover of the book gives off a vibe of a sort of childish, playful, whimsical story, but it’s actually so much more than that. There are issues of family, politics, social status, social rules, fantasy, history, and so much more. Plus, it’s just a generally awesome story. I definitely recommend this book to YA lovers!
March 4, 2017
3.5/5 Stars
Disclaimer: I received a free copy from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Well, this one took me a while to get into. Raneh lives in a world split by castes: The Ruler, Ruler's Heirs, Landowners, Mathematicians, Magicians, and Vassals. Landowners are not allowed to know math nor use magic on pain of death. Raneh wants to be a Landowner like her parents, but finds herself with magic.
Why did it take me a while? Because the whole system made no sense to me. It seemed overly ridiculous. Plus, the Status that Landowners have seemed way too reminiscent of magic, thus confusing me even more. However, about halfway through the novel, more aspects were explained thoroughly and the novel got more exciting.
I also really disliked Raneh. She seemed very blase when it came to everything but herself. Honestly, I feel like she barely grew throughout the novel, although I am intrigued about her system. I did enjoy the Ruler and her Heirs. They all seemed intriguing, especially her husband.
Overall, I like where this story is heading. I'm intrigued about what the next book will bring.
Disclaimer: I received a free copy from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Well, this one took me a while to get into. Raneh lives in a world split by castes: The Ruler, Ruler's Heirs, Landowners, Mathematicians, Magicians, and Vassals. Landowners are not allowed to know math nor use magic on pain of death. Raneh wants to be a Landowner like her parents, but finds herself with magic.
Why did it take me a while? Because the whole system made no sense to me. It seemed overly ridiculous. Plus, the Status that Landowners have seemed way too reminiscent of magic, thus confusing me even more. However, about halfway through the novel, more aspects were explained thoroughly and the novel got more exciting.
I also really disliked Raneh. She seemed very blase when it came to everything but herself. Honestly, I feel like she barely grew throughout the novel, although I am intrigued about her system. I did enjoy the Ruler and her Heirs. They all seemed intriguing, especially her husband.
Overall, I like where this story is heading. I'm intrigued about what the next book will bring.
November 11, 2016
I read this as part of the Noblebright kindle box set
This is first book in the Systems of the Rulership series.
I think it's a wonderfully different take on the idea of magics as a way of life. A clean fantasy book with a good amount of teen drama I ended up staying up way past bed time to finish it.
It's easy reading and wonderfully written to stop you putting it down.
This is first book in the Systems of the Rulership series.
I think it's a wonderfully different take on the idea of magics as a way of life. A clean fantasy book with a good amount of teen drama I ended up staying up way past bed time to finish it.
It's easy reading and wonderfully written to stop you putting it down.
June 4, 2020
I read this as part of the Noblebright kindle box set
That was odd.
Victory Gardens, meets Pride & Prejudice (sans Mr. Darcy) with overtones of Hunger Games (sans games) and maybe the Matrix?
That was odd.
Victory Gardens, meets Pride & Prejudice (sans Mr. Darcy) with overtones of Hunger Games (sans games) and maybe the Matrix?
November 7, 2016
I am a huge fan on Emily´s writing and I must admit she did not disappointed me once again.
Raneh lives secretly on the edge of the law - as a landowner, she possesses magic, which is strictly restricted and punishable by death sentence. When her younger sister Yaika in her vanity attracts the interest of the Ruler, Raneh realizes she is in danger - and more so when Yaika becomes the Ruler´s heir and takes her sister as a companion to Central.
The story is very original, innovative and appealing. I struggled the first half to understand the concept of status and how it worked, but I eventually figured it out :) What I found especially amusing was the outlaw position of mathematics (as a person who studied math, I found some scenes really much fun).
I love the variety of characters, their distinct individualities, clear contures and understandable motives of their acts. One can easily associate with each of them and share their emotions. Although most of the main characters are YA, they don´t lack depth and detailed, complex personalities that develop reasonably and realistically over time. Their reactions feel natural and the behavioral change under circumstances is fully understandable.
