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The sealed box Teal finds in the street contains more than just a mystery...

What if to be with the man of your dreams…you had to give up your life? On the verge of losing her job, side-lined journalist Teal Douglas is forced to travel to the South Pacific to profile a powerful businessman. But with her almost-but-not-quite fiancé Bear discouraging her every step of the way, she may not be able to save her career or her relationship.

When corporate criminals invade paradise, Teal teams up with former boxer turned marine biologist Perry Stanley to investigate. As she discovers the true intentions behind their new fishing operations, she must either accept the plum promotion that will save her career or—with Perry—defend the island with more than her life.

This full length novel in the soul-stirring series by Ben Starling continues the journey begun in Something in the Air, a short story now available on Amazon.

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395 pages, Kindle Edition

Published January 21, 2016

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Ben Starling

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BEN STARLING is an author, multi award-winning public speaker and performance storyteller.

He has featured as an expert commentator on the BBC, ITV, Sky News, BBC Radio World News Service, and on international broadcast radio networks. In 2019, he was selected as a Gold Ambassador by the world's largest public speaking organisation, and also received their prestigious Triple Crown and Gold Speaker Awards. Prior to his work as an author and professional speaker, Ben worked in finance, and as an entrepreneur.

Ben graduated from Oxford University with an MA (Oxon), and an MPhil in Management Studies.

And just for fun: Check out the videos (column on left below). Ben performs live, storytelling to a rapt audience. Click More videos, to see Ben boxing in a Suntory Whiskey ad he was featured in while at Oxford University. (Ben is the boxer on the left.) This period piece was filmed after the release of ‘Chariots of Fire’.

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48 reviews115 followers
April 6, 2020
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5.0 out of 5 stars
The beautiful craftsmanship reflects a soul that cares very much for ...
ByPhyllis Eisenstadton December 6, 2017

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"Something in the Water" is one of the most emotionally evocative novels I have read all year -- entertaining, sensitive, and didactic. The beautiful craftsmanship reflects a soul that cares very much for our borrowed and shared environment.

Mr. Starling's pen is, indeed, mightier than the proverbial sword when it concerns the damage being wreaked upon our oceans and marine wildlife. He is the ombudsman of living creatures, particularly those who make their home in the ocean. He loathes those who seek riches at the cost of lives, and this is made apparent by the protagonist in his novel.

Love, hatred, treachery, greed, mystery, and romance are also incorporated in this complex but easy to read tale, so that it would be unfair to categorize and contain it in a single genre. There is even a bit of magic realism in this book. In all, I have learned a lot from this novel for which I thank you, Mr. Starling.

Bravo, and please keep writing.

Phyllis Rader Eisenstadt
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Author 232 books1,481 followers
February 24, 2016
I wasn't prepared for this novel. I had read short stories by Starling, so I knew it was going to have beautiful writing. However, I had no idea how he was going to weave together a story of signs and synchronization so seamlessly that it gave me chills. This is not an easy thing to do since these ideas are rather abstract and most people think a coincidence. But Starling makes you believe, just as the character does, that things are happening for a reason, drawing her to a certain place and time. This novel will lure you in, intoxicate you, and then fracture a bit of your heart. It will be worth it. I promise. I know this will stay with me for a long time. And the words. So many great ones strung together that my kindle is a mess of highlights. I've included only a few lines that struck me, made me reread.

"Forget everything you know when trying to understand the locals. They have a completely different view of how the world works."

"I've had strange coincidences too. One or two at first. The more you notice them, the more you see."

"Then Perry smiled-one of those smiles that repositions you at the center of the universe."

"His mouth found mine. He stole my air, my fear. And my heart."

"Life is but death's dreamtime."

"Sand is time's way of reminding rock who is boss."
Profile Image for Brittany McCann.
2,846 reviews602 followers
June 7, 2024
Something in the Water felt a lot longer than 395 pages, it covered such an array of topics. Ben Sterling has created in Teal, a character that is going through an extreme life/soul-changing experience throughout the pages of this book. His character Perry has been somewhat likened to himself with the boxing, athletic, marine affinity background personality.

