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To Enter The Path
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A Vendrix is born. These are mortals that know all spells and enchantments, without having picked up a spell book all their lives. Normally, such power would be drool-worthy, but in this case, it means to be possessed by a demon that’s just using a body as a conduit.
For the townspeople, a beloved family member will now crave carnage and kill siblings and strangers alike.
For the person possessed, they barely last a day before sharpened pitchforks are used against them.
But a drunken minstrel’s foreseen a Vendrix that can actually control the demon. Such a weapon seems to be the only thing that can annihilate the sorcerer that’s been wreaking havoc everywhere.
Zendra’s denying that she’s the Vendrix, despite the fact that she just massacred a horde of wizards with no more exertion of energy than a yawn. Regardless, she’s enlisted by three men wanting to attempt the deadly path to the sorcerer, for fame, adventure, or vengeance.
Now, Valen, an arrogant yet charming wizard prodigy, Brevle, a wise-cracking warrior, Wulard, owns a map (sorry, that’s all he contributes), and Zendra, still unsure if she’s more of a threat to them than the obstacles, must band together, quiet their pessimism, and will their legs to forge through the Path of Fatality.
A Vendrix is born. These are mortals that know all spells and enchantments, without having picked up a spell book all their lives. Normally, such power would be drool-worthy, but in this case, it means to be possessed by a demon that’s just using a body as a conduit.
For the townspeople, a beloved family member will now crave carnage and kill siblings and strangers alike.
For the person possessed, they barely last a day before sharpened pitchforks are used against them.
But a drunken minstrel’s foreseen a Vendrix that can actually control the demon. Such a weapon seems to be the only thing that can annihilate the sorcerer that’s been wreaking havoc everywhere.
Zendra’s denying that she’s the Vendrix, despite the fact that she just massacred a horde of wizards with no more exertion of energy than a yawn. Regardless, she’s enlisted by three men wanting to attempt the deadly path to the sorcerer, for fame, adventure, or vengeance.
Now, Valen, an arrogant yet charming wizard prodigy, Brevle, a wise-cracking warrior, Wulard, owns a map (sorry, that’s all he contributes), and Zendra, still unsure if she’s more of a threat to them than the obstacles, must band together, quiet their pessimism, and will their legs to forge through the Path of Fatality.
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272 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 3, 2015
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May 19, 2018
This was an action-packed fantasy adventure. I won’t give a synopsis, as other reviewers have done a good job of that. I will say that it was fun to follow Zendra’s journey and to learn the history of the Vendrix. Watching Zendra battle for control of the Vendrix inside of her was my favorite aspect of the story. The world-building was fantastic, with places like the Path of Fatality and the Mountains of Murk.
There was plenty of humor mixed in with the action scenes, which helped to balance out some of the darker moments in the plot. I especially enjoyed the banter between Brevle and Valen. There were characters, like Sarc and Shaleen, that I would have liked to have more time with.
This is the first book in the Series and is not meant to be complete, but I did feel that I was left hanging at the end. They’ve not yet completed their quest. I wanted to see where Valen and Zendra’s relationship will go. I wanted to know more about the connection between Marnivus and Zendra. I suppose that’s a good thing because I will definitely be picking up the next book in the Series to find out! I recommend this book to anyone who enjoys fantasy, adventure, and a bit of romance.
There was plenty of humor mixed in with the action scenes, which helped to balance out some of the darker moments in the plot. I especially enjoyed the banter between Brevle and Valen. There were characters, like Sarc and Shaleen, that I would have liked to have more time with.
This is the first book in the Series and is not meant to be complete, but I did feel that I was left hanging at the end. They’ve not yet completed their quest. I wanted to see where Valen and Zendra’s relationship will go. I wanted to know more about the connection between Marnivus and Zendra. I suppose that’s a good thing because I will definitely be picking up the next book in the Series to find out! I recommend this book to anyone who enjoys fantasy, adventure, and a bit of romance.
May 14, 2018
There are the bones of an excellent YA fantasy novel in here! There was intriguing world-building and a wide collection of characters whose behaviors hint at interesting histories and engrossing growth arcs in their futures. There was hope and tragedy, romance and pathos, humor and horror. The protagonist's struggle against her inner demons was dramatic and well portrayed.
Unfortunately, the delivery felt uneven to me. Some passages flowed smoothly with artful descriptions and characters acting in a manner that felt rational given the situations before them; other scenes seemed forced and wooden, as though the protagonists lacked agency and were compelled into accepting out-of-character roles for the sole purpose of depicting a desired scene. Physical and emotional trauma were well described but were sometimes brushed aside without explanation, only to flood back when dramatically appropriate. Certain sequences were repetitive, and the lack of a proper ending was jarring.
While occasionally challenging, these were not fatal flaws! The author obviously has a vivid imagination and interesting tales to tell. I look forward to reading her future works as she polishes her craft.
Unfortunately, the delivery felt uneven to me. Some passages flowed smoothly with artful descriptions and characters acting in a manner that felt rational given the situations before them; other scenes seemed forced and wooden, as though the protagonists lacked agency and were compelled into accepting out-of-character roles for the sole purpose of depicting a desired scene. Physical and emotional trauma were well described but were sometimes brushed aside without explanation, only to flood back when dramatically appropriate. Certain sequences were repetitive, and the lack of a proper ending was jarring.
While occasionally challenging, these were not fatal flaws! The author obviously has a vivid imagination and interesting tales to tell. I look forward to reading her future works as she polishes her craft.
April 29, 2018
To enter the path is a YA fantasy novel, full of magic, assassins and demons. The book begins with a dramatic start as Zendra’s parents are slaughtered in front of her very eyes.
We learn Zendra is an incredibly powerful being called a Vendrix. But with that power comes an internal struggle where the Vendrix tries to take over and push Zendra out. She has to fight to keep herself
A character called Sarc is introduced, trains Zendra for a bit, then goes away, which was weird.
Although the inner turmoil against the Vendrix was good, Zendra was fairly overpowered with her magic, so I never felt like she was in any real danger.
Although a lot happened, the challenges Zendra and her companions faced were also a little repetitive, a bit more variety would’ve went a long way.
The ending was abrupt, and not really an ending at all. A proper conclusion was needed. Still, the book was full of action and some good characters. Valen was quite humorous and Marvinus was an appropriately unlikable villain you wanted to see defeated. If you’d like a fast paced, light fantasy book, this might be for you.
September 18, 2017
‘To Enter the Path’ is a fun adventure about a super-powerful female ‘Vendrix’ who struggles to control the evil power inside her. She is accompanied on her quest by two witty wizards and one knowledgeable, albeit otherwise amusingly useless, old man.
There are a lot of things I loved about this story. The characters are fun and easy to like, the story is exciting and moves quickly, there’s a very healthy dose of humor, and even the romantic subplot is fun to follow along with. I like how the author penned her female hero: she is neither a damsel in distress nor a superhero who can handle everything on her own. Sometimes she helps herself, sometimes needs help from her friends. I also liked that despite the ‘gloom and doom’ situation, the characters often remained upbeat and the humor style reminded me a bit of ‘Dealing with Dragons’ which was one of my favorite fantasy books as a child. Moreover, the descriptions and depth of emotions are compelling and engaging throughout.
