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These Mean Streets, Darkly

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THESE MEAN STREETS, DARKLY the prequel to the upcoming, cyberpunk, detective series, Liquid Cool.

It’s a world of colossal skyscrapers. Hover-cars fly above in the dark, rainy skies and gray people walk below on the grimy, hard streets in the “Neon Jungle.” Uber-governments and mega-corporations fight for control of the super-city, but so does crime.


An average woman, Carol—hardworking and decent in every way— loses her daughter to the psycho Red Rabbit. Can Police Central find the girl in time—alive? And is it really a random, senseless kidnapping in the fifty-million-plus city?


There are a million victims and perpetrators in this High-Tech, Low-Life World. This is one of those stories…before we meet our private eye (and unlikely hero), Cruz, in the soon-to-be-released, debut novel, Liquid Cool


55 pages, ebook

First published August 1, 2015

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Austin Dragon

59 books1,834 followers
Austin Dragon is the author of the new military sci-fi Planet Tamers series, epic fantasy Fabled Quest Chronicles, the sci-fi detective Liquid Cool series, the international epic After Eden Series, and the classic Sleepy Hollow Horrors. He is currently working on new books and series in science fiction, fantasy, and classic horror!

He is a native New Yorker, but has called Los Angeles, California home for the last twenty years. Words to describe him, in no particular order: U.S. Army, English teacher, one-time resident of Paris, political junkie, movie buff, Fortune 500 corporate recruiter, renaissance man, dreamer.

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Profile Image for Montzalee Wittmann.
5,213 reviews2,340 followers
December 10, 2016
These Mean Streets, Darkly (Cyberpunk Short Story): A Liquid Cool Prequel by Austin Dragon is a very interesting prequel that left me wanting to know more and so I had to buy the first book. The dark but interesting city with the many shades of strange, and the odd characters, and the missing girl that is the focus. The whole feel is odd but made me what to know more so I picked up the book to see. I normally just read freebies unless it is something I just have to have but this was less than a buck so, I am going to check it out. I like checking out new authors, new to me anyway. It's called Liquid Cool.
Profile Image for Meenaz Lodhi.
1,021 reviews86 followers
December 3, 2017
Liquid Cool unleashed! A Metropolis, a terrifying near future, a kidnap turns out it’s a major sinister plot... the life described in this Megacity is very realistic, to the point of horrifying, to think our next generations may have to live this year uncertain, sad and horripilant existence, is scary, present facts tend to corroborate. This prequel is an introduction of the style and ways of the “gray people”, masses, the police force, shady business and large corporations. An intrepid and unique beginning!
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620 reviews32 followers
March 21, 2017
This book is good. Not great, but good. A short story to try and get you sucked in to buying the full length novel Liquid Cool .

This is a crime story set in a dark atmospheric "omnicity". Neon lights everywhere. Rain all day all night (Like my home town). Imagine the worst city iddled with crime, and this city, Metropolis, is worse. By a lot.

Thats the setting and I dig it. I can imagine it perfectly, and its a place I could see a good novel taking place. But this was the teaser trailer to the movie. Something to get you excited for " the big event". And it just wasn't enough to make me want the full book.

I may come back to it someday, but today is not that day.
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60 reviews2 followers
November 26, 2021
EDIT: I lazily went over my younger self's rant about this book and corrected a few awkward sentences, confusing sections and non-inclusive language. I also removed some of the vomit-inducing arbitrary pettiness. The brat... 🙄 ...lucky for them, I can't punch through time.

=== T H E B A D ===

§ HELL LOTTA EXPOSITION: The author included entire paragraphs of explanations without letting our understanding of the world flow naturally. He tells instead of showing, which artificially enlarges the book. It also helps to drag the pace, making it slower than it should be.

