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Channon's first time under Jack's thumb was better than he could ever have imagined. He wants more, but has no idea what that could be. Jack, meanwhile, knows exactly what he wants from his young lover--nothing less than total obedience. And he knows exactly how to get it.

39 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 23, 2015

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R.J. Moray

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Also writes as Robin Moray.

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196 reviews115 followers
July 28, 2022
Do you see me in a wet, steaming puddle on the floor? Cuz, hOT DAMN!😩
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683 reviews548 followers
July 23, 2022
Jack is just CHEF'S KISS 🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇
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410 reviews105 followers
July 28, 2022
I’m loving the direction this story is going in. The phone scene…wow. I loved it
Profile Image for Chris.
2,070 reviews
June 24, 2018
The deal is set - Channon is becoming Jacks submissive.. not that Channon really understands everything this entails but he’s sure keen to please !
Profile Image for Amber.
1,732 reviews7 followers
January 19, 2019
Great addition to the series!

This was a great addition to the series. I like how Jack and Channon's relationship is progressing. Can't wait to see what Jack has Channon do next. I read this book using the Kindle Unlimited program.
Profile Image for Guy Venturi.
1,081 reviews1 follower
July 12, 2018
Gentle stimulation, simple demands, setting the hook

When your unknown desires suddenly overwhelm your hormones and brain, the power of suggestion becomes controlling of your responses. When sex is the motivator, most people's response is to obey. Even the body responds, but may not want to wait for orders.
Profile Image for Vita.
409 reviews
March 31, 2026
“I saw it when you realized,” Jack went on, quiet in Channon’s ear. “There was a moment where you knew you’d been caught, and then you took one look at me and the whole of your face transformed. It was beautiful. You looked so confused and so desperate, so reluctantly aroused. I wanted that. I still want that. You, Channon, on your knees for me..."
Profile Image for Denise GremoryKohta.
4,333 reviews7 followers
April 19, 2018
Here Channon is figuring out what Sir expects. He is also finding out more about what he likes. I love how this is going. Slow steady steps in teaching Channon what submission is.
514 reviews
December 10, 2021
Starting to get interesting. Still waiting to see what decisions are made.
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1,420 reviews94 followers
January 5, 2022
Phone Fun👀

Ummmmm this man… this man is just… wowza. I hate denial, it sucks and I’m bad at it but boy does he make it fun. 5/5⭐️ 3/5🌶🔥
Profile Image for Nonna 2K.
1,369 reviews11 followers
March 31, 2024
Quick Reads

I’m hooked and this is only the end of episode 2. Channon is exploring with Jack and discovering his submissive nature. Off to episode 3 I go!
Profile Image for Amur Thera.
560 reviews76 followers
February 27, 2023
The good
+ Channon
+ Channon taking Jack's rule about honesty very seriously
+ Channon's praise kink
+ Jack's attempts at communicating with Channon (but seriously, Jack, Channon needs more information to know exactly what he's consenting to!)

The bad
- Jack told Channon how to stop something he doesn't like, but it's obvious that Channon would never safeword if he thought Jack was enjoying something. This could easily have been prevented by Jack saying he'd be disappointed if Channon didn't safeword (because disappointing someone is Channon's personal hell), or checking in more often with questions Channon has to answer honestly
- Jack said Channon is his exclusively, sexually speaking, but didn't 'return' the promise. I bet poor Channon thinks Jack has a convenient boy in every town

Quotes
x He looked relaxed, pleased, and Channon wanted to go over there and... well, anything Jack wanted. But he didn't. Instead, he stood there staring like a love-struck baby cow.
x Jack smiled. He looked so normal when he smiled, shockingly handsome but normal, a regular guy who liked regular things, not things like fucking his teenage neighbor's mouth raw.
x "Normally, the second rule would be that you address me as 'sir', but you already seem to have the hang of that. In public 'Jack' or 'Mr Nash' is fine. But in private, I'll be 'sir' to you. Do you understand?" "Yes, sir. Uh, sir?" "Yes?" "Am I still Channon?"


I still don't like Jack. But I'm clinging to the memories of future-Jack and just focusing on Channon right now. So here's three good boy stars for Channon.


Read in 2021 and 2023.
Profile Image for Allison.
1,897 reviews13 followers
May 11, 2025
I enjoyed seeing Channon begin to blossom and Jack begin to understand just how lucky he was to find Channon.
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