I very much enjoyed reading this. Thank you to the author for providing me with a free copy in exchange for my honest, non-reciprocal, review.
There are a lot of things I loved about this story. The characters are fun and easy to like, the story is exciting and moves quickly, there’s a very healthy dose of humor, and even the romantic subplot is fun to follow along with. I like how the author penned her female hero: she is neither a damsel in distress nor a superhero who can handle everything on her own. Sometimes she helps herself, sometimes needs help from her friends. I also liked that despite the ‘gloom and doom’ situation, the characters often remained upbeat and the humor style reminded me a bit of ‘Dealing with Dragons’ which was one of my favorite fantasy books as a child. Moreover, the descriptions and depth of emotions are compelling and engaging throughout.
I very much enjoyed reading this. Thank you to the author for providing me with a free copy in exchange for my honest, non-reciprocal, review.
January 4, 2019
To Enter the Path is an imaginative book. The main character is possessed by a demon, which grants her great power, but which also comes at a horrible price. While she can do seemingly anything with magic, she will also lose control to the demon and slaughter anyone around, be they friend, foe, or loved one.
The villain has a backstory, and while it doesn't entirely explain why he is the way he is, it does make him more than a one-dimensional character. One that I assume will be more fully realized in the sequel.
There's a lot that happens in the book, with a variety of obstacles and monsters in the way of our party of heroes. I especially liked the two skeleton "guides". Very clever and fun.
The author does use a strange turn of phrase here and there, but overall the writing is solid.
Give this one a read, you'll enjoy it.
The villain has a backstory, and while it doesn't entirely explain why he is the way he is, it does make him more than a one-dimensional character. One that I assume will be more fully realized in the sequel.
There's a lot that happens in the book, with a variety of obstacles and monsters in the way of our party of heroes. I especially liked the two skeleton "guides". Very clever and fun.
The author does use a strange turn of phrase here and there, but overall the writing is solid.
Give this one a read, you'll enjoy it.
February 22, 2018
Zendra’s life has been tainted by her destiny since she was a child. As a young woman, she learns that she’s the Vendrix, a magical anomaly who is destined to be the host for a powerful force of magical destruction – the Victus Lameit. Fortunately for her, she finds she has some ability to control the demon inside her. Enlisted by three companions— a wizard’s apprentice, a wizard-warrior, and an old man with a map—she sets off on the Path of Fatality to the Mountains of Murk to destroy the evil sorcerer Marnivus who killed her parents and sister.
This first book covers the introductions of the characters and propels them through the first major challenge on the Path. They encounter a wide variety of lesser obstacles that are randomly placed along the Path in an attempt to kill her. In many ways, the journey reminded me role-playing games where the obstacles aren’t integral to the plot but add interest while testing the characters’ abilities and building relationships. The downside was that they seemed like random obstacles that aren’t integral to the plot.
The characters make the story. They’re well-rounded with full personalities, flaws, and emotions. Most of the story is in Zendra’s point of view, and she has a rich emotional inner life. Zendra’s love interest in the story, Valen, is sweet and their relationship felt authentic to me. All the relationships were believable and the dialog flowed naturally with a fair amount of banter. Brevle, the wizard-warrior, is a great third wheel.
The magic in the book is primarily spell-based. Two elements that make the magic fun are that the skills of the characters vary and that Marnivus, the sorcerer tracking their progress along the Path, has some tricks of his own. There are some twists and turns that keep readers on their toes. Marnivus has a lot of mystery around him and his relationship is Zendra has some secrets that could only guess at but am eager to learn.
To Enter the Path seems like a perfect book for young adult fantasy readers.
This first book covers the introductions of the characters and propels them through the first major challenge on the Path. They encounter a wide variety of lesser obstacles that are randomly placed along the Path in an attempt to kill her. In many ways, the journey reminded me role-playing games where the obstacles aren’t integral to the plot but add interest while testing the characters’ abilities and building relationships. The downside was that they seemed like random obstacles that aren’t integral to the plot.
The characters make the story. They’re well-rounded with full personalities, flaws, and emotions. Most of the story is in Zendra’s point of view, and she has a rich emotional inner life. Zendra’s love interest in the story, Valen, is sweet and their relationship felt authentic to me. All the relationships were believable and the dialog flowed naturally with a fair amount of banter. Brevle, the wizard-warrior, is a great third wheel.
The magic in the book is primarily spell-based. Two elements that make the magic fun are that the skills of the characters vary and that Marnivus, the sorcerer tracking their progress along the Path, has some tricks of his own. There are some twists and turns that keep readers on their toes. Marnivus has a lot of mystery around him and his relationship is Zendra has some secrets that could only guess at but am eager to learn.
To Enter the Path seems like a perfect book for young adult fantasy readers.
May 1, 2018
I'm not an avid reader of fantasy, especially medieval fantasy. I usually find the number of characters, different weirdly wonderful names, historical references and worlds totally confusing for my mind, which obviously just can't cope with an overload of all the senses. Having said that, I was more than pleasantly surprised that I found that I could slip into this story and be totally enthralled from the outset. Yes, there were complicated character names, but not such an overload that I would become lost. I actually understood what was going on, and even better, was really enjoying the plot! Well done to the author.
The plot is fast-paced and full of action, although occasionally I did find the chapters a little long due to the intense amount of action and description. The mythical beasts are breathtakingly scary and have you on the edge of your seat. I liked that the novel followed a journey; the path along which Zendra takes both literally and metaphorically as she develops as the story progresses. The evil spirit inside sometimes overtakes her character and I was interested to see how she'd overcome this and take control of her own destiny. There are plenty of twists and turns to keep you totally engrossed.
I liked that the novel was left on a cliffhanger, knowing that there would be more books to follow, it certainly made me eagerly want to pick up the next book. Overall, a very enjoyable read.
The plot is fast-paced and full of action, although occasionally I did find the chapters a little long due to the intense amount of action and description. The mythical beasts are breathtakingly scary and have you on the edge of your seat. I liked that the novel followed a journey; the path along which Zendra takes both literally and metaphorically as she develops as the story progresses. The evil spirit inside sometimes overtakes her character and I was interested to see how she'd overcome this and take control of her own destiny. There are plenty of twists and turns to keep you totally engrossed.
I liked that the novel was left on a cliffhanger, knowing that there would be more books to follow, it certainly made me eagerly want to pick up the next book. Overall, a very enjoyable read.
December 7, 2015
I purchased this book on free day. Starting this, I didn’t have much idea about plot but as I adjusted to the story, with subsequent chapters,it turned out to be a wonderful one.
The story is about young Zendra who has super powers, but she has no idea about. But her parents knew and they try hiding her but it didn’t work out. Zendra is trained to become an assassin and although reluctant to admit her powers she turned out to be a Vendrix. But who’re these Vendrix exactly? What are their powers and how dangerous they are?
