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Her Unforgettable Laugh
The Companion's Secret: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
“You must marry her,” the stern voice said. “I need to gain control of her inheritance before she reaches her next birthday. It need not be a long marriage, but marry her you must.”
Alone in the world, Elizabeth Bennet had to rely upon herself. She knew escape was the only way to ensure her safety. With the help of Longbourn’s faithful servants, Elizabeth disappeared from her home and the odious heir. She was determined to find a way to support herself and remain hidden until after her birthday.
Fortune smiled on Elizabeth when a series of events offered her the position of companion to Georgiana Darcy. In spite of her position, Elizabeth found herself attracted to her new employer. Could he ever see her as more than his sister’s companion? Sometimes Elizabeth thought Mr. Darcy might care for her, too, but would his attraction—if that is what is was—survive when he learned the truth about her?
Hidden away at Pemberley, would Elizabeth be able to remain safely concealed until coming of age? What surprises did the future hold for her?
Alone in the world, Elizabeth Bennet had to rely upon herself. She knew escape was the only way to ensure her safety. With the help of Longbourn’s faithful servants, Elizabeth disappeared from her home and the odious heir. She was determined to find a way to support herself and remain hidden until after her birthday.
Fortune smiled on Elizabeth when a series of events offered her the position of companion to Georgiana Darcy. In spite of her position, Elizabeth found herself attracted to her new employer. Could he ever see her as more than his sister’s companion? Sometimes Elizabeth thought Mr. Darcy might care for her, too, but would his attraction—if that is what is was—survive when he learned the truth about her?
Hidden away at Pemberley, would Elizabeth be able to remain safely concealed until coming of age? What surprises did the future hold for her?
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452 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 26, 2015
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About the author
Linda Thompson
4 books11 followersLinda Thompson was born in Washington, D. C., and grew up in the Maryland suburbs. Perhaps this accounts for her love of culture and all things historical. She is an East Coast girl through-and-through, who loves the ocean! To her, there is no more soothing sound than the kiss of the surf as it reaches the sand.
Linda's love of reading and particularly the Regency Era began during her long bus commutes in junior high school. During her last year in junior high, she was introduced to what would become her two favorite books: Gone With the Wind and Pride and Prejudice. Her first attempt at writing was a sequel to Gone With the Wind at the age of sixteen.
Though writing was always something she enjoyed, Linda's career of choice was that of Administrative Assistance. Oddly enough, she always found a need to create a company newsletter for each of her employers.
She currently makes her home in Denton, Texas. She has been married to her husband, Jim, for 27 years and has had the privilege of being a stay-at-home mom for her three children for the last seventeen years.
You will often find her engrossed in a good book--usually JAFF or other historical fiction. She also loves to bake, cook, scrapbook, dance (She was a classically trained ballet dancer for thirteen years.), and travel. Now the joy of writing fills up much of her time.
As a glance at her blog would indicate, Linda adores spring flowers. She took the pictures that adorn the page. You can learn more about her writing and upcoming books at https://lindathompsonbooks.wordpress.com where she is happy to get your comments or you can send her an email at mailto:lindathompson.author@gmail.com.
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Linda's love of reading and particularly the Regency Era began during her long bus commutes in junior high school. During her last year in junior high, she was introduced to what would become her two favorite books: Gone With the Wind and Pride and Prejudice. Her first attempt at writing was a sequel to Gone With the Wind at the age of sixteen.
Though writing was always something she enjoyed, Linda's career of choice was that of Administrative Assistance. Oddly enough, she always found a need to create a company newsletter for each of her employers.
She currently makes her home in Denton, Texas. She has been married to her husband, Jim, for 27 years and has had the privilege of being a stay-at-home mom for her three children for the last seventeen years.
You will often find her engrossed in a good book--usually JAFF or other historical fiction. She also loves to bake, cook, scrapbook, dance (She was a classically trained ballet dancer for thirteen years.), and travel. Now the joy of writing fills up much of her time.
As a glance at her blog would indicate, Linda adores spring flowers. She took the pictures that adorn the page. You can learn more about her writing and upcoming books at https://lindathompsonbooks.wordpress.com where she is happy to get your comments or you can send her an email at mailto:lindathompson.author@gmail.com.
Librarian’s note: There is more than one author in the Goodreads database with this name. To link to this particular author, put three (3) spaces between first and last name. Linda Thompson
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May 23, 2018
Murder, mayhem, intrigue, and an escape for freedom
Oh My Goodness. The creativity level on this story blew my mind. It was wave after wave of some of the most outrageous crafty, devious and thrilling scenes I’ve ever read in JAFF. WOW!
I enjoyed every minute of it. I could not put it down. I’ll clean house and do laundry another day.
Jane was staying in London helping during Mrs. Gardiner’s confinement. Elizabeth was at home ill [she suffered from migraines] and the Bennet family had gone to the Meryton Assembly without her. Mr. Bennet went because with the two oldest absent, he needed to keep an eye on his youngest daughters.
The Bennet family left the assembly during a thunderstorm and experienced a terrible accident on the way home. None survived. Before the family was even buried, Cousin Collins the father and Cousin Collins his son arrived to take over. The older Mr. Collins was not a nice man. He was dictatorial, condescending, ordered his son around, and was demeaning to Mr. and Mrs. Hill and the Bennet’s beloved servants.
Elizabeth was suspicious of his coming when he did. She began to take notice as he attempted to isolate her and make her feel alone and dependent on him. Slowly he began to restrict her movements and made more and more demands on her in an attempt to break her.
Late one night she overheard the father. He intended to have her wed his son immediately as she was to inherit from some obscure relative on reaching her majority. If she refused they would compromise her and she would then have no choice.
