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479 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 12, 2015
DNF @ 25%
Good writing but there's a few pet peeves that I couldn't progress further.
Too many weird 180 internal monologues, along with a bunch of fragment statements here and there. The writing style's meant to be this way and while I enjoyed it at first, it just kills the flow for me. There are times where I think to myself, can you just get on with the story? I think this is because I just don't care for the non-stop wordplay.
As much as I like romantic subplot, I think this one is poorly done. First meeting they go into insta-sex, then insta friendship, then insta-companionship, then insta-vows and then insta-marriage all in a span of a FEW days. Notice that I stopped reading at 25% and all that happened within that scope...
Yea, I know this is a fantasy book but c'mon man! If the above doesn't peeve you, it'll be a great read though.