The characters are rich and have amazing powers especially Zendra and Valen. Book ends on a satiating note and make a way for the second one in the series. If you like war fantasy with lot of sword fights, you’ll enjoy this book.
The story is about young Zendra who has super powers, but she has no idea about. But her parents knew and they try hiding her but it didn’t work out. Zendra is trained to become an assassin and although reluctant to admit her powers she turned out to be a Vendrix. But who’re these Vendrix exactly? What are their powers and how dangerous they are?
The characters are rich and have amazing powers especially Zendra and Valen. Book ends on a satiating note and make a way for the second one in the series. If you like war fantasy with lot of sword fights, you’ll enjoy this book.
March 27, 2018
Fantasy, adventure and non-stop action. Very hard to pull off because you have to achieve world building whilst trying to move the story at a gripping pace. Stephanie Flores really pulled this one off. I couldn't put this down from start to finish (Its 4am right now lol).
I like it when a book has very serious themes and can still make me laugh because of the sense of humour of the characters. I really really loved the witty banter and relationship between Zendra and Valen. Although I thought there'd be some romance, I like it when a book doesn't go in the way I thought it would.
Some parts of the writing could have been edited further so as to make it a bit smoother to read but I didn't care at all because the plot was really good. I'd watched this if it were a movie.
I like it when a book has very serious themes and can still make me laugh because of the sense of humour of the characters. I really really loved the witty banter and relationship between Zendra and Valen. Although I thought there'd be some romance, I like it when a book doesn't go in the way I thought it would.
Some parts of the writing could have been edited further so as to make it a bit smoother to read but I didn't care at all because the plot was really good. I'd watched this if it were a movie.
December 10, 2015
To enter the path was a wonderful book. Zendra is a strong and independent woman who is a Vendrix with vast powers and capabilities. She was a perfect protagonist with her moments of doubt, fear, anger and kind heartedness.
The Path of Fatality is a dangerous path which she must walk on to seek her revenge, and it had many interesting elements. The fantasy world that the author has crafted is interesting and fun to read. If you like magical adventures, this maybe the one for you.
The Path of Fatality is a dangerous path which she must walk on to seek her revenge, and it had many interesting elements. The fantasy world that the author has crafted is interesting and fun to read. If you like magical adventures, this maybe the one for you.
November 26, 2018
I received this book for free from the Author in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review. Will Zendra be able to control the demon within her?
To Enter the Path by Stephanie Flores is a very engaging book from the beginning to the very end of it. Trust me every time I put it down I wanted to know more about the characters and what would happen in the situation I left them in.
Ms. Flores did an excellent job of creating a phenomenally spectacular world and an interesting main female character. All the characters seem so realistic as well.
What I like:
That we got some glimpses into Zendra’s life before we find out that she is a Vendrix. I thought that was cool and it helped develop the character for that plot to work.
The idea behind the Vendrixes is so cool. Well okay even though you have a demon living in your body waiting to wreak havoc on everything and everyone you love. But it’s still a cool idea and something not seen in the world of young adult fantasy.
I love the banter between Zendra and the whole group. It helps get through some of the horrific scenes.
Then there is the love triangle, and it isn't forced and something that needs to happen. It’s a pretty standard thing to be happening during all of this fighting that the characters are going through together.
And the last thing that I like is the villain. He’s a great character and someone that you want to die but also care for as well.
What I dislike:
The only thing that I didn’t like is that Zendra doesn’t believe that she will live long after completing her task.
Five Stars
To Enter the Path by Stephanie Flores is a unique change to the books that we usually find in the young adult fantasy genre. It’s one of the many things that I like about this book. However, I can’t tell you the others as that would spoil it for you.
Ms. Flores is a great author and one that I can’t wait to read more of her books. I am especially looking forward to the last one for this duology. I am giving this book a five-star rating since it's an excellent book and one that I didn't want to put down.
Anyways until next time enjoy this review brought to you by,
This review was originally posted on Baroness' Book Trove
To Enter the Path by Stephanie Flores is a very engaging book from the beginning to the very end of it. Trust me every time I put it down I wanted to know more about the characters and what would happen in the situation I left them in.
Ms. Flores did an excellent job of creating a phenomenally spectacular world and an interesting main female character. All the characters seem so realistic as well.
What I like:
That we got some glimpses into Zendra’s life before we find out that she is a Vendrix. I thought that was cool and it helped develop the character for that plot to work.
The idea behind the Vendrixes is so cool. Well okay even though you have a demon living in your body waiting to wreak havoc on everything and everyone you love. But it’s still a cool idea and something not seen in the world of young adult fantasy.
I love the banter between Zendra and the whole group. It helps get through some of the horrific scenes.
Then there is the love triangle, and it isn't forced and something that needs to happen. It’s a pretty standard thing to be happening during all of this fighting that the characters are going through together.
And the last thing that I like is the villain. He’s a great character and someone that you want to die but also care for as well.
What I dislike:
The only thing that I didn’t like is that Zendra doesn’t believe that she will live long after completing her task.
Five Stars To Enter the Path by Stephanie Flores is a unique change to the books that we usually find in the young adult fantasy genre. It’s one of the many things that I like about this book. However, I can’t tell you the others as that would spoil it for you.
Ms. Flores is a great author and one that I can’t wait to read more of her books. I am especially looking forward to the last one for this duology. I am giving this book a five-star rating since it's an excellent book and one that I didn't want to put down.
Anyways until next time enjoy this review brought to you by,
This review was originally posted on Baroness' Book Trove
June 25, 2018
A Humorous, Creative YA Quest Fantasy
“You must believe when I tell you that not everything is as it seems.”
As a child, Zendra has to witness the horrific murder of her parents by an evil magician and following that she is rescued and raised by an assassin. Then her life gets complicated when she discovers she is the Vendrix, host of an evil demonic force known as the Victus Lameit, which allows her the ability to use any kind of magic. She sets out with a small group of men to destroy the magician who murdered her parents. They must travel along the Path of Fatality to the Mountains of Murk….
'In front, a small wooden sign with bubbly and inviting handwriting read: WELCOME TO THE PATH OF FATALITY!'
What I Really Liked:
- The story was really strong and progressed well keeping me engaged and wanting to know what would happen next.
- The touches of humour. These were sometimes brilliantly comedic, most often well placed but did fall flat on some occasions.
- The world building was highly creative, with lots of interesting details that seemed very original to me. The two together resulted in a marvellous unfolding tapestry of events with fantastical but well-explained features that kept on intriguing me as a reader all the way through.
- The magic system. Often a real weak spot in fantasy stories this one is well explained.
‘With each panic-stricken stare into the gloom, her heart sent deep exertions of pain throughout her chest, hinting its lack of oxygen.’
What I Struggled With:
- The characters would sometimes behave quite unpredictable and odd ways that made little sense to me, making it hard to get a grip on their personalities.
- The key feature of the demonic possession of Zendra is never clarified. Its appearance was very random and her control over it never really explained or explored.