§ OFFICERS & FEMALE OFFICERS: There's a weird use of the word "female," to an extent that it gets uncomfortable to read. No man is ever referred to as 'male' in this book, thus giving the use of 'female' a heavy derogatory tone by establishing 'male' as the default and 'female' as a variation of it.
He calls the policemen "officers," but the policewoman he calls "female officer," which becomes even worst in a scene in which the only officer is a woman, and her gender is mentioned again and again, and again—for no good reason. The thing is: you won't call a woman a policeMEN, because she is not a man, you'll call her a policeWOMAN, but the word "officer" has no gender attached to it, thus making the use of "female officer" slightly sexist—which can be unintentional but is still there.


§ BY THE WORD: The word count seems to be increased by the usage of more words for the sake of using more words. Despite it being a short piece, it has a lot of filler words. Phrases are longer than they should, making the pace even slower.

§ THE NARRATOR: The narrator isn't a character, yet, they act like one. It looks like they were supposed to be but ended up not being, which is slightly mind-boggling. There are some more colloquial mannerisms that contribute to making phrases longer by giving them a more complex structure and filling them with adjectives and speech marks — further damaging the pace.
Long descriptions should create suspense, they should be a build-up for a twist or just a way to trigger your brain to play scenarios, imagining probable outcomes that may be very far from the actual conclusion of the scene, but still instigate you to engage with the story. This book just shows some detailed suspenseless—chill even—scenes for no good reason. It felt to me like there was only build up but no payoff.


§ INCONSISTENCY: There's a moment in which the city is described as ten times bigger than Seattle, and there are people who apparently know the story of each street—not only do they know the streets, but they're also so very familiar with their own unique stories. Cars fly, the place is huge—these mean streets seem hard to remember. Characters also have a very hard time reacting accordingly to situations. One moment you are the sassiest hostage, the other you are crying after you've been saved.

§ THE AUTHOR DOESN'T SEPARATE SCENES: Austin arbitrarily divides his book. A chapter might be a scene or multiple scenes, which is fine... as long as you know the scene has changed. Whilst reading I felt like I suddenly was teleported somewhere else every once in a while. I thought the scene was still the same and it was a completely different one already.
You don't really need to be super fancy — with three asterisks (***) you can divide your scenes and avoid the reader having to pull up a magnifying glass to find clues, re-read a section just to situate themself.

§ THE DIALOGUE IS CONFUSING: The author names the characters a lot, which I found a little clunky, and I couldn't really tell who was talking when he didn't. The voices were very similar in my mind.

§ LACK OF CHARACTER MOTIF: The reason why things happen is completely overlooked. No character has any reason to do anything, yet, they do.
A story is made of actions (with reasons and consequences) and obstacles. This story felt like an endless string of actions. Something happens and something happens and so on, so forth most of the time. The mother (I forgot her name [Catherine? {I just said they got named a bunch... ;-; —
it's Carol; I checked —}]) is the only one with reasons to me. She lost her daughter to (in her own words) a "freakazoid", so I can understand her reasons. The other characters didn't telegraph their reasons so clearly and there are 5 POVs (if I remember correctly), meaning she didn't get enough time to get me invested.

§ LACK OF A STORY: Set up, build up, pay off — these are the building blocks of a story. This prequel to 'Liquid Cool' feels more like the set up for 'Liquid Cool'. There are many characters, plotlines, and concepts introduced but the story never continues.
My hunch is that this short story is just the introduction to Book #1. I have been putting off reading Liquid Cool, so I don't really know that.

§ THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS A SYNONYM: The characters are referred to by their title and name all the time. I found it a bit annoying. This is very petty of me.

=== T H E G O O D ===

§ SILLY NAMES: I originally had some unexplainable strong feeling about the naming convention, but I don't really know why. In retrospect, not even questioning the names people have in the far future seems more natural than if it were explained.
The bigger the city, the fewer people actually bat an eye on those things. There are people who actually choose to have specific nouns as their name and, to be honest, most names, if you look at their history, are just compliments and specific nouns that might or might not have had their etymology lost in time.
Like Luna; which means moon in Italian and Spanish.