Elizabeth planned her escape in minute detail and with the help from the servants, fled the county. She was careful and switched back several times and make false leads and sent her relatives on a wild goose chase. The servants vacated the premises soon after the Collins men went to look for her.
Elizabeth soon ran into the Darcy siblings shortly after the Ramsgate debacle. They hire her to be Georgiana’s companion. Darcy suspects that something isn’t quite right about her name, but has a good feeling about her and hires her anyway. They proceed on to Pemberley.
Mr. Collins was not best pleased that he had lost Elizabeth and continued the search for her.
Wickham joined the militia at Meryton and soon saw an easy mark in Collins and attempted to garner whatever he could from him.
Caroline was beyond EVIL and reason. She constantly pushed herself on others [Darcy and Georgiana especially], and was abusive, both verbally and physically to the servants. She witnessed the affection Georgiana and Darcy had for the companion along with their preference for her company. Caroline’s jealously reached new heights. She was outrageous and wholly uncontrollable.
Elizabeth finally had to intervene by telling Darcy about her abuse to the servants. Caroline's behavior became so bad that Darcy had to put his foot down with her and Charles. Charles eventually took her back to London and attempted to reign her in. It was hilarious how he tried to make her understand her actions had consequences. She simply would not see what she didn’t want to see.
Her final coup de grace was a maneuver that caused so much trouble and devastation that it’s almost impossible to describe. Later, when Charles tried to explain what her actions had done, she was unrepentant.
Georgiana was delightful and so much improved with Elizabeth’s help. She became quite the accomplished lady.
When Collins found out where Elizabeth was hiding [guess who told him], he knew he would need help in getting her, so of course he called on Wickham. So they were off to Derbyshire. Wickham intended to reacquaint himself with Georgiana and Collins would get Elizabeth. Collins wanted to cross the border into Scotland and marry; however, Wickham knew he couldn’t marry in Scotland [due to the restrictions on Georgiana’s dowry]. So, he figured he'd just ransom her instead, after taking his pleasure, of course. As long as he could have his revenge on Darcy, it didn't matter to him.
The tension came wave after wave…it was relentless and so well done. You couldn’t keep up with what was happening. You kept thinking any minute the ax would fall and sure enough it did.
I loved our dear Colonel Fitzwilliam and his parents the Earl and Lady Matlock. Oh they were such wonderful people.
Not so with Lady Catherine and Anne de Bourgh, they were a TOTAL surprise. I’ve never seen them portrayed this way before, oh my goodness. They both were quick with a right hand slap. Yeah, daughter like mother. Keep your distance from those two. They deserve each other.
When Collins and Wickham arrived at Derbyshire, all you-know-what hit the fan. It was amazing, quick action and the end to nefarious plans of an evil tyrant.
HEA [happy ever after] all around. So many threads to wrap up and the author did just that.
The epilogue was delightful and the last page…get a tissue…I lost it. The author put a mental picture in my head and I when I think about it, I want to burst into tears. OMG!!! I didn’t see it coming and simply lost it.
There were those pesky editing problems.
Oh My Goodness. The creativity level on this story blew my mind. It was wave after wave of some of the most outrageous crafty, devious and thrilling scenes I’ve ever read in JAFF. WOW!
I enjoyed every minute of it. I could not put it down. I’ll clean house and do laundry another day.
Jane was staying in London helping during Mrs. Gardiner’s confinement. Elizabeth was at home ill [she suffered from migraines] and the Bennet family had gone to the Meryton Assembly without her. Mr. Bennet went because with the two oldest absent, he needed to keep an eye on his youngest daughters.
The Bennet family left the assembly during a thunderstorm and experienced a terrible accident on the way home. None survived. Before the family was even buried, Cousin Collins the father and Cousin Collins his son arrived to take over. The older Mr. Collins was not a nice man. He was dictatorial, condescending, ordered his son around, and was demeaning to Mr. and Mrs. Hill and the Bennet’s beloved servants.
Elizabeth was suspicious of his coming when he did. She began to take notice as he attempted to isolate her and make her feel alone and dependent on him. Slowly he began to restrict her movements and made more and more demands on her in an attempt to break her.
Late one night she overheard the father. He intended to have her wed his son immediately as she was to inherit from some obscure relative on reaching her majority. If she refused they would compromise her and she would then have no choice.
Elizabeth planned her escape in minute detail and with the help from the servants, fled the county. She was careful and switched back several times and make false leads and sent her relatives on a wild goose chase. The servants vacated the premises soon after the Collins men went to look for her.
Elizabeth soon ran into the Darcy siblings shortly after the Ramsgate debacle. They hire her to be Georgiana’s companion. Darcy suspects that something isn’t quite right about her name, but has a good feeling about her and hires her anyway. They proceed on to Pemberley.
Mr. Collins was not best pleased that he had lost Elizabeth and continued the search for her.
Wickham joined the militia at Meryton and soon saw an easy mark in Collins and attempted to garner whatever he could from him.
Caroline was beyond EVIL and reason. She constantly pushed herself on others [Darcy and Georgiana especially], and was abusive, both verbally and physically to the servants. She witnessed the affection Georgiana and Darcy had for the companion along with their preference for her company. Caroline’s jealously reached new heights. She was outrageous and wholly uncontrollable.
Elizabeth finally had to intervene by telling Darcy about her abuse to the servants. Caroline's behavior became so bad that Darcy had to put his foot down with her and Charles. Charles eventually took her back to London and attempted to reign her in. It was hilarious how he tried to make her understand her actions had consequences. She simply would not see what she didn’t want to see.
Her final coup de grace was a maneuver that caused so much trouble and devastation that it’s almost impossible to describe. Later, when Charles tried to explain what her actions had done, she was unrepentant.
Georgiana was delightful and so much improved with Elizabeth’s help. She became quite the accomplished lady.