- The technical structure of the writing was not always good, I was sometimes thrown out of reading immersion by awkward phrasings and word choices. This was especially marked during the action sequences.
- There was some ambiguity about which character’s point of view the reader was in and at times this did get a bit confusing.
Star Rating: 3.5
Overall:
I really enjoyed this book, it was a fun fantasy romp! With just a few less road bumps in the reading, it would have been superb.
Who Would Enjoy this Book:
All fantasy lovers, especially those of YA fantasy, should take a closer look at this one.
“You must believe when I tell you that not everything is as it seems.”
As a child, Zendra has to witness the horrific murder of her parents by an evil magician and following that she is rescued and raised by an assassin. Then her life gets complicated when she discovers she is the Vendrix, host of an evil demonic force known as the Victus Lameit, which allows her the ability to use any kind of magic. She sets out with a small group of men to destroy the magician who murdered her parents. They must travel along the Path of Fatality to the Mountains of Murk….
'In front, a small wooden sign with bubbly and inviting handwriting read: WELCOME TO THE PATH OF FATALITY!'
What I Really Liked:
- The story was really strong and progressed well keeping me engaged and wanting to know what would happen next.
- The touches of humour. These were sometimes brilliantly comedic, most often well placed but did fall flat on some occasions.
- The world building was highly creative, with lots of interesting details that seemed very original to me. The two together resulted in a marvellous unfolding tapestry of events with fantastical but well-explained features that kept on intriguing me as a reader all the way through.
- The magic system. Often a real weak spot in fantasy stories this one is well explained.
‘With each panic-stricken stare into the gloom, her heart sent deep exertions of pain throughout her chest, hinting its lack of oxygen.’
What I Struggled With:
- The characters would sometimes behave quite unpredictable and odd ways that made little sense to me, making it hard to get a grip on their personalities.
- The key feature of the demonic possession of Zendra is never clarified. Its appearance was very random and her control over it never really explained or explored.
- The technical structure of the writing was not always good, I was sometimes thrown out of reading immersion by awkward phrasings and word choices. This was especially marked during the action sequences.
- There was some ambiguity about which character’s point of view the reader was in and at times this did get a bit confusing.
Star Rating: 3.5
Overall:
I really enjoyed this book, it was a fun fantasy romp! With just a few less road bumps in the reading, it would have been superb.
Who Would Enjoy this Book:
All fantasy lovers, especially those of YA fantasy, should take a closer look at this one.
February 5, 2018
It took me a little while to get into this book as I found the writing style a little stilted, but once I was into the story I enjoyed it. The characters were interesting and the plot kept moving along, and the powers granted to the main character meant she never had too much trouble in saving the day or getting herself out of a tricky situation.
The premise of the story is awesome, starting with the young heroine’s parents hiding her in the forest in an effort to protect her. However, if all had gone according to their plan there would be no story to tell and the plot carries us forward to scenes of magic, fantasy, and sword play.
The author pulls in several scenarios and emotions as she keeps the tale moving along, and the book strikes me as being perfect for readers who enjoy a good video fantasy game, complete with monsters and action and enough banter to bring forth a smile.
The book is part one in a series and I’m sure many people will be anxious to read the next installment.
The premise of the story is awesome, starting with the young heroine’s parents hiding her in the forest in an effort to protect her. However, if all had gone according to their plan there would be no story to tell and the plot carries us forward to scenes of magic, fantasy, and sword play.
The author pulls in several scenarios and emotions as she keeps the tale moving along, and the book strikes me as being perfect for readers who enjoy a good video fantasy game, complete with monsters and action and enough banter to bring forth a smile.
The book is part one in a series and I’m sure many people will be anxious to read the next installment.
February 11, 2018
A magical world of wizards, spells, unbelievable scary creatures and heart stopping non-stop action. Yes, ‘To Enter the Path’ is an enthralling read. I take my hat off to the author for compiling such a complicated plot, well written, it’s hard to believe this is a debut novel.
This genre is well outside my usual choice, my eyes tend to roll at the mention of spells, wizardry, the super natural, but the story totally captivated me. I’m sure this book is aimed at the young reader market, I don’t quite qualify, but prejudices and preferences quickly dissipated the more I read.
Books in a series can frustrate me when there is no conclusion, I feel cheated when a story stops at an exciting point – buy the next book to complete the story. This book almost did that, the adventure had not reached a conclusion, but in this case, I will let my criticism pass. It sort of reached a satisfactory place to end. The next book will be worth waiting for.
This genre is well outside my usual choice, my eyes tend to roll at the mention of spells, wizardry, the super natural, but the story totally captivated me. I’m sure this book is aimed at the young reader market, I don’t quite qualify, but prejudices and preferences quickly dissipated the more I read.
Books in a series can frustrate me when there is no conclusion, I feel cheated when a story stops at an exciting point – buy the next book to complete the story. This book almost did that, the adventure had not reached a conclusion, but in this case, I will let my criticism pass. It sort of reached a satisfactory place to end. The next book will be worth waiting for.
October 18, 2017
Adventurous!
‘To Enter the Path’ was an interesting, highly original and awesome story filled with magic and heroism; which I absolutely loved. Being an obsessive fan of Skyrim (yes, the video game) this book was in the familiar realm of mages/wizards, warriors, creatures of lore. The author did a wonderful job creating a well plotted book with detailed characters along with such descriptions that played the story in my mind as if I watched it as well. It was well done, and now I’m left hanging on, waiting for the second book.
‘To Enter the Path’ was an interesting, highly original and awesome story filled with magic and heroism; which I absolutely loved. Being an obsessive fan of Skyrim (yes, the video game) this book was in the familiar realm of mages/wizards, warriors, creatures of lore. The author did a wonderful job creating a well plotted book with detailed characters along with such descriptions that played the story in my mind as if I watched it as well. It was well done, and now I’m left hanging on, waiting for the second book.
November 6, 2017
Pretty good book overall. It’s well written, the characters are well created, the story flows nicely, there’s no confusing parts that don’t belong. I enjoyed it overall. This is only a light four starts because there are character traits I didn’t like, and little things that I feel were left out, but overall an enjoyable read and recommended for anyone who like YA fantasy.
February 13, 2018
Flores' powers as a storyteller are on display in To Enter The Path. The story captivates you from page 1 and keeps the reader's attention throughout. An excellent start to the series, this book will open up a new world for readers who love to escape into a good book. Even as someone who doesn't usually read fantasy novels, this one was compelling and I would highly recommend it.
September 23, 2017
After being orphaned as a child, Zendra is taken in by a kindly assassin who trains her in the art of combat. Years pass with Zendra becoming happy in her new home and she soon settles into a comfortable existence. She has no idea that she's a powerful witch - a Vendrix who wields the destructive power of the Victus Lameit, a parasitic rage capable of obliterating entire towns in its wrathful wake.
First let me say that alot of work goes into writing a book. Next let me say that this book was spectacular even before Zendra and her comrades entered onto the Path. But once on the Path they battled ogres, finx, and even the Kraken.
I love the Kraken.