The plot is intriguing, full of twists (not too much surprising, but still accelerating the pace). It keeps the light, entertaining tone the whole time, even during the darker passages.
My only serious objection is the rushed conclusion. Sure, it opens the door to the sequel, but it felt quite suddenly cut and missing the richness of information the whole rest of the book showed. Otherwise, nothing much to object, it was a pleasurable read and the sequel is already prepared to read in my pc.
Raneh lives secretly on the edge of the law - as a landowner, she possesses magic, which is strictly restricted and punishable by death sentence. When her younger sister Yaika in her vanity attracts the interest of the Ruler, Raneh realizes she is in danger - and more so when Yaika becomes the Ruler´s heir and takes her sister as a companion to Central.
The story is very original, innovative and appealing. I struggled the first half to understand the concept of status and how it worked, but I eventually figured it out :) What I found especially amusing was the outlaw position of mathematics (as a person who studied math, I found some scenes really much fun).
I love the variety of characters, their distinct individualities, clear contures and understandable motives of their acts. One can easily associate with each of them and share their emotions. Although most of the main characters are YA, they don´t lack depth and detailed, complex personalities that develop reasonably and realistically over time. Their reactions feel natural and the behavioral change under circumstances is fully understandable.
The plot is intriguing, full of twists (not too much surprising, but still accelerating the pace). It keeps the light, entertaining tone the whole time, even during the darker passages.
My only serious objection is the rushed conclusion. Sure, it opens the door to the sequel, but it felt quite suddenly cut and missing the richness of information the whole rest of the book showed. Otherwise, nothing much to object, it was a pleasurable read and the sequel is already prepared to read in my pc.
February 6, 2017
This was a lovely light fantasy, and the blurb doesn't do it justice. Although it follows Raneh, the real main character is the weird world that they live in, and there are some fun twists. The writer really captured the situation where some classes of people in a culture never question it because "that's just how things are done", while others think it's crazy. Recommended if you like "noblebright" fantasy
February 1, 2017
I did think from time to time that maybe this was intended for young adults and all the discussions on clothes and flowers were a bit "girly", but not too much, and anyway that did not interfere with my enjoyment. The striking thing was a totally original slant on magic.
March 13, 2017
The Keeper and The Rulership is the first book that I have read by Martha Sorenssen. "I voluntarily reviewed a copy of this book. All opinions expressed are my own." The author has created a fantastical world complete with a likable cast of characters.
This is a world of magic and mathematics. People live with an ever-changing status system. Raneh is a young woman at the cusp of adulthood trying to choose between several not-so-perfect suiters. She lives with her family; her parents a dull brother and a younger sister with renowned beauty. Raneh seems like a typical girl, but she has a secret, one that could be deadly. In a world where one can practice only math or magic, she can do both. She keeps her magic hidden away in her garden thinking she will be safe. However, when her sister catches the eye of the Ruler and is named one of her heirs, Raneh is exposed. In a world with clearly defined roles and rules, she is an unknown and this puts her life is at risk.
This is an original read. It took me a while to become fully immersed into the story. Once I did, the story was entertaining. It's well written and the pacing is good until the end. I felt it was a bit rushed at the conclusion. It just ends, without really wrapping up the storylines, setting up the sequel.
This is a world of magic and mathematics. People live with an ever-changing status system. Raneh is a young woman at the cusp of adulthood trying to choose between several not-so-perfect suiters. She lives with her family; her parents a dull brother and a younger sister with renowned beauty. Raneh seems like a typical girl, but she has a secret, one that could be deadly. In a world where one can practice only math or magic, she can do both. She keeps her magic hidden away in her garden thinking she will be safe. However, when her sister catches the eye of the Ruler and is named one of her heirs, Raneh is exposed. In a world with clearly defined roles and rules, she is an unknown and this puts her life is at risk.