In Edward/Bear, Ben has provided a character I truly wanted to die, with multiple deaths within these pages. There were many times I wanted him to be punched, shot, drowned, eaten, etc. In the island, he has provided the auspicious myth of a people who shy away from tourism and outsiders.

I feel as though Ben dared to allow readers to glimpse his soul and the issues that mattered to him. He did a superb job of bringing the characters to life in these pages and invoking feelings from his readers. I look forward to reading more of his work and hope he answers his calling to make a difference in the world.


I enjoyed the journey that I was taken on. I constantly thought of a non-fiction book that I experienced Voices in the Ocean A Journey into the Wild and Haunting World of Dolphins by Susan CaseyVoices in the Ocean: A Journey into the Wild and Haunting World of Dolphins that would be a great follow-up read from a possible Teal-like journalistic and self-realization from a personal account.
Profile Image for Jennifer Kirkwood (Levac).
351 reviews35 followers
January 29, 2016
I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. More reviews at GenuineJenn.com

his is book two in the Ocean romance series. I actually enjoyed this book a lot more than the first, Something in the Air. The first was a good story but I felt it was rushed. This book goes into more of a story, touching a few different topics within the story. I loved learning more about Firefly Bob (I knew it! can't tell you what I knew though), the whales (I've always loved whales), and the Island.

The author did a great job with his characters, you either liked them or you don't. Dan Dragan is one of those characters that I didn't like at all in book two. Perry, what can I say about this man, he is an amazing catch. Teal is likeable right from the beginning, she has had a rough like and finally was starting to have things fall into place. Edward, ouch, I couldn't stand him, nothing nice to say about this man. Right from the beginning he got on my nerves with his better than thou attitude and his haw, haw's. I loved the couple at the resort, Frank and Nancy. Grandma Lizzie is also another amazing character. If you care a lot of about the ocean and the whales this is a great story about love, determination, doing right for the planet. I will admit to shedding a few tears near the end. There are a few sad times.

You could read this book as a stand alone but if you are like me, you will want to start the series at the beginning. There isn't a huge tie in with the first book but you will see how over the years Daniel Dragan has changed his attitude.

I would give this book a 4 out of 5 stars. I can't wait to read the next book in the series.
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101 reviews
October 11, 2016
4.75 (But this one was so close it hurt... literally.)

I'm not sure If I loved Lizzie at first, I found her to be easily sidetracked with a box... or was she just trying to do the right thing? Was she over curious, or maybe the curiosity came after she could not catch him. (Read it and you will understand!) I found her excitement endearing, I know how she felt, I could feel her anxiety. Then I found her almost pathetic, TAKE THE LEAP! But don't take him. I thought this over and over in my head. What is she doing? Why is she wasting time? I thought she knew she was better than that... hmmmmm.

But then I loved her, or maybe it was the author that I was falling for since he was the one who wrote this, but I loved her. I rooted for her, I cheered her on! Who wouldn't? Sometimes I could have thrown something at her, but I wanted everything to be absolutely breathtaking for her. And one of those things that I wanted was for her to just walk away from Bear... he was a bit over-bearing (see what I did there? hehe). In the end, although I did not love him, I understood the whole of the story, he was a vital part of her life experience, and a lesson learned.

I want to be a mermaid, is that weird? I want to be in that ocean, I want to be a part of that marine life, I want to save those who have no voice. The love in this book was not just for two people who came together to fight against a problem, they built a friendship. Friendships last, not all relationships last, but a true friendship will last all sorts of trials and tribulations.

I feel as though Ben walked me through this, almost like it was a tour. He allowed me to feel all of these emotions on my own, with no significant aid. Not once did Ben Starling tell me how to feel, he presented me with the actions and reactions of the characters and through those mini-stories within the story itself I formed my own dislike and distaste for certain characters and my love and admiration for others.

