Sketching Character

by Pamela Lynne

What if a tragic event involving a beloved sister shatters Elizabeth Bennet‘s confidence in her ability to accurately judge a person’s character? When she leaves Longbourn for Kent, Elizabeth’s heart is full of worry for those she left behind. She carries a secret that would ruin her family if exposed and she must deceive the ones closest to her to conceal the truth.

She unexpectedly encounters Mr. Darcy on her journey and his gentlemanly behavior confuses, yet comforts her. Their daily encounters in the woods surrounding Rosings soothes Elizabeth’s weathered conscience and she soon falls in love. Her doubts, along with the well-placed words of another, threaten to destroy the peace she finds in Darcy’s company and she wonders if she has again failed to correctly sketch his character.

When the truth behind her deception is uncovered, will Darcy shun her as Elizabeth fears, or will his actions prove that he is the very best of men?

Genres: Regency, Historical, Romance, Historical Romance, Historical Fiction, Fan Fiction, Retellings

296 pages, Paperback

First published September 25, 2015

About the author

Pamela Lynne grew up in the American South, surrounded by Southern Gothic works by Faulkner, O'Connor and the like. These authors helped shape her evolving mind and continue to influence everything she produces as an adult. It was a Regency-era wit from across the Atlantic, however, who lit a life-long interest in 19th Century England.

Pamela cites Jane Austen as her primary literary influence and she delves into the darker aspects of Regency life in all her novels, most particularly in the upcoming Granville Legacy Series, where she explores the bonds of family and what it costs to break them.

Dearest Friends: A Jane Austen Inspired Novel, Pamela’s debut work, won the Independent Publishers 2016 IPPY Awards Bronze Medal for Romance.

Pamela currently lives in the rolling hills of Tennessee with her husband of more than a decade, four kids, two cats and one very blond dog. She is still a Marianne hoping to grow into Elinor, or Clairee from Steel Magnolias.

Reviews

[Claudine DiMuzio / Just Jane 1813 · Rating 4 out of 5]

Ever since I reread "Pride & Prejudice" last year, I have longed to read more about those three mysterious times during Elizabeth's and Darcy's visits to Rosings, where Darcy happened to meet Elizabeth during her early morning rambles… It was a part of P&P that I wished Austen would have written for us with more details in regards to their time spent together. How did Elizabeth not see Darcy's admiration for her after meeting her there "accidentally" three times? I have pondered that question many times... I also wished that Andrew Davies would've elaborated on these scenes when he wrote the screenplay for the 1995 BBC version of "Pride & Prejudice." But it was not to be…

Imagine my joy when Pamela Lynne wrote "Sketching Character" and gifted us with plenty of those swoon-worthy scenes in the woods of Rosings Park. What pure happiness I experienced as I was able to actually read some of the most beautiful scenes between Darcy and Elizabeth at Rosings Park and run through the woods in such a captivating manner!

"Sketching Character" is a P&P variation that contains many twists and turns; some of these changes are familiar to a JAFF reader and a few are quite original in their execution. There are also some bold changes in a few of our main characters, and there are other characters, such as Caroline Bingley, who remain the same in their essentials throughout this story. Some of these changes were quite appealing to me, such as the bolder Jane Bennet we meet in this story, and yet, a few of these changes, such as the deviations to Lydia's storyline, didn't feel as believable for me by the end of the book. I enjoyed the way Colonel Fitzwilliam's character was sketched throughout the book, as this was a stance I haven't often seen, and I thought it was well done here throughout the entire story. I felt satisfied in his personal journey and was glad I had the chance to experience this alternate path for his relationship with Darcy. It also wasn't overdone or heavy-handed in any way.

There was a lovely romance at the heart of this book and quite a few beautifully tailored scenes between Darcy and Elizabeth. The word choices were poetic in many places and allowed the reader to really experience the growth of a very strong and devoted love between Darcy and Elizabeth. I enjoyed the way they expressed their love for each other and the scenes where little details were added throughout the story that allowed us to witness how they came together in their relationship. I think their love story is the greatest strength of this book.

Pamela Lynne's writing is well-paced, as she moves her plot along with a comfortable pace. I couldn't wait to read the next part of the book each time I had to put it aside. After reading her first two books, I can eagerly say I look forward to her third book, which I hope is her sequel to "Dearest Friends!"

[J. W. Garrett · Rating 5 out of 5]

“…Families are Forever, and wondered if the slogan was meant as a promise or a threat.” –Brady Udall, The Lonely Polygamist

Rating: MA: mature audience: crude descriptions of sexual behavior and language, vague descriptions of sexual assault

I have tried to write this review a half-dozen times. I took so long that I had to reread parts of the story in order to refresh my memory. I was so caught up in the story [again] that I couldn’t put it down. I am still not certain how to review this. I loved the story although it was a bit dark.

“Unfortunately, some family members are so psychotic that no matter how hard you try to forge a healthy relationship, nothing will help. Now that you’re an adult, take refuge in the fact that some things are beyond your control. You owe it to yourself to steer clear of people who are harmful to your health.” –Andrea Lavinthal

Darcy’s Fitzwilliam relations were not very nice. We often read of a nasty Lord Matlock but this guy was beyond description. I was constantly thinking… he did not just do that… but he did. Matlock was a second son that inherited the earldom when his elder brother died. He also married his brother’s intended. Bless her heart. She certainly didn’t get the better brother. Matlock was crude and devious and only cared for what he wanted. He invited Darcy to dinner with a scheme that Darcy felt was insulting and beneath him. When the scheme was revealed, Darcy was shocked by his uncle’s machinations and walked out of Matlock House completely disgusted. He was not the only one horrified as his cousin the Viscount also walked out with intentions to break with his father.

“If a man’s character is to be abused, say what you will, there’s nobody like a relative to do the business.” –William Makepeace Thackery, Vanity Fair

Lord Matlock was also in cahoots with his sister, Lady Catherine. Both insisted that Darcy’s honor required him to marry Anne, as was his duty to the family. Their plan was to combine the estates of Rosings and Pemberley, thus giving them access to the wealth and prestige of the Darcy name and the Darcy coffers. They failed to consider that it was never Anne’s intention to marry and certainly not to her cousin Darcy. He needed a wife that could help him run Pemberley and could give him an heir. Anne wanted no part of her mother’s plans. In fact, when she came of age, things took a dramatic turn at Rosings. Let’s just say that Lady Catherine was seriously displeased.

