Life sails along smoothly on beautiful St. Thomas for Abby Melrose Bellavance, or so she thinks. That is, until her husband Remy steals her trust fund and disappears for parts unknown. Now, with five million reasons to write off men for good, she returns to Charleston, broke and groveling at her mother’s feet.
Living again in the opulent mansion on South Battery, Abby is thrown another curve ball. Her mother passes away, leaving Abby with an enormous home but no money to support it.
Turning the mansion into a boardinghouse has its advantage—immediate cash—and disadvantage—two of the hottest men in Charleston are now Abby’s tenants.
Abby wants love again, especially with hunky Erik, the handyman, and sexy Brandon, the prominent attorney, living in the mansion with her. They are so different, yet they’re similar in one way she needs to avoid—they are men, and she should keep her distance.
As the southern summer blazes on, Abby’s life becomes even more complicated. Personal secrets are revealed, and fate deals her one final blow. She wonders if she will ever be given a second chance at falling in love.
Bria Marche has spent most of her adult years living near Milwaukee, Wisconsin. She is a member of numerous writer’s organizations including, Fiction for All, Fiction Factor and Writers-Online.
Along with writing, she also enjoys many forms of art, especially creating tangible objects herself. She loves to travel worldwide and is an avid bicyclist.
I couldn't even finish this book. The main character is a spoiled immature brat. Nine chapters was enough for me. I couldn't care what happened to her.
: If she wasn't smart enough to protect 15 million dollars of her own, who would care if she is going through a little hard time..
I finished it fairly quickly but I had a hard time with the copy editing, you would be reading about one thing/place and the next sentence you have moved onto another aspect of the story... very confusing. A new paragraph would have removed that confusion. I also found the story to be very predictable with way to many cues about what was going to happen that nothing was a surprise. I also found the characters to not be very developed and not very believable either. Not sure I will read anything by this author.
Definitely a book for readers of (sweet) romance and/or chick lit. As with most/all romance it is eminently predictable.
Rich girl marries a Caribbean man who runs off with her millions and sells their house from under her. Rich – now poor – girl goes home to mummy who lives in the posh area of Charleston. Mummy has changed her will as she (correctly) thought the new husband was just after the family money, but she agrees to change it back. Trouble is, she dies before that happens leaving her daughter high and dry with no cash and a mansion to maintain, which can't be sold according to the terms of the will.
So our heroine turns it into an illegal boarding house, and natch, two of the tenants are extremely handsome eligible men … There is the inevitable misunderstanding between her and her chosen love interest, the inevitable reconciliation and she ends up recovering her millions.
The locations are glamorous, no slums or poverty in this, and there are some interesting ethical questions raised about deception, lies, trust, friendship and … money.
But the writing is one-dimensional, the characters similarly so, and every time a problem appears, a solution appears just as magically in the next few pages so there is no tension and the pacing is flat. It's an easy read though.
The blurb also gives away too much of the story about the death of the mother and the boarding house. It felt as though the first few chapters were just back story as the reader knows what's coming and is waiting for the mother's death and the reading of the will. Plus we also know there will be two men competing for her attention. I'd have liked less of a summary style blurb and one that was shorter and more intriguing.
I'd give it 2.5 stars, but given it is romance, that's rounded up to three stars.
I tried, but I just couldn’t finish this one. The story was very meandering. It also seemed to provide lots of detail when it wasn’t needed (goes on and on describing the house) and little detail where it is needed (there are three female lead characters and all we know about two of them is their occupation and how they’re affiliated with the heroine). I gave up at 30% and can’t recommend this one.
Interesting basic premise; extremely obvious development of that premise. Stilted dialogue and narration, inconsistent timeline and relationship details. Plodding. At 50% I began skip-reading.