This was well done, and I do sincerely recommend this to others! I am actually going into my recommends challenge for one of my groups and sending this to my challenge partner!
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758 reviews104 followers
November 6, 2017
Whew! This was quite a journey! I'm just going to jump right into this review because I have a lot to say and not enough space to say it.

1. The topics/themes. I wanted to address this first because of it's immense importance to me. I haven't mentioned it here before but my major at university (the main program I'm completing) is environmental biology and the topics of this book really spoke to me. I haven't read many books that have conservation take center stage so it meant a lot to me for this author to pick that as their main theme. The plot doesn't start out as such but it evolves from a journalist just trying to win an award, to that journalist uncovering a plot that spells bad news for the environment. There are several places where the theme of Earth stewardship is especially pronounced (for one, there is a giant ball of carved animals and if you take too many of the carvings away, the sphere collapses which is such a perfect metaphor for the fragile ecosystems of the earth) and this is something that's of great importance to me.

2. The plot. As I mentioned above, the plot centers around a journalist named Teal and her adventures on an island in the South Pacific. While for a bit I was slightly confused as to the nature of the book (it combines elements of mystery, environmentalism, and fantasy with a bit of romance tied in), it soon became clearer as I read (probably would have helped if I had actually read the blurb - I got this a long time ago!). The one tick mark against this book that kept my rating from 5 stars is how little exposition there is. Yes, jumping straight into the plot can engage people (it certainly kept me engaged), but it can also cause them horrible confusion. Teal's boyfriend, for instance, is referred to by three different names in the span of around five pages and it's never explained that these are the same people. It would have been great if there was a little more explanation as to who these people are and what their backgrounds are. This problem perpetuated itself throughout the novel as I consistently found myself confused about the exact settings (things like switching islands or boats). Generally speaking, though, I couldn't put this book down!

3. The characters. While the characters are slightly stereotypical (the person with a utilitarian point of view vs the environmentalist), I found myself loving each of the characters. I think that they could have done with a little more exposition themselves but overall, you get a good feel for them. I especially loved Perry as he's very much the type of person I want to be after I graduate (or maybe before! There's a research trip to the Galapagos this summer!) and I always found myself loving he and Teal's conversations. Generally speaking, each of the characters had something that made them stand out; spunk if you will.

4. The romance. This is something anyone could see coming a mile away but that didn't make it any less adorable. If you've ever read any of Kasie West's novels (one of the YA contemporary queens), you know what I'm talking about. It was such an inevitable romance and so sweet and well-written at the same time. It's a slow burn relationship that develops throughout the novel and it's so much more than a physical relationship which I loved.

5. The ending. I didn't want to wrap up this review without addressing this quickly. I won't spoil anything but let me just say that you will need tissues for this. The ending is so emotional and symbolic. It reminds me of the end of environmental movies where they always put in a bit of hope. All of the different plotlines came together (the weird music that Teal and her grandma heard, the romance, the environmental perspective, the future of the resort, and Tea's career) is drawn to a close with skill.

The Final Verdict:
The fantasy elements may seem a bit odd at first but I would highly recommend this to anyone and everyone. The themes it presents are completely timely and relevant in an age where looking to the slightly distant future is a rare occurrence. The characters, romance, and ending are spot on as well.
4.5 stars
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Author 4 books89 followers
April 10, 2016
This review is also posted on my blog: http://danielletaraevans.blogspot.com...

This was a very powerful and emotional book to read. At first, it seemed to be a fairly light story, but then its depth was revealed. And there were some very dark moments later on. I also didn't expect it to take such a spiritual turn (not religious, however).

Teal, the main character, is a journalist who's sent to the South Pacific to write a story about a businessman there. It seemed like a great opportunity, particularly because she gets to stay on a beautiful island. Surprisingly, her boyfriend decides to come along with her, and she's hoping she can save their relationship. Why she would want to save anything with this man is beyond me. You can tell a lot about a person by the way they treat wait staff and anyone they believe is below their pay grade. Bear, her boyfriend, is horrendous to wait staff and is an all around terrible person. I have no idea how she managed to stay with him for as long as she did because she's a genuinely good person, and everything that man did made me cringe. I just loathed him, and then I loathed him even more as the story progressed.

