Crude MMC, doormat FMC
Hot Protector is part of Lynn Raye Harris’s HOT (Hostile Operations Team) Strike Team 1 series. I read the first book a while ago and recall enjoying it. This one only landed on my TBR list because it was free. Although the story itself kept me interested, I unfortunately found myself not liking the characters.
While enjoying some downtime after the team’s last mission, Chase is awakened at 3:00 AM by a knock on his door. Thinking it’s a booty call, he opens it to find the daughter of the woman his father married—his stepsister, Sophie, whom he cannot stand. Sophie explains that she’s being hunted by dangerous people after unknowingly getting involved with a very bad man. Chase initially refuses to help, but then his apartment is bombed while they’re still talking. What follows is a frantic race to stay ahead of the bad guys and recover a flash drive Sophie “stole” from her ex on the way out.
A lot of the logic in this book just didn’t add up for me. First, we have two people who barely know each other—one of whom (Chase) harbors a lot of, albeit undeserved, resentment toward the other (Sophie). Then Sophie gets herself into a dangerous situation, and who does she run to? That’s right: Chase. A man who couldn’t stand her as a teen and hasn’t spoken to her since. She shows up at his door at 3:00 AM expecting him to leap to her defense. That didn’t quite gel for me.
Sophie got involved with a mobster, “dated” him for a month, but they never got intimate (insert eyeroll here). Then we’re told how “innocent” she is. Really? After their first intimate scene, Chase reflects on how Sophie’s “lack of experience” shows—reinforcing the near-virgin trope authors still peddle. Honestly, I’m stumped that in the 21st century, we’re still perpetuating the idea that women should arrive at the altar hymen intact. I’m not saying the FMC should be promiscuous, but if she’s had sex before, why do authors insist on portraying her as nearly virginal? Meanwhile, Chase’s sexual history is “sold” as normal, but he honestly came across as a man-wh0re. And that was fine—because he’s the man. But we’ll get to Chase.
Back to Sophie: she was vapid and spineless. Chase treated her like trash, and yet she clung to him like he was her lifeline. She was clingy over someone she barely knew. So much so, that she even got upset when he had to do reconnaissance, insisting he not leave her alone even though she was perfectly safe. Worse, she asked the most ridiculous questions: “Do you really think it’s necessary to arm yourself?” (They were dealing with the mob!) “Do you want to talk to your estranged father?” (He hated his father with a passion.) I swear, I can’t deal with FMCs like this anymore.
Then there was Chase… Usually, in these types of books, I find that authors write the MMCs better than the FMCs (the irony isn’t lost on me here, given that I’m talking about female authors). But in this one—and for the first time I can recall—I could not stand Chase. He was arrogant, rude, crass, and had absolutely nothing going for him. His line to Sophie—“It was just pussy, and I can get that anywhere”—was the cherry on the cake. I’ve never disliked a MMC this much. He was crude from the start, had sex on the brain, and showed zero interest in Sophie as a person until the last few chapters, when we’re suddenly meant to believe he wants her in his life. Chase had no redeeming qualities. Zero. Nada. Zilch. Maybe it was his age (twenty-six to Sophie’s twenty-four), but I couldn’t picture their relationship lasting beyond the lust. And believe me, lust was all they had. Again, I didn’t like Chase at all—and I liked Sophie even less for letting him treat her so disrespectfully.
There were a few things about this story I found downright gross. For example, Chase having lascivious thoughts about Sophie’s mother, recalling his teenage crush on her, and noting how Sophie looked like her—just a “lusher” version. Then both of them getting turned on by the fact that they were step-siblings (even though not related by blood), and by how “illicit” it felt. Sorry, but that was just disgusting.
And then, after one heart-to-heart conversation—after he’d treated her like garbage from the start—Chase suddenly does a complete 180 and says, “I’m not leaving you, Sophie. I’ll protect you with my life. You can count on that.” I was like, where did this come from? He’s hated and resented her all his life, and one talk leads him to pledging his life for her? Just no. There was no relationship build-up or emotional arc to support that moment.
I’ve read a lot of Lynn Raye Harris’s books, and for the most part, I enjoy them. This one, though, I downloaded because it was free—and I’m glad I didn’t pay for it. Something I’ve noticed about the FMCs in Harris’s books is that they’re all “too sweet.” I kid you not—this is exactly how Sophie describes the other FMCs from previous books in the series when she meets them: “They were all too sweet.” And it hit me—that’s the problem. The FMCs in Harris’s work feel like cut-out figures from a bygone era, pitching the patriarch’s idea of the “perfect” woman. This applies to all of them, except maybe Natasha in Black Heart. It’s disappointing.
That said, I do like the author’s writing style. She tells a story well—it’s just the characters that sometimes fall flat for me. I’m giving this one a rating of 2.
PS: The sex scene featuring Mendez and his friends-with-benefits partner, Sam, had no place in this book.