This is an original read. It took me a while to become fully immersed into the story. Once I did, the story was entertaining. It's well written and the pacing is good until the end. I felt it was a bit rushed at the conclusion. It just ends, without really wrapping up the storylines, setting up the sequel.
August 15, 2017
Disclaimer: I received a free copy from the author in exchange for an honest review.
After reading the description of the book I was interested in it, and having finished, it was even more interesting then I was expecting. Sorensen has created a very fascinating world with a lot of rules and then managed to make it feel real and that the characters are part of it.
Raneh lives is a world where magic exists, however only those who take an oath and renounce status are able to use it. As a Landowner, Raneh certainly isn't allowed to, in fact it is punishable by death. Unfortunately, Raneh seems to have natural magic.
The first half or so of the book mostly deals with Raneh trying to prepare for her future. In this world status is an intangible substance that is used in place of currency, but is also given or taken away from you based on the public's perception of you. If you do something impressive, you are awarded status; do something taboo or even just embarrassing and others can take it away from you. Raneh is at an age where she should be focusing on who to marry, but all of her suitors have drawbacks. Raneh also has to deal with her siblings and how their behaviors affect the family's status.
I don't want to get into any spoilers, but things only get more complicated when the Ruler comes to visit.
The biggest criticism of the book I have is that while while the characters are well written, we don't interact with those outside the family much. I don't think single friend of Raneh's was mentioned that isn't a suitor. I would love to see her have some more relationships in future books.
I really appreciated the worldbuilding that went into this. The rules in place and the strict adherence to social classes set the framework on which Sorensen has created some really unique ideas that set it apart from other fantasy novels.
After reading the description of the book I was interested in it, and having finished, it was even more interesting then I was expecting. Sorensen has created a very fascinating world with a lot of rules and then managed to make it feel real and that the characters are part of it.
Raneh lives is a world where magic exists, however only those who take an oath and renounce status are able to use it. As a Landowner, Raneh certainly isn't allowed to, in fact it is punishable by death. Unfortunately, Raneh seems to have natural magic.
The first half or so of the book mostly deals with Raneh trying to prepare for her future. In this world status is an intangible substance that is used in place of currency, but is also given or taken away from you based on the public's perception of you. If you do something impressive, you are awarded status; do something taboo or even just embarrassing and others can take it away from you. Raneh is at an age where she should be focusing on who to marry, but all of her suitors have drawbacks. Raneh also has to deal with her siblings and how their behaviors affect the family's status.
I don't want to get into any spoilers, but things only get more complicated when the Ruler comes to visit.
The biggest criticism of the book I have is that while while the characters are well written, we don't interact with those outside the family much. I don't think single friend of Raneh's was mentioned that isn't a suitor. I would love to see her have some more relationships in future books.
I really appreciated the worldbuilding that went into this. The rules in place and the strict adherence to social classes set the framework on which Sorensen has created some really unique ideas that set it apart from other fantasy novels.
March 20, 2017
I read this book in one day... really in a few hours. It was a great, easy read! It was also really well thought out. The world building was excellent, and while trying not to give much away, the positive aspects and faults of the world were highlighted nicely.
I really liked the main character. While pressure was put on her to find a husband, not only did she stick to her morals and standards, but she also didn't get dumb and goofy over any guy that gave her attention and she thought she might be attracted to. Although occasionally, I got a little annoyed at the way Renah reacted to some of the things some characters did, I couldn't get mad at it. It really fit in well with the story and portrayed the society she was raised in.
This book was very unique in many ways, and I found it quite refreshing. It had romantic aspects, but it didn't fuss over them or dwell on them too much.
This book was AWESOME, and I can't really find anything that I didn't like. I can say that I think it could have been longer and added a little more detail toward the beginning about Renah's world and the significance of the flowers.
Overall, this was a great story! I was only upset with the ending, because I can't wait to find out what happens next! I just looked it up, and sequel, The Fires of the Rulership, was released in November! I can't wait to get a copy and learn what happens next with Renah and her family!