Fortunately for Teal, she meets Perry, who is the complete opposite of Bear. He's kind and caring and fun to be around. He's also a restaurant owner and marine biologist who's concerned for the environment and all the creatures that inhabit Earth. I was ready for her to ditch Bear and be with this guy, someone she's much better suited to. I was honestly surprised she was even upset with Bear over what he did when she had already fallen for Perry.

While Teal is on the island, some real and very serious environmental concerns are brought to her attention. As someone who would much rather be an investigative journalist exposing the corrupt, it's hard to write an article about a businessman in a positive light the way she believes her boss has requested her to do so. Now she feels she has to choose between her job and doing the right thing.

Not only does she meet Perry, she also befriends an elderly couple who are just as concerned about what's been going on as Perry's been. I loved this couple; they felt so real to me. And the resort owner and his wife were good allies as well. I also enjoyed reading the letters that her deceased grandmother wrote. She would have certainly approved of her relationship with Perry.

But then she meets Daniel Dragan. And it took me quite a while before I realized that this was the same man from the first story, "Something in the Air." What made me realize it was when they talked about him being a Vietnam War vet. And then I realized they had the same first name, but I couldn't remember his last name until I checked the summary of "Something in the Air." And sure enough, it's the same name. I never would've though they'd be the same person. His personality and his whole outlook on life changed so dramatically. I was pretty upset by this, and I was hoping he would somehow come back around...

As Teal and Perry investigate what's going on and as they try to literally save the whales and the island, they end up putting their own lives in danger.

This was a compelling read that had me on the verge of tears. I felt so many different emotions while reading it. The romance and the suspense kept me hooked, and then of course, it got me thinking about how humans are destroying the oceans and hurting and killing the animals that live there. And then it leaves you wondering what you can do to help...

Highly recommended.

*Disclosure: I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review.
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204 reviews
October 23, 2016
Very interesting story as talks about losing a job. giving up your life for a man as some parts of the book was a bit spiritual along with scientific Knowledge through out the story.

Teal takes her present life and change for the better in looking for happiness and it comes near the end of the book. Through out the story Teal does some travelling around the world and then when she returns home it seems a little different but good.

It is a good story but not the average romance story it was a little different due to the twist and turns. Well written and beautiful characters throughout the story. Some pots and turns enough to keep you turning the pages to see what is happening next. It is also about unconditional love over all and fate at the same time.
I felt when the end came will there be another book to continue to see what happens next and I will be waiting. Was given the book free for a good review and enjoyed the book very much.

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6 reviews1 follower
March 2, 2016
This review comes out sounding rather personal, as it was taken from an email sent to the author. He felt I should use it as my review. Also some spoiler alert going on…

I have to say that I have never cried so long over the last few chapters of a book as I did with this - tears of great sadness and tears of great joy. But let me share my feelings through the book.

I had a hard time getting into it through the first few chapters, as I felt I had no idea what was going on; there was much simile, adverbs, adjectives and metaphors to wade through. But somewhere around Chapter Four you put your hooks into me. And from that point, I could not stop reading. I wanted Edward to choke on his food, and to slap Teal upside the head for her even bothering to try to “improve” the relationship with him. But thankfully, Lizzie gave me the strength to go on, as she gave to Teal.

To put it in a nutshell, I ended up crying for the oceans, the whales, all sea life, for the planet, for the lost ways of the elders and ancestors, for Teal and Perry, for you and Melisa, for Fonu and Losa… for all creatures, including humankind, upon this earth. But there is hope, as you say, that life is death’s dreamtime. And the one thing that means much to me is when Fonu says, “Sand is time’s way of reminding rock who is boss.” Those two things I will carry with me, as well as my lifelong belief that love will right all wrongs. The latter was the most validating thing to me, as I have tried through my lifetime to live this truth.

