Going Under

by Adrian Thomas

As a child, Mahogany goes through being verbally and physically abused, left without a choice, she deals with it. After her mother is killed, she's left to live with her hateful grandmother. When her grandmother passes away, her aunt and uncle takes her in.

She'll lose one of many people she has grown to love dearly, which will leave a huge dent in her heart. In the midst of it all she gets accepted into FAMU. She struggles to be the cream of the crop. Things take a drastic turn for the worst. Will Mahogany have to put her life on hold or will she be able to maintain? When all of the trouble arises the person that she least expects will be there to be her Clark Kent and save the day.

188 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 3, 2015

Reviews

[Tanielle · Rating 1 out of 5]

If I could give this 0 stars I would even try for negative numbers! The story made no sense and on top of that it jumped from one thing to the next. One sentence Kent was there then the next sentence five years had passed, and he was gone same thing with Ann. There was nothing going on, you couldn’t connect with the characters, the names where switched from who was supposed to be talking, people came out of nowhere…the issues just go on and on. I can’t I doubt I’d read anything else by this author.

[Bookbabe · Rating 2 out of 5]

What the hell

This book needs to go back to the drawing board it has a great story line but the author or editor did absolutely nothing to ensure this book was on track parts that should have been detailed you.had to fill in the blanks and unnecessary stuff was over detailed at any given time the author would.mix up.characters smh I had high hopes for.this author

[Faye Fite · Rating 3 out of 5]

Bad editing

This could have been a good book, but the editing, the mixed up names, the mixed up pronouns, made for a hard read. The gaps in time, with no explanation. A good story-line, but little continuity. At one time, it went from a man walking into his house to watch his hands, then the next sentence, he is long dead.

[Krystle Banks · Rating 1 out of 5]

Terrible

O-M-G the storyline is all over the place and the grammar is terrible. Characters names in the wrong place. You can tell this book was rushed and I won't be reading the rest of this series

[Patricia A. Atterberry · Rating 3 out of 5]

Just Okay

Don't like continuing books. This was just o.k. Won't be checking out part 2. Mahogany was just had luck to begin with. Felt sorry for all she went through.

[Helen L.Williams · Rating 5 out of 5]

What a story

What kind of woman leaves her child all the time,after fighting to get the man of her dreams.And poor Danna and sister no mama or daddy all they got is each other and there cousin who already got probable of her own.

[Cece Williams · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good read. Some of the characters and fine details were mixed up throughout the book. like Mahogany having hazel eyes at the beginning and then grey eyes towards the end. Also, the author confused Danny with Nachelle a couple of times. other than that and a few minor eyes the storyline was good.

[Happy Reading · Rating 5 out of 5]

Good stuff

Page turning suspense. Drama filled with twists and turns leaving you wanting for more. Great job to Adrian Thomas. Kudos

[Deborah Bates · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good

Very good book.Finally the last few I've read sucked. There were a few major mistakes but the storyline was good.

[Sylvia · Rating 5 out of 5]

IFive Stars

I really enjoy this book a real page Turner. I can't wait to read what happen in the girls life after miss Ann dies. Adrian Thomas you have a new fan

[Shakeria Sharie · Rating 2 out of 5]

This was ok. It was tragedy after tragedy.