When Collins found out where Elizabeth was hiding [guess who told him], he knew he would need help in getting her, so of course he called on Wickham. So they were off to Derbyshire. Wickham intended to reacquaint himself with Georgiana and Collins would get Elizabeth. Collins wanted to cross the border into Scotland and marry; however, Wickham knew he couldn’t marry in Scotland [due to the restrictions on Georgiana’s dowry]. So, he figured he'd just ransom her instead, after taking his pleasure, of course. As long as he could have his revenge on Darcy, it didn't matter to him.
The tension came wave after wave…it was relentless and so well done. You couldn’t keep up with what was happening. You kept thinking any minute the ax would fall and sure enough it did.
I loved our dear Colonel Fitzwilliam and his parents the Earl and Lady Matlock. Oh they were such wonderful people.
Not so with Lady Catherine and Anne de Bourgh, they were a TOTAL surprise. I’ve never seen them portrayed this way before, oh my goodness. They both were quick with a right hand slap. Yeah, daughter like mother. Keep your distance from those two. They deserve each other.
When Collins and Wickham arrived at Derbyshire, all you-know-what hit the fan. It was amazing, quick action and the end to nefarious plans of an evil tyrant.
HEA [happy ever after] all around. So many threads to wrap up and the author did just that.
The epilogue was delightful and the last page…get a tissue…I lost it. The author put a mental picture in my head and I when I think about it, I want to burst into tears. OMG!!! I didn’t see it coming and simply lost it.
There were those pesky editing problems.
February 4, 2023
I really liked this story. Due to no initial misunderstanding between E and D they start their relationship very softly. And in any case E and D are both gentler, less abrasive characters in this rendition.
This is the second book I have read by this author and I am beginning to think this writer is not my cup of tea. It is sweet and simple, nothing specifically off with it, but it seems a bit too simplistic to me.
Reread - Liked the story just as much. Felt the same way about the writing style.
This is the second book I have read by this author and I am beginning to think this writer is not my cup of tea. It is sweet and simple, nothing specifically off with it, but it seems a bit too simplistic to me.
Reread - Liked the story just as much. Felt the same way about the writing style.
April 25, 2016
Erika loaned this book to me and as you can read, she rates it a 5 star review. I did find this an interesting read with some mystery, many murders and other deaths, blackmail, kidnapping, disguises and a descent into madness for one loathsome character. The characteristics of several of the latter type persons whom we know from canon are painted with stronger vileness than we know from P&P. Wickham, Caroline, Lady Catherine and even Anne de Bourgh plus a new villain, Mr. Collins’ father, Harold Collins, are more wicked and/or conniving, confrontational and/or even abusive in ways that may shock you. For instance: to talk of compromising the woman you want your son to marry…how sadistic, much less twisted?
The book description tells you that Elizabeth is alone in the world and it also tells you that she finds herself a position as companion to Georgiana. The tale getting there is one using a lot of imagination. I did find it touching as I read of how the servants all worked together and also considered the ramifications of their actions in helping Elizabeth escape a monster. I loved how that same monster found himself with no servants, no Elizabeth and, even, no son around to abuse and vilify one find day.
Evil is seeking to do Elizabeth in and it is coming at her from more than one source. You know how Darcy hates disguise of any sort – and here his instincts tell him that even with all the good qualities he is told and observes there is something going on that Elizabeth has not revealed to him. Yes, she is hired as a companion (and that situation is a bit of a stretch of the imagination, but OK) and she also fits the description of “governess” as she sets up lesson plans in a truly imaginative and fun manner for her charge.
That old cliché about ‘tangled webs when first we start to deceive’ comes into play as both Charles Bingley and Colonel Fitzwilliam discover, by default or by investigation, clues about Elizabeth’s true identity and her recent history.
Part of the reason this story only earned 4 stars for me is that the relationship between Elizabeth and Darcy had no spark, no sexual chemistry. It developed too easily. Yes, Elizabeth kept him at arms’ length knowing that 1.) She dare not allow a situation of compromise to occur and 2.) That he could not consider her as marriage material due to the span between their social positions and 3.) She had to continue to hide much of her background from him and thus would be dishonest in proceeding with a relationship with that standing in the way. However, I would have still liked more romance; not just in saying it occurred but in relating more of the internal feelings, the senses being involved, the heart being entangled! There are also some errata getting in the way of a higher designation.
Darcy and Elizabeth are, finally, painted as the most generous and considerate of all human beings. Thus you will find them the epitome of honorable as Master and Mistress of Pemberley. The ending was dragged out in my opinion. We get an epilogue which goes on and on through the years to the gravesite. There I pulled out a tissue. Somehow, even knowing these are fictional characters, I don’t really want to read of their demise, even after many happy years. Silly me!
This was a good story which definitely kept my interest as I read in within a 24 hour period. I can honestly say that this is a story I would recommend others who like JAFF read.
The book description tells you that Elizabeth is alone in the world and it also tells you that she finds herself a position as companion to Georgiana. The tale getting there is one using a lot of imagination. I did find it touching as I read of how the servants all worked together and also considered the ramifications of their actions in helping Elizabeth escape a monster. I loved how that same monster found himself with no servants, no Elizabeth and, even, no son around to abuse and vilify one find day.
Evil is seeking to do Elizabeth in and it is coming at her from more than one source. You know how Darcy hates disguise of any sort – and here his instincts tell him that even with all the good qualities he is told and observes there is something going on that Elizabeth has not revealed to him. Yes, she is hired as a companion (and that situation is a bit of a stretch of the imagination, but OK) and she also fits the description of “governess” as she sets up lesson plans in a truly imaginative and fun manner for her charge.