I felt thankful for this book, as it validates so much of what I believe in my heart and soul. It also makes me realize that the “job” I have, working with gardeners for a landscape/nursery company and educating people about the uses of fertilizers, pesticides, etc. is something important. I also am a hospice volunteer and do end of life work in a nursing home, so much of this book spoke to me. The Ocean of the Souls is much like the vision I had once through my soul that showed me a crystalline web of life within the hologram where we exist, all tied together by those silk threads that appear tenuous, but so very strong, showing all is one, and that one does totally affect all others within the web.

Thank you, Ben. Now off to read Something In the Air. Your book is brilliant and the fact that the message comes from a whale, who I believe holds destiny for us all, along with the Akashic records of all time, truly made it very real to me. I wish you so much success with these books.

Thank you for the opportunity to read this piece of work. And bless you for your knowledge and beliefs of the ocean, the earth and the afterlife.
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Author 2 books10 followers
February 21, 2016
Note : A review of this book has been published in my blog Book and Ink

A journalist on a remote island profiling a powerful businessman – a potentially heady combination for a thriller – this story was nothing short of a perfect thriller.

Our protagonist, Teal, is forced to take up an obscure assignment on a remote island to save her job. Her task – to profile a businessman involved in the fisheries business in the main island. Her ‘assignment’ takes a turn when corporate criminals invade the island plotting to destroy flora and fauna by carrying out ‘activities’ which are disastrous. Along with the help of boxer turned marine biologist and other locals, she ends up investigating them. Her investigation comes with a price; would she be able to pray that price?

The story was simply good, merging two worlds seamlessly into one – the modern world with its devil ways and the ancient world which care even for about the animals. The characterization was pretty good and most of characters emoted perfectly adding layers to the story. The ‘character’ of Solomon the ancient whale deserves a special mention. Giving a human being a character sketch by itself is a complex job, with animals the level of difficulty just increases. The writer has done a stellar job in giving the whale a much convincing character. Though the whale did remind me of Flipper – the dolphin from 90s Cartoon network serial, this character stood out. The writing was well balanced and perfect. The story kept me absolutely hooked. My only complaint would be the ending. I felt the writer was in a great hurry and dilemma to finish off the story.

MY SAY: An interesting read.

RATING:

PLOT: 4/5

CHARACTERISATION: 4/5

NARRATION: 4/5

BOREDOM QUOTIENT : 1/5 (Lower the better)

OVERALL RATING: 4/5

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Author 16 books128 followers
January 12, 2016
This story has a wonderfully gripping beginning. We race along behind the heroine as she desperately tries to find the owner of a mysterious box. A mysterious box that had her name on it and was dropped by someone from the other side of the world. Someone she was destined to meet, and soon.
Mysteries abound in this magical adventure, and I loved the way the author, Ben Starling, describes everything in such revealing detail. I could smell the ocean and feel the sand between my toes. Everything came to life on the page and seemed so real.
The heroine, journalist Teal Douglas, is the kind of young lady determined to write about the wrongs she encounters, exposing the evil that people do. Even when she finds herself up to her neck in a world of political greed and illegal practices.
In this novel, you get two stories for the price of one, for an ancient guidebook creates a perfect analogy, reflecting the modern day problems of some of the world’s most beautiful places.
The attempted slaughter of Solomon, a sacred old whale, had me in floods of tears, but there was much worse to come. Solomon survives, severely wounded and returns to say goodbye… but what happened next tore my heart to shreds.
Apart from the fact that Something in the Water is a cracking good story, the author manages to get the conservation message across in such an easily understood way, which should help to bring about the changes our planet so desperately needs.
A beautiful story, beautifully told. Ben Starling will be the author to watch, for he is surely going places…
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Author 10 books138 followers
June 12, 2016
Teal Douglas is up for her very first investigative journalism award for Musculus Media. And while she isn’t confident that she is going to win, her co-workers are. Unfortunately, much to everyone’s disappointment, Teal falls short. When she steps outside to compose herself, she is almost immediately summoned back inside – the founder and chairman, Basil Thane, wants to speak with her.