“A man’s true character comes out when he’s drunk.” –Charlie Chaplin

Charles Bingley was absolutely spineless to the core. He allowed his sister Caroline to lead him around by the nose and she completely dominated his life. One thing he did do that was honorable… he prevented Darcy from falling into a trap [set by another] while he was too drunk to prevent it. Oh, what a mess. It still made the papers but at least Darcy and Bingley knew the truth of what happened that night.

“Be more concerned with your character than your reputation, because your character is what you really are, while your reputation is merely what others think you are.” –John Wooden

Colonel Fitzwilliam: how do I describe this man? He was not our dear Colonel that we normally love and adore. I can’t even call him an evil-scumbag-rat-bastard. I reserve that moniker for another in this story. Him, you know all too well. In our Colonel’s case, his motives and behaviors were questionable at best, while his actions at times were despicable. I’m sorry; I could not like him and yet, I felt deeply for him. This was not the brother/cousin relationship that we are so accustomed to. His blatant disregard and jealousy over his cousin simply broke my heart. What Darcy had spent his life building and protecting… his honor and his character… were nearly torn down in one night. The Colonel’s betrayal of Darcy’s trust hurt him deeply and it would be a long time before Darcy could forgive his actions, if ever. “My good opinion.…” The author did such a good job at portraying a tortured man dealing with the ramifications of his actions. This simply broke my heart.

“If you bungle raising your children, I don’t think whatever else you do matters very much.” Jackie Kennedy

Bennet: indolent and disconnected from his family. When the worst happened with a daughter, Mr. Bennet refused to consider his part in the disgrace. It then fell to Lizzy to make the arrangements. Keeping the secret from Mrs. Bennet was near on impossible but it had to be done as she could not be trusted. This was heartbreaking as a daughter realized the reality of her situation and the need to grow up all too quickly. It would forge a relationship with a sister never before felt. I wanted to rage against the injustice of it.

I loved Darcy in this story. He was large and in charge. It was so romantic in places that I nearly swooned. Yeah, that is our guy. Georgiana was so sweet and grew a lot in this story. She was amazing.

I wondered what happened to several of our characters. When they left the story, we didn’t hear any more about them. I would have liked to know what happened to them.


2nd read 10-8-18 ~ 10-9-18 I couldn't help it. I had to read it again.

[Erika · Rating 5 out of 5]

I was fortunate to have won an ebook from a contest on Austenesque Reviews.

So the premise is that there is a significantly tragic event after the Netherfield Ball that alters Elizabeth's understanding of human nature and of her judgement. She is forced to reconsider her opinions and character sketches on almost everyone.

Things stay initially in canon where the Netherfield party high-tails it to London after the ball. Jane with her heart broken, goes to London with the Gardiners. And Elizabeth goes to Hunsford to visit Charlotte with Sir Lucas and Maria at Easter. From there the plot deviates but is not drastic.

On the way to Hunsford the Lucas party requires assistance and the shining knight to cross their path is non-other than Mr Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam. There is some back history with the Fitzwilliams that is played out that varies with Jane Austen's P&P. The liberties that Mrs Lynne takes with the Fitzwilliam clan is not all that different than what other authors do, though I will only say I don't like Colonel Fitzwilliam!!!!!

Will the secret Elizabeth has to keep get in the way if her happiness? Does Colonel Fitzwilliam stand in the way for Mr Darcy's happiness? What of the Fitzwilliams and Lady de Bourgh? What is this big secret, and who is involved???

This story is well written, fast-paced, and EXTREMELY addictive!!! Only got 3.5 hrs of sleep Sat night because I couldn't put it down!!!!! Mrs Lynne has become one of my favorite P&P authors, I love how she allows Mr Darcy and Elizabeth to come together. In my opinion, her Mr Darcy's are not so brooding, but more layered with deeper emotions. She tends to allow us to see these emotions to varying degrees throughout the book.

I will DEFINITELY recommend Sketching Character to any and all JAFFers. I would say this is a PG-13, there is implied adult situations, but nothing too explicit!

[Les · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved this book so much I stayed up until 5:45 am reading it.

Now let me say that this is a P&P what if that is a bit dark and some of your favorite characters will behave badly. It also features much more of the Darcy family than the Bennets.

Beginning immediately following the Bingley's departure for London, many at Longbourn are depressed. But things can and do get worse. We see the unpleasant side of the London Ton. When they arrive at Hunsford Lizzy is already aware of Wickham's faults, but have no fear there are plenty more disagreements for our happy couple.

My only meh part of the book is the epilogue; which comes after 'The End'. I felt it was unnecessary. It felt like an editor asked but what happened to X, Y & Z and the author felt compelled to answer.

ETA: So here's a funny thing, despite my glowing review (deserved) I completely forgot every detail of this book so my recent re-read was like a brand new book.
Thus here is my 2021 review.
LOVED IT!! This is a unique path for a P&P what if that features a Rotten Richard© or a Callous Colonel© and an Evil Earl and an Admirable Anne.
This what if puts evil front and center for ODC to overcome. This is a story where you wonder if it wasn't for bad luck would they have any luck at all.
If you have read any of the author's other works you know she has no love for Mr. & Mrs. Bennet and they are again shown at their worst then basically ignored.
This is an angst heavy book with mature themes. But I loved it.

[Ｓｈｉｆｒａ ♕ · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is a must read. Pamela Lynne outdoes herself in Sketching Character, the story is beautifully wrapped up by the theme of prejudice and overcoming it, the dialogue is Austen witty, the chemistry is palpable and the romance clean but thrilling.


Synopsis:

As Lydia’s waste was carried downstream, joining the volume from each night prior, Elizabeth wondered how much of her sister was disappearing with each wave.

Circumstances brought about by Lydia becoming depressed and with child after being raped by Wickham after the Netherfield ball lead Lizzy to reexamine all her preconceived notions.

Elizabeth had never been more jealous of Jane—not because she was getting attention from a man, but because Elizabeth had forgotten what it was to be sure of anything.

