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Mercers of Montana #1
Sweet Surrender
A LADY bound by contract … an OUTLAW torn by desire …
The exquisite Lady Olivia Tarrington of London’s upper class arrives in corrupt and decrepit Virginia City, Montana, coerced to marry Jackson Mercer, the black sheep of an established Montanan family, who has a dark and cruel past.
As the eldest daughter of Lord Henry Tarrington, Olivia must honour her father’s arrangement with the powerful Mercers, which will erase his burgeoning debt and ensure her sisters marry according to their choosing.
Torn between her growing desire for a dangerous man and another who’d give her the life she’s accustomed to, she has to make a choice. But to find the freedom she desperately yearns for, she must first unlock her heart.
“Sweet Surrender” is a stand-alone mail order bride themed sweet, western romance and the first book in the Mercers of Montana Series.
The exquisite Lady Olivia Tarrington of London’s upper class arrives in corrupt and decrepit Virginia City, Montana, coerced to marry Jackson Mercer, the black sheep of an established Montanan family, who has a dark and cruel past.
As the eldest daughter of Lord Henry Tarrington, Olivia must honour her father’s arrangement with the powerful Mercers, which will erase his burgeoning debt and ensure her sisters marry according to their choosing.
Torn between her growing desire for a dangerous man and another who’d give her the life she’s accustomed to, she has to make a choice. But to find the freedom she desperately yearns for, she must first unlock her heart.
“Sweet Surrender” is a stand-alone mail order bride themed sweet, western romance and the first book in the Mercers of Montana Series.
198 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 15, 2015
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April 22, 2016
Kindle freebie, a squeaky clean romance set in the Old West. This one was too silly and superficial for me to even finish. I gave up on it about the time the kind, plucky British heroine helped save the manly, brooding hero from a cornered coyote. For non-critical sweet romance readers only.
September 3, 2016
Lady Olivia Tarrington has just arrived in Montana after being sold by her debt-ridden father as a "mail order bride". Not only is this a solution for her father, but it will also allow her younger sisters to marry. Olivia's fiancé, Jackson Mercer, is the black sheep of his family. A single look from him will have the local townspeople scattering to the other side of the street from fear due to his unsavory reputation. Both Olivia and Jackson find themselves in danger as a series of suspicious accidents begin to occur at local mining operations.
The book is ok, not great. Olivia's character is fine, as is that of the other females - Charlotte, Abigail, Lady Dubuque, etc. However, Jackson's character was seriously lacking. A physically imposing, handsome, wealthy "alpha" male on the outside, he had significant self confidence and self respect issues on the inside. The author seemed to be confused as to how she wanted to portray the character so none of it seemed right. Oh, and, you could figure out the bad guy and the motive without much effort.
This book is the first of a four book series.
Rating: 2.75 stars
The book is ok, not great. Olivia's character is fine, as is that of the other females - Charlotte, Abigail, Lady Dubuque, etc. However, Jackson's character was seriously lacking. A physically imposing, handsome, wealthy "alpha" male on the outside, he had significant self confidence and self respect issues on the inside. The author seemed to be confused as to how she wanted to portray the character so none of it seemed right. Oh, and, you could figure out the bad guy and the motive without much effort.
This book is the first of a four book series.
Rating: 2.75 stars
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September 19, 2016DNF at 33%
August 24, 2021
This was a good historical romance, but it seemed to me unfinished. The plot was well-rounded, but the romance was severely lacking. I didn't really feel a spark between the two main characters, and I wanted more out of the relationship. I felt they were not connected in any way. It was a good beginning, but more was needed.
July 15, 2017
It had a lot of potential and a very likable main character. But the story is too short and simplistic compared to the potential it had... Low 3
November 14, 2017
Sweet Surrender (Mercers of Montana Book 1)
A sweet and funny book,it had some funny parts an lots of intrigue kept me hooked to the very end.
A sweet and funny book,it had some funny parts an lots of intrigue kept me hooked to the very end.
February 10, 2024
Spellbound
I read it in one setting.
I couldn't put it down.
I can't wait to down load the next book of hers.
I read it in one setting.
I couldn't put it down.
I can't wait to down load the next book of hers.
March 14, 2017
Two stars
Book was typical of mail order bride books..
First the don't like each other and then they fall in love. Ok for quick bedtime read.
Book was typical of mail order bride books..
