3.25*
Picking up almost exactly where Her Majesty’s Necromancer (#2) left off, Beyond the Grave was another fun and entertaining read. There was a little less action but the mystery was enjoyable and I liked the overall plot.
If you’ve liked Charlie, Lincoln, and the rest of the gang for the last 2 novels, you’ll continue to like them here. Charlie and Lincoln in particular, continue to take baby steps towards each other and I appreciate a slow-burning romance. Lincoln continues to deny his feelings for Charlie for most of the book but I think we’re seeing some hope on the horizon for book #4.
However, at times, Charlie can sometimes sound like the teenager she is and, despite her hardened years on the street, she still seems to have a naive faith and hope in people. She likes to see the good in others and, while this isn’t necessarily a bad thing, living on the street slaps you in the face with the harsher realities of the world (including the cruelty and callousness humans can show). Charlie also continually seeks love and affection from others. Again, this is something that I question someone in her position doing so openly. She wears her heart on her sleeve vs showing any wariness toward others or having a more jaded and cynical view of the world. It doesn’t seem believable.
Additionally, as a continuation of this, I think I may have romanticized the previous novels in this series a bit instead of looking at them more practically. I overlooked several things in the in the last 2 novels that are glaring errors now. As an example, the language Charlie uses isn’t correct. Not once have we really read the slang and lower-class, gutter-toned speech that she would’ve and should’ve picked up during her time living as a boy. There may be a small reference here or there where she’s not using perfect / correct grammar, but the author never lets us read more than a word of two of it. Furthermore, Charlie supposedly ‘slips’ back into her street-urchin slang when she goes to visit the theater and talk to its employees. Not only would this make sense for Charlie to do, but it’s implied that the actress she spoke to conversed in a similar manner. But again, we (as readers) never see that, we’re just told that it happened this way. Although it doesn’t take place in London, we should be seeing a lot more passages similar to The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn (except with a more English flare). I hate that the author only nods to the differences in speech by stating that there are differences vs letting us read the difference.
I also found myself a little annoyed that in the previous book, Her Majesty’s Necromancer (#2), we learn that Lincoln struggles to interact well with others at times. Again, we see little evidence of this and what interactions we read about, not only is Lincoln a perfect gentleman to his guests/other members of society, but he’s able to engage in polite conversation with them rather well. There’s a small mention that he may not be the best at small talk all the time but, for the most part, he’s certainly able to get by. This is yet another contradiction between what the author is stating or implying vs what’s actually being written in the pages.
It’s not that I didn’t enjoy this novel or that I’m giving up on the series. Because, to the contrary, I plan on continuing this journey. I think reading book 3 just threw some red-flags my way that, in all honestly, should’ve stood out from the beginning. I’ve been a little disillusioned with my reading of Beyond The Grave (#3) so I hope book #4 is better!