Lizzy smarts to her unjust prejudice and pride, she begins to check her own air of superiority and habit of looking down on the follies of others and becomes more open minded;

Elizabeth had never thought much about Maria. She was Kitty and Lydia’s friend, and she had relegated her to the “silly girl who must be tolerated” area of her mind. She was ashamed of herself for being so prejudiced and dismissive of another person. She began to search herself for other ways in which she was like her father. She, too, had some things to conquer.

She realizes that her father, although she can't help loving him as is due, is weak and ineffective;

He spoke in the tone he always used with his wife and younger daughters: one that was a strange combination of anguish and amusement, as if he could not decide between the two and so united them into one peculiar feeling that Elizabeth once interpreted as exasperation. She now only heard weakness.

And Wickham might seem charming but in actuality is a horrible rake, cad and every name is the book.


Meanwhile Mr Darcy is in London trying to shake his infatuation with Miss Elizabeth Bennet through distance. Here we are privy to his relationship with his family the Fitzwilliams, and unfortunately they are your run of the mill gentry of the ton.
Lady Matlock is addicted to opium and Lord Matlock lives a life of debauchery, he even hires whores and has them at a family dinner party not informing them before hand, Darcy is outraged and so is the Viscount who cuts ties with his father, Colonel Fitz however takes after his father and agrees to it;

Why is Lord Matlock doing this? He is desperate for Darcy to marry Anne to consolidate the Fitzwilliam fortune, and he thinks Darcy, who does not dally with hookers and never has, is apprehensive to enter into a union with an ill lady and perhaps if he was introduced to the notion of kept women he'll go along.

Darcy is disgusted by this, and greatly disillusioned by his family, a parallel journey to Lizzy, he too realizes the people he held in high esteem aren't all perfect, and he too could grow.


So when our protagonists are reunited when the carriage Lizzy is on with the Lucases on route to Rosings breaks down in thunder, and Darcy is her savior she is more open to not imposing judgement on his person. Darcy's defenses crumble at seeing Lizzy, and since Lizzy is more open minded and thankful for Darcy's gentlemanly manner towards her, she checks her prejudice towards her previous antagonism increasingly.

We readers are privy to how those three Rosings walks may have gone if both parties were more open with each other.

He tugged her arm and they were off again. He did not release her but led her further into the trees where the path was less worn. The sun had not dried the ground there, and mud splashed around them. There was no convention in their actions. No propriety or societal expectation followed them as they moved deeper into the trees. They had escaped.

Lizzy and Darcy have a whirlwind romance; stealing kisses, breaking proprieties, and falling mutually in love from the first rendezvous in their meadow. It is a very sweet innocent, first love sort of romance, none of that torrid, corset ripping passions, and all the more beautiful for it.

But as in many variations, characters are tweaked and unfortunately our dear Colonel is the victim of the authors tweaking, here Colonel Fitzwilliam is less than honorable and very resentful of Darcy’s lot in life.

“In truth, the opinions she formed of them, in general, were influenced as much by books as by actual experience. She grouped all the ones she knew into two categories: heroes and villains. And in her naiveté, she never realized the lines between the two could be fluid.”

As the story progresses so does the Colonels descent and you can tell he is becoming increasingly unraveled.

Ms Lynne reflects this thought, although the Colonel is a baddy his origin story is explained and rounded out and although you'll be mad at his choices you'll understand what drives it. Insecurities as a second son, feeling his lot in life isn't fair, jealous of Darcy getting everything, including Lizzy's preference for him.

He thus plants the seeds of mistrust in Lizzy and they are separated due to a frustrating misunderstanding, not to mention he places Darcy in a precarious position in a moment of vulnerability and it's one of the most vile plots and betrayals ever executed in JAFF.


Lizzy gets the classic explanatory letter from Darcy and immediately feels contrition and loves Darcy but realizing Lydia would be a burden to this good man, is self sacrificing and never responds, and Darcy is heartbroken believing he lost her affections.

The thing I loved was that their separation wasn't due truly to a misunderstanding, rather its due to Lizzy's love and self sacrificing for what she feels is in Mr Darcy's best interests and you understand why Lizzy would endure it.

Anne is such a darling, she stands up to her mother and claims her place and tries really hard to set things right between Darcy and Lizzy.


Lydia grows a lot, far too much unfortunately due to her hellish pregnancy she endures, she has to fend off the advances of the men of the family she was left in the care of. in Lambton, it will drive her to escape the house and put her life in jeopardy, but Darcy finds her on the side of the road and nurses her back to health


What I enjoyed:
-Lydia and Lizzy sisterhood

-Lizzy is quippy, witty and everything pretty;

-Darcy is steady and the romance is heady.

-The Irish heritage of Darcy’s grandmother was woven into the story in the most romantic fashion

-Darcy and Lizzy being just childlike and nature loving in their courtship at Rosings, i.e. Darcy running with Lizzy- crazy romantic!

-Ms Lynne's evident knowledge of era and Austen

What Displeased Me:
-I can’t abide an evil Colonel Fitz, he is goodness incarnate to me! Though it worked well for tale just broke my heart!

-The angst man! I hate a separation!

Obviously these are not real complaints, I have none of substance!

Conclusion:
It was on all counts an entrancing read, one of the handsomest JAFFs of my acquaintance; so beautiful, intricate, structured and thematic.

I am rendered breathless! Truly! I anticipate revisiting aplenty in future!

I might add in passing that I've read Dearest Friends: A Jane Austen Inspired Novel and although it was a pleasant read, it was all over the place and by no means the level of craftsmanship of this work. I truly did not think Ms Lynne capable of this, and I was all the more impressed.

[Sophia · Rating 5 out of 5]

After listening to Dearest Friends, I realized that I had missed one of the author's backlist books and it was already on my shelf. Of course I had to slip right back into her writing with another engaging cast of characters and plot surrounding the Pride and Prejudice world.

Sketching Character tackles a sad and slightly darker subject than the original Austen story because it answers 'what if' Wickham had debauched Lydia before he left Meryton and also asks 'what if' Colonel Fitzwilliam wasn't the honorable friend to Darcy, but jealous of what he had? There are more alternations to the original so that this felt more distant from the original though still strongly P&P flavored.