Abigail Melrose Bellavance has just been left by her husband Remy Bellavance. But he didn’t just leave her he took all her money as well. So Abby had no choice but to move back to Charleston, South Carolina and move in with her mother. Her mother set down conditions for her to live with her and Abby had to make a plan and present it to her for her mother to change her mind about changing her will back to what it initially stated. But the day Abby’s mom, Charlotte, was supposed to talk to her lawyer she had a car accident and was immediately killed. When the will was read Abby was in dire straits because she had no money left to her but she had the house she was raised in. The thing is she had no way of taking care of said house because she had no money. So the maid who she now treated as a best friend, Betsy, came up with an idea to make the house into a boarding house. This way Abby could get money to take care of the house while also taking care of Betsy, and her best childhood friend, Melanie. The three of them set up what they needed to take care of the house what price ranges to make of the rooms and how to find decent tenants. They found the tenants and two were two hot guys that were vying for Abby’s attention but she only really had the hots for one. Erik Christensen was a hardworking handyman and restorer and he offered his services for room and board. Brandon Luck was an attorney who boasted about what he did and looked down on everyone else in the house especially Erik. When the truth came out about Abby she lost both men but you will have to read the book yourself to see what happens at the very end.
The basic premise of the story is good. The fact that no attention was paid to the what was actually legal really made so much of he story a fantasy. As the purported confiscation of Abby's monies and the sale of the marital home took place in the U.S. Virgin Islands, the laws of the U.S. would be in effect. Therefore, even if Abby's name was not on the deed to the property, it was the marital home and therefore required her signature in order to be sold. As to a joint bank account, in order to empty and close a joint account, both signatures would be required. Indiscriminate monies could be taken out, but to close it out, as with any joint account, both signatures are required. The rest of the story was good and the ingenuity in renting out the rooms in order to obtain monies to maintain the house was great. I had to snicker when Brandon hit on Abby and took her out, as it was kind of a foregone conclusion that he was going to turn out to be the lawyer who would be representing the insurance company and his fraternization and living in the property was such a clear cut conflict of interest and most certainly was going to make him look like a fool. Fortunately, our author paid attention to the law in this instance. Although it was a pleasant story, it was not my cup of tea and I won't be following any further with this series.
An example of what gives Chick Lit a bad name. I cannot comprehend how readers gave it such a high rating. The only good thing about this book is that it gives hope to anyone thinking of writing a book -- Yes, Virginia, even a horribly bad book can get published. I finished it just as some people rubber-neck at the scene of a collision. There was a certain fascination of the fact that the majority of the book is poor dialogue. One is that dependent on bad dialogue to tell the story only because they just can't write well enough to impart the story any other way. Do we blame the author, the editor. the copy editor? How about all? There's definitely enough blame to go around.
Ok, I read a lot of books, probably 3 to 4 a week. This book got on my last nerve. Abby is so stupid, why would you allow a husband access to your money and you married without a prenuptial agreement because your Mom was looking out for you. And you’re so immature I couldn’t finish the book and I deleted the second book. Sorry I just didn’t like it. After this review I’m deleting this book from my library.
Abby thought she had it all until her husband gave her a reality check by skipping off with all of her money. Now she is back in the house with her mother when she is given another kick of tragedy. She takes everything in stride and with the help of Erik a handy man and Brandon a lawyer she's beginning to see a light at the end of the tunnel until she is thrown for another loop. Will Abby ever get her life back on track and get a second chance for a happily ever after?
Life sucks when you're husband leaves you, stealing all of your money and selling your home out from under you. Life really sucks, when you go home with your tail between your legs, only to have your Mom die the next day, and find out she left you a mansion you can't sell and no money for upkeep. What is a girl to do?
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This is so much more. The characters are believable as well as the settings. There is no raw sex or bad language. Happiness abounds along with the sadness. The word pictures of Charleston and St.Thomas are enough to make you start packing.Could have been a lot less alcohol, but that's just me. It's a very good story.
Enjoyed this book. The characters were very likeable. I wish the ending didn't seem so abrupt. Everything wrapped up so quickly then it was over. Pleasant way to pass a day.
Over a good read about s girl who had everything then lost it and what she was willing to do make threw life. My only wish is the book would of taken us to what happen with her friends they reactions and Eric reaction to the home ect. I dislike quick ending
Everything possible goes wrong. Life's lessons carry a very heavy tuition as Abby tries to right her world or at least navigate her way through it. She does this as she gathers a very different sort of family around her. Good story.
I just finished this book and LOVED it. I would really like to see a sequel! I just ordered next book and look forward to reading it. Please think about a sequel 😋
After hardships she find love the second time around With the help of her friends she overcomes loosing her mother and money and find the love of her life