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228 pages, Kindle Edition
First published July 19, 2016



This story was a litany of missed moments for tension, drama, and mystery. The overall series "secret" could have been developed and increased the mystery and drama. The tantrum in the wrong place over that kiss in the parking lot was a sorry excuse for avoiding some hard work. And I know tropes — the age-old trope of I-can't-stay-with-the-person-I-love…so's-I-can-protect-her — can be tricky to twist and make interesting. And not working it isn't a good excuse. Kelcee's need for secrecy was so surface and barely touched at that. Why wouldn't that hit-and-run start revving up Kelcee's fears? Instead she tosses it off. How is it that a bunch of Navy SEALs, supposedly accustomed to protecting AND clearing a house, not think about that front door?"'Also sent one to Reece." He chuckled. 'Or Steelhead, as you guys called him.'" (Wouldn't his fellow teammates know he was called "Steelhead"?)
"'After Stoney got killed, a translator was requisitioned for our unit ASAP." (Yep, and I'm sure the fellow team member he's speaking to knew that as well. And, yes, it goes on in that conversation with more that they both know.)
JJ's tale about his grandmother…sweet, but wouldn't the guys have known all this?
ZQ's speech about Mom going to visit a sick friend…
Why is Dustin telling her about the two horses almost ready to foal? How does it even fit in?
Kelcee's anger with "frog face" is reasonable, but why would it have been okay for him to say these things if she'd had some food in her system? Davis just pops out the secret ops deal that ZQ is working on. No buildup. No mystery. And I'm feeling like ol' Jim is a loose thread.What is with this sudden swing in the conversation…
"… We've got some serious plans to make to save your precious life. By the way, I like your haircut."
"Something about you grates on my nerves."
"What? My scars?"
"Oh, get over yourself. So you have scars. BFD." She fist a hand at her waist. "I have a teacup ass. ZQ has big feet. None of us is perfect."
Dustin grabbed her upper arm and forced her partway around as he barked a laugh. "A...a teacup ass? Hell, woman, there's no way you could all that delightful rear end into a teacup."
I will love you forever, Kitten, until my final heartbeat and the one after that