Elizabeth must prove her own strength to sustain her sister through this difficult crisis and hold the secrets so the family reputation is protected. She must also face her own faulty judgment of character that had her just as deceived as Lydia though luckier because she was not seduced. It forces to admit that she wanted to see Darcy as the villain because he didn't compliment her looks. Darcy must fight his arrogance that sees him and his family above others especially when he knows his extended family proves they are not honorable and not better than Elizabeth or her relations. Time spent on walks and talking privately teach the pair to appreciate and cultivate the blooming romance between them, but of course, insidious words from a surprising source might destroy it all.

Around the Elizabeth and Darcy romance are the story of others like Jane who realizes before Lizzy that while Bingley was influenced, it was his own choice not to return to her, Georgiana who moves past her mistake, Anne who is far stronger and determined than anyone guessed, and oh yes, Lydia herself who has a rough journey into womanhood having to change so much. So many wonderful plot threads going on.

I was particularly touched by the times when the Bennet sisters were together or showing each other the support and understanding they couldn't get from their parents. This was especially striking when it was Elizabeth and Lydia who shared a deeper relationship through the trial. Darcy was also closer with his sister and a couple cousins. There was one unusual villain in this one that is generally not the bad guy, but I was glad to see how that was handled in the end.

There was a heartwarming, swoony epilogue after all the major conflict was dealt with and things were settled. This was moderately angsty and had a riveting bundle of plot threads that had me flying through the story. Those who like a slightly spicy, but strongly altered Pride and Prejudice variation would probably enjoy this one.

[Meredith (Austenesque Reviews) · Rating 5 out of 5]

What If A Bennet Sister Got Herself In Trouble?

TYPE OF AUSTENESQUE NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation

TIME FRAME: Netherfield Ball through the summer + epilogue

MAIN CHARACTERS: Mr. Darcy, Elizabeth Bennet, Lydia Bennet, Jane Bennet, Colonel Fitzwilliam, Anne de Bourgh, Lady Catherine de Bourgh, Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner

SYNOPSIS: Elizabeth and one of her sisters carry some heavy and secret burdens in this variation. They face harsh realities, disappointment in those they thought they could depend on, and Elizabeth quickly learns that her abilities at sketching a person’s character are not to be trusted. When Elizabeth encounters Mr. Darcy in Kent she knows she misjudged him, but it takes her awhile to learn by how much. Will she be able to trust him with her heart and her sister’s secret, or will something happen that proves to Elizabeth that he is a man not worthy of her faith and trust…

WHAT I LOVED:

- The Premise: Pamela Lynne threw a wrench in the plot that changes the fate and charted course of several characters and I loved it! It is a bit darker and grittier – and I think it a very realistic possibility. (Slight spoiler alert! With how flirtatious, imprudent, and daring Lydia is, seeing her in this kind of trouble felt plausible. And Mr. Bennet’s lazy, hands-off approach in dealing with the situation was not too hard to believe given his indolent nature.) Lydia isn’t often a featured character in Pride and Prejudice variations, she is usually the impetus that takes Darcy away from Elizabeth just as they were about to come to an understanding. I really enjoyed seeing a premise that focused on Lydia (in a more positive light) and I delighted in the relationship that developed between her and Elizabeth.

- Romance in the Forest: (or should I say grove!) I loved seeing how Elizabeth’s experiences in Meryton altered her reaction to Mr. Darcy in Kent. Their quiet walks in the grove take quite a different turn. I loved watching Darcy wordlessly express his ardent love and adoration for Elizabeth in these walks. As Marianne would say “it was every day implied, but never professedly declared.” But unlike Willoughby, Darcy’s intentions are most honorable and his attentions to Elizabeth are mesmerizing to witness. To see these two share such moments alone and have their actions, tender looks, and comfortable banter speak of their love was utterly romantic!

- Daring and Unique Character Alterations: With the plethora of Pride and Prejudice variations being published every year, I find it refreshing when an author decides to tweak the nature and personality of one or two of Jane Austen’s characters a little. (I don’t care for it when too many changes or liberties occur in the same novel, but some believable alterations are always interesting to explore!) In this variation, readers will see a more grounded and selfless version of Lydia (which is quite understandable given what she has been through) and a more spiteful and jealous version of Colonel Fitzwilliam (which also is plausible, he is a second son with a cousin and brother who receive large inheritances and estates). I loved seeing a Lydia who was mature and likable for a change, and even though I adore Colonel Fitzwilliam, I enjoyed witnessing what a disgruntled and jealous Colonel Fitzwilliam does when he is discontented with his lot in life.

- A Perfect Balance: Romance, action, banter, conflict, page-time for minor characters, satisfying conclusions for all – Pamela Lynne struck a wonderful balance with all these components and I could not feel anything but delight and pleasure with this story. There was a lot going on and I really appreciated how Ms. Lynne gave each character attention, careful thought, and detail. I’m especially glad she didn’t forget about Mr. Bingley in the end!

WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:

Zip. Nada. Nothing!

WARNING: I’d recommend this book for PG-13 audiences. Nothings takes place on page, but references to sexual situations are made.

CONCLUSION:

Sketching Character is a brave, intuitive, and skillfully written Pride and Prejudice variation! I appreciated the darker premise, the honest emotions and consequences, and the exquisitely beautiful romance that takes place in a most sheltered and romantic setting! I very much adore this new novel by Pamela Lynne (perhaps a smidgen more than I do Dearest Friends) and I am all eager anticipation to see what she writes next!

[Sheila Majczan · Rating 4 out of 5]

4.5 stars

I, too, won this book through a drawing on a blog. I read it over the last three days and found that at times, I just had to put it down and take a break. NOW don’t take that in a negative way but realize that sometimes one has to take a break from tension and suspense. There were times I wasn’t sure where things were going…although I do depend on a HEA for our dear couple. But I had just finished another book with much angst and with one following the other, I needed a respite.

Although the places visited in this version of JAFF may be the same, for me the characters are different, and their actions in similar places and times are not as you read of in canon. Colonel Fitzwilliam, for me, took on some similar qualities in his behaviors to Wickham. WHAT? You may say…No, he didn’t seduce anyone, nor gamble away what little money he possesses, but his relationship to Darcy does undergo a change and you will not get the explanation for that from me…here. Family factions play a part in asking for loyalties and living up to standards…or sinking to certain levels.