There was never a dull moment in this book. The characters were written wonderfully and the plot is very engrossing.
I will definitely be looking forward to reading Book 2. It's books like these that end up as motion pictures.
Excellent! 6 stars
First let me say that alot of work goes into writing a book. Next let me say that this book was spectacular even before Zendra and her comrades entered onto the Path. But once on the Path they battled ogres, finx, and even the Kraken.
I love the Kraken.
There was never a dull moment in this book. The characters were written wonderfully and the plot is very engrossing.
I will definitely be looking forward to reading Book 2. It's books like these that end up as motion pictures.
Excellent! 6 stars
October 22, 2015
The story follows Zendra, a young woman who discovers she is a Vendrix. Vendrix are people who, at random ages, obtain particularly strong powers. They don't learn them, these powers are simply known. In an attempt to hide her, Zendra's parents are murdered by a sorcerer and she is taken in by a man who trains her to become an assassin.
The story is a bit slow to start (understandable, as it's told as a legend), but it really picks up around the end of chapter 5 after the introduction of Valen. Watching Zendra and Valen work off and sometimes against each other can be pretty entertaining. The snarky tones the conversations take are a little reminiscent of older Dean Koontz, who is a personal childhood hero of mine. Zendra faces a lot of loss but never really loses her tough attitude. Valen lets a lot roll off him like water off a duck, especially when it comes to Zendra.
The tale reads a little like an older PlayStation RPG--another thing I'm a huge fan of. There are quests, there are quippy lines, and there is action. In those aspects it reminded me a lot of Okage: Shadow King, so I had a lot of fun reading it.
I did detract a star because there were a couple pet peeves that detracted from my enjoyment, and they were:
1) The Bram Stoker-esque chunks of paragraphs and info-dumping. Some people love this. It never reached Ayn Rand levels, but it made it really hard for me to read sometimes since my eyes would wander unintentionally. Again, it's a personal preference, but a lot of the paragraphs could have been broken up and made for a smoother read.
2) The main character is INSANELY overpowered. I couldn't feel much tension for most of the book when something happened to her simply because I knew she had a way out. This can be done well, but even when it is, I hate seeing it.
If neither of those things bother you and you want a quest-like story with fun, amusing characters and a good book to read in those small spaces of time you have between your busy day and going to bed, I recommend this one. And even if they do bother you, I recommend giving it a shot if only for the characters.
The story is a bit slow to start (understandable, as it's told as a legend), but it really picks up around the end of chapter 5 after the introduction of Valen. Watching Zendra and Valen work off and sometimes against each other can be pretty entertaining. The snarky tones the conversations take are a little reminiscent of older Dean Koontz, who is a personal childhood hero of mine. Zendra faces a lot of loss but never really loses her tough attitude. Valen lets a lot roll off him like water off a duck, especially when it comes to Zendra.
The tale reads a little like an older PlayStation RPG--another thing I'm a huge fan of. There are quests, there are quippy lines, and there is action. In those aspects it reminded me a lot of Okage: Shadow King, so I had a lot of fun reading it.
I did detract a star because there were a couple pet peeves that detracted from my enjoyment, and they were:
1) The Bram Stoker-esque chunks of paragraphs and info-dumping. Some people love this. It never reached Ayn Rand levels, but it made it really hard for me to read sometimes since my eyes would wander unintentionally. Again, it's a personal preference, but a lot of the paragraphs could have been broken up and made for a smoother read.
2) The main character is INSANELY overpowered. I couldn't feel much tension for most of the book when something happened to her simply because I knew she had a way out. This can be done well, but even when it is, I hate seeing it.
If neither of those things bother you and you want a quest-like story with fun, amusing characters and a good book to read in those small spaces of time you have between your busy day and going to bed, I recommend this one. And even if they do bother you, I recommend giving it a shot if only for the characters.
February 9, 2016
To Enter the Path is author Stephanie Flores’ debut novel and it captured my interest from the first page - I was delighted by the opening of the story.
Young Zendra’s parents are brutally murdered by an evil sorcerer, Marnivus, when she is just ten years old, and shortly thereafter, she is taken in, raised and expertly trained in the arts of self-defense and weaponry by a well-known assassin.
As Zendra matures, she slowly learns the secrets of her own past, and the mystery behind her parents’ deaths. She reluctantly discovers that she is a powerful Vendrix, and soon realizes that if she cannot learn to master her new power, she may succumb to it forever.
Zendra and her friends set out to destroy Marnivus, thereby avenging the deaths of her loved ones.
Stephanie Flores has created a well developed, edge of your seat type of story, and I look forward to reading more from this author.
This book was provided to me by the author, in exchange for an honest review.
Young Zendra’s parents are brutally murdered by an evil sorcerer, Marnivus, when she is just ten years old, and shortly thereafter, she is taken in, raised and expertly trained in the arts of self-defense and weaponry by a well-known assassin.
As Zendra matures, she slowly learns the secrets of her own past, and the mystery behind her parents’ deaths. She reluctantly discovers that she is a powerful Vendrix, and soon realizes that if she cannot learn to master her new power, she may succumb to it forever.
Zendra and her friends set out to destroy Marnivus, thereby avenging the deaths of her loved ones.
Stephanie Flores has created a well developed, edge of your seat type of story, and I look forward to reading more from this author.
This book was provided to me by the author, in exchange for an honest review.
February 22, 2017
Vendrix Trilogy Book 1. This was a free Kindle book from Stephanie Flores. Thank you, Ms. Flores, for sharing your work with me! By the time I was ten pages in, I was jealous of your students - you must be a wonderful teacher~!
This is an excellent book for tweenes and teens. the characters are complex, the intricacies of the political and social mores are well explained without preaching, and the story is involved but clearly explained. What may be less important in this texting world of teens but still resonates with us elders, this story is grammatically correct, and it builds at a steady and clearly defined pace. This is a book I will share with my young friends. I cannot wait for the next installment!
This is an excellent book for tweenes and teens. the characters are complex, the intricacies of the political and social mores are well explained without preaching, and the story is involved but clearly explained. What may be less important in this texting world of teens but still resonates with us elders, this story is grammatically correct, and it builds at a steady and clearly defined pace. This is a book I will share with my young friends. I cannot wait for the next installment!
July 31, 2018
I was given a free copy of the book in exchange for my honest review. Make sure to read more reviews at Katherine's Book Reviews.
To Enter The Path is a fantasy novel by Stephanie Flores.
SUMMARY:
A Vendrix is born. These are mortals that know all spells and enchantments, without having picked up a spell book all their lives. Normally, such power would be drool-worthy, but in this case, it means to be possessed by a demon that’s just using a body as a conduit.
For the townspeople, this means a beloved family member will now crave carnage and kill siblings and strangers alike.
For the person possessed, they barely last a day before sharpened pitchforks are used against them.
But a drunken minstrel’s foreseen a Vendrix that can actually control the demon. Such a weapon seems to be the only thing that can annihilate the sorcerer that’s been wreaking havoc everywhere.
