Great Read but a David Brock Replacement
James Force. Somehow his last name seems to fit his reason for writing this book.
Mr. Force, what were you thinking??? Rather than write the great American novel, you chose to meddle and force your own political attitudes on those who were willing to pay the bucks to read your first novel. Its sad. Sad for you. Rather than use your obvious research and writing skills for something that could have made your future brighter, you became the evil 'Dr Gaulle' character from your own book.
It's too bad you chose to waste this publishing opportunity to write a good yarn, and instead, let the right-wingers use your skill as a propaganda tool for the upcoming election. They don't care about you; they're just using you like they do everyone to get what 'they' want. Talk to David Brock about what happens when getting sucked into being the right-wing machine's stool pigeon.
How could you stoop so low while at the same time show your naïveté to how you're being used? You chose to describe in the most devastating and destructive imagery your characters by being lazy and using circumstances and innuendo of current living people.
What happened to true creative writing? What happened to class and decency in writing? If you wanted to write a documentary, then you should have done that. Of course, the problem with that plan is that everything has to be based on FACT...which requires an honest search for the 'real' truth.
But to write a fiction while using descriptions of real people living now...people for whom more than half the population have deep respect, and then add destructive imaginings that so disgrace these very public people and their CHILDREN!! Your desire to manipulate this election is so overpowering that you don't even care about the impact your awful suggestions will have on their kids??
I was so shocked that you would describe current, well-known public figures in such despicable manner Now your book, your work (or...was the writing actually the work of well-paid right-wingers with vast resources of money?), is nothing but manipulative propaganda in its lowest form.
You have skill, Mr. Force, but you wasted this golden opportunity to publish something truly great,—something hundreds of thousands of hopeful writers pray they can accomplish someday—that could have actually reached vast more readers and left them profoundly enlightened. You could have written something with a hopeful outlook that could appeal to more people rather than just the uneducated, white men angry about their CHOSEN lot in life by blaming it on external people and events. Instead, you chose to be the David Brock replacement for the far right political machine.
How low you stooped to turn a good story into an obvious effort to impact the current election. And even then, you still could have written this story, set in a time far in the future, using unknown characters whose personalities you could have fleshed out using real creativity, and your storyline would have been great! The detailed descriptions of the mission , the wealth of knowledge about the equipment used by SEALs, the interrogation techniques of an agent, the stock brokering processes, sooo much fine detail,... and then you completely distracted your readers by resorting to shock tactics by embarrassing and shaming truly decent people we all know, just to rile those 'poor', white bubba boy voters.
I was so shocked that you would describe current, well-known public figures to use as the basis for your story. Now your book, your work (or.....was the writing actually the work of well-paid right-wingers with vast resources of money?), is nothing but manipulative propaganda trash.