I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest opinion.
I really liked the main character. While pressure was put on her to find a husband, not only did she stick to her morals and standards, but she also didn't get dumb and goofy over any guy that gave her attention and she thought she might be attracted to. Although occasionally, I got a little annoyed at the way Renah reacted to some of the things some characters did, I couldn't get mad at it. It really fit in well with the story and portrayed the society she was raised in.
This book was very unique in many ways, and I found it quite refreshing. It had romantic aspects, but it didn't fuss over them or dwell on them too much.
This book was AWESOME, and I can't really find anything that I didn't like. I can say that I think it could have been longer and added a little more detail toward the beginning about Renah's world and the significance of the flowers.
Overall, this was a great story! I was only upset with the ending, because I can't wait to find out what happens next! I just looked it up, and sequel, The Fires of the Rulership, was released in November! I can't wait to get a copy and learn what happens next with Renah and her family!
I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest opinion.
March 17, 2017
I want to say how much I enjoyed this book. I truly did. However it is not without some small critiques. I want to say that for starters I was very intrigued and my attention was very much engaged in the entire concept of this story/world that the author has built for us. While she has done an excellent job of building this world and maintaining it there were parts, in which past rulers and keepers are being talked about, that my head went sorta swimmy. What I mean by that it was easy to get slightly confused. I am that person that felt a tiny glossary at the end of the book, which others have done before, would have been fantastic.
As far as things I can say "bad" that is really it because overall I truly loved this book. I may be slightly obsessed with the main character, Raneh, and can't wait to read more about her journey. She is such an amazingly well written character who was believable and entertaining. I loved the interactions she would have throughout this book with her Grandmother, who is quite the spunky thing. I adored how much she preferred spending time in her garden. I really liked having that be such an important factor to the character and the entire world itself. I am hoping there is more to come with a male character she befriended, which seemed to abruptly end.
I know there is a second book and I am so ready to read it now as well. The continue of the story is one that I need and want. I even want to check out a tiny prequel that I was made aware of as well. I am hoping reading the prequel will help a small problem I had during scenes in the book where I felt like I had missed something, or was already in book two.
*I was given a free ARC copy of this book to read and write my own personal review. My review is solely my own thoughts and opinions of this book.*
As far as things I can say "bad" that is really it because overall I truly loved this book. I may be slightly obsessed with the main character, Raneh, and can't wait to read more about her journey. She is such an amazingly well written character who was believable and entertaining. I loved the interactions she would have throughout this book with her Grandmother, who is quite the spunky thing. I adored how much she preferred spending time in her garden. I really liked having that be such an important factor to the character and the entire world itself. I am hoping there is more to come with a male character she befriended, which seemed to abruptly end.
I know there is a second book and I am so ready to read it now as well. The continue of the story is one that I need and want. I even want to check out a tiny prequel that I was made aware of as well. I am hoping reading the prequel will help a small problem I had during scenes in the book where I felt like I had missed something, or was already in book two.
*I was given a free ARC copy of this book to read and write my own personal review. My review is solely my own thoughts and opinions of this book.*
November 6, 2016
Magic is forbidden, but Ranah can't stop herself from growing it. As if that isn't trouble enough, she's at the age to be choosing a serious suitor, but can't seem to get that to work out right, either. Solidly YA fantasy about a young woman trying to find her place in a world ruled by status and laws that she just can't quite fit into.
September 14, 2017
Magic and math are only for the lowly. The landowners can use those who have it but can't use it themselves. Magic keeps the world going, but something is wrong. Raneh is looking for love and marriage, but magic is in her life. She does not want it. What will happen?
Great story with interesting twists and turns.
Great story with interesting twists and turns.
August 5, 2017
An odd little story. Has promise of being less YA but decided to stay there. Secondary characters could have been more real. Glad I read it because of its weird concept and world, but won't read the next because the details are too simplistic and girly.
