3.5 stars.
I enjoyed this - Murakami's first novel. It certainly didn't have the polish of later work, and the storyline was pretty basic, however it did convey a sense of displacement, broken relationships, thwarted ambitions. The dialogue is snappy, the rhythm is syncopated, thoughts and emotions are "shown", rather than "told".
"You like Tokyo?"
"One place or another - it's all the same to me."
"I guess so. I haven't left this town once since the Tokyo Olympics."
"You like it here?"
"As you said. it's all the same."
This made a lot of sense as a first novel - a novel whose author goes on to develop and captivate audiences worldwide. My rating reflects the book as it is, though, not as the first attempt to someone who would become famous. There is a wonderful introduction which describes Murakami's journey to becoming a writer. After graduating, Murakami opens a jazz club, "a place where people could go to listen to jazz records, have a coffee, eat snacks and drink". It was 1974, an era when "all over the world, one could still find gaps in the system."
Murakami says that he had an epiphany during a baseball game when he suddenly realised he could write a novel. I'm normally very suspicious of 'epiphany' moments, I simply don't believe in them. You think you have a great idea, a life-changing idea, but when you get to write it down you understand it's not worth what you thought it was. However, Murakami did go on to write his novel, the book that would become Hear the Wind Sing, writing nights whilst working at the jazz club at all other times. Of special interest is his account of how he developed his writing. After completing a first draft, Murakami says, he read through the result and was "far from impressed". Of course, it had been a mistake to assume that "a guy like me who had never written anything in his life could spin off something brilliant off the bat." So he works on his writing, first by abandoning Japanese and writing in English instead. His English was not grear, therefore the language "had to be simple". "The result was a rough, uncultivated kind of prose." However, this was a breakthrough because:
Since I was born and raised in Japan, the vocabulary and patterns of the Japanese language had filled the system that was me to bursting, like a barn crammed with livestock. When I sought to put my thoughts and feelings into words, those animals began to mill about, and the system crashed. Writing in a foreign language, with all the limitations that entailed, removed this obstacle."
I'd recommend this introduction to anyone aspiring to write fiction. "In the process", says Murakami," a new style of Japanese emerged. The style that would be mine." And I think that's true, you do get a clear sense of the signature Murakami style when you read this.
And now for the second novel, Pinball...
29/7/2018
Halfway through Pinball now, and I just wanted to jot down some very quick thoughts. One thing that strikes me in these two novellas is the lack of machismo in Murakami's male characters. The narrator in Pinball is portrayed as a lonely young man, living in the University halls of residence, who never receives phone calls or gets visits. There are of course plenty of lonely young men in the literature of the 60s and 70s (I'm thinking the Beat generation right now), but what sets these characters apart from Murakami's is that the latter do not seem intent upon proving their masculinity, for example through drunkenness and sexual exploits, through an incessant desire to have their maleness vindicated, through occupying space. We can see this everywhere around us: go out on a Saturday evening and you see hordes or young men shouting at each other, mostly playfully (at least at the beginning of the evening), but always with the clear and distinct intention of claiming this space for themselves.
Murakami's characters are not like that. They do not seem possessed by this voracious appetite for affirming their maleness even when sex is referenced in the novel. Maybe it's the difference between Japan and the Western world; or maybe it's the particular sensibilities of Murakami's. However that may be, the absence of machismo in Murakami's male characters, their vulnerability, is what brings me closer to them.
30/7/2018
Finished Pinball. Not sure I enjoyed it as much as Wind, esp. after about the 60% mark. It seemed to me that Murakami was getting on a bit. Too many lit cigarettes and finished bottles of beer. Then it struck me how visual this book was. The author in bed with the twins, two identical identical twins. The Rat drinking at J's bar. The vast warehouse with the pinball machines being brought back to life. It could make a brilliant movie - but as a book? I think it bears the signs of its era. Raymond Carver. William Burroughs. Counter-culture. "Show, don't tell". In fact, don't tell them anything, just allow them to seep in the aura. Does it work? A little bit, yes. But I can't wait to get my hands on a copy of Wild Sheep Chase and see how Murakami moved on.