I have to say that I enjoyed book two, which I just recently read, more than I did this one. In fact I was slightly disappointed, which is a shame because I usually love Lucy Monroe books, but this one just missed the mark for me.
And it wasn't a bad book or boring or anything like that it just didn't do it for me or more accurately the love story aspect, which is a huge part of Harlequin Presents, just didn't do it for me. It just didn't feel right or what I wanted to feel while reading a love story. I was turned off by a few of things.
One the first time they make love, they were both under the influence of alcohol, and that's a big no no for me because I want both hero and heroine to have clear heads while they are doing the deed and not blame it on the alcohol later of why they gave into each other in the first place then say that it was a mistake that they slept together in the first place. I hate that in romance stories. I never want alcohol in an aspect in a love story. EVER! That's is a biggest pet peeve of mine. And it was here in its full glory here. Plus it kind of made me think less of Sayed because he knew Liyah was drunk yet he decided to make love to her anyway knowing full well she wasn't in her right mind, but he continued anyway because he wanted her and couldn't wait to have her. It made me question his motives and in fact whether he was a good guy or not or was he just pressing his advantage. (Later in this review I will talk about Sayed and his character and how he did redeem himself in my mind, but at first I was a little iffy with him) So that was a huge deal with me. I don't like drunk storylines. There's enough of that in reality I don't need it in my fiction to. So that was first off. So didn't enjoy that scene so much.
Secondly even though it was stated that they were severely attracted to one another, I didn't really feel it or maybe it was just too forced and faked for my liking. It just didn't seem natural and even though it was a fiction story, I still need it to be believable and feel natural as they fall into a romance, and I didn't get that here.
Thirdly, which kind of relates to point number two, was that it happened almost too quick for them to give into their attraction for one another. There was no slow burn or anticipation that added to the tension and angst of the book. I want that slow burn and have it drawn out a bit before they give into their passion for one another that is nearly exploding off the page, which is what makes a story interesting and make me want to turn page after page and getting my pulse to pound right along with them. I guess that was my biggest complaint was the lake of angst and tension between the two or if there was a bone of contention between the pair which wasn't a lot it was dealt with too easily and quickly and they would be back together again. If you have read my reviews in the past, you know how much I like me some angst between the couple in their love story, which keeps me glued to the page. This one didn't have it. So that was another thing that just didn't do it for me in their love story.
Fourthly, and again this kind of relates to the previous points above, I didn't believe in the romance or the fact that they fell in love. I saw no reason they fell in love with each other, okay maybe on Liyah's part, but not really on his. I just felt for him it was more physical than anything else. Now I could see where he was heading in that direction, but I didn't feel he was quite there yet. They needed a little more time in between. Now do I believe that Sayed cared about her? Absolutely. Was he heading in that direction? Yeah, but again in my view he wasn't there yet. I just feel like all he wanted to do was sleep with her and that was it. Maybe I am being too overly critical because there was evidence in the book that he cared deeply for her like helping her with her father and such and being protective of her and stuff like that, which some people might interpret as him being in love with her, and I could agree slightly on that point, but I just didn't feel it. That's just me.
Also and I kind talked about this above was the lack of conflict between the pair and when one came up it was easily dealt with. In fact the one point of contention between them was when he pushed her away and then made her believe that he didn't want to spend time with her, hurting her in the process (and breaking my heart for Liyah) where she just felt the lowest of lows at that point and making her feel even more alone. Having that in there kind of sparked my hope that the book would be better and become more angsty after that and I was looking forward that, but then a few pages later he realized the error of his ways and how he hated hurting her in the process they went to find her and make up. And she forgave him just like that despite the fact he punch her in the gut. Again I think she forgave him way too quickly where he didn't have to work at all to get her forgiveness. In fact they go into the desert for a romantic rendezvous where they spent their entire time making love. Really? After that. It was almost like what was the point with the whole scene where he made it seem like he didn't want to spend time with her in front of her mother plus he made Liyah seem like she wasn't good enough for him because she was of a lower class than him and making her feel like garbage like her father did when she approached him for the first time in her life. So it just made me wonder why it was even in there. It didn't need to be. So why put it in there? I don't get it. Now if most of the book had this conflict then I totally get and it would make it for an interesting story plus the fact that he would have to grovel a bit, but none of that happened. It kind of just felt stuck in there for filler. There really wasn't conflict in their relationship.
Now apart from the love story aspect of the story, which in my opinion was weak for the reason I gave above, there was some things I really liked and enjoyed.