First the don't like each other and then they fall in love. Ok for quick bedtime read.
October 15, 2015
SOMETIMES A LADY CAN MAKE A DIFFERENCE
I really enjoyed this clean historical western with a touch of London society tossed in. The story kept me captivated as the mystery and suspense unfolds. I thought Lady Olivia Tarrington of London was resourceful and rather ingenious. She isn’t whiny or pretentious and accepts her lot in life to correct errors of her father and make a better path for her younger sisters. Jackson Mercer has a reputation that his mother, Abigail, is hoping to clean up with an arranged marriage to a Lady of upper-class standing. Maybe the match was not love, but sparks do happen when these two are together. The dialog is entertaining and the cast of characters add to the constant suspense. Lady Olivia can charm a crowd, even when they are prone to quickly throw out accusations and possible violence. I look forward to reading more stories by Ms. MacQuaid and the Mercers of Montana. Disclosure: I was provided an e-copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. All thoughts, opinions, and ratings are my own.
I really enjoyed this clean historical western with a touch of London society tossed in. The story kept me captivated as the mystery and suspense unfolds. I thought Lady Olivia Tarrington of London was resourceful and rather ingenious. She isn’t whiny or pretentious and accepts her lot in life to correct errors of her father and make a better path for her younger sisters. Jackson Mercer has a reputation that his mother, Abigail, is hoping to clean up with an arranged marriage to a Lady of upper-class standing. Maybe the match was not love, but sparks do happen when these two are together. The dialog is entertaining and the cast of characters add to the constant suspense. Lady Olivia can charm a crowd, even when they are prone to quickly throw out accusations and possible violence. I look forward to reading more stories by Ms. MacQuaid and the Mercers of Montana. Disclosure: I was provided an e-copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. All thoughts, opinions, and ratings are my own.
October 17, 2015
Sweet Surrender by Evelyn MacQuaid ***
Lady Olivia Tarrington is betrothed to Jackson Mercer. Lady Olivia travels from England to Montana to fulfill a marriage contract. The marriage will settle a financial debt for her father and provide for her family. So basically, her father sold her into marriage. She, on the other hand, is seeking love and adventure and discovers it in her betrothed. Jackson too finds her fascinating, warm and adventurous. Although he has been known as an outlaw and miscreant. Olivia see past these terrible rumors to a selfless kind man.
I liked this book but found it a bit jumbled to read. I often couldn't tell which character was saying what.
The villain was quite obvious from the beginning but the author did develop him well enough to sustain the interest of this reader. I gave this book three stars but would hope the author could develop a smoother style and clearer editing.
Lady Olivia Tarrington is betrothed to Jackson Mercer. Lady Olivia travels from England to Montana to fulfill a marriage contract. The marriage will settle a financial debt for her father and provide for her family. So basically, her father sold her into marriage. She, on the other hand, is seeking love and adventure and discovers it in her betrothed. Jackson too finds her fascinating, warm and adventurous. Although he has been known as an outlaw and miscreant. Olivia see past these terrible rumors to a selfless kind man.
I liked this book but found it a bit jumbled to read. I often couldn't tell which character was saying what.
The villain was quite obvious from the beginning but the author did develop him well enough to sustain the interest of this reader. I gave this book three stars but would hope the author could develop a smoother style and clearer editing.
October 16, 2015
Just finished reading Sweet Surrender. I loved that Jackson and Olivia are both strong characters. Olivia is willing to stand up and fight for what is right. She does not let "popular" opinion sway her course of action. Many times the woman's character has them vapid and lacking character. More interested in what they are wearing than what is happening around them. Jackson is a man who struggles with his past and trying to move forward in his life. It is sweet to see how these two skirt their feelings while trying to make a better life for everyone in Virginia City. Loved the suspense and twists and turns in the story.
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January 22, 2016Not rating.
I dnf'd at 19% when the same-old-same-old plot line appeared. (The 'hero' being mistaken for a servant) Too clichéd for me I am afraid.
And I HATE it when I read a name and I have NO idea how to pronounce it - Lady Dubuque - Dubuck? Doo-booh-k? Due-bewk? It could be pronounced Ducky as far as I know!! Why, Just ... WHY?? Its clumsy and irritating.
I dnf'd at 19% when the same-old-same-old plot line appeared. (The 'hero' being mistaken for a servant) Too clichéd for me I am afraid.
