This book suffered from the same issue as Against Doctor's orders, only the couple wasn't as interesting, or at least, I didn't feel the connection. They're drawn to each other, but they didn't spend nearly enough time together discussing anything of actually import, so I'm not sure what this insta-love was supposed to be based on.
The Blake storyline was something I haven't seen in lesfic before, but there's just instant acceptance everywhere (with the exception of one cartoonishly written antagonist) so it's just kind of glossed over, and didn't have any real emotional depth to it, although I did love the Blake/Abby scenes. And the Margie character was too overwhelmingly perfect for me to be able to warm to.
Nobody else did anything of note, the book is just made up of reasons for Abby and Flann to see each other/be jealous of someone else being near the other/trying to resist each other, yeah... that's pretty much it.
This book also suffers from Rad's compulsion to fill her books with lesbians, apart from the two main pairings of the first two books, we also have Glenn (barely mentioned in the first book but given a bit more to do here) and Carrie, although they both just seemed to be there to raise jealousy in their respective leads, and two minor secondary characters, one mentioned in passing and one introduced at the end of the book who may or may not play a bigger role in the series. So, not even counting the overall town, this small town hospital now boasts a lesbian president, three doctors, one surgical PA and a few other characters mentioned in passing as showing at least some sapphic tendencies. I could buy this in her P-Town stories, (although even they stretched credulity by the end) but in a small town in the Appalachian mountains? Yeah, sure.
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I didn't like Flann as much as I did Harper, but I did enjoy Abby, although I didn't buy into their relationship like I did with Harper and Presley. I hope the third one is better.