That old cliché about ‘tangled webs when first we start to deceive’ comes into play as both Charles Bingley and Colonel Fitzwilliam discover, by default or by investigation, clues about Elizabeth’s true identity and her recent history.
Part of the reason this story only earned 4 stars for me is that the relationship between Elizabeth and Darcy had no spark, no sexual chemistry. It developed too easily. Yes, Elizabeth kept him at arms’ length knowing that 1.) She dare not allow a situation of compromise to occur and 2.) That he could not consider her as marriage material due to the span between their social positions and 3.) She had to continue to hide much of her background from him and thus would be dishonest in proceeding with a relationship with that standing in the way. However, I would have still liked more romance; not just in saying it occurred but in relating more of the internal feelings, the senses being involved, the heart being entangled! There are also some errata getting in the way of a higher designation.
Darcy and Elizabeth are, finally, painted as the most generous and considerate of all human beings. Thus you will find them the epitome of honorable as Master and Mistress of Pemberley. The ending was dragged out in my opinion. We get an epilogue which goes on and on through the years to the gravesite. There I pulled out a tissue. Somehow, even knowing these are fictional characters, I don’t really want to read of their demise, even after many happy years. Silly me!
This was a good story which definitely kept my interest as I read in within a 24 hour period. I can honestly say that this is a story I would recommend others who like JAFF read.
April 15, 2016
An absolutely FANTASTIC P&P variation!!!
If I could, I would give The Companion's Secret a 10 star rating!!!! This book definitely is towards the top of my Top P&P variations list!!!!
Okay a general synopsis: The Companion's Secret is about love and loyalty, honor and trust. We start out with the the assembly in Meryton, though Netherfield is empty, Jane is assisting her aunt Gardiner through a rough pregnancy, Elizabeth is sick and left home to recoup, and Mr Bennet going with he rest of the family to the Assembly because he was feeling he needed to supervise his wife and younger girls since neither Jane or Elizabeth would be there. A terrible storm started as everyone was leaving the assembly. As the Bennets made their way home lightening struck and thunder rolled through startling the horses. When Elizabeth wakes the next morning feeling better, she wonders why everything is so quiet and goes to investigate. Not finding her family she and a stablehand, Sam, set out down the lane to see if they would come upon them. They find the horses, Sam notices the carriage but diverts her attention to getting help then sending her home.
As we say goodbye to dear friends, the unscrupulous and slimy heir, Mr Harold Collins (father to the Mr Collins we know in the original) slithered in the very next day!!! Coincidence?!?! You decide by reading!! With him is Mr Walter Collins (the Mr C we know), though he follows his father's orders he appears to have a conscience!!! Ooohhh I loathe Mr H Collins!!!!! Elizabeth overhears both men talking about horrible things one late night and determines that she must run for her life!!! With the help of very loyal servants (Mr and Mrs Hill, Sam, Sally and Mrs Phipps), Elizabeth is able to make her escape.
I will not give anymore away because you MUST read it for yourselves. Let's just say that with Elizabeth in hiding, there is no place to hide better than the most beautiful piece of heaven on Earth!!!' Can you guess? Sure bond between ODC seems to easily come about, but with sinister characters like Caroline (who literally became more deranged as the book went on), and Mr Wickham (still the delusional sod thinking he is owed everything), Lady Catherine (a meddlesome and vulgar woman who likes to strike young innocents), Mr H Collins (he is just pure evil), and Miss Anne de Bourgh (B**** who takes after her mother!!), the path to love is never easy!!!
Okay, I need to say that I ADORED this Mr Darcy!!! He was less arrogant, less condescending, more accepting, more caring, much more compassionate. This Darcy listens to his heart more than his brain or the concerns of his status!!! I LOVED how he consulted with Georgiana to center himself instead of disregarding her opinions because she's so much younger then he is.
Oh and Elizabeth!!! All the trials she has to suffer to be a less prejudiced version of herself!! What would it be like to find someone who can truly see you, who can truly appreciate your intelligence?? I love the Elizabeth that emerges...confident, compassionate, giving, intelligent, spirited, forthright, and so much more!!!
I will HIGHLY RECOMMEND all JAFFers!!! For those who are a little "mature" shy, worry not there are no explicit sexual content, though there is some vulgar language (remember me mentioning Lady C) and some violence (though nothing terrifying). And be aware, if you're a softy get out your tissues for the last chapter and epilogue!!! Just a beautiful story and well written!!! I applaud Linda Thompson and look forward to more of her stories!!!
If I could, I would give The Companion's Secret a 10 star rating!!!! This book definitely is towards the top of my Top P&P variations list!!!!
Okay a general synopsis: The Companion's Secret is about love and loyalty, honor and trust. We start out with the the assembly in Meryton, though Netherfield is empty, Jane is assisting her aunt Gardiner through a rough pregnancy, Elizabeth is sick and left home to recoup, and Mr Bennet going with he rest of the family to the Assembly because he was feeling he needed to supervise his wife and younger girls since neither Jane or Elizabeth would be there. A terrible storm started as everyone was leaving the assembly. As the Bennets made their way home lightening struck and thunder rolled through startling the horses. When Elizabeth wakes the next morning feeling better, she wonders why everything is so quiet and goes to investigate. Not finding her family she and a stablehand, Sam, set out down the lane to see if they would come upon them. They find the horses, Sam notices the carriage but diverts her attention to getting help then sending her home.
As we say goodbye to dear friends, the unscrupulous and slimy heir, Mr Harold Collins (father to the Mr Collins we know in the original) slithered in the very next day!!! Coincidence?!?! You decide by reading!! With him is Mr Walter Collins (the Mr C we know), though he follows his father's orders he appears to have a conscience!!! Ooohhh I loathe Mr H Collins!!!!! Elizabeth overhears both men talking about horrible things one late night and determines that she must run for her life!!! With the help of very loyal servants (Mr and Mrs Hill, Sam, Sally and Mrs Phipps), Elizabeth is able to make her escape.