And I HATE it when I read a name and I have NO idea how to pronounce it - Lady Dubuque - Dubuck? Doo-booh-k? Due-bewk? It could be pronounced Ducky as far as I know!! Why, Just ... WHY?? Its clumsy and irritating.
November 15, 2016
Sweet Surrender
For those that like to read both Historical Victorian Romance stories as well as Early American Wild West Love stories!
A proper young English women sold off by her sham of a father to an unknowing Rancher in the Wild West of America set up by his mother! An arranged marriage that turned into a love match!
For those that like to read both Historical Victorian Romance stories as well as Early American Wild West Love stories!
A proper young English women sold off by her sham of a father to an unknowing Rancher in the Wild West of America set up by his mother! An arranged marriage that turned into a love match!
January 8, 2016
Sweet story
Cute, but not overly original. A light read to spend the afternoon with. Enjoyed the spirit of Olivia and Jackson and their care for their community and the people in it.
Cute, but not overly original. A light read to spend the afternoon with. Enjoyed the spirit of Olivia and Jackson and their care for their community and the people in it.
January 26, 2016
OK Book
This was an ok book but I figured out the mystery about half way thru the book. I thought that it ended rather abrupt however and an epilogue would have made the ending a little better.
This was an ok book but I figured out the mystery about half way thru the book. I thought that it ended rather abrupt however and an epilogue would have made the ending a little better.
February 10, 2016
Lady genius
I loved this novel. Lady Olivia is a lady, but she actually does stuff that is conceivable for a woman to do in Victorian England, she has spunk and tries to push conventions while still being a lady. Great novel, I'd definately read more by this author
I loved this novel. Lady Olivia is a lady, but she actually does stuff that is conceivable for a woman to do in Victorian England, she has spunk and tries to push conventions while still being a lady. Great novel, I'd definately read more by this author
April 10, 2016
Fun to Read
The setting for this story is a little different and therefore helps to make this fun to read. It is not your usual match and that also adds to the enjoyment. Happy to tell others to consider this short.
The setting for this story is a little different and therefore helps to make this fun to read. It is not your usual match and that also adds to the enjoyment. Happy to tell others to consider this short.
August 25, 2016
Not my best read
While the story was cute, I didn't understand what was going on at some parts and felt like I missed a whole lot. I didn't understand how the two could be in love after a day of meeting each other and doing nothing but staring and walking through the city.
While the story was cute, I didn't understand what was going on at some parts and felt like I missed a whole lot. I didn't understand how the two could be in love after a day of meeting each other and doing nothing but staring and walking through the city.
October 28, 2016
A sweet little read. I think it set up more than it delivered and could have been a wee bit longer to fulfill that. Particularly Olivia being worth something more than a bauble. It was addressed in the end to a degree but I think it could have been developed more.
November 6, 2015
Sweet surrender
Beautiful story! The author captures the essence of good versus evil. Good is victorious. I do recommend this book. Easy read!
Beautiful story! The author captures the essence of good versus evil. Good is victorious. I do recommend this book. Easy read!
February 1, 2016
I enjoyed the mystery mixed in with the mail order bride romance in this novel.
January 14, 2016
Short, but not too bad. Saw the villain coming from a mile away.
January 11, 2016
2.5 stars. Quick, infinitesimal character development, and the story didn't seem to go anywhere. Didn't have any attachment to the H/h. I am not compelled to read further in the series.
January 18, 2016
I liked the plotline and the characters, but both needed more development.
January 24, 2016
Was going well...
Was going really well & then got all jumbled towards the end. Seemed rushed. I liked the idea & the characters behind the story however.
Was going really well & then got all jumbled towards the end. Seemed rushed. I liked the idea & the characters behind the story however.
January 30, 2016
Great book :) Highly recommended.
February 2, 2019
Fun read, but way to short and undeveloped. More of a novella.
September 28, 2021
The love story of Lady Olivia and Jackson Mercer. A mix of English's Lords and Ladies meet the old west. You love it.
March 19, 2016
Olivia's father sold her to be Jackson's bride. The problem was Jackson didn't know. His mother had planned the whole thing.
May 24, 2016
Lightweight
The book had very little depth either in characters or plot. What plot there was was very predictable. The ending, "My hero!!!" Seriously?
The book had very little depth either in characters or plot. What plot there was was very predictable. The ending, "My hero!!!" Seriously?
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