§ THE PREMISE IS COOL: I read the blurb and it really got me psyched. The aesthetic and the challenge of solving crime in such a massive and difficult world made me want to read it. The prequel disappointed me a tad, but maybe the actual Book 1# delivers more.
Profile Image for vk chompooming.
572 reviews4 followers
February 7, 2025
A good cyberpunk short-story. I am currently reading book #1. This was a good intro duction to the world of Liquid Cool. The free copy I received was not edited so this makes me think the book is self-published, which is not a problem, except it is not edited. I liked the characters, setting, and I'm pretty sure the author is a cyberpunk fan, which is good cuz this book was better than anything William Gibson ever wrote. 4 stars b/c of the novel not being edited, but I plan on reading the next one.
Profile Image for Allyn Nichols.
373 reviews7 followers
November 1, 2018
A great intro to the Liquid Cool universe.

High tech noir at it's finest! A must read for anyone who loves cyberpunk, blade runner and black and white movies about bummed out detectives that smoke too much in the rain. Great work.
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165 reviews2 followers
October 14, 2017
more of a teaser type thing than a prequel. a lot of characters to keep track of. a lot of repetition in descriptions. I don't feel a need to read any more of the series.
Profile Image for Aurora Dimitre.
Author 43 books154 followers
September 5, 2015
-I received this book from the author for review-

I tried to keep a few things in mind while rating this book - this is a prequel and I haven't read any other part of this series, this is a short work of fiction and therefore characters won't have as much time to be fleshed out, and things such as that. And keeping those things in mind, this was a perfectly adequate, interesting book.

This book takes place in a futuristic city - a city that is probably my favorite part of the book. The atmosphere in this book is done absolutely phenomenally. The way the mood of the situation is portrayed, the language that the author uses - it works so well for the story. Atmosphere and setting and how it's all tied together is something that I never remember I love until I end up reading something that does it well, and then I'm completely blown away.

The writing was something sort of average - the style fit the story, and it didn't distract from what was going on, but it didn't wow me when it came to sentence structure or anything like that.

As well as that, characters - like I said up there, I tried to keep a few things in mind when rating, and those things are mostly in the realm of characters. Because I am a character person, shorter works where you don't get as much insight into characters don't always work for me, especially when there are as many characters as this book has, being a prequel and setting things up for the first book in a series. But , I did find the villain intriguing. And while I didn't really care much about the victim - sure, it is sad, but it takes more than that for me to care - the fact that the villain was so interesting really pushed it through for me. I did want to know what he'd do next.

And the dialogue was cool - with a lot of books, I've noticed that all of the characters sound the same while speaking. That's not so with this book, and I always appreciate it when an author makes an effort to make their characters not sound the same.

Overall, this is an interesting science fiction/steampunk novel with a crime-filled, intriguing world that I think anyone could fall in love with. It's got a fast-paced plot that, I presume, gets you ready for the rest of the books in the series, and pulls out a villain that I'm certainly interested in.
Profile Image for Matt Knepper.
133 reviews
September 9, 2015
First, I have to say that I wouldn't consider this a prequel. It's really not a story all on its own. It's the very brief beginning of a much larger story to come. There was no resolution. It just left me hanging. I wanted more - much more - but I suppose that was the intent.

This story is really just setting the scene for the upcoming Liquid Cool series. We get a vivid description of the city in which we'll meet our hero and villain, although we might have trouble telling which one is which. The world created in this story is bleak and despondent, and I loved it. Not a terrible place, but by no means a good one either.

There were a couple of characters I found fascinating, but most of them seemed extraneous. There were far too many characters for the length of the story. I expect all of them are crucial to the future storyline, but for now I was introduced to too many of them too quickly. I did, however, like the manner in which they were introduced. This was a writing style that really fits my tastes, but it might not for others. I think it blends well with the atmosphere the author creates. It comes across almost noirish.