Zendra’s denying that she’s the Vendrix, despite the fact that she just massacred a horde of wizards with no more exertion of energy than a yawn. Regardless of her denial, she’s enlisted by three men wanting to attempt the deadly path to the sorcerer, for fame, adventure, or vengeance.
Now, Valen, an arrogant yet charming wizard prodigy, Brevle, a wise-cracking warrior, Wulard, owns a map (sorry, that’s all he contributes), and Zendra, still unsure if she’s more of a threat to them than the obstacles, must band together, quiet their pessimism, and will their legs to forge through the Path of Fatality.
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To Enter The Path has a plot that you don’t want to miss out on. I was surprised to see how action-packed the story was in what seemed like such a short amount of time. I love the main character Zendra; she is the type of heroine you want to cheer for. She is not stereotyped as the typical girly-girl, and I love that it took her some time to accept the fact that she is a Vendrix. All of the characters are interesting, and I enjoyed getting to know each of them, especially Zendra.
I like this book. Stephanie Flores writes well; her narrative flowed nicely and I enjoy most of the fantasy-like descriptions seen in this novel. There were times however I felt these descriptions were a little too long for my taste, although I am not an avid fantasy reader. The premise of this story is extremely interesting and easy to get into, but I was a little disappointed by the ending. The story’s ending fell short; it ended too quickly and I do wish there was more of a presentable conclusion. I understand that the pacing of this story is meant to be fast, and I think for the most part the fast pace works, but I wanted to learn and know more about this fantasy world by the end. I do suggest this book to anyone who is looking for a quick and eventful novel filled with imagination. This book teaches you that you can’t escape who you are, no matter how hard you try.
To Enter The Path is a fantasy novel by Stephanie Flores.
SUMMARY:
A Vendrix is born. These are mortals that know all spells and enchantments, without having picked up a spell book all their lives. Normally, such power would be drool-worthy, but in this case, it means to be possessed by a demon that’s just using a body as a conduit.
For the townspeople, this means a beloved family member will now crave carnage and kill siblings and strangers alike.
For the person possessed, they barely last a day before sharpened pitchforks are used against them.
But a drunken minstrel’s foreseen a Vendrix that can actually control the demon. Such a weapon seems to be the only thing that can annihilate the sorcerer that’s been wreaking havoc everywhere.
Zendra’s denying that she’s the Vendrix, despite the fact that she just massacred a horde of wizards with no more exertion of energy than a yawn. Regardless of her denial, she’s enlisted by three men wanting to attempt the deadly path to the sorcerer, for fame, adventure, or vengeance.
Now, Valen, an arrogant yet charming wizard prodigy, Brevle, a wise-cracking warrior, Wulard, owns a map (sorry, that’s all he contributes), and Zendra, still unsure if she’s more of a threat to them than the obstacles, must band together, quiet their pessimism, and will their legs to forge through the Path of Fatality.
—
To Enter The Path has a plot that you don’t want to miss out on. I was surprised to see how action-packed the story was in what seemed like such a short amount of time. I love the main character Zendra; she is the type of heroine you want to cheer for. She is not stereotyped as the typical girly-girl, and I love that it took her some time to accept the fact that she is a Vendrix. All of the characters are interesting, and I enjoyed getting to know each of them, especially Zendra.
I like this book. Stephanie Flores writes well; her narrative flowed nicely and I enjoy most of the fantasy-like descriptions seen in this novel. There were times however I felt these descriptions were a little too long for my taste, although I am not an avid fantasy reader. The premise of this story is extremely interesting and easy to get into, but I was a little disappointed by the ending. The story’s ending fell short; it ended too quickly and I do wish there was more of a presentable conclusion. I understand that the pacing of this story is meant to be fast, and I think for the most part the fast pace works, but I wanted to learn and know more about this fantasy world by the end. I do suggest this book to anyone who is looking for a quick and eventful novel filled with imagination. This book teaches you that you can’t escape who you are, no matter how hard you try.
April 2, 2018
This book to me seemed like a chain of stories without progression. At times it was vexing, because in impossibly dangerous situations, Zendra's magic would rescue her just barely after her powerful blows and strategy against the mighty obstacle, yet at other times her magic barely functions in easy but lethal situations. One example that comes in mind is that she and her band of travellers are attacked by a small village full of people with no superpowers, yet they fall victim to their savagery and cannot escape. This made the story very inconsistent. Another inconsistency was that sometimes the evil spirit within her would rise, sometimes it wouldn't, and she could not control it whenever it did possess her. She's just a vessel. Sometimes she doesn't have her own will, which is important in a main character. As well, the gruesomeness of the atrocities at the beginning, with all those murders of secondary characters, threw me off a bit, wondering why these happened and why they are supposed to make me feel absorbed in the story.
Another issue with the story is the dangerous "Path" -- the mystical fantasy land that has an evil wizard who torments her and the village from time to time. The band of comrades didn't want to go in, and I wasn't sure why they felt it was necessary, given its grave dangers. I reviewed some conversation that Zendra didn't feel safe in the village with this evil wizard still on the loose, so she resolved to find him and kill him or at least find out who he really is. However, this pre-emptive strike is hardly a reason to go on such a journey.
Plus, there were entire villages living in the Path! As well as isolated cottages with an inhabitant or two. I found it hard to believe. Why would they live there? That had me perplexed.
The good things though, the premise is pretty cool if the story is re-developed with a clear purpose and with some structure on Zendra's powers and some firmer rationale for heading in. I would also evict the ordinary Pathdwellers people, since their existence sort of negates the mystery and danger of the Path, as well, how do they get their food, metal, building and clothing supplies from the rest of the world?
The author attempted some humour in this story, which is great, but because of the problems of the structure of the story -- the flat tension and the moments of incredulity -- some of it missed the target. One small thing, and maybe it's just me, I found it hard, among the male companions to Zendra, to figure out whom was speaking. Their voices weren't distinctive enough for me.
Overall, I think there's a great story in there, if the author wants another go, and also one last thing is that there is no resolution at the end of the story, which disappointed me.
Another issue with the story is the dangerous "Path" -- the mystical fantasy land that has an evil wizard who torments her and the village from time to time. The band of comrades didn't want to go in, and I wasn't sure why they felt it was necessary, given its grave dangers. I reviewed some conversation that Zendra didn't feel safe in the village with this evil wizard still on the loose, so she resolved to find him and kill him or at least find out who he really is. However, this pre-emptive strike is hardly a reason to go on such a journey.
Plus, there were entire villages living in the Path! As well as isolated cottages with an inhabitant or two. I found it hard to believe. Why would they live there? That had me perplexed.
The good things though, the premise is pretty cool if the story is re-developed with a clear purpose and with some structure on Zendra's powers and some firmer rationale for heading in. I would also evict the ordinary Pathdwellers people, since their existence sort of negates the mystery and danger of the Path, as well, how do they get their food, metal, building and clothing supplies from the rest of the world?