Elizabeth plays much more of a pivotal role in her family and their destinies. Mr. Bennet’s attitude and actions in “protecting” and caring for and planning for his daughters play out to the extreme in this tale. I have never admired him, as I believe he neglects all his duties towards his family and his estate. His only redeeming quality was that he fulfilled a role in Elizabeth’s education with his indulgence for her use of his library and his discussions with her. But he does not respect her advice in canon nor does he step up in this book. Elizabeth’s insight in uncovering a sister’s misery and determination then in coming up with some sort of solution plus her continued care about how that progresses show us a woman with an agenda to care for all her sisters and to protect them. And this author gives one sister a journey “to hell and back”. I was so pleased…all the way into the epilogue of the lessons learned and remembered by that “little one”.

Anne DeBourgh has her own gratifying plan come to fruition as she celebrates her twenty-fifth birthday. (Lady Catherine didn’t see that coming.) Jane and Bingley – well, we know that they were separated after the Netherfield Ball. But…is Darcy’s observation that she didn’t display a depth of attachment to match Bingley’s still a mistaken opinion and one which Elizabeth will call him on? The time in Kent has some crucial changes for this variation to come to a satisfactory conclusion. And as Darcy finally admits to himself his feelings we also read of twists precipitated by family members both well-intended and NOT.

Wickham and Caroline do have some comeuppance within…to my satisfaction.

There is so much more to relate, so much more to tell but I am trying not to write SPOILERS. Vulgar Roses? Running through a grove of trees? A woman “under his protection”. There are some scenes of an intimate nature but tame by most reading standards. Do read this very different variation and remember it is a variation…creativity and imagination abound.

[James S · Rating 5 out of 5]

Favorite scene

My favorite time in the book is when Lydia is found on the road, very close to death. The care she receives from the Darcys is very moving.

A superb book.

[Talia · Rating 5 out of 5]

Loved the Lydia storyline. This one is a keeper!

[Mary · Rating 5 out of 5]

A very clever storyline encompassing a secret with a twist,a very understanding, sweetly endearing Darcy,a brave, fiercely independent and strong Elizabeth,a naive and all too-trusting Lydia and a very different Colonel Fitzwilliam all add the necessary spice to this compelling story.

I must admit that I loved it -I couldn't put it down in my eagerness to discover how ODC would overcome the many difficulties that lay in their path.

Ms Lynne has a unique way with words, her very clever plot,quick pacing and the adorable situations ODC find themselves in as they fall in love all serve to make this a delightfully compelling and satisfying read.

Highly recommended -can't wait for her next book!!

[Sam H. · Rating 4 out of 5]

The relationship that grows between Elizabeth and Lydia is beautiful. But harsh to see such a side of Mr. Bennet revealed.

Very well done story.

[Carol Perrin · Rating 5 out of 5]

Sketching Character: A Jane Austen Inspired Novel

Excellent story about the tragic affair that dealt with Wickham's treachery, and her father's reaction to what happened. Only he and Elizabeth know what happened and she's made up her mind to help her sister. Several months after the London group leaves Netherfield, Jane, Elizabeth, and one of her younger sisters leave for London. Her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner have found somewhere for the younger sister in Lambton, Derbyshire. In fact, the lady is her cousin to Mrs. Gardiner. Her aunt assures her that will be taken care of and possibility of light chores, but as soon as the Gardiners leave, she is given difficult and back breaking chores that strip both her dignity and help. When the Mr. Of the house starts touching her and saying horrible things he was going to do to her, she runs away. Meanwhile, Elizabeth is in Kent at the parsonage. Before getting there, the horses get scared because of the thunder and lightning, and when the driver loses control, the carriage flips over do to the muddy road. Sir William Lucas is hurt, but Elizabeth and Maria are shaken up and bruised. Elizabeth was about to walk to Bromley in the rain when an carriage arrives at the scene. My, oh, my. Once Darcy gets over the shock from seeing her, and she remembers how badly she misread him, things smoothed out somewhat. However, Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam was not the nice man as in most variations. He and his older brother, “Frederick, have taken after their father. All these men have mortified Lady Matlock for almost her entire marriage. Now that the oldest brother married Lady Victoria, he's a changed man. When Darcy is invited to dinner at the Matlocks, the Earl invited two courtesans to dinner with his sons, his daughter, and Lady Victoria. Darcy is not interested, and leaves the home his cousin, Frederick, tells Darcy he is done with his father and brother and moves to his wife's family home. Richard can see that Darcy loves Elizabeth, but at each opportunity makes some remark trying to discredit his cousin. Two days before they were to leave, Anne had her mother, Lady Catherine de Bourgh sent to the Dowager's house. She is now in charge with running Rosings. Of course Darcy will help, but neither of them wanted to marry each other. Elizabeth and Darcy were in the forest when he and Anne came upon them just when was going to propose. Elizabeth was ready and would have said yes. Jumping up, Darcy admonishes Richard for bringing her out this far and takes her back to Rosings. Richard strikes, telling Elizabeth carefully worded lies that leave Elizabeth furious. She verbally abuses him and stalks off. Not knowing what has happened, Darcy is dejected and drinks him into a stupor. Fitzwilliam shows up saying he was taking him out to see friends. No friend, by the courtesan Matlock tried to have him give into. Luckily, Bingley was there, saw what was happening, and escorts him home. Too late it already reached the news paper. Darcy tries to confront his cousin, but replies that he is too busy with his soldiering to come. Darcy sees what his cousin is about and compares his actions to Wickham. He heads for Pemberley and just as the carriage reaches the front gate, it stops. When Darcy sees who it is, he orders the carriage home and the called immediately. When the Gardiners and Elizabeth arrive to pick up her sister and find her gone, they come down hard on the Baines, family or not. Before dark, the Gardiners go to try to find their niece. Elizabeth knows she is near Pemberley and even though she hurt Darcy, she remembers he told her if she needed him to come. She does travel with the servant, Hannah, and when the door opens, Darcy is so happy to see her. The Gardiners are sent for and all were happy to see her sister alive. Elizabeth and Darcy realizes that they still love each other and once she tells him all of what his cousin said, he is furious. Elizabeth and her family are invited to stay at Pemberley during her sister's confinement. A baby girl is borne, and is immediately placed in another home. Had to be done quickly since Caroline Bingley invited herself and her brother, early to Pemberley along with the Colonel. Immediately upon seeing Elisa, she starts in on trying to make her look bad, but little does she know that Elizabeth and Darcy are betrothed. When announced, poor stupid Caroline retires to herself room with a headache. In a few days, she leaves Pemberley to her own establishment. The Hursts don't want her and neither does Charles. Inviting the men to his study, Darcy finally gets his chance to show Fitzwilliam how he felt about the lies he told. He leaves Pemberley and has been reassigned to Canada. When the special license arrives, Darcy and Elizabeth marry in front of her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner, her three sisters and Jane's husband. Darcy finds Wickham with the help of Colonel Forster, he leaves Wickham thinking he'll be hung. Good old Bingley, he lost Jane, but still married a Bennet daughter.