March 2, 2017
The Author is a good storyteller. Some of the aspects of the new world she created could use a little more explanation on how it works. But her writing made that world very believable.
May 11, 2017
This was a fun lighthearted fantasy. Part of the boxed set "Light in the Darkness." I give it four stars. Ok for teens and up. No swearing, violence or sexual content.
August 12, 2017
I loved the premise of this book. So interesting. But I feel that a lot of this book was to set up the next one.
January 28, 2024
In the world of The Keeper and the Rulership, there are three quasi-magical systems – status, mathematics, and magic. People who are endowed with one of these systems are not allowed to use the others. Status is sort of the currency of the realm. It is nearly invisible, but it can be felt. Landowners have status – or they should. When they become landowners, people have to renounce magic (and I presume mathematics, although mathematics is not considered as dangerous as magic). Magicians have to request magic and renounce status. Mathematics is acquired primarily through study and seems to be safeguarded by the lack of interest in mathematics on the part of non-mathematicians.
If a landowner, or someone who should have renounced magic, uses magic, they can incur the death penalty.
In this story, we are primarily following Raneh, the daughter of a landowner family whose dream is to marry another landowner, get their own place, and raise a family. Unfortunately, Raneh also has magic. She is trying to hide it, but it is getting harder and harder.
Raneh is a little annoying at times because she is primarily focused on finding a husband. The two boys who have been courting her don’t seem exactly what she is looking for, so she is looking for someone more to her liking. Meanwhile, she is trying to keep her magic under control by releasing it into plants called groverweed in her garden. The groverweed absorbs the magic, but it is beginning to do some strange things. Her grandfather, a mathematician, tells her (without knowing about her magic problem) that magic has been slowly disappearing from the world for years, since before she was born. Raneh wonders if she can be the cause of magic disappearing. Or, on the other hand, if she can become the one to save it.
Raneh’s sister, Yaika, is also obsessed with getting married. Her goal is to marry the richest man she can find. When one of the Ruler’s heirs comes to an event near their home, she can’t wait to meet him – until she discovers he is in his fifties. But later the Ruler herself comes to Yaika’s oath ceremony (this is the Oath of childhood that children take when they are twelve). She is impressed enough with Yaika that later still she comes back with her husband and three other heirs to spend a week. They check out Yaika and the family thoroughly and wind up making an offer for Yaika to become one of the ruler’s heirs.
When her parents decide they can’t accompany Yaika to Central, Raneh volunteers to go with her to keep an eye on her. In Central, they all learn what it means to be a Ruler’s heir. As much of an honor as that is, it turns out to be more like a job.
Eventually though Raneh is caught having magic. And then things really get strange.
If a landowner, or someone who should have renounced magic, uses magic, they can incur the death penalty.
In this story, we are primarily following Raneh, the daughter of a landowner family whose dream is to marry another landowner, get their own place, and raise a family. Unfortunately, Raneh also has magic. She is trying to hide it, but it is getting harder and harder.
Raneh is a little annoying at times because she is primarily focused on finding a husband. The two boys who have been courting her don’t seem exactly what she is looking for, so she is looking for someone more to her liking. Meanwhile, she is trying to keep her magic under control by releasing it into plants called groverweed in her garden. The groverweed absorbs the magic, but it is beginning to do some strange things. Her grandfather, a mathematician, tells her (without knowing about her magic problem) that magic has been slowly disappearing from the world for years, since before she was born. Raneh wonders if she can be the cause of magic disappearing. Or, on the other hand, if she can become the one to save it.
Raneh’s sister, Yaika, is also obsessed with getting married. Her goal is to marry the richest man she can find. When one of the Ruler’s heirs comes to an event near their home, she can’t wait to meet him – until she discovers he is in his fifties. But later the Ruler herself comes to Yaika’s oath ceremony (this is the Oath of childhood that children take when they are twelve). She is impressed enough with Yaika that later still she comes back with her husband and three other heirs to spend a week. They check out Yaika and the family thoroughly and wind up making an offer for Yaika to become one of the ruler’s heirs.
