Okay. There are so many things wrong with this book that I gave up at 36% with a sigh of relief.
For starters. I don't know if the author has a real interest in endometriosis, but dammit, when I read a romance novel I do not want to be subjected to pages describing the heroine's period pains which are SO BAD she has to take ibuprofen and is seriously considering a hysterectomy to stop the symptoms.
I know someone with the condition. She was also advised to have a hysterectomy, after three failed laparoscopies. She more often than not collapsed with the pain and was taken to hospital and put on a morphine drip and eventually prescribed morphine. Ibuprofen is something taken for headaches, not the crippling pain of endometriosis.
Also, do I really want to read about her period happening? Shouldnt she have been aware it was going to start? She was on the pill for heaven's sake!!
This was supposed to be Religious and Inspirational, but to be honest, it was just one more nail in the religious coffin for me. Dak is judgemental and thoroughly obnoxious - snitching on Storm when he finds birth control pills in her fridge. (Apparently, ANY single woman who takes the pill is a whore and slattern and deserves anything that's coming to her, including miscarriage.)
WOW. What religion is THAT!!! Not Christian, surely?? I thought they taught forgiveness?? Nah, obviously not.
Then, when he is finally made aware of his error, Storm 'forgives' him by playing a pretty nasty 'practical joke' on him - throwing paint over his car, loosening the battery connections and putting a plastic snake under the bonnet of his car. THAT is just plain sick. And idiotic. And thoughtless, and pathetic to boot, not to mention spiteful.
I. Hate. Snakes." He threw it at Storm.
With a smile on her face she caught it. "I thought it might surprise you, but that was a better reaction than I had hoped for."
Christian 'fun' eh ;) Don't you just LOVE it.
The characters were thoroughly unlikeable and the whole set up with the endometriosis was almost ludicrous.