The character of Sayed. Granted I wish he was a little more alpha for my taste and wished he didn't sleep with Liyah when they were both under the influence of alcohol, I did genuinely liked him. Even though he grew up with a loving and supportive family, he did have some issues deal with after the death of his brother, who was the one meant to be king one day after their father retired, but once he died Sayed was slated to take over and he took his duty very seriously and planned to be the emir. He even let himself be set up in an arranged marriage to a woman that would be a "perfect" queen for his country. And he even remained celibate for three years once their engagement became official even though they had been betrothed for awhile. And he was content to be the "perfect" son for his parents to make up for the fact that his brother was gone (though his parents never asked that of him and he put that on himself). So when his fiancée ran off with someone else and disrupting his perfect plans of a marriage then him taking over as king, his world ended up in a tailspin and the only where he could turn to was Liyah and gave into his attraction for her even though I thought it was the wrong time and place. For one the drunk part and two his fiancée just ran off and married someone else. Now granted he didn't love his fiancée but still. But despite all that, I really did like him. He was content to do the right thing both by his parents and Liyah. He was loyal. Smart. Good looking. Nice. And just a really caring individual and didn't want to see anyone hurt including Liyah. Plus he did little things to make her feel special with little endearments as well as listen to her when she talked about the loss of her mother and how she felt when her father rejected her after she finally met him. So he was a great hero and I did enjoy him as a character, and I wanted him to be happy. But again I wasn't sure he was in love with her yet, but he cared about her and wanted to keep her safe and I wanted him to have a happy life with her.
Another aspect that I did enjoy was Sayed's family. I loved both the king and queen and how they treated Liyah when she came home with Sayed. They really welcomed her with open arms and never judged her for a second for the position that she was in, mainly the fact that she could have been pregnant with Sayed's child. They never accused her of blackmail or her motives ever. They trusted her pretty much from the beginning and treated her like family right away. In fact Sayed's mother called Liyah, her daughter, which was really nice to see especially since Liyah had just lost her mother 4 months earlier. So they were very supportive of the union of Sayed and Liyah and knew they belonged together and even tried to help them come together. I just loved the scene with his mother yelling at him for pushing Liyah away and then his father coming in and commenting on his mother was pistol and was usually right in my most thing. I could just feel the love in that family and just how much they cared for of another. Usually in Presents, I see heroes with screwed up family lives or abusive parents so it was a nice change to see loving ones and I loved seeing it all play out.
There was conflict in the story, even though the conflict wasn't in my view in the romance because they came together so quickly and gave into their passions, but it more had to do with Liyah and her journey. Yes, that's usually part of a love story, but it just felt more overpowering in this one, which wasn't bad thing, but it overtook the romance in my opinion. Liyah was raised by her mother and it was strung into her from an early age that she must be proper woman who didn't focus or talk about sex and not to give into her passions until she was married, which was a result of how Liyah's father had treated her mother, having an affair with him when he was married that later on left her pregnant and alone. Liyah's mother didn't want that for her daughter so she pound those views into her daily and just wanted better for her daughter. Liyah's mother even made it seemed like her father knew about her and cared about her because he paid them a stipend. So this was drilled into her from an early age and she acted accordingly until she met Sayed that was who just totally overwhelmed her and she didn't stand a chance. But before that happened and they crossed paths, Liyah promised on Liyah's mother's deathbed that Liyah would seek out her father Gene Chatsfield and introduce herself as his daughter in hopes of building a relationship with him. So that was the promise she made an even though she didn't want to go through with it because she promised her mother she made her way to London to meet him, and did so when the opportunity came about. Basically they needed someone who knew the custom's of Sayed's country and basically serve Saye's needs in a way that wouldn't offend. Because this was a huge account for Gene Chatsfield and they didn't want to loose it. So they hired her as a head housekeeper to make Sayed happy. Her father didn't even know it was her coming to accept the job, but even when she made her presence known to her father he immediately rejected her leaving her feel wounded and in Sayed's arms. So she had to deal with that and not feeling good enough and Sayed did help her with that. But that the biggest conflict in the story not the love story, which I wanted to see more of.
As book a book it was okay, but as a love story not so much. I just wanted more tension between Sayed and Liyah and just more friction. The angst that she loved. Plus after reading book number two in the Chatsfield series, Playboy's Lesson by Melanie Milburne which featured Lucca, Liyah's half brother, was almost perfect that this one paled in comparison. In the second book there was so much tension and passion and love between Lucca and his lady love that steam practically came off the pages that this one kind of fizzled. Even the passion and them giving into one another didn't really feel hot or smoking like I would've liked. There was just some element missing. Again that could have been with the alcohol in their first love scene together that clouded my judgment and made me view it not in a favorable light at all. In fact like I said it was a turn off. Plus like said I was comparing book two with book one so that doesn't help and also that I read them pretty close together so Playboy's Lesson was fresh in my mind and hard to get over and wrap my head around this new story. So it could have been my frame of mind, but I just wasn't jumping up and down with this book like I thought I would be. I wish I did. But it wasn't bad either. So it was just okay.
With that being said I have now read the first two books in this series and I look forward to reading the rest in the future. I am curious about these sibling and if or when they will all come together and reconcile with their father. I see some type of big reunion coming. I'm also looking forward to Lucilla and Christos story because I can see a blood bath coming between the two of them with lots of sexual tension to come. Unfortunately that's the last book in the series so I have a little while to wait, but I looking forward to reading each and everyone of their stories. Also heard that there will be a spinoff of this series that will come out sometime next year, and I am looking forward to that as well. Hopefully I will enjoy this series as well as the spinoff. Hopefully the other books will have more promising romances than this one did, and I'll just have to wait and see.