soluble

covalent bonds #3

by HalfFizzbin

Sterek

Derek comes back after summer break all hot, beardy and brace-less. Stiles honestly has no idea what everyone's freaking out about.

Genres: Fan Fiction, M M Romance, Romance, Humor, Short Stories, High School

4 pages, ebook

First published January 27, 2015

Reviews

[Julio Genao · Rating 4 out of 5]

ridikaluss.

ficlet got me sprung like whoa.

so many pop culture references at my disposal

so many

but i'm just gonna go with GET IN, LOSER. WE'RE GOING TO PROM

(please go to prom? that would, you know, complete the epic high school gaymance cycle? please?)

[Meags · Rating 4 out of 5]

4 Stars

So apparently nerdy Derek came back from summer break looking like this >>



(I'll give you all a moment...)

*ahem*

Everyone at school has taken a keen interest in the all new Derek.

Stiles gets possessive of what is his.

It's hot as f*ck!

[* A Reader Obsessed * · Rating 3 out of 5]

Derek has gone through a "minor" transformation over the summer (muscles, contacts and no braces!) and everyone takes notice because hello! Of course that matters not, he only has eyes for Stiles but regardless, Stiles is feeling a bit territorial.

"Heh, there's come in your beard," Stiles says…"Leave it there yeah? Wear it to school. Lemme write my fucking name on your face. Tell everyone else to back off, I fuckin' saw you first."

"You are so impossibly weird," Derek groans... it's safe to say neither one of them is entirely normal.

[Trisha Harrington · Rating 4 out of 5]

I hate that there are no more of these.

So cute and enjoyable. I loved getting Stiles POV here.

[BWT · Rating 4 out of 5]

Short, hot and humorous. I'm a happy girl.

[Maygirl7 · Rating 3 out of 5]

A bit too schmoopy for me but still enjoyable.

[Sandra · Rating 4 out of 5]

Such a nice finale that Derek finally grows into his hotness and everyone else see it, but Stiles was so ahead of the game. I love how much they laugh during sex, great with the feelz.

[Janie · Rating 3 out of 5]

Really cute but too short. I needed more.

[Meep]

Derek has done a 180 here - muscles, beard, confidence - he doesn't think Stiles minds!!!!!!!

It's cute enough to cause diabetes!
Liked the laughter between them but beyond that it's too too sweet for me. Not rating as I fear not loving this shows my bitter, bitter soul...

[Kudrat Kaur · Rating 3 out of 5]

It's truly ridiculous how freaking fluffy this is.

Ridiculous.

Totally ridiculous.

Absolutely ridiculous.

... I need more

[Mj · Rating 4 out of 5]

First read Dec 2015 . . .All 3 were just so full of goodness.

[Ornella · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5
Make over for nerdy Derek :)