I received this book through a goodreads giveaway. I was excited to read it, as it appears to be a Christian fantasy romance -- sounds great to me! I tried to give it a good chance, and made it about 1/3 of the way through the book.
The author has an odd way of writing that distracted me from the story. For example, "She changed her perspective so that she could look at him." What? Just say, "she turned and looked at him." And given that she used the incorrect idiom of "all of the sudden" that really bugged me, I noticed it every time she used it, which was way too often!
I also didn't "feel" the characters. I felt like the author was telling me how to feel about a certain character, rather than letting me make my own judgment.
If the writing was smoother, I'd definitely be interested in continuing the story.