The author attempted some humour in this story, which is great, but because of the problems of the structure of the story -- the flat tension and the moments of incredulity -- some of it missed the target. One small thing, and maybe it's just me, I found it hard, among the male companions to Zendra, to figure out whom was speaking. Their voices weren't distinctive enough for me.
Overall, I think there's a great story in there, if the author wants another go, and also one last thing is that there is no resolution at the end of the story, which disappointed me.
July 1, 2018
Although it's not mentioned in the description, this book is part 1 of Vendrix series; that IDK consists of how many books. I couldn't find that information anywhere.
I believe the main characters in the book had a good character development - Zendra, Valen, and even Marnivus.
I like the author's writing. The intense moments were intense and fighting scenes were well written.
However, I feel the story was a bit off.
First off, the whole decision of going through the Path of Fatality didn't feel justified. There wasn't enough build-up for that.
Marnivus killed . But neither of them had any character development at all. So, even though their deaths were all tragic, they were still pretty forgettable. Especially, with all the slice-of-life elements present in the book.
It's as if the characters were introduced just to kill them. I did not feel connected to them. And hence, their deaths did not affect me. If only there was a happy memory of that could break our hearts and implant in our minds why going through the Path of Fatality and killing Marnivus was so important.
Also, the Path of Fatality didn't feel as fatal as it sounds. I expected the journey through the path to be something like that in Lord of the Rings, but this was much much easier. Something like Digimon - You wander around with your friends in an alien world with exotic animals and battle monsters every now and then. I mean, yeah, the fight scenes are well written and intense. But the time between the fight scenes, i.e. the Path itself, feels like they're having a regular stroll through the woods.
Thirdly, Marnivus didn't feel villainous enough. Killing are the only brutal things he did in the book and neither of them had much impact on me due to their lack of character build-up. Plus, the fact that the party practically cakewalk his dreaded Path of Fatality.
And we're already made to sympathize with him due to his troubled past. That intended element of internal struggle in Zendra's mind, towards Marnivus by making us sympathize with him, would've only been successful if we were made to hate him in the first place.
TL;DR: It was a good read. But, I believe it had a lot more potential.
It felt as if a lot of focus was put on the turmoils of a demon-harboring girl and the overall story took a hit.
I believe the main characters in the book had a good character development - Zendra, Valen, and even Marnivus.
I like the author's writing. The intense moments were intense and fighting scenes were well written.
However, I feel the story was a bit off.
First off, the whole decision of going through the Path of Fatality didn't feel justified. There wasn't enough build-up for that.
Marnivus killed . But neither of them had any character development at all. So, even though their deaths were all tragic, they were still pretty forgettable. Especially, with all the slice-of-life elements present in the book.
It's as if the characters were introduced just to kill them. I did not feel connected to them. And hence, their deaths did not affect me. If only there was a happy memory of that could break our hearts and implant in our minds why going through the Path of Fatality and killing Marnivus was so important.
Also, the Path of Fatality didn't feel as fatal as it sounds. I expected the journey through the path to be something like that in Lord of the Rings, but this was much much easier. Something like Digimon - You wander around with your friends in an alien world with exotic animals and battle monsters every now and then. I mean, yeah, the fight scenes are well written and intense. But the time between the fight scenes, i.e. the Path itself, feels like they're having a regular stroll through the woods.
Thirdly, Marnivus didn't feel villainous enough. Killing are the only brutal things he did in the book and neither of them had much impact on me due to their lack of character build-up. Plus, the fact that the party practically cakewalk his dreaded Path of Fatality.
And we're already made to sympathize with him due to his troubled past. That intended element of internal struggle in Zendra's mind, towards Marnivus by making us sympathize with him, would've only been successful if we were made to hate him in the first place.
TL;DR: It was a good read. But, I believe it had a lot more potential.
It felt as if a lot of focus was put on the turmoils of a demon-harboring girl and the overall story took a hit.
March 15, 2018
Within this book is a great story trying to get out.
The main protagonist, a young woman overtaken by a demonic magic spirit, is very well imagined and drawn. Her companions are equally well created.
The problem is that the story is somewhat swamped by the repetitive nature of the challenges and solutions. The book is too long. After the umpteenth test in her attempt to resolve a life-threatening situation, the story lost plausibility for me. Fantasy, in particular YA fantasy, often deals with unreal situations. However, the story needs to be plausible, and this one becomes so mired in impossible-to-resolve situations that are then resolved, that I was unable to suspend my disbelief any longer.
There are editing issues, which, given the author’s thanks to her editor, questions the quality of the chosen individual’s expertise.
There is, though, much that’s good about this book, and I suspect many younger readers will either ignore or absorb those things that irritated me. The pace is generally fast; in fact, there were times when I wished for a breather to collect my flagging mental energy! But the story does move along.
It’s easy to empathise with the female protagonist and with the men who oppose and help in her quest. There’s a good moral theme underlying the story, and the burgeoning romance will definitely appeal to many readers.
I suspect this tale is simply not my cup of tea. And the fact that the book just comes to an end, rather than a phase of the story naturally reaching a conclusion, is also an irritation. Yes, this is the first part of a series, but readers expect such a break to complete a part of the story, rather than simply end abruptly.
So, mixed feelings for me here. The negatives are in the story structure, length, and lack of conclusion. The positives lie in the wonderful characters and the amazing imagination that developed the world and its settings.
The main protagonist, a young woman overtaken by a demonic magic spirit, is very well imagined and drawn. Her companions are equally well created.
The problem is that the story is somewhat swamped by the repetitive nature of the challenges and solutions. The book is too long. After the umpteenth test in her attempt to resolve a life-threatening situation, the story lost plausibility for me. Fantasy, in particular YA fantasy, often deals with unreal situations. However, the story needs to be plausible, and this one becomes so mired in impossible-to-resolve situations that are then resolved, that I was unable to suspend my disbelief any longer.
There are editing issues, which, given the author’s thanks to her editor, questions the quality of the chosen individual’s expertise.
There is, though, much that’s good about this book, and I suspect many younger readers will either ignore or absorb those things that irritated me. The pace is generally fast; in fact, there were times when I wished for a breather to collect my flagging mental energy! But the story does move along.
It’s easy to empathise with the female protagonist and with the men who oppose and help in her quest. There’s a good moral theme underlying the story, and the burgeoning romance will definitely appeal to many readers.
I suspect this tale is simply not my cup of tea. And the fact that the book just comes to an end, rather than a phase of the story naturally reaching a conclusion, is also an irritation. Yes, this is the first part of a series, but readers expect such a break to complete a part of the story, rather than simply end abruptly.
So, mixed feelings for me here. The negatives are in the story structure, length, and lack of conclusion. The positives lie in the wonderful characters and the amazing imagination that developed the world and its settings.
July 5, 2018
To Enter The Path is a fast-paced fantasy romp, but sometimes suffers from that pacing.