When her parents decide they can’t accompany Yaika to Central, Raneh volunteers to go with her to keep an eye on her. In Central, they all learn what it means to be a Ruler’s heir. As much of an honor as that is, it turns out to be more like a job.
Eventually though Raneh is caught having magic. And then things really get strange.
March 19, 2017
This book is a YA (Young Adult story), well written and full of surprise.
I enjoyed the characters, the plot, the plot twists and its evolution until its conclusion. a story that will transport you into a new world, different from ours, but very charming.
I recommend this book to those who love fantasy and adventure.
I received this book from the author and this is my honest review.
I enjoyed the characters, the plot, the plot twists and its evolution until its conclusion. a story that will transport you into a new world, different from ours, but very charming.
I recommend this book to those who love fantasy and adventure.
I received this book from the author and this is my honest review.
March 20, 2017
I was impressed by the complexity of the world in this book. It was a very refreshing take on what could have been a typical teen fantasy novel. I am quite interested in reading the next book in the series.
March 16, 2017
I received this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
This story has great potential. It's imaginative and colorful. The plot has great bones. But many of the main characters need fleshing out. There are plot elements that take sharp turns as if a chapter were missing. It's also a little precious in places.
Aside from that, it's a quick and enjoyable read. None of the flaws I mention above are deadly, just a little distracting. I'm hoping that the prequel and subsequent books flesh things out a bit better.
This story has great potential. It's imaginative and colorful. The plot has great bones. But many of the main characters need fleshing out. There are plot elements that take sharp turns as if a chapter were missing. It's also a little precious in places.
Aside from that, it's a quick and enjoyable read. None of the flaws I mention above are deadly, just a little distracting. I'm hoping that the prequel and subsequent books flesh things out a bit better.
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March 12, 2017This book was absolutely amazing. The story line was brilliant and i didnt put the book down until i had finished it. Character development in this book was outstanding. couldnt ask for anything better. I flew throught this book without a single problem. each segment of the book i thoroughly enjoyed and would live to read another of books now. would recommend to anyone who loves a good book.
March 12, 2017
Was definitely for the young adult. I wasn't sure I was going to like it but the more you read the more interesting it became. I want to know more of how the world is going to be changing since magic has disappeared. Would like to know how the ruler is going to use the sister to get her revenge on Ranah.
March 10, 2017
So good I finished in two and a half days. I couldn't put it down and absolutely loved the characters. Excellent story plot with an unexpected twist. I would recommend it to anyone who likes fantasy and magic. I loved it and am giving it five stars
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February 27, 2017I received a copy for an honest review. Unfortunately I really didn't like this story. After reading the first few chapters, I struggled with picking the book up again.
Now don't get me wrong, it had its moments where I was grasping for the page. I just did not like Raneh. She was petty and superficial with absolutely no redeeming qualities. Everything had to go her way and with little regard for those around her.
As for the "love triangle," that was a reach. She found something wrong with them from the start, however she still continued to "date" them. Then after a short period was find gaining another suitor.
Finally, we discover the true issues facing this world. Magic is dying and no one discusses it. Everyone knows that it's happening, but they don't care. Really!?
Now the Ruler is a total nightmare, with shallow morals and even worst taste.
Granted I did enjoy some of the book or I would not have finished it. I just felt like there could have been more. Don't ask me what that more is, I honestly haven't a clue. Something felt like other was missing or rushed.
Now don't get me wrong, it had its moments where I was grasping for the page. I just did not like Raneh. She was petty and superficial with absolutely no redeeming qualities. Everything had to go her way and with little regard for those around her.
As for the "love triangle," that was a reach. She found something wrong with them from the start, however she still continued to "date" them. Then after a short period was find gaining another suitor.
Finally, we discover the true issues facing this world. Magic is dying and no one discusses it. Everyone knows that it's happening, but they don't care. Really!?