[Caitlin Williams · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved this book. I never like to see Mr Bennet as truly bad and I did have trouble with his characterization at the beginning, but then I was swept along with the story and it no longer mattered. In fact, I could see why he was portrayed the way he was, as it allowed Elizabeth to compare Darcy favourably against him - and part of maturing and growing is seeing our parents as human and fallible.
The dialogue was great, the love story between Darcy and Elizabeth was very romantic. All the little 'endings' were perfect.
I am saving Pamela Lynne's 'dearest friends' for a time when I can sit and savour it properly.

[Talia · Rating 5 out of 5]

Had to read this one again since I reread Dearest Friends and then Family Portraits. Still in love! Le sigh!

Reread: Loved this book! Still do.

[Janet · Rating 5 out of 5]

Once in a while I read a book that leaves me with a sense of complete satisfaction…a warm fulfilled feeling that the book was everything and more than what I had hoped for. Sketching Character by Pamela Lynne is that kind of book. That’s not to say that it contains no misunderstandings or angst because it does but all is resolved in such a way that everything felt perfect and as it should be, a truly feel-good novel.

The story begins with a prologue of much importance. The incident that occurred will have implications throughout the book and will influence the behavior and actions of several of the characters. It will completely change one of the characters and eventually for the better.

Chapter one starts with Lizzy preparing for her visit to Charlotte Lucas at Hunsford. A carriage accident in the rain and a rescue by Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam set in a motion some of the changes that follow. There is no botched first proposal but Darcy is still Darcy and hesitant to declare himself for reasons completely different this time around. His reasons were justified in my eyes and for a good cause. It was not so easy for Elizabeth especially when she was fed tiny bits of misinformation…just enough to make her doubt the man she had come to ‘know and understand’.

I liked the Viscount but not so much Colonel Fitzwilliam. He did redeem himself later in the story but he was not the affable and loyal cousin that I have come to expect. I loved Anne and the way she was portrayed. Her plans and strength of conviction were a force to be reckoned with. Lady Catherine – watch out!

Jane was such a sweet and gentle Jane as one would expect but she does ‘see’ more than usual. I liked that and found her ‘change’ to be a surprise but a pleasant one. Mr. Bennet was, well, Mr. Bennet. He continued his negligence of a serious situation and as a result, some of the respect previously held by his favorite daughter, was lost. Lydia has a significant role and her character grows into a better person, one which I came to like.

Encouraged by his cousin, the Viscount, Mr. Darcy learns to fight or box instead of fencing. I loved how some of the characters that he met while residing at the boxing club played a significant part later in the story. It was very well done! Readily available is Caroline Bingley…and she is as obnoxious as ever! There seems to be no limits to her rudeness and her presumptuousness. But then comes Lydia and Miss Bingley gets the best ‘set-down’ I think I have ever read. It was subtle but oh, so effective!

This was such an entertaining book and one that I highly recommend. There were several unexpected twists to the narrative that I found very agreeable. Pamela Lynne is a skilled author and tells a fantastic story. Her book kept me reading and ‘held me captive’ until the last words on the last page. I will be rereading Sketching Character!

[The Book Junkie Reads . . . · Rating 5 out of 5]

What if what you thought was a person character just was a show that was put on for the benefit of others? How would you feel if everything you thought was true became more or less a mask easily removed?

Here in this inspired novel we find that those you love and trust with the world are not exactly what you thought and those you thought to be one way in fact were the opposite. Elizabeth finds her trust, respect, and perhaps love shattered, crushed, concealed. This was very concerning for her. It made her doubt her judgment. There was serious depth and thought put into the various scenes and the way they played out.

I loved most the stepping outside of things that Pamela Lynne did with the various characters. The expansion of some of the original scenes. The depth given to characters that did not have a large role in the original telling. I was allowed to fall in love in a new way with a new telling of an old story.

[Ree · Rating 5 out of 5]

Another great read by Pamela Lynne
Reviewed in Canada on June 9, 2019
Very enjoyable variation. Non-canon storyline had me eagerly turning the pages. I very much enjoy the way Ms. Lynne portrays the characters I love and even those I tend to dislike. Colonel Fitzwilliam was a bit disappointing in this one, however. That was quite different.

February 21-22, 2021—Second Read
Some of my early reviews were rather pathetic, and the above is a good example. Pamela Lynne is a brilliant storyteller. Our usual characters are there, but the outcomes she writes for them are all refreshingly different. I actually enjoyed this book even more the second time around. It’s nice going back and rereading favorites.

Mildly mature content.

[Susan · Rating 4 out of 5]

This Pride and Prejudice variation begins after the Netherfield Ball and Lydia's life changes forever, she has been seduced by Wickham and now bears the consequences. Can Elizabeth's visit to Rosings bring her happiness, and what of Lady Catherine de Bough, Anne, Darcy and the Colonel, a different Colonel then what I have usually read, a gentleman who is not happy with his situation.
A delightful read, a lovely flowing writing style, and I have loved all three of this writer's works. I hope there will be a next one.

[Deborah · Rating 5 out of 5]

I had a difficult time putting this book down.

