Meh
I like this author's other writing, but short form isn't for everyone, and it isn't easy. This novella was rushed, with things happening without any clear reason why. It's confusing to follow and unbelievable in many places. It could have been a longer novella for sure, with some of the scenes more fleshed out and some of the characters more sharply defined. As it stands, this reads like a freshman introduction to short fiction. Rewrite, clean up and sharpen, and it would be ten times better.