This sequel definitely wasn't as satisfying as I had hoped. It's been a while since I read the first book and I'm sure it had its flaws but I loved it. It's one of those books that have stuck with me ever since I finished it. This book, however, I can't say left much of an impression. It was a little hard to read through to be perfectly honest and I think it's primarily because it seems so vastly different from what was presented in the first book. The first book was suspenseful story about a girl out to keep herself from her dangerous step father with a little supernatural power for extra measure. With this book it was like the author didn't know what to do because after this book she has one more to write - which is a shame because I think this all would have done well with just two books rather than the overused trilogy formula - so she had to come up with something and this is it.
First off, this story just comes off as an outright mess. You have Jenn's perspective, Becca's perspective, and Derrick's perspective. All of this seems so wildly different from one another it was hard to see how in the world they were connected. Even when they finally came together - well, at least Jenn's and Becca's did - it still seemed utterly confusing with a rushed ending to explain how everyone is connected to this one seal. I'm all for varying perspectives but it could have been written much neater than it was in this book.
Jenn's perspective was the only perspective that remained interesting throughout the entire book. I don't remember her from the first book which irritated me a little but I was okay with going along with it. Jenn herself is a little tiring in how outright antagonistic she is and her home life didn't seem so bad to justify her behavior but I got use to her fast enough. At least her side of the story was going somewhere. Becca, who was the only character I really was invested in, seemed to have very little to do in this story and until way into the middle half her perspective is very dull. It felt like her story, which was all the first book was about, was being shunted aside for this less interesting mystery about a seal. I will say, though, that at least she didn't spend her time moping about Derrick. That would only have made it worse.
Derrick's perspective was useless. Really, the author could have cut all the chapters from his POV and the story would not have been impacted at all. It was like she was dying to keep him relevant but had no real way of doing so. I feel like his perspective could have been compelling: He is part of a very small minority on an island populated by mostly whites and he has a hard time reconciling his life in the States and his life in Uganda. All of this would have been a unique story line to follow, one we don't see enough of in YA literature. What does the author focus on? Sex. He wants to have it but when he does it wasn't what he expected. It read like some cautionary tale a Christian youth group would give to its students. Somehow this all ties into his struggle with identity but to me it was a flat story about not knowing whether you really want to sleep with someone or not. What does this have to do with Uganda? What does this have to do with Derrick as an actual person with a huge identity crisis? Nothing. Nothing at all. I'd say it was the chapters about Derrick that made reading this a chore.
I see a lot of people don't know what to think about the seal and that's because really there's no one way to feel about it. It comes completely out of left field. Suddenly everything it about this seal, even the characters themselves constantly talk about why everything is about this seal. It's an unusual seal, the book says over and over. That's because it's a selkie which seems so out of place with everything that has been given to the reader so far. Suddenly we have magic seals. Why? How does this impact the overall story which, if you've forgotten in all this, is Becca trying to hide out from her stepdad? I don't even know the answer to that myself.
I don't think I've been so mad about a sequel in my life. I wanted to like it but it just didn't go with the first book at all. It's such a shift in focus and direction that it's hard to tolerate. I've never seen a bunch of characters who just don't know anything about themselves, about the people around them, about where they're going. Every character arc felt like it ended up with, "IDK, I guess I'll figure out at some point." If this is suppose to represent teens then it's kind of off the mark. I think real teenagers know a lot more about themselves than this book will lead you to believe. I don't know if I'll bother with the third book and if I do it will only be to see how everything turns out with Becca's stepfather. I'm certainly hoping there won't be another ridiculous plot about seals or some out of place nonsense.