Back inside, Basil discusses a job with Teal. He wants her to interview an old friend living in the South Pacific. Teal, however, is once again disappointed and the offer makes her feel as though she is going backward in her career. She wants to be considered a serious investigative journalist. When she hesitates to accept, Basil reminds her that he will be disappointed. Nevertheless, he gives Teal a few days to consider his offer.

After much contemplation, Teal accepts the job proposal and she invites her boyfriend, Edward, on the business trip. She wants to rebuild their faltering relationship.
Something in the Water is a clever and well written story full of mystery, romance, and characters you’ll love to hate. I enjoyed this story from beginning to end, as author Ben Starling’s writing evokes a myriad of emotions from joy to sadness and love to hate.
6 reviews1 follower
February 3, 2016
Another wonderful, well written book by Ben Starling.
Gifted the novel by the author in return for an honest review.
An amazing novel of romance, mystery, conservationist and animal lovers. This novel takes you to another place and time. Beautiful ocean,beaches and underwater scenes that are so well described, makes you feel like you are there. Love all the characters. From Teal the main character , Perry the former boxer, a Great Dane, blue footed bird to Solomon the humpback whale. Teal discovers that all things happen for a reason.
True love develops through the story line. Teal is searching for answers, and finds signs that help lead her to truths she is looking for.
Again Ben Starling traps you between the covers of this book page after page. Just think it all started with a mysterious box with Teals name on it.
If you are looking to read a book that will have you spellbound by love,tears and even angry at times . Then I recommend this book as the one.
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1 review
January 17, 2016
I read this because I liked a short story written by this author. Once again, Ben Starling does not disappoint. Clean compelling characters, including the villains - vivid characterizations in a brightly painted setting. What can happen when a young newspaper writer meets a marine biologist on a faraway island? A lot. What didn't I like about this book? Well, it kept me up all night before an important morning meeting the next day, so no thanks for that! I like this series and will be back for more.
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Author 6 books31 followers
March 31, 2016
What a great book for relaxing. I really enjoy story line. Some very interesting twists and also shocking ending - you will never expected it :)
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417 reviews
April 1, 2019
I enjoyed the writing style - she had me hooked from the 1st few pages, but I found that as the book progressed the story became less and less plausible to the point that I got frustrated. The surprise ending was fun but again, just didn't stand up to a reality check.
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81 reviews1 follower
August 7, 2018
Loved this book......kept me on edge until the final 30 minutes. Beautifully written.....great suspense. Will try to find more books by this author.
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Author 21 books38 followers
July 27, 2016
Originally posted on Tales to Tide You Over

This book is very hard to classify which can be a bad sign but is not in this case simply because the story is strong. If you’re expecting a traditional romance, though, you’ll be disappointed. There is a confusing, realistic, at times frightening, romance that doesn’t hold to the markers expected in a traditional romance. The book is, however, mainly an environmental thriller with a mystery to solve that aspiring investigative reporter Teal Douglas is capable of undertaking if she only has faith in herself.

I’m going to avoid major spoilers, but I’ll say one of the reasons it doesn’t follow traditional romance guidelines is because Teal is in a long-term relationship through most of the story that is not the love story. This relationship is both toxic and abusive, clear from the beginning, though I felt Edward/Bear was a little overdrawn at times in both the descriptions of him and his behavior. I didn’t always agree with what Teal chose to do, but at the same time, I always understood why she did make those choices, so I’m divided. It’s certainly as complicated and messy as real life. The love story is a low-key romance that has non-explicit sex and is mainly about the people coming together because of what they believe in.

