I love this series. I did not LOVE this entry. I liked it well enough. I had some problems with the flow of it, mainly. It doesn't seem to have the same ability to give you resolution the way the other books do. This review is FILLED with spoilers.
Things I Liked:
All the fun of finally getting to see characters time traveling back and forth of their own free will and volition, opting to meet Shakespeare and Robert Louis Stevenson. Those parts were great.
Joseph trying to prevent Alec from ever being born was pretty funny. His failed revenge scheme in Jamaica was...bizarrely funny.
The weird guy at the other end of time and wondering what his deal was. I'm still wondering what his deal was...it wasn't really explained what the hell he was doing there.
Suleyman and Latif being fucking badasses and saving the imprisoned immortals who had been imprisoned along with Mendoza. I wish there was more backstory on how Nefer was Latif's adopted mother and raised him with Suleyman, because that sounds like it could have worked great as a chapter on its own.
Some of the more philosophical passages about Nicholas and Edward being disembodied programs who are now living parallel to Alec and he occasionally lets them have control. Some of the arguing and fighting could have been more interesting. It just came across as tedious after a while. I liked the process of them working together as a team.
Mendoza and Alec in the 1990s trudging around a supermarket and marveling at the time before it all went to hell gave me remarkable deja vu. Kage predicted correctly about how freedom of speech would go out the window and she saw the rise of vegetarianism as a political movement, which is increasingly making it into the news these days. The fact that she predicted the fall of America and civil war would occur by the 2030s is not far off from what could happen. She also posits that in Alec's time, all vices have been banned: alcohol, sugar, caffeine, tobacco, everything that costs money in a socialist medical system will be banned. And I have to wonder how far off her prediction will be in the coming years. It doesn't seem that unlikely at this point.
Things I Didn't Like:
The reconstruction of Mendoza's body resulting in her being physically 14 was...not comfortable for me. I decided not to picture this at all. I just kept picturing Mendoza at an immortal 18. Because otherwise it's just unfortunately gross.
I really wish I could like Captain Henry Morgan more. He starts to become less one-note near the end, but for the most part I really wanted him to give us more of what he was thinking in terms of the big picture regarding Mendoza.
I really didn't like him going along with the delusions Alec was feeding Mendoza. In fact, this really irritated me and kind of ruined both of their characters for me. They're lying to her about Alec being an immortal cyborg just like her when he was genetically created and therefore a unique Company experiment? How does that even make sense? Why do you need to protect her from that to begin with? What? This was a really stupid thing for both of these characters to do and one of them is supposed to be a remarkably brilliant AI. This plotline really doesn't bring anything to the overall story and we don't even get to see a major fight over it when she realizes he lied. It was a cop out not to have any consequences over that at all. The story didn't need that plot point because it barely resulted in conflict, and it should have. It just didn't fit. There was enough conflict going on over Edward, since his character went full insane evil scientist.
Which brings me to how gross it is that Edward plotted to be reincarnated as Mendoza's baby.
What.
Just.
I just...
No. Stop that. Amazingly, this was a plot that American Dad used at one point where Hayley gave birth to Jeff after he had been abducted by aliens. I haven't seen much of that show since I saw that episode. Because...ew.
Okay, apart from the absurdity of that, why wouldn't you just try and wait for the day that technology could give you a clone body or something. How about not leaping right to that as a solution. It's just very uncomfortable. The fact that he tries to convince her to give birth to a baby and she wouldn't even know it's Edward is beyond creepy.
So that brings us to the ending, which had one of the most unexpected scenes in all of literature.
So, they are wind up in the deep past again, but it's not that deep. The furthest back you can go is the research center Alec and company steal from, where the one human guy has been leading a very boring life with AIs. Is he brainwashed or does he not know that he's interacting with artificial intelligences? There's a "Lost" style mystery of him pushing a button in a room somewhere, and it's important for the Company...very important. But vague. I'm thinking it has something to do with keeping time travel possible for them later on?
Anyway, so at the end, it's very unexplained, but Mendoza downloads all of the Captain's information about the Company and she almost goes catatonic because it's way too much for her. Presumably she understands everything that we the readers understand and more. The Captain is somehow suddenly more than a hologram? I think?
Keep in mind, they are back in time maybe 300,000 years in the past. 500,000 is the absolute limit.
So then Alec gets hacked by Edward and he locks Alec's consciousness up inside a virtual prison along with Nicholas, betraying them both. Edward Bell Fairfax Alton is a cunt. He has a cunt name, and he's just a cunt of a disembodied clone spirit. So he takes over, and then...
Are you fucking ready for this one?
A fucking ichthyosaur jumps out of the water and bites his fucking leg off.
An ichthyosaur. They died out 65 million years ago, but Kage magically brings one up, and we are left with questions. How did the ichthyosaur not die off? Did we never find its remains from the age of the dinosaurs til now but it was there, swimming around? I mean, it defies logic, yes, but in a fun way. Because at this point, I really didn't want Alec to get hurt, but something had to stop Edward, so it may as well been the most random ever surprise "dinosaurs aren't actually extinct" scene I've ever read...and I did not see that coming...at all.
Sure it may be possible that ichthyosaurs were somehow around a few hundred thousand years ago and that they went extinct between then and now. Science fiction is goofy. Sometimes, you have scenes which are more out there than others. I know I'll never forget that scene.
I hate to give this book a 3 because I love the series as a whole. But it irritated me. I waded through parts of it and I'm definitely enjoying the last book in the series, Sons of Heaven, much more than I did this book. So I can report that it does get better. I am only 10% into SOH but so far so good.