Very high three stars. I almost gave this four stars, but there was a bit too many questionable character decisions for me to justify my nostalgia, this time.
Just like the last series, this book has the old Erin Hunter writing style, which I very much enjoy. There were a couple typos, but nothing too major, and for the most part it was just nice to dive into a familiar way of writing- not too complicated, super easy to read, and a decent balance of description and dialogue.
The general plot of this arc only just gets started in this book, which means for the most part this story is setup. Keeping that in mind, I think it does a pretty good job of building tension and setting stakes. There’s a pretty big conflict inside the pack between the Patrol Dogs and Twitch’s old pack, which both filled the time until the traitor plotline could be teased and also tied into said plotline.
My issues with this book stem from the more personal conflict, which is Storm and this sense of ‘darkness’ inside her. Sound familiar? Yeah, that’s because we spent three of the last six books refuting the idea that Storm was evil, or that her nature would make her evil, or that all Fierce Dogs were evil, etc. And now we begin this book with. . . The same conflict? To me this is just a poor writing choice. Storm was accepted into the pack for real in Storm of Dogs, and proved to herself and her friends that she wasn’t a villain. But in this book we return immediately to those same worries, inwardly (with Storm’s own thoughts) and outwardly (with the pack’s opinion of Storm) flipping back and forth depending on what was most convenient. It made a lot of that well-written tension I praised earlier feel cheap and fabricated, because the other half of it came from plot convenience and unnecessary repetition that regressed our lead for apparently no reason.
Aside from that, thankfully, Storm was actually a great protagonist. Her curiosity and impulsiveness actually feel natural, since she is a young dog. I think her sleepwalking plotline gives her a much more logical reason to worry about her actions than her Fierce Dog heritage- in fact, I think if her worried about her inherent evilness only resurfaced briefly, after she realized she could be doing anything in her sleep, it could actually have worked for her character instead of against it. I really loved her interactions with pretty much every dog in this book, too, with her conversations with Moon, Arrow, and Lucky being highlights. My absolute favorite part of Storm, though, is something I hadn’t noticed in previous reads (and I am begging my memory to be correct that the authors commit to this): Storm is asexual. I am. . . Kind of surprised that got through the very unintentionally sexist authors and editors. A female main character who doesn’t take a mate? Doesn’t even have interest in it? This is honestly amazing for these authors, and I love Storm 1000 times more for it. Not to mention, it’s written in such an organic way, like she’s genuinely curious why dogs would take mates and why they can’t just be friends, but appreciates the work taking care of pups is even though she knows it’s not for her. And she’s so sure (like many people are) from a young age that she doesn’t want kids. As someone who has also felt sure I don’t want kids from a very young age (and continues to be sure now), this is such a subtle representation that I don’t think I’ve seen spelled out in a book before EVER, let alone in an older Erin Hunter book. Hats off to the authors for this one, and to Storm for being such a natural character to put this viewpoint on.
None of the side characters in this book were very important or unique, but I like that a lot of them have their own stuff going on during Storm’s plots, like Bella and Arrow’s secret romance.
But I do want to briefly talk about Lucky. I don’t really like what’s done to him in this book. Changing his character to be far more incompetent just because he’s having pups with Sweet feels like an excuse to create more conflict, not a natural story beat based on what we saw in the last six books. I understand overprotectiveness for sure, but freezing and only defending Sweet when he KNOWS loudbirds aren’t dangerous to the dogs unless they land felt very cheap and fabricated. I hope his character returns to usual levels of competency next book.
Because this book is far from revealing the identity of the traitor in the pack (though in hindsight it is pretty obvious), there isn’t really much to say about antagonists. I do think the book did a good job of slowly establishing this mysterious dog might be up to something nefarious, since the crimes start small and then escalate. I also like that it could easily be a personal conflict tying into the Patrol Dogs’ conflict at first, but the end makes it very clear this is bigger than a grudge or revenge of the perceived wrongs of one dog.
Overall, while Storm’s repetitive character beats were annoying as a subject to read about, I really enjoyed revisiting this book! I do hope the rest of the series is stronger, but this certainly isn’t a bad start. Onto the next!
SERIES RATINGS:
A Pack Divided: ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Dead of Night: ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Into the Shadows: ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Red Moon Rising: Currently rereading
The Exile’s Journey: —
The Final Battle: —