[Marcie · Rating 4 out of 5]

The weather is dismal outside. For the past week we've fluctuated between severe weather (flooding and storms) or just humid and miserable. So the only thing to do is read (or in my case re-read) a book about a couple of fictional characters I can't get enough of--Elizabeth and Darcy.

In Sketching Character: A Jane Austen Inspired Novel
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, Elizabeth is having doubts about Darcy's character. She can't quite decide if he's honorable or a jerk. Because let's face it--Darcy can be a bit of an ass at times. Not only that, she's struggling with worry over her sister Lydia. A tragic event forces Lydia to regret some of her previous behaviors. This event can also lead to the ruin of all the Bennet sisters and lose Darcy's favor once and for all.

And this is a little spoilery, but I feel that it needs to be said for potential readers who might want to read this book but are sensitive to certain subjects: The tragic event that happens to Lydia is rape.

This is Pamela's second novel about two of the most beloved characters of all time. Her first book, Dearest Friends: A Jane Austen Inspired Novel
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came out in 2014. I have yet to read that one, but I purchased it after finishing Sketching Characters, which came out in September of 2015. So needless to say, I really enjoyed this book. There are some darker parts to this novel, but I feel it really added to the story line in making Elizabeth's fear of losing Darcy's good opinion because of the circumstance.

There were some aspects that I didn't quite agree with either. *SPOILER ALERT* Such as Darcy letting his sister spend time with Lydia after he finds out her secret. Not so much because he was being a jerk, but rather to protect Georgiana's innocence. But regardless it's a great read. I really enjoyed finding this new-to-me austenesque author. I hope Pamela Lynne has more Austen Inspired Novels up her sleeve, but in the meantime I have her first book to devour.

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[Angela Withrow TheArdentReader · Rating 5 out of 5]

I was totally unprepared for the tragedy that befalls Elizabeth's dear sister!
Elizabeth is dealing with some things when we meet her again in the beginning of this book!
She is playing nursemaid for a certain person and is worried what will happen. She goes with this person to London to her
aAunt and Uncle Gardiner's home in Gracechurch Street. There she will travel on with Sir William Lucas and his daughter Maria to visit Charlotte Collins (nee Lucas)
She is worried for her sisters and her father and worried that a great secret will become known and ruin them all.

While on the road to Kent, to visit Charlotte, their carriage is overturned after a broken wheel. Elizabeth is standing on the road trying to
figure out what to do about this situation, and along comes the most unexpected person, who offers his assistance. Mr. Darcy!


This story was not short and I was so happy it wasn't! It was long and wonderful and I felt like I was sitting with friends having a wonderfully long chat.
Or maybe a weekend visit. Either way, I LOVED this story! Pamela Lynne knows how to write these characters so they stay true to Miss Austen's original
ideas and the manner of speaking and interacting with each other. It is "comfortable" if that makes sense. I fell back into their lives as though they are
real people and ones I know very well. The twists in the story are well done and completely believable. I really liked Anne De Bourgh in this one!!

Elizabeth and Darcy go through quite a bit of trouble trying to stay out of trouble.
But misinformation and misinterpretation play a large part in their story here.
Don't worry, they get their HEA, eventually!
Truly loved this one!

I highly recommend this title and this author!
Every book I've read by Pamela Lynne has been a joy to read and re-read!
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[Sara · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is a very interesting book. Wickham is still the scum of the earth and I wish Darcy was even harsher. This book focuses on Elizabeth and her relationships with her sisters, family. It also focuses on Darcy's family issues, especially the troublesome Fitzwilliams. Not a lot of "action" but lots of sweet and heart-wrenching moments. I really enjoyed the flow and writing of this book. A few grammatical errors but they were not overly distracting. I enjoyed this jealous Richard and wished he had a more befitting punishment for his actions. The love story between D and E is beautifully done.

I really enoyed this book especially the 2nd read! If you love P&P this is a must read about differing characters!

[Hui Ting · Rating 4 out of 5]

Very interesting plotline. For me, it only picked up around half way through the book and I was really into it after that. The romance between Darcy and Elizabeth was really romantic and his proposal was simply swooning. Everyone ended up happy even for Lydia. Overall a good read.

[Kim · Rating 4 out of 5]

Wow. If you love JAFF, you should read this. Loved the epilogues, too.

[Madenna U · Rating 4 out of 5]

This story to me was the an amazing display of the love between sisters and the men who love them. So many moving pieces to try to salvage a families reputation after a horrific event. Who can you trust. Elizabeth, with eyes wide open, realizes that she needs to take a good look at her judgments of herself and others. Love and acceptance are found and hard won.

[Abi Demina · Rating 4 out of 5]

4.5 stars.
This is my favourite Pride and Prejudice adaptation so far. I was close to giving it 5 stars but I think I must be the book judge equivalent of Craig Revel Horwood, reserving top marks for nothing short of absolute perfection.

This book was so good, I wonder if Jane Austen herself might have changed Lydia and Wickham's story in just the same way if she had been writing in a less critical time.
I doubt readers in the 1800s would have appreciated having the seduction and rape of a 15 year old and the hypocrisy of society shoved under their noses, but we can assume that she felt strongly about such things as she talks of similar 'ruined' women in Sense and Sensibility (Colonel Brandon's Eliza and her daughter), and in Pride and Prejudice she draws a comparison between the way Georgiana Darcy, a 15 year old with the protection of great wealth and an honourable family name, and Lydia Bennet, a 15 year old with no money and little family protection are dealt with by the same villain and the world in general.

The depiction of Mr Bennet as a weak and prejudiced father is very well done. It draws on character traits hinted at by Austen and serves to explain Elizabeth's own early tendency for hasty judgements, as a behaviour learned and encouraged by her father.

The loss of Lizzy's faith and trust in her father was one of the most moving things about this story, and the part where she remembers his dealings with Lydia as he bids her farewell on her journey to Kent made me cry.
It was far worse to me than villainous Wickham attacking a girl he barely knows, to have the man Lizzy loved and idolised above all others turn out to be someone she can no longer respect or trust to care for them.
The wound Lizzy feels and her sense of betrayal is heartbreaking, and her care and love for Lydia as well as Lydia's own crushed spirit is brilliantly written.

