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This was disappointing. I was expecting Aden's story to be great after all the build up he and the Arrows got, but I was mostly bored by him and his relationship with Zaira/the Arrows. It didn't help that the story and the dynamics between characters were very similar to the last few books in the series, there was nothing new or exciting or interesting about any of it.
Liked:
-The secondary characters were fun to read about, especially Nikita, Anthony, Kaleb, and Sienna.
-It was easy to immerse into the psy-changeling world again and enjoy all the different elements of it.
-The introduction of the RainFire pack, loved the idea of a fairly new pack/alpha trying to establish themselves.
-The floating cities of the water changelings, they sounded pretty amazing.
-The psy/humans/changelings developing alliances and relationships with each other.
-Loved Beatrice's character, even though she had a relatively small role she still managed to have more depth and nuance than Zaira. I hope she crops up again in future books.
Plot summary:
Zaira: Oh noes, we've been kidnapped. I'm small and curvy but oh so dangerous. Also, I have a dark past which means I can't have a normal life.
Aden: Let's escape. I'm good and honourable and kind and modest.
Bad guys: Lets kidnap children and drug people and try to kill Aden and his Arrows. How else can we take over the world?
Zaira: I lurve Aden, I lurve him so much. I lurve, lurve, lurve him. I have a dark past, I deserve no-one, I can't be normal. OMG, I wonder who kidnapped us. Do they know I have a dark past?
Aden: Children are the future, we must protect them. Good guys are good, bad buys are bad. I lurve Zaira, she so small and curvy and deadly, it turn me on. Must remember to find bad guys.
Zaira: I am rage monster, stay away from me!! My dark past haunts me and controls me etc, etc. Children are small and innocent, what I do with them?
Aden: The Arrows are my family, and children are children who need protecting. Hope, faith, love.
Zaira: I hate anybody who hurts children. I'm also evil but I lurve Aden and also the children and innocents but that don't mean I good. My dark past haunts me.
Aden: Hope, faith, love. That's all you need Zaira. Family, children, home, protect, good guys, hope, faith, love, children, innocents.
Zaira: I have a rage monster, my dark past haunts me! I kiss Aden but can't be with him. I kiss him again.
Aden: Zaira so powerful and sexy. Hope, faith, love. I have patience.
Zaira: I cannot be helped. My dark past haunts me! Nobody hurts children or I kill them.
Aden: Children need protecting, they also need family, hope, faith and love. I lurve Zaira.
Zaira: My dark past haunts me. I have a rage monster. I want Adrian but my dark past haunts the me. I kiss him?
Aden: Hope, faith, love, family, children, home, kebabs. I lurve Zaira.
Zaira: My dark past haunts me. But hope, faith, love, family, children also haunting the me now. That mean I good.
Aden: Hope, faith, love.
Zaira. Yes Aden, you be right. Hope, faith, love. My dark past no longer haunting the me because of the hope, the faith and the love.
Bad guys: Let be planning for world domination, just because. Hee hee, we so evil.
The end.
Disliked:
-The plot didn't click with me at all. Aden and Zaira were targeted by some mysterious shadowy bad guys, and then there was a bunch of other craziness going on with someone trying to create dissension between the different races. So Aden and Zaira ran around trying to figure out what was going on and who was behind all the chaos, all whilst getting angsty and sexy with each other.
-I DESPISED Zaira, she irritated me so much. No other heroine in the series so far has annoyed me as much as her. She was a one note character with no shades of grey, she kept having the same internal struggle and kept saying and doing the same thing over and over and over again. Ugh, I felt like punching her.
-Aden was nowhere near as good a main character as I thought he'd be. He was so much more interesting and charismatic as a secondary character, his romance with Zaira sucked all the life out of him, he was just so boring. Also, not once did I believe in his feelings for Zaira, it all seemed so fake, forced and unconvincing.
-I was so sick of Zaira banging on about her rage, her monster, her darkness, her aloneness, her awfulness, her twisted rage, her traumatic childhood, her worthlessness, and how damaged, broken, scarred and insane she was. Boo fucking hoo. That was all she thought about and talked about, there was nothing else to her - well, except for her unhealthy obsession with Aden. I needed less angsty, repetitive monologuing and more character development and growth.
-I hated how Zaira kept going back and forth about her relationship with Aden, she couldn't make a decision and stick to it, she kept running away. I didn't care about her inner pain or the monster inside her or all the crap she'd been through. The more she bought up her tortured past, the less I cared about her. She didn't read like a fully fleshed character, she had no depth or nuance, she was just a bunch of tragedies. It didn't help that she literally had no-one in her life except for Aden, even that guy who imprinted on her was nothing but a background thought. She was just a flat character whose world revolved around Aden. At least Aden had his squad, Vasic, Ivy, and Walker to flesh him out, Zaira had no-one. A heroine needs more than a love interest and a dark past to be interesting and nuanced.
-Zaira's obsession with Aden was beyond pathetic and embarrassing. Her jealousy and possessiveness for him wasn't endearing, it was fucked up. Aden should have run a mile from her craziness.
-The way Zaira treated Aden pissed me off, for someone who was that desperately in love she sure treated him like crap. He was patient and supportive of her but all she did was string him along and play hot and cold. I don't know why Aden put up with her wishy washy attitude, she really didn't deserve it.
-Zaira banging on about her rage monster was beyond irritating, she literally wouldn't shut up about it. The silly cow thought she was insane because she killed her evil, abusive parents, and for some reason she thought that meant she was evil just like them (despite only ever hurting people who deserved it). She conveniently seemed to forget how protective she was of children, innocents and the vulnerable, and that she would do anything to help and save them. I can't stand characters who berate and hate themselves about 'bad' things they've done (which are actually reasonable and understandable things) whilst forgetting all the many good and martyr-ish things they've done. The lack of perspective and logic in characters like that is so frustrating to read.
-Didn't enjoy the mystery of who was after Aden/Zaira/the Arrows and who was trying to cause dissension between the major psy/changeling/human groups. It took too long to find out what was going on and even then it was kept a mystery just to drag things out. And the whole evil Consortium group trying to take over the world at the end was so corny and generic, I couldn't care less about them or their cheesy taking over the world plans.
-I was sick of the psy and the Arrows, their relationships, dynamics, and whole set up was dull to read about. I used to think they were different and interesting but they've become more and more boring with each book.
-Took way too long to find out what Aden's powers were, by the time they were revealed I no longer cared.
-The children, the bloody children. So cute, so precocious, so innocent, so vulnerable, so ugh. Every other page someone was banging about kids and what little miracles they were and how they were every good guys weakness and how they needed love and protection. Give me a fucking break.
The amount of times various characters mentioned the miracle of children and how oh so precious and innocent they were was ridiculous. It almost started to sound preachy. It was cheap and lazy how the child characters were used to show how the good guys were good and the bad guys were bad, it was so heavy handed. Ugh.
-Every action and thought and conversation a character had/did was analysed to the extreme. Nothing was left to the readers imagination. If Aden was angry at some bad guy, his entire thought process and the feeling behind his anger was explained in minute detail as if we we're too dumb to figure it out ourselves. And if Zaira was pushing Aden away, she monologued or talked about why she was doing exactly what she was doing, despite it being obvious or already being explained a thousand times before. There was so much telling and not enough showing, and no room for imagination or interpretation.
Overall, I wasn't impressed with Aden or Zaira or their relationship, they didn't entertain me in any way. Hopefully, the next couple will be more exciting and engrossing than boring Aden/Zaira.