I will not give anymore away because you MUST read it for yourselves. Let's just say that with Elizabeth in hiding, there is no place to hide better than the most beautiful piece of heaven on Earth!!!' Can you guess? Sure bond between ODC seems to easily come about, but with sinister characters like Caroline (who literally became more deranged as the book went on), and Mr Wickham (still the delusional sod thinking he is owed everything), Lady Catherine (a meddlesome and vulgar woman who likes to strike young innocents), Mr H Collins (he is just pure evil), and Miss Anne de Bourgh (B**** who takes after her mother!!), the path to love is never easy!!!
Okay, I need to say that I ADORED this Mr Darcy!!! He was less arrogant, less condescending, more accepting, more caring, much more compassionate. This Darcy listens to his heart more than his brain or the concerns of his status!!! I LOVED how he consulted with Georgiana to center himself instead of disregarding her opinions because she's so much younger then he is.
Oh and Elizabeth!!! All the trials she has to suffer to be a less prejudiced version of herself!! What would it be like to find someone who can truly see you, who can truly appreciate your intelligence?? I love the Elizabeth that emerges...confident, compassionate, giving, intelligent, spirited, forthright, and so much more!!!
I will HIGHLY RECOMMEND all JAFFers!!! For those who are a little "mature" shy, worry not there are no explicit sexual content, though there is some vulgar language (remember me mentioning Lady C) and some violence (though nothing terrifying). And be aware, if you're a softy get out your tissues for the last chapter and epilogue!!! Just a beautiful story and well written!!! I applaud Linda Thompson and look forward to more of her stories!!!
July 6, 2017
2.5 rounded up to 3 stars
I actually kind of liked this plot despite the fact that it's pretty over-the-top melodramatic. Murder, secret identity, kidnapping, and a great deal of face slapping find their way into this crazy story.
All of Elizabeth Bennet's family except herself and her sister Jane are killed in a carriage accident on the way home from a Meryton assembly. Elizabeth was spared because she stayed home, feeling ill that evening, while Jane was in London with the Gardiners. Mr. Harold Collins and his son Walter quickly show up at Longbourn to claim their inheritance. The senior Mr. Collins immediately starts pushing a match between Elizabeth and his son and isolating her from the rest of her family and her neighbors.
Fortunately, Elizabeth learns his motivation, which is another inheritance she was unaware of from the aunt she was named for. She will receive this when she marries or enters her majority, which is not for several months. She realizes she must get away and, with help from the servants, who already detest the new master of Longbourn, she hits the road.
Luck is with her, as she comes across Mr. and Miss Darcy and ends up being hired as Miss Darcy's new companion. In order to keep Harold Collins from finding her, she goes by the name Rose Lucas. The story proceeds from there.
Unfortunately, I didn't care for any of the characterizations. Darcy and Elizabeth are too perfect and brilliant, and the villains (and there are several) are like caricatures, with no redeeming qualities. Caroline Bingley is certifiably mad, with Lady Catherine and Anne de Bourgh not far behind her. Harold Collins and Mr. Wickham are just evil personified. No one feels like a real three-dimensional character.
That's because the writing is stiff and the dialogue unnatural. Nothing flows. There's a lot of repetitiveness, too. There are various misspellings and grammatical errors sprinkled throughout. At one point, Georgiana addresses her companion as Elizabeth, when she's only supposed to know her as Rose.
Considering the lack of quality writing here, this is way overpriced, even though the story is okay in a can't-turn-away-from-the-car-wreck kind of way.
I actually kind of liked this plot despite the fact that it's pretty over-the-top melodramatic. Murder, secret identity, kidnapping, and a great deal of face slapping find their way into this crazy story.
All of Elizabeth Bennet's family except herself and her sister Jane are killed in a carriage accident on the way home from a Meryton assembly. Elizabeth was spared because she stayed home, feeling ill that evening, while Jane was in London with the Gardiners. Mr. Harold Collins and his son Walter quickly show up at Longbourn to claim their inheritance. The senior Mr. Collins immediately starts pushing a match between Elizabeth and his son and isolating her from the rest of her family and her neighbors.
Fortunately, Elizabeth learns his motivation, which is another inheritance she was unaware of from the aunt she was named for. She will receive this when she marries or enters her majority, which is not for several months. She realizes she must get away and, with help from the servants, who already detest the new master of Longbourn, she hits the road.
Luck is with her, as she comes across Mr. and Miss Darcy and ends up being hired as Miss Darcy's new companion. In order to keep Harold Collins from finding her, she goes by the name Rose Lucas. The story proceeds from there.
Unfortunately, I didn't care for any of the characterizations. Darcy and Elizabeth are too perfect and brilliant, and the villains (and there are several) are like caricatures, with no redeeming qualities. Caroline Bingley is certifiably mad, with Lady Catherine and Anne de Bourgh not far behind her. Harold Collins and Mr. Wickham are just evil personified. No one feels like a real three-dimensional character.
That's because the writing is stiff and the dialogue unnatural. Nothing flows. There's a lot of repetitiveness, too. There are various misspellings and grammatical errors sprinkled throughout. At one point, Georgiana addresses her companion as Elizabeth, when she's only supposed to know her as Rose.
Considering the lack of quality writing here, this is way overpriced, even though the story is okay in a can't-turn-away-from-the-car-wreck kind of way.