Now the Ruler is a total nightmare, with shallow morals and even worst taste.
Granted I did enjoy some of the book or I would not have finished it. I just felt like there could have been more. Don't ask me what that more is, I honestly haven't a clue. Something felt like other was missing or rushed.
March 10, 2017
Nice young adult fantasy about magic. Took a few chapters to describe the setting and what Ranch's life is like. About midway it started to get interesting and kept your reading. Love the ending now I need to read the next book to see what is going to happen.
March 18, 2017
super creative and very detailed! The story was well developed and very whimsical. I was really transported into the Rulership
November 14, 2015
I like books about magic, I like books with minority leads, I like books that have a bit of magical fantasy in them. And that’s what I got here.
This is kind of like a big pot of magic, somewhat dystopian society, romance, and basic hero rises to her calling. Its not exactly cliché as it has a fairly original plot, its just that the way things played out made me feel like I would know the ending before I got there.
In the beginning we have Raneh, a pretty good female lead. She’s something like royalty but of course she’s fed up with being upper-class but whatever—what kind of princess protagonist ever likes being royalty? I could actually see why Raneh didn’t enjoy everything about her life, though. She lived in a society where her gifts were forbidden. If that’s not oppressive enough try having your mother on your case about marrying someone who’s deathly loyal to the rulers of that society?
Yeah, so she wasn’t exactly the happiest camper in the book.
I kind of felt like Raneh was a little bit dry as I read through the story. That’s not as much of a complaint as it might sound though. Her personality is kind of like … meh … most of the time. But it really worked. I think most of the personality in the book was poured in by the other characters who were also enjoyable. I liked having this kind of depressing, gloom and doom girl as the lead. There weren’t very many exclamation points in her portions of dialogue, not much yelling, or hissing. Just kind of very standard reactions. But, again, it really worked! I liked Raneh and I got a kick out of her reactions to things. I’m really not sure if the author’s intentions was to make her somewhat impersonal and maybe I’m interpreting her incorrectly but I like this interpretation. It didn’t take away from the story at all.
What did take away from the story a little was the cover. I do like it but I think it doesn’t depict the inside very well. If I hadn’t been approached by the author seeking a review I probably would not have picked up the book. It looks like it’s about Malaysian farmers or something. But its not at all. There’s a lot of good stuff in this book, character development, plot twists, not to mention great writing. Even though there aren’t laser beams, ogres, and time travel, there is some world building here as our characters live in a society completely made up by the author.
All in all, I think Sorensen did a good job on this book. I look forward to more books written by her and I do hope to see more of Raneh in the future!
*I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest*
This is kind of like a big pot of magic, somewhat dystopian society, romance, and basic hero rises to her calling. Its not exactly cliché as it has a fairly original plot, its just that the way things played out made me feel like I would know the ending before I got there.
In the beginning we have Raneh, a pretty good female lead. She’s something like royalty but of course she’s fed up with being upper-class but whatever—what kind of princess protagonist ever likes being royalty? I could actually see why Raneh didn’t enjoy everything about her life, though. She lived in a society where her gifts were forbidden. If that’s not oppressive enough try having your mother on your case about marrying someone who’s deathly loyal to the rulers of that society?
Yeah, so she wasn’t exactly the happiest camper in the book.
I kind of felt like Raneh was a little bit dry as I read through the story. That’s not as much of a complaint as it might sound though. Her personality is kind of like … meh … most of the time. But it really worked. I think most of the personality in the book was poured in by the other characters who were also enjoyable. I liked having this kind of depressing, gloom and doom girl as the lead. There weren’t very many exclamation points in her portions of dialogue, not much yelling, or hissing. Just kind of very standard reactions. But, again, it really worked! I liked Raneh and I got a kick out of her reactions to things. I’m really not sure if the author’s intentions was to make her somewhat impersonal and maybe I’m interpreting her incorrectly but I like this interpretation. It didn’t take away from the story at all.