It's a short story that doesn't go very far, but my interest has been piqued. I wasn't blown away, but it served its purpose. I am definitely excited for the first book in the series to come out.
500 reviews8 followers
February 22, 2017
Short Story: Hipster Manhattan of the Future

In this fascinating short story, Dragon draws a picture of a future "MegaCity ", drawing on current trends (or what people think are currently trends) drawn out into their logical escalation. He writes in a very familiar and affectionate style, reminding me of Ohenry.

The petty criminals, small-time business owners, successful entrepreneurs, who people this future world are, for the most part, understandable, hard-working folks looking for a real score. They know that they won't get into the upper classes based on normal work or normal success. They would be familiar to anyone who has lived in a big city environment.

HIGHLY RECOMMENDED as a science fiction short story of the future...
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94 reviews5 followers
February 4, 2019
If this should have teased me to read the whole book, than it failed miserably... Scenes thrown after another without any coherecy or any indication of the change, support cast without names, terrible dialogues, every cyberpunk cliche you can think of...
67 reviews
June 12, 2017
This is more great storytelling from Austin Dragon. If you've read his After Eden series, you'l probably love this as well. I will warn that there is a cliff-hanger at the end of this story, but that's because it's a prequel story and sets up the first book perfectly. I really enjoyed getting a glimpse into this new world and couldn't wait to read Liquid Cool (book 1).

The setting is Metropolis, a supercity sans superman, where it pretty much rains all of the time and people fly around in hovercars. It's definitely a cyberpunk world out there with all kinds of cool tech, but at the heart of it, it's still a basic crime story. I don't mean basic as in the story isn't interesting, though. I really enjoy Austin's ability to weave a story together from multiple threads and I have a good feeling that this is going to be more of the same with this Liquid Cool series.

This is a short introduction to the world that Liquid Cool takes place in. The plot in this short story, perfectly sets up the events that will happen in Liquid Cool. If you enjoy Austin's stories like I do, pick this up and start the series off right. If you enjoy cyberpunk and/or detective stories, you'll want to pick this up as well. The author has set up a fun new world and I can't wait to read more of the great stories that will come from this place.
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497 reviews5 followers
February 3, 2019
The concept of this book is intresting and gives me Blade Runner vibes. That said this novella was not the best introduction. I picked this up when I relized you were supose to start with the novella, and I know understand why. The novella is not a complete story it the start and it finished in the first full length novel of the series. This is not a style of publishing I enjoy. Each installment should be a complete story in plot with character interactions and relationship branching across the series. Second is the jumps in location and characters we are fallowing with no indication it jumps. Plus the names of most of the characters are not what we traditionally consider names which can make fallowing these jumps even more complicated. As a whole this book doesn't give the best first impression of the series but is nessesary reading and the start of the series.
994 reviews10 followers
May 17, 2018
4 STARS for Austin Dragon's These Mean Streets, Darkly which is a Prequel for his Liquid Cook Series. If you like action, strange people of a sort, happenings at different locations within the borough megacity, spectacular crazy eye-wear with purpose, hover cars and not to mention a crazy criminal physco Rabbit whose head changes colors that wears a suit this sci do thriller is right up your alley. I loved it. It has a Thin Man, a Fat Man, no aliens, punks, public transportation and yes, taxis (they hover too, so do garbage trucks, gotta love that). I enjoyed this short read of crazy, it was just what I needed to chase the boy's away, read it. On to Liquid Cool.
WARNING: 19 & Up Violence, Murder, Child kidnapping. Human FishBait
130 reviews1 follower
January 4, 2020
I like the premise and world of the story. The world feels a mixture between what you see in the 5th Element and Ghost in the shell.
The story and characters so far are ok.
However, I found a few flaws that bother me (I usually can overlook a lot but these ones make me hesitate to continue with the series).
Loads of grammatical errors, to the point where I wasn’t sure of the intended meaning of the sentence.
Lots of focus on the fashion and ethnicity of the characters without it seeming to have a role in the narrative. Why would I care if a character is black or dressed in blue if it doesn’t explain or affect anything at all.



