Its hard to give this book a low rating when I really enjoy this type of plot. I've seen it plenty of times before and I don't mind seeing it again. But when its BELIEVABLE!! There were a number of things that had me rolling my eyes and shaking my head during my quick read of this book. Just to name a few....
1. I was completely turned off when the author described the heroine's features. For the duration of the book, I pictured this short, unattractive and slightly hefty female.
2. Jess's responses to Kyle were meek and unwitty. In fact, I think I can count on one hand actual complete sentences that she says to him. What is it about her that makes her so "awesome" and unlike any other girl he's ever been with.
3. Fell in love with you when you were throwing up in my bathroom? I get what the author was going for but there needed to be more reasons. How about "I realized I was in love with you the moment you threatened to walk out of my life forever and needed to come up with a way to get you to know me better."
4. The "I love you" & "I love you too's" at the end were weak and disappointing.
5. And OMG - pregnant? Really? they've been together 6 months - now they're going into this relationship with a baby? Think about that - I mean really think about it.
There were some rather enjoyable moments in this book; the scene with the mother were great, I really liked Nicole. Kyle's demanding demeanor was super sexy and the author handles those scenes nicely.
The imagery and descriptive narrative was very well done, (slightly repetitive I mean how many times can one call a room straight "out of a magazine"? But still, I enjoyed the read.