October 8, 2015
The Companion's Secret: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
How can anything be happy and horrible at the same time? Well, this story has done just that! A mix of sadness that involves the Bennet family and the happiness she finds becoming a companion of Georgiana Darcy. In this story, Linda has written a character, if possible, worse than Wickham. Caroline is her usual hateful haughty self with insanity thrown in for an extra characteristic that she's always held confined in many other variations, but in this variation it all shines through. Much angst in this story that all leads to much happiness in the end. I have enjoyed Linda's other books, but I could not stop reading this one until it ended.
How can anything be happy and horrible at the same time? Well, this story has done just that! A mix of sadness that involves the Bennet family and the happiness she finds becoming a companion of Georgiana Darcy. In this story, Linda has written a character, if possible, worse than Wickham. Caroline is her usual hateful haughty self with insanity thrown in for an extra characteristic that she's always held confined in many other variations, but in this variation it all shines through. Much angst in this story that all leads to much happiness in the end. I have enjoyed Linda's other books, but I could not stop reading this one until it ended.
April 23, 2016
Oh dear reader this was such a beautiful tale!
If you are looking for a sweet story centred around a kind,considerate,caring Darcy and a strong,independent and determined Lizzy supported by a close and loving extended family,then this is the book for you.
This tale initially takes us on a journey of grief and heartbreak as Lizzy is faced with the death of her parents and younger sisters.
Alone at Longbourn,it isn't long before she is compelled to welcome one Harold Collins, heir and now owner of the only place Lizzy has ever called home,and his son Walter.
Due to Harold's gambling debts,his intention to force a marriage between his son and Lizzy, and the severe treatment she receives while a resident in his house,Lizzy flees in the hope of remaining under the radar until she reaches her majority.
Lucky enough to encounter one Mr Darcy, the story continues to unfold as the couple surmount the various trials and tribulations presented by the usual suspects!
This is a feel good story that I highly recommend. The epilogue is so sweet that you may find yourself in need of a handkerchief or two!
If you are looking for a sweet story centred around a kind,considerate,caring Darcy and a strong,independent and determined Lizzy supported by a close and loving extended family,then this is the book for you.
This tale initially takes us on a journey of grief and heartbreak as Lizzy is faced with the death of her parents and younger sisters.
Alone at Longbourn,it isn't long before she is compelled to welcome one Harold Collins, heir and now owner of the only place Lizzy has ever called home,and his son Walter.
Due to Harold's gambling debts,his intention to force a marriage between his son and Lizzy, and the severe treatment she receives while a resident in his house,Lizzy flees in the hope of remaining under the radar until she reaches her majority.
Lucky enough to encounter one Mr Darcy, the story continues to unfold as the couple surmount the various trials and tribulations presented by the usual suspects!
This is a feel good story that I highly recommend. The epilogue is so sweet that you may find yourself in need of a handkerchief or two!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 26, 2018
After a carriage accident that kills her three younger sisters and parents, Elizabeth is left at Longbourn with the Collins - Harold Collins and his son Walter. Fearing for her life she decides not to burden the Gardiners (where Jane is staying) but make her way as a companion and governess. It is fortuitous that she meets the Darcys.
In this variation Elizabeth and Darcy seem to have no faults, and the villains no redeeming qualities. As much as I love the villains, to counteract the sweet, at least one of them should have had one spark of goodness.
In this variation Elizabeth and Darcy seem to have no faults, and the villains no redeeming qualities. As much as I love the villains, to counteract the sweet, at least one of them should have had one spark of goodness.
March 15, 2020
4.5⭐️ Loved the ending!
July 18, 2017
This Pride & Prejudice variation started with a lot of excitement, but ended up being just really bland.
Thompson ruthlessly kills off Elizabeth's entire family (except for Jane, who visiting the Gardiners) in a terrible carriage accident in the first chapter. Immediately, the heir to Longbourn shows up, except in this variation it isn't the Mr. Collins we know, but that Mr. Collins's father, who is a pretty terrible person. The reader is not surprised to learn that he probably had a hand in creating the carriage accident. He's super creepy and everyone hates him, including his own son who doesn't really like any of his dad's plans but since his dad has always beaten him up when he disagrees, he pretty just goes along with everything.
Anyway, Mr. C Sr. wants Mr. C Jr. to marry Elizabeth. Since she isn't really into that idea, Sr. decides that Jr. will have to compromise her. Elizabeth overhears them talking and discovers that she is supposed to receive an inheritance from her great aunt when she reaches her majority the following spring, which is what this is all about. She also hears about the whole planned compromise thing, and then listens as Sr. laughs evilly whilst plotting her ultimate demise after he gets his hands on the inheritance. Fearing for her life, she flees Longbourn in disguise, aided by the servants who all love her. She coincidentally meets up with the Darcys at an inn, and what with one thing and another is hired as Georgiana's companion.
While I didn't dislike this variation, there was just no character development. Elizabeth is absolutely perfect - kind, loving, thoughtful, generous, etc. Darcy is also perfect - kind, loving, thoughtful, generous, etc. Georgiana is quietly perfect - kind, loving, thoughtful, generous, etc. Guess who else is perfect? Jane, Mr. Bingley, the Gardiners, all of the servants at Longbourn, Darcy's entire family except for Lady Catherine, a random dressmaker in Lambton, and even Elizabeth's horse. Since all the good guys were already perfect, there wasn't really any room for them to learn or grow. The bad guys were all super bad (in this version, Collins Sr., Wickham, Miss Bingley, and Lady Catherine), so they didn't really learn or grow either - they just got punished.
Thompson did a decent job making things seem plausible, even hiring Elizabeth at a random inn. She stretches credulity but I still could get behind it. I mean, who wouldn't hire an angel if they stumbled across them? And that's basically Elizabeth's character in this book.