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May 16, 2021
Book lacked an ending. The writing was great and the author really knows how to sell, but the book should have an ending to it. I was disappointed in putting all of that time in.. At least let us know what happens to the girl. Unless this was a cliffhanger which it did not seem to be. I don't know if it was part of the first book. Anyway, the writer knows his stuff, but should rethink his first book into the series.
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283 reviews
dnf
February 20, 2025
Meh, not compelling or well-written. I haven't picked it back up in months which means it's time to accept fate andplace it in the dnf pile where it belongs.

Also, as another reader pointed out, the word "female" is used to refer to women but that's not the case for the word "male" and men. Example: Policemen are referred to as "officers" while a policewoman is referred to as "female officer", which seemed weird and gross to me.
Profile Image for Mark Zodda.
800 reviews1 follower
May 28, 2018
Doesn't set the environment for this cyberpunk world as well as Liquid Cool did. Limited additions to the backstory. Some of the introductions to characters and events seem to set up future stories because it sure didn't clear any part of the Liquid Cool story for me, and if anything, made it murkier. Read after Liquid Cool and not before.
472 reviews4 followers
August 29, 2020
Some people get wrapped up in the wording, but if a story line is good enough you don't notice anything but the story. And this is one of those books. I love his characters and the world they live in, even though I would not want to live in it. It's definitely an escape from reality. I just wish there were more in this series, because I've read them all and may have to start over.
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Author 33 books282 followers
September 22, 2021
This was intriguing. Am I going to read the novels in this series? Maybe...I mean, I really enjoyed the world. The characters were cool, the mystery is intriguing, the atmosphere is dark and creepy. I also really like the covers for the novels. Maybe I'll pick up the first one to see how I like it. I would love to find a new amazing sci-fi series.
791 reviews6 followers
October 30, 2022
I gave this short prequel a 5* due to , in my opinion,a cool setting. A large city, A young girl kidnapped, a woman looking for her daughter and finally , an individual or CEO of a taxi company willing to help. I just wish the author could have continued a little bit longer but now I am trapped within his web waiting to continue to follow the story.
Profile Image for Graham Carter.
554 reviews
February 16, 2023
The beginning really reminds me of the British 2000AD comic main strip- Judge Dreed, a futuristic city that overpopulated by people of all walks of life living as best they can A perfect crime to involve the reader in- a child abduction and what an introduction to the villain. it makes me want to learn more about him! Highly recommend giving this novella a read!
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499 reviews
May 30, 2023
It is interesting. As the first time I have ever read anything by Austin Dragon; his style, his characters, his world; demanded that you pay attention. At times; I found it slightly convoluted and had to circle back myself and reread sections to be certain I did understand where I was heading!
I look forward to reading the series —-
75 reviews
September 24, 2017
Intriguing Prequel

This prequel was free and I am so thankful I received it. I cannot wait to read the first book in the series. The story setting reminded me of Blade Runner. Check this out!
15 reviews2 followers
September 27, 2017
Great introduction to the series.

Really enjoyed this short makes a great introduction to the book series. Can't wait to read the other books.
Great character introductions as well of some of the periphery characters.
2 reviews1 follower
October 13, 2017
Really enjoyed this. Pretty much a perfect set up for a series, although I would say it probably could just have been the opening to the first book. But I now can't wait to get stuck into the actual series.
1,690 reviews10 followers
January 11, 2018
This is a prequel that will have you hooked on Austin Dragon's Liquid Cool series. A kidnapping starts people working together to fight crime on These Mean Streets. Well written with great characters.
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1,011 reviews14 followers
January 22, 2020
Although this short read is a little out there, I found it quite interesting. A new and different take on the future of our civilization. A young girl is kidnapped and as always the police are involved. This is a prequel to a new series that sounds like fun.
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222 reviews
July 8, 2021

I wasn’t sure what to think of Liquid Cool or even it’s lead up, These Mean Streets. However, I think it’s safe to say that I am intrigued & will be reading book 1: Liquid Cool, sooner rather then later, that’s for sure.
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