It is unfortunate that I chose this to be my first foray into the works of Margaret Peterson Haddix. I've long been told that I should try her work since I love a good middle grade read. The premise was intriguing, and I had heard from other readers that she tends to have a good deal of mystery and suspense in her writing, but I couldn't help but be quite disappointed.
To be fair, the writing itself seemed solid, if a bit juvenile even for a middle grade book. However, while the prose were sound, the book is written in first-person, and the voice of the protagonist actually read as much younger than her 12 years, in my opinion. Also, there just didn't seem to be much substance to the story at all... that's probably what really sunk it for me. I mean, it was written well enough that I didn't DNF it, but it felt like for everything that supposedly /did/ happen, nothing really happened at all.
Then, near the end of the book, the big reveal is that they've been dealing with Aliens all along, and that the parents that didn't show any real love or care for their returned children, actually did care and love them after all... and the protagonist decided it was better to stay in a dangerous world with people that she barely knew than to go back to the home and acceptance she'd been wishing for since they first left, simply because "it's the right thing to do..."
In my opinion, this felt simply regretable... I think the idea has potential, but unfortunately, the story as it is now doesn't feel like it was executed well enough to live up to that potential. It was beyond frustrating to me how naive and even - dare I say "Stupid" - the protagonist came across to me, especially for someone who was supposed to be portrayed as clever and smart for her age; in truth, she felt like her character had no real depth. It was ridiculously annoying how things were written in such a way that nothing was ever explained, and when it finally was, it didn't even make sense. WHY were green-eyed and brown-eyed people at odds with each other? WHY did the Aliens even decide to take it upon themselves to steal the children away in the first place? WHY was this one specific city, out of an entire planet worth of people, under lock and key as intergalactic war criminals? (And by the way, none of this is even known or hinted at until the last 2 chapters of the book... which is honestly a crying shame.)
One of the things that I thought could have been portrayed MUCH better was the idea that the children were taught not to judge by appearances... which would have made MUCH more sense to me if the eventaul "apearence" being judged were something other than just eye-color (which is hard enough to notice at a distance, anyway). Details about character appearance were vague to begin with, and I would have found this so-called "virtue" to be much more striking if the Alien creatures who were the children's original adoptive parents weren't somehow hiding themselves in "human suits" to blend in better. Or even if the children had returned to a society that supported a more diverse population of human culture, instead of the one mention of a preacher character who seemed to be of possible Asian decent and may or may not have been an alien too (that, at least, wasn't revealed in this book.)
It was just a really disappointing read, overall. None of the character motivations were clear or even really hinted at for any of the characters involved, not just the protagonist... and when things finally were briefly explained, it was done in a short info-dump that felt over-simplified and came far too late in the book.
I'm not planning to read the second book. I just can't imagine it will get better from here, even if it does give us more information on the world and its current situation. Everything about it was just far too aggrivating for me to think continuing the story would be worth the time spent reading it.