This was a really enjoyable novel. Overall, the diversity was done quite well, and I loved the intersecting plotlines and the themes of healing and friendship.
A small list of all the diversity in this novel
• Willa and Louis are half-Indian
• Willa is disabled (she has two prosthetic legs)
• Arrow is adopted from Vietnam
• Frances lives with her grandparents (idk if this counts but that is a discussion for another time)
• Frances is suffering from grief and maybe mild depression (as a result of domestic upheaval and violence, I don’t exactly know)
• Louis has severe anxiety and suffers from panic attacks
So far, so good. Intersectionality is great, right? I don’t know how good the representations of disability, adoption, Vietnamese culture, and mental health disorders are, because that’s not something I’ve experienced, but it was something which came up often, influenced how a character behaved (e.g. Arrow liking Vietnamese food and knowing that people looked at her differently because she was Asian; Frances’s memories of her when she had just been adopted, Willa’s nervousness about new legs, Louis’s fear of panic attacks and attempts to avoid them). These various elements of the characters identities were discussed and formed part of how they interacted with others. (do you sense a but coming?) But, I was really unhappy with the half Indian representation. I am a half Indian myself, so I always love seeing characters like me on the page. But this is how the fact that Willa and Louis were Indian manifested in the story
• They had an Indian last name
• Louis mentions his dad going to India and the fact that he has been to India too
• probably a couple of mentions of skin/hair which I missed
And look, half-Indians can, of course, live in LA and get run over and drive around in cars and have anxiety disorders and play tennis; in other words, live a fairly typical upper middle class life with their average share of tragedy and success. But if you’re going to make being Indian be part of a character’s identity, you could at least mention them eating dahl, or going to the gurudwara or missing mangoes or wearing a kurta or SOMETHING.
Road trip books are always fun, and the magical realism link between the characters journey’s made everything more fun, though it was kind of obvious. I think that extra layer of quirkiness was a big, important part of the story, and I’m so glad it was there, that there was an answer to all the questions but not quite a resolution. The meetings worked out as you might expect, and I was satisfied with how the characters ended.
I really liked how family was a big part of the story. It’s so nice when families in books are also friends with each other, and that element was maybe my favourite thing about the story. Through their friendship and their faith in each other, Willa and Louis and Arrow and Frances are able to journey to a more complete understanding of themselves, not just based of complicated, writhing pasts, but on thriving possibilities in the future.
So while I wish that Leno hadn’t had half Indian characters if her portrayal of them was going to be so shallow, I really appreciated the hope and comfort of this story.