What did take away from the story a little was the cover. I do like it but I think it doesn’t depict the inside very well. If I hadn’t been approached by the author seeking a review I probably would not have picked up the book. It looks like it’s about Malaysian farmers or something. But its not at all. There’s a lot of good stuff in this book, character development, plot twists, not to mention great writing. Even though there aren’t laser beams, ogres, and time travel, there is some world building here as our characters live in a society completely made up by the author.
All in all, I think Sorensen did a good job on this book. I look forward to more books written by her and I do hope to see more of Raneh in the future!
*I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest*
January 15, 2016
Today, I am reviewing the Fantasy story The Keeper and the Rulership by Emily Martha Sorensen. While this is definitely a YA (Young Adult, for our newcomers) style book, I enjoyed its in-depth character development and plot very much. In this book, we follow the adventures of the young woman, Raneh, as she learns why she has magic and comes to terms with her destiny.
This is a very solid YA fantasy, with enjoyable characters, that stays away from the most onerous of tropes. I give this book a 4/5. Here is my breakdown.
Characters: 4/5. Sorensen does a great job in establishing the characters and their motivations. Each is sufficiently distinct from the others and has obvious motivations that make sense. Their interactions are fun and they fit well within the world that she’s established. I enjoyed spending time with them; their behaviors were consistent and well-reasoned, with little of the “random” things that characters can do because of “plot necessity.”
Plot/Storyline: 4/5. A fun story that, while it doesn’t leave profound, lasting marks on my soul, was a very worthy use of my time. I thoroughly enjoyed the time I spent in Raneh’s world, walking beside her as she came to her realizations and made her decisions. The development of the world was well-done, and felt very real to me.
My only concern with the storyline is the ending. The ending itself was fine, but it felt abbreviated, like it came too soon after the climax of the story with insufficient denouement. I would have liked more wrap-up.
Technical Aspects: 4/5. The story moved quickly and was a treat to read. I had a good time and didn’t trip up over choppy sentences, poor dialogue, or exposition. A well-constructed book that allowed me to access the story.
Spelling/Grammar: 4.5/5. There were a few, very few, typos in this book. Well done!
Overall: 4/5. This is a very solid book, clean, fun, and well-crafted. I enjoyed it very much and want to read more from Sorensen. She is very talented and I look forward to seeing more of her work. Thank you!
Originally posted at: http://curtainofreality.blogspot.com/...
This is a very solid YA fantasy, with enjoyable characters, that stays away from the most onerous of tropes. I give this book a 4/5. Here is my breakdown.
Characters: 4/5. Sorensen does a great job in establishing the characters and their motivations. Each is sufficiently distinct from the others and has obvious motivations that make sense. Their interactions are fun and they fit well within the world that she’s established. I enjoyed spending time with them; their behaviors were consistent and well-reasoned, with little of the “random” things that characters can do because of “plot necessity.”
Plot/Storyline: 4/5. A fun story that, while it doesn’t leave profound, lasting marks on my soul, was a very worthy use of my time. I thoroughly enjoyed the time I spent in Raneh’s world, walking beside her as she came to her realizations and made her decisions. The development of the world was well-done, and felt very real to me.
My only concern with the storyline is the ending. The ending itself was fine, but it felt abbreviated, like it came too soon after the climax of the story with insufficient denouement. I would have liked more wrap-up.
Technical Aspects: 4/5. The story moved quickly and was a treat to read. I had a good time and didn’t trip up over choppy sentences, poor dialogue, or exposition. A well-constructed book that allowed me to access the story.
Spelling/Grammar: 4.5/5. There were a few, very few, typos in this book. Well done!
Overall: 4/5. This is a very solid book, clean, fun, and well-crafted. I enjoyed it very much and want to read more from Sorensen. She is very talented and I look forward to seeing more of her work. Thank you!
Originally posted at: http://curtainofreality.blogspot.com/...
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