My main qualm with this book is that is just moves too fast for it's own good at times, especially in the beginning. This isn't so evident in the general arc of the story, which was quite good, but in the individual scenes. The best example I have if the first manifestation of the Vendrix (the demon/magical force that takes up residence in our Mc's body.) This first manifestation occurs instantly, from zero to a hundred with no intimate foreshadowing. We know about it from the synopsis and the dialogue of characters throughout the preceding chapters, but we're never allowed to truly see or experience it, we're never teased with what it can do from a personal perspective. This means that the creature/being's first reveal is lackluster, and it takes most of the book before its presence acquires the menace it trull needs. This is the story's greatest weakness; we see the vendrix act, we see it devastate, but it's always from the outside, divorced from the character we have the most emotional attachment to: The MC. The author conveys early on that the host body remains conscious while the spirit assumes control, yet we never watch the vendrix from inside, we never experience the visceral hopelessness that causes, the terror as it threatens the characters our MC cares about the most.
So, To Enter The Path is a fun, fast story with lots of action and verbal sparring, but had several scenes where it needed a slower, more intimate and physical hand. (And less telling in general to move the story along.)
My main qualm with this book is that is just moves too fast for it's own good at times, especially in the beginning. This isn't so evident in the general arc of the story, which was quite good, but in the individual scenes. The best example I have if the first manifestation of the Vendrix (the demon/magical force that takes up residence in our Mc's body.) This first manifestation occurs instantly, from zero to a hundred with no intimate foreshadowing. We know about it from the synopsis and the dialogue of characters throughout the preceding chapters, but we're never allowed to truly see or experience it, we're never teased with what it can do from a personal perspective. This means that the creature/being's first reveal is lackluster, and it takes most of the book before its presence acquires the menace it trull needs. This is the story's greatest weakness; we see the vendrix act, we see it devastate, but it's always from the outside, divorced from the character we have the most emotional attachment to: The MC. The author conveys early on that the host body remains conscious while the spirit assumes control, yet we never watch the vendrix from inside, we never experience the visceral hopelessness that causes, the terror as it threatens the characters our MC cares about the most.
So, To Enter The Path is a fun, fast story with lots of action and verbal sparring, but had several scenes where it needed a slower, more intimate and physical hand. (And less telling in general to move the story along.)
August 4, 2018
A lot of good ingredients in this YA Fantasy. Accessible writing style, intriguing world, interesting characters, action, humour, and fun.
The opening is gripping and takes you right into the action. The main character, Zendra, soon trains under the tutelage of Sarc. And just when their dynamic is beginning to get interesting, we time leap forward, leaving Sarc a distant memory - a surprising leap.
The book feels long for the ground that it covers. And although I had been warned to expect an abrupt ending, paving the way for book 2, the sudden ending is still no less jarring.
The range of characters work well together, bringing a real sense of life and joy to an otherwise dark and forboding path.
I found the ‘Path’ itself to be the most intriguing aspect of the novel. However, on the long journey, there are a few too many fights with random beasts and thugs. When all that really matters is the dark force haunting Zendra’s dreams since her childhood - and the internal struggle she has with her own powers.
There’s a lot here that works well. It’s just not quite ‘there’ for me yet.
The opening is gripping and takes you right into the action. The main character, Zendra, soon trains under the tutelage of Sarc. And just when their dynamic is beginning to get interesting, we time leap forward, leaving Sarc a distant memory - a surprising leap.
The book feels long for the ground that it covers. And although I had been warned to expect an abrupt ending, paving the way for book 2, the sudden ending is still no less jarring.
The range of characters work well together, bringing a real sense of life and joy to an otherwise dark and forboding path.
I found the ‘Path’ itself to be the most intriguing aspect of the novel. However, on the long journey, there are a few too many fights with random beasts and thugs. When all that really matters is the dark force haunting Zendra’s dreams since her childhood - and the internal struggle she has with her own powers.
There’s a lot here that works well. It’s just not quite ‘there’ for me yet.
November 28, 2017
A solid read for lovers of fantasy.
The author does a wonderful job weaving a compelling world and creating complex characters. I particularly liked how she makes the reader feel such sympathy for the villain of the story, adding more depth.
I personally was hoping for a little more romance, but the sparks never really did fly between the main characters for me. I would have liked a little more time spent on the main character's backstory to make me a little more bonded with her, as I had a hard time relating. Even without the romance I was hoping for and not really loving the main character, the book was a fun read. The concept is original enough to keep one entertained, and the author does a great job describing the action and building the world. My favorite characters were some of the secondary ones, as the author does a great job in creating full stories for more than just the main characters.
Overall, an entertaining read those who enjoy young adult fantasy with wizards and an epic journey.
The author does a wonderful job weaving a compelling world and creating complex characters. I particularly liked how she makes the reader feel such sympathy for the villain of the story, adding more depth.
I personally was hoping for a little more romance, but the sparks never really did fly between the main characters for me. I would have liked a little more time spent on the main character's backstory to make me a little more bonded with her, as I had a hard time relating. Even without the romance I was hoping for and not really loving the main character, the book was a fun read. The concept is original enough to keep one entertained, and the author does a great job describing the action and building the world. My favorite characters were some of the secondary ones, as the author does a great job in creating full stories for more than just the main characters.
Overall, an entertaining read those who enjoy young adult fantasy with wizards and an epic journey.
June 27, 2018
I don't often read fantasy, but I do enjoy the genre on occasion. This book featured great world building and the author has immense talent, but I never really connected to this book or the characters in the way that I would have liked to, and I don't really know why that is. The story seemed to have a slower pace than I prefer in books, though that could simply have been due to the fact that I ended up reading it more slowly, because even though the book was interesting it didn't really hold my attention. I don't think that is at all the fault of the book, simply that the book just wasn't my cup of tea. Overall, I did enjoy the story, but I wasn't a fan of the ending, I don't hate cliff hangers but I do crave a bit more closure at the end of a story than I found in this one. As far as content goes there is a tiny bit of bad language, and of course fantasy style violence, and lots of magic, but otherwise it's a pretty clean read! I recommend this book if you enjoy fantasy, and don't mind a lot of magic. I might someday read the next book in the series.
October 13, 2018
Although YA Fantasy is not generally my cup of tea, the main character’s inner conflict and action piqued my interest. Zendra was kinda OP which took the tension out of some scenes while being inconsistent in others, which brought into question the pacing and character-agency even when she had a target to pursue. This also goes for the rippling consequences concerning the idea of the Vendrix and the ill-named “Path of Fatality” that, although interesting, events felt a little rinse and repeat in places.
It’s easy to see that a lot of work was put into some of the fun characters and scenes in the book, particularly the brutal beginning, where others didn’t seem as trim or convincing and resolved haphazardly if at all (*ahem* Sarc), which I put mainly due to this being the first in a series, so I can’t be too hard on it for that. I’m glad the author warned me of the ending and would maybe suggest reading both of her books as one.
It’s easy to see that a lot of work was put into some of the fun characters and scenes in the book, particularly the brutal beginning, where others didn’t seem as trim or convincing and resolved haphazardly if at all (*ahem* Sarc), which I put mainly due to this being the first in a series, so I can’t be too hard on it for that. I’m glad the author warned me of the ending and would maybe suggest reading both of her books as one.
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