We spend time in the woods at Rosings with Darcy and Elizabeth and these scenes were absolutely beautiful, providing the reader with as much desperately needed relief from the darkness as Lizzy herself feels.
The careful choice of words during a scene between Colonel Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth were so well crafted and clever and up until this point of the book, I would have given 5 stars very happily, I could not stop reading and every page was wonderful.

My one small criticism of this story comes around the introduction of Mr Burton.
I have no objection to an alternative love interest for Jane, my criticism is simply that during her time at Gracechurch Street we do not see enough of Mr Burton to know his true character or motivations.

Perhaps this was intentional to keep us guessing if Bingley would still win her heart after all, but it just left me feeling unsettled and uneasy until a small interaction between Burton and Darcy towards the very end of the book, when we realise that he is actually a good man and Jane is not being ill treated, and is not about to be abandoned when he discovers the Bennet's scandal, etc.

Again, this may simply have been an intentional story choice to keep us worried we would find Jane living in misery with an overbearing husband in Yorkshire, relatively isolated from her sisters, but I wonder if it was simply that we were supposed to take Lizzy's judgement of him at face value, even though we could not do so for any of her other judgements until this point, rather than allowing us to see more of his interactions with Jane and the Gardiners and being able to decide for ourselves.


One thing I hugely appreciate (and hope I am not spoiling anything by saying this) is that a child does not get taken from her caregivers at the end, as some writers might have done. Too often writers give a main character an idealised HEA, without giving their readers enough credit that we might wonder about the happiness of characters in their universe we have not met - those that raised a child from 0 to 5 years old, for example - and how these things would affect them.

Pamela Lynne's writing is accomplished, intelligent, and credits her readers with intelligence too.
I thoroughly enjoyed this and will certainly be buying other books by this author.

[lori huff · Rating 4 out of 5]

Wonderful

This is a highly dramatic and emotional variation. It begins after the Netherfield ball, and the removal of the entire Netherfield party with no farewell except Caroline Bingley 's disturbing letter. The Bennett family equilibrium is about to be irrevocably altered due to Lydia's indiscreet liaison with Wickham. Lydia finds herself pregnant and ill, and a plan is quickly initiated to secretly send her away until after the birth. Only Elizabeth, Mr. Bennett, and the Gardiners are in on the secret.

There are many fundamental changes in key characters that give the story an overall solemn tone, and it's sometimes difficult to shake the melancholy feeling, even when there's a positive impact. I deducted a star for the purely personal preferences I have for leaving some characters alone. I don't like it when Mr. Bennett is hard nosed and mean. Colonel Fitzwilliam is changed, and not for the better. Jane has a backbone, which is good, but leads to some sadness. Anne DeBourgh is much nicer, and that's wonderful, but even her improvement is infused with sadness.

Darcy is a shining light throughout the story, and keeps the book from sinking into complete melancholy. You'll fall in love all over again with him, and how he repeatedly aids the Bennett family, mostly without their knowledge, and also saves Elizabeth from despair time and again in the most romantic ways. His actions, when faced with adversity from many directions, keep the story moving forward, and provide all the hope for a HEA for many of the characters. When everything and everyone seems to be conspiring against a happy outcome, Darcy retains his honesty and integrity, and is the strong protector of all those he loves.

This author is a talented writer and storyteller. The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.

[D. B. Grace · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was certainly an interesting and entertaining Pride and Prejudice fanfiction.

It made two strong departures from the "norm" or common tropes:

1. Lydia is ruined by Wickham right away and with child. She is sent away to pass her confinement in secret, so as to not disgrace the rest of the family.

2. Bad Guy Colonel Fitzwilliam!

The first incident is really the pivot point of the story. Lydia's experience with Wickham is quite different here, and she is remorseful and cognizant of the consequences of her actions right away. This happens when Elizabeth still fully believed in Wickham and disdained Darcy, shaking her confidence in her own instincts. Thus, when she goes to Hunsford and is thrown into company with Darcy more often, she is entirely less sure of her judgments.

Lydia's story is interesting. Half the time I was wishing we stayed with her. But Darcy and Elizabeth's journey is also enjoyable. It is smoother at first, given that Elizabeth already knows she was mistaken in at least one of the things she holds against Darcy, but there are still bumps in the road. This is where Bad Guy Colonel Fitzwilliam comes in. I found this to be a fascinating wrinkle! Colonel Fitzwilliam is almost always portrayed as universally likable and the voice of reason, so it was interesting to see a version of him that is ruled by more unkind impulses.

There is a lot more drama here than I think would ever make its way into an actual Jane Austen book. For instance, the carriage crash, Lydia's dramatic escape, and the courtesan and boxing gym interludes. I didn't mind this, however, and the story kept my interest the entire way through. By the time we finally got back to Lydia, I was desperate to find out what happened to her!

[Vem · Rating 2 out of 5]

Its a good story for the most part but lacking a lot in the romance department. Elizabeth goes from being indifferent to Darcy to letting him kiss her in 2,3 short interactions. She also allows him to court her in secret but never clarifies her suspicion of Darcy and Anne's supposed engagement / relationship. It rubbed me the wrong way, as it felt like she was knowingly interacting with and encouraging a man who is supposed to marry another woman. I also don't think Darcy would plan meetings with a woman, kiss her, romance her etc without proposing marriage. There is nothing stopping him from assuring Elizabeth of his intention, he could have simply kept their engagement secret until they both left Kent. All of these inconsistencies make the characters less honorable.

I also find it so far fetched that E & D don't guess Colonel Fitzwilliam's true character, specifically Darcy. He disapproved of Wickham's behaviour, here Colonel is not much better. I find him purposely bringing a drunk darcy to a courtesan to be seduced to be really unforgivable. He perfectly knows that Darcy is a virgin, and that he feels strongly about sleeping with someone who is not his wife. Thank god for Bingley in this, who quickly understood the situation and took Darcy away. Darcy never reveals this to Elizabeth, but even without that, D & E should never forgive him or even allow Georgiana to interact with him. I feel like author makes a lot of mistakes like this, making one character do something truly horrible but not make the other character react to that appropriately, just for plot convenience. Now that I'm writing this, I'm reminded of more and more such inconsistencies and I'm even more annoyed. I was initially going to rate it 3 stars but now changing to 2