As might be expected with my characterization of an environmental thriller, there’s a strong environmental message mixed with mysticism in a beautiful blend of spiritual tradition and scientific knowledge. For the most part, the story is grounded in the contemporary world with a clear understanding of the problems we face not just in what’s happening to our planet but also clear in the mentality that drives the wealthy to act as they do. At the same time, the story starts with music no one else can hear and Teal’s close relationship with her grandmother’s ghost.

The real love story is not between Teal and the man you’ll meet as you read, but between aware humans and the planet we live on. It’s about the connection between the Earth and every creature on it as well as sacrifices made for the greater good.

The description overall was lovingly drawn and quite evocative, especially in the boat and ocean metaphors, something that calls to me quite strongly. Despite my frustrations with the Teal and Bear thread, the main story has truly bad “bad people” and gives the good people the opportunity to stand up for what they believe in, even when it seems like everything will collapse. The investigation was at times harrowing, but the pieces were in place for me to recognize key elements while also learning about the lengths those with money will go.

The many cast members came to life on the page, both those who cared and those who did not, making for fascinating, realistic people, excepting my issue with Bear. Frank and Nancy were lovely, as were Kris and Emma, while their stories fleshed out the main one. Bob, however, plays a key role, and the way this apparently unstable native is drawn is compelling. I figured out his story so the seeds are there, something I appreciate in the books I read, especially those with a mystery element, and Bob’s were not the only seeds laid.

So, basically, if you pick this up looking for a traditional romance, you might not like what you discover. However, if you are looking for a passionate story with characters who are both interesting and driven by the need to make a difference, you will not come away wanting as Something in the Water fulfills that wish admirably.

P.S. I received this novel from the author in return for an honest review.
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Author 7 books46 followers
March 14, 2016
Opening with a chase prompted by a dropped, mysterious box, this novel follows investigative journalist Teal as she is sent on assignment to the South Pacific to interview the mysterious Thurston Morfil. On this journey she takes her (totally unappealing) boyfriend Bear and the memory of her recently deceased grandmother, who had a deep bond with the ocean:


"I leaned back against the headboard of our bed, my mind wandering to the last real

conversation I’d had with Grandma. Staring over my shoulder at the frothing surf, she’d

described how, in unguarded moments, the ocean had “sung” to her. I fingered the ripples

of my bedspread, remembering her description of erratic harmonies that drifted in on a

flood tide. Sometimes she’d heard it in her seafront cottage, above the cry of the gulls on

those condensingly hot nights."


Teal and Bear stay in a remote resort, where Teal discovers a lot about the local wildlife and how it's threatened by human activities, while Bear remains self obsessed and boorish. While Bear wanders off, Teal becomes involved with Perry, a marine biologist and eco-activist. Together they become aware of mysterious and possibly illegal activities going on in the area with tentacles stretching globally. As they investigate what is going on, they encounter an old native islander, Bob, who seems to be a custodian of the local ecosystems and who may hold insights into a better relationship between humans and nature.


This is an engrossing story, a well balanced mix of romance and thriller, with believable characters (even the vile Bear is (sadly all too) believable!) It's beautifully written with wonderful descriptions of marine life, especially whales. Information about wildlife issues is woven seamlessly into the story and the environmental message is made more powerful by being embedded in the development and actions of the main characters.And yes the mysterious box dropped at the beginning does reappear.....
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5 reviews24 followers
December 27, 2016
"Something in the Water" SOARS!
A riveting read, driven by engaging characters that inexorably draw you into their world.The intriguing, fast paced complex plot includes romance, mystery, suspense, drama and world travel, but also explores other realms. Beautifully written, with a musical cadenza that alternates perfectly timed dialogue and exquisitely crafted descriptive passages, the overriding theme that runs through and envelops the entire story, is LOVE. The tender love of a deceased, yet ever present grandmother who guides the protagonist, Teal, a feisty, adventurous young journalist [love her name!], through her harrowing journey of discovery, and search for truth, based on signs and music that only she can hear. The burgeoning love between Teal and the irresistible Perry, daredevil and passionate environmentalist who becomes her sleuthing partner. And the all-encompassing love, which transcends all else, between man and nature's greatest gift.
"Something in the Water" weaves a spellbinding tale yet is also a powerful call to action to preserve and protect our threatened oceans and their inhabitants. Captivated from page one, I read straight through to the end, amidst laughter, tears, palpitations, and heartache. I sighed with deep regret as I turned the last page, transfixed by a world I couldn't bear to leave...
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142 reviews6 followers
August 10, 2016
We received a request to review Something in the Water via email....like most other requests, but something about Ben Starling's email stuck out to me, and I'd like to share it with all of you. He said, "The novel explores the most enduring kind of love after separation, one that lights up two lives and reaches past the grave. Why do I write love stories? Because nothing else matters...". A simple, yet profound, statement that holds a tremendous amount of truth.

