Look, a 2 Star is probably a bit harsh but a 3 star is kinda too much ?? So it’s 2.5
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I’m gonna start off this amazing review by saying ; this was not AT ALL written for my age group , if the author wanted us to identify with it at least ... so a lot of these opinions are based around that slight predicament. I’m gonna write this with all my random 1 am agro thoughts so I can use it for study later HA HA HA .
What did I think ??? I extremely extremely disliked it . :/ . Every single second was a drag. I cannot name one redeemable thing about any of this book , nothing enjoyable. Seriously .
It’s all about this ray of sunshine named charlotte who ’s, just , the worst .
She’s a passive main character . What does that mean you ask ? It means ‘things’ just happen to her, she never really makes anything happen to herself .. not really . A main character is meant to be the person the reader follows that propels a story forward ( if there was even a story in this hehe ) and Charlotte is not that . She moved to Australia because of the Husband- her only Friend Carol forces her to make friends by initiating friendship first-Nicholas gives her the money she needs to go back to Australia .... and so on . This makes for a) a boring character and b) an un interesting story (tbhitsalsolowkeylazywrittenwithjusttoolongdrawnoutdescriptionsthataresoonthenosewithitssymbolism) .
This main character also seems to have ONE emotion , always . Idk maybe the writers goal was to shed light on marriage and motherhood and how it’s just ... always miserable ect BUT NOT ONCE does Charlotte over come anything , she learns ABSOLUTELY NOTHING . Aside from supposedly being a painter , THiS chick just mopes around all day . Given the passiveness , she makes