The last 20% of the book was completely superfluous. All of the main storylines are resolved, and Darcy and Elizabeth get married. Except then all of the sudden we have this weird last bit where Lady Catherine shows up and causes trouble, but it felt really awkward, like this part was literally there just to make the story longer. There were also some minor editing issues; the main one that aggravated me was that the author couldn't seem to decide whether Bingley's aunt in Yorkshire was named Agnes or Agatha.
All in all, a 3/5 for a story that wasn't terrible, just very, very bland.
Thompson ruthlessly kills off Elizabeth's entire family (except for Jane, who visiting the Gardiners) in a terrible carriage accident in the first chapter. Immediately, the heir to Longbourn shows up, except in this variation it isn't the Mr. Collins we know, but that Mr. Collins's father, who is a pretty terrible person. The reader is not surprised to learn that he probably had a hand in creating the carriage accident. He's super creepy and everyone hates him, including his own son who doesn't really like any of his dad's plans but since his dad has always beaten him up when he disagrees, he pretty just goes along with everything.
Anyway, Mr. C Sr. wants Mr. C Jr. to marry Elizabeth. Since she isn't really into that idea, Sr. decides that Jr. will have to compromise her. Elizabeth overhears them talking and discovers that she is supposed to receive an inheritance from her great aunt when she reaches her majority the following spring, which is what this is all about. She also hears about the whole planned compromise thing, and then listens as Sr. laughs evilly whilst plotting her ultimate demise after he gets his hands on the inheritance. Fearing for her life, she flees Longbourn in disguise, aided by the servants who all love her. She coincidentally meets up with the Darcys at an inn, and what with one thing and another is hired as Georgiana's companion.
While I didn't dislike this variation, there was just no character development. Elizabeth is absolutely perfect - kind, loving, thoughtful, generous, etc. Darcy is also perfect - kind, loving, thoughtful, generous, etc. Georgiana is quietly perfect - kind, loving, thoughtful, generous, etc. Guess who else is perfect? Jane, Mr. Bingley, the Gardiners, all of the servants at Longbourn, Darcy's entire family except for Lady Catherine, a random dressmaker in Lambton, and even Elizabeth's horse. Since all the good guys were already perfect, there wasn't really any room for them to learn or grow. The bad guys were all super bad (in this version, Collins Sr., Wickham, Miss Bingley, and Lady Catherine), so they didn't really learn or grow either - they just got punished.
Thompson did a decent job making things seem plausible, even hiring Elizabeth at a random inn. She stretches credulity but I still could get behind it. I mean, who wouldn't hire an angel if they stumbled across them? And that's basically Elizabeth's character in this book.
The last 20% of the book was completely superfluous. All of the main storylines are resolved, and Darcy and Elizabeth get married. Except then all of the sudden we have this weird last bit where Lady Catherine shows up and causes trouble, but it felt really awkward, like this part was literally there just to make the story longer. There were also some minor editing issues; the main one that aggravated me was that the author couldn't seem to decide whether Bingley's aunt in Yorkshire was named Agnes or Agatha.
All in all, a 3/5 for a story that wasn't terrible, just very, very bland.
January 26, 2018
The beginning is heart - wrenching, the Bennet family save Elizabeth and Jane is killed in a carriage accident. Examination of the carriage shows evidence of foul play. Jane is currently visiting the Gardiners as her aunt is expecting. Elizabeth was at home but did not attend the assembly because of a headache.
The next day the heir of Longbourne arrives with his son. Elizabeth is soon isolated from her neighbours but it's an overheard conversation in the night that makes her run away. She will get an inheritance upon her 21st birthday that will make a marriage to her advantagous. On her escape she happens upon the Darcy siblings and gets a position as Georgiana's companion. The trials are far from over though. The Bingley's visits and miss Bingley is worse than ever.
Wickham is assigned to the militia in Meryton and befriends the heir of Longbourne. Eventually they catch up with Elizabeth.
Lady Catherine makes her mark towards the end and the apple does not fall far from the tree...
There is an epilogue which was a list of events until the last page which was heart - wrenching.
I loved the angsty bit which kept turning the pages. The last quarter of the book was really sweet, a bit too sweet perhaps... I kept wishing for a bit of romance and passion but it never happened. I think that would have balanced the book nicely and would have made it a 5 star read. As it is, it's a weak 4.
Elizabeth is a bit over the top in skills and accomplishment, I thought that unnecessary.
Darcy acted impulsively when hiring Elizabeth but was other wise not his usual haughty self and there were no misunderstandings. He was adorable throughout and I actually missed the arrogance etc and felt it too heavy on the sugar.
All in all a thrilling story and a page turner that I recommend.
The next day the heir of Longbourne arrives with his son. Elizabeth is soon isolated from her neighbours but it's an overheard conversation in the night that makes her run away. She will get an inheritance upon her 21st birthday that will make a marriage to her advantagous. On her escape she happens upon the Darcy siblings and gets a position as Georgiana's companion. The trials are far from over though. The Bingley's visits and miss Bingley is worse than ever.
Wickham is assigned to the militia in Meryton and befriends the heir of Longbourne. Eventually they catch up with Elizabeth.
Lady Catherine makes her mark towards the end and the apple does not fall far from the tree...
There is an epilogue which was a list of events until the last page which was heart - wrenching.
I loved the angsty bit which kept turning the pages. The last quarter of the book was really sweet, a bit too sweet perhaps... I kept wishing for a bit of romance and passion but it never happened. I think that would have balanced the book nicely and would have made it a 5 star read. As it is, it's a weak 4.
Elizabeth is a bit over the top in skills and accomplishment, I thought that unnecessary.
Darcy acted impulsively when hiring Elizabeth but was other wise not his usual haughty self and there were no misunderstandings. He was adorable throughout and I actually missed the arrogance etc and felt it too heavy on the sugar.
All in all a thrilling story and a page turner that I recommend.