I feel like the best way for me to vocalize my feelings of this book would be to describe them as being love/hate. Maybe that's not exactly fair, considering I loved the story.....I just wasn't a huge fan of Bear, an overbearing and almost unnecessary character. I will say that as the book progressed, to the final chapters, I was able to see everything come together, which made Bear, and his constant "haw, haw" a little less unbearable.

Something in the Water is a beautiful example of unconditional love and fate. It's the type of book that just makes your heart happy.

You can find this review (along with many more) here, on the CommonBookSense blog.
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28 reviews
March 29, 2016
The book is about life and death; and about Teal and Perry (and about everyone and everything else so intrinsically important in between them).

An unforgettable love story that makes a difference, so that reading any other after this book of Ben Starling could never be the same for an avid reader, like you and me.
Why?
The Genius in the man, wrote poetry in a love story within a story that may have well been yours and mine.

So then, to all my fellow readers who feel this extraordinary poetry in the story you take to the heart as I did:


"May all our 'Perries' in the world know in their sleep;

And may their 'Teals' no longer fear the passages of time in human suffering,

As Guardian Angels weave dream catchers from their wings-

So wide, the shadow of all ills from underneath the sea of bedcovers

Span instead, a blanket of white from where fear once menacingly stood

Reckoning with the ensuing peace of God;

And the Pearl of great price is at last in gestalt found."

~aliceinthepoetsheartland for Juanita
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7 reviews1 follower
January 27, 2016
A fast-paced opening in the city of New York sees journalist Teal Douglas plunged into intrigue with the discovery of a small box dropped by a stranger. As career disappointments and a relationship with the wrong man begin to take their toll, Teal finds herself on an assignment to a beautiful and remote island in the South Pacific where she begins to discover what's truly important in life. A budding new romance with an ex-boxer turned marine biologist, a blue-footed booby, and a whale named Solomon are just some of the wonderful characters our protagonist meets, and throughout her journey we are subtly made aware of the current plight of dolphins and whales in our world of greed and excesses. Solving mysteries, saving innocent animals, and falling in love are just some of the themes woven throughout this wonderful story. Characterization is brilliant and, guaranteed, you won't be expecting the ending. Another wonderful story from author Ben Starling.
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134 reviews4 followers
January 27, 2017
Wow, if any book ever needed a trigger warning, this is the book! No, not for the reasons you're thinking, but because if this book doesn't make you tear up, you're a monster. Starling has created a gripping story that is full of adventure, mystery, love, and has a spiritual undertone to remind us that all life is interconnected. I really can't say enough about how incredible Starling's writing is and how powerful this tale is. This is superb quality from beginning to end; there is no skimping on plot or words within. Absolutely one of the best books I've read!
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Author 30 books15 followers
April 19, 2016
Well written, great story, love the important message portrayed through the characters and their journey. Romance, spiritualism, myths. mystery, fantasy, breaking and entering, murder all fitted together with care. wonderful descriptions and diverse characters.
The romance is not only between humans but between humans and the ocean.
Read this story and the message remains with you.
Thanks Ben, thoroughly enjoyed the smiles and tears your story caused.
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