Lovely little teen romance centred about the love of horses and a quick read. I like the way the author portrays Tull and Liberty: Tull being handsome and easy-going and Liberty with a facial flaw and a bite. I guess the main suspense is whether he’ll get the girl or not, Liberty being so defensive at times. But they are both hard-working and love horses and there they both find a common ground.
What I liked most in this short story and Eleanor is the writing.
He couldn’t stop thinking about her, couldn’t help but look out for her every day.
That random act of kindness, such a rarity in the jungle of an educational establishment,had humbled him. []He wanted to know what the shoebox had been about, why her hands were so calloused, what shampoo she used to make her hair smell of Christmas, what that scent underneath had been and whether the scars to her lip itched sometimes when the weather was hot, the way his appendicitis one did. There was also the part of him that kept imagining what it would be like to kiss those jagged edged lips, whether it would change the feel of kissing significantly or not.
The writing is smooth with nice turn of phrases. The events are light and interesting, without being overbearing. No heart wrenching suspense nor OTT conflict. The dialogue flows smoothly and well in character. The main characters have well drawn-out backstories (only after meeting Liberty that Tull realises how rich he was (haha!).
Even though the short story has a lot of narrative and we are mostly in Tull’s head and thoughts/musings, it adheres much to the ‘Show, don’t tell'.
Thanks for sending me the story!