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January 30, 2020The author states that this book has been professionally edited and proofread. Perhaps Kindle downloaded an old version or the author was robbed blind. So many errors. Several times Georgiana calls Rose 'Lizzie' before she knows who she really is. Darcy waits for Bingley and his sister in his study but, for some reason, the author has Bingley enter the library. These kind of mistakes, which should have been picked up, throw you completely out of the world the author is trying to create. There are other examples but those mentioned show the type of carelessness that is dotted throughout the text.
As to the story itself. It started off alright but was too easily resolved. The angst was minimal and scenarios did not ring true.
As to the story itself. It started off alright but was too easily resolved. The angst was minimal and scenarios did not ring true.
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June 28, 2025
I enjoyed this variation!
The beginning was heartbreaking and drenched with so many emotions (sadness, anxiety, anger, Suffering…)that I wanted to quit but could not put it down. I had many tears.
This was not a meeting in the assembly but while Elizabeth is on the run. Darcy is amazingly knight in shining armor but not annoyingly perfect. Richard just puts his foot in his mouth and cannot help his concern that he stumbles over his first meeting with Elizabeth.
He breaks the flow in a positive way but still keeps the storyline alive and interesting.
There are 2 Mr Collins [and it is an awesome twist]. Wickham and lady Catherine are awful but they also keep this alive in the after math.
I highly recommend this retelling to ages 15 and above!
The beginning was heartbreaking and drenched with so many emotions (sadness, anxiety, anger, Suffering…)that I wanted to quit but could not put it down. I had many tears.
This was not a meeting in the assembly but while Elizabeth is on the run. Darcy is amazingly knight in shining armor but not annoyingly perfect. Richard just puts his foot in his mouth and cannot help his concern that he stumbles over his first meeting with Elizabeth.
He breaks the flow in a positive way but still keeps the storyline alive and interesting.
There are 2 Mr Collins [and it is an awesome twist]. Wickham and lady Catherine are awful but they also keep this alive in the after math.
I highly recommend this retelling to ages 15 and above!
June 6, 2018
Second read!
This is a wonderful book filled with romance, drama, thrill, murder and mystery! What more can you ask for when you all all that and a fantastic plot! Enjoyed reading it again!
This is a wonderful book filled with romance, drama, thrill, murder and mystery! What more can you ask for when you all all that and a fantastic plot! Enjoyed reading it again!
July 22, 2018
I loved this story
I found the plot very original and enjoyed the story very much. The pacing was also just right for me. The HEA and the epilogue couldn’t have been better.
I recommend this book highly.
I found the plot very original and enjoyed the story very much. The pacing was also just right for me. The HEA and the epilogue couldn’t have been better.
I recommend this book highly.
October 12, 2020
Exhilarating!
I really enjoyed this book very much. It is a very original and different version than the other "Pride and Prejudice Variation" I've read.
It starts in a very unexpected way and continues this way until the end.
I couldn't drop it until the end!
I really enjoyed this book very much. It is a very original and different version than the other "Pride and Prejudice Variation" I've read.
It starts in a very unexpected way and continues this way until the end.
I couldn't drop it until the end!
February 1, 2019
Interesting
Interesting variation of Jane Austen’s classic Pride and Prejudice. Very different timeline from canon and several new characters but enjoyable
Interesting variation of Jane Austen’s classic Pride and Prejudice. Very different timeline from canon and several new characters but enjoyable
October 30, 2023
Excellent journey
Entertaining read that had many ups and downs in the lives of Elizabeth and Darcy. There were quite a few interesting scenes in the storyline to keep you engaged.
Entertaining read that had many ups and downs in the lives of Elizabeth and Darcy. There were quite a few interesting scenes in the storyline to keep you engaged.
March 20, 2016
It was so good that I finished it in two days! I simply could not put down this book! The villains here were again very wicked as were written in her other variations. She had timed the kidnapping at the right moment just when you might have forgotten about the villains as the Darcys and Lizzy were so happy. There were many touching moments such as when Darcy proposed and Elizabeth was finally reunited with her family. In the end, everyone got their happily ever after and I liked how all the pieces came together in the remaining chapters. A very delightful standalone variation! I am eagerly awaiting the third in her unforgettable laugh series. :)
March 29, 2016
A bit of something for everyone.
This book has a bit of something for everyone. Murder, mystery, crazy Caroline, betrayal, love, and truths. The journey of heartbreak, finding purpose and love for Elizabeth keeps you wanting to read more. There are no "sex scenes" in this book, so I was happy, however you may not if like to have them in your books. I was sorry to come to the end of the book.
This book has a bit of something for everyone. Murder, mystery, crazy Caroline, betrayal, love, and truths. The journey of heartbreak, finding purpose and love for Elizabeth keeps you wanting to read more. There are no "sex scenes" in this book, so I was happy, however you may not if like to have them in your books. I was sorry to come to the end of the book.
April 11, 2016
Good read
The book is a different variation on Pride and Prejudice. I enjoyed the differences, however my joy in reading was disrupted by typos and an inability to count. This shows up in the epilogue. I truly enjoyed the author's imagination. I have read other titles by the author and the plot was as excellent as always.
The book is a different variation on Pride and Prejudice. I enjoyed the differences, however my joy in reading was disrupted by typos and an inability to count. This shows up in the epilogue. I truly enjoyed the author's imagination. I have read other titles by the author and the plot was as excellent as always.
July 24, 2016
This was an enjoyable book that I found interesting to read as it is very different than most other variations that I've read. I enjoyed seeing the Collins as truly horrible people. I found it to be well written although there are several name mistakes and and grammatical errors.
April 29, 2016
Story was fine but I thought the writing itself needed some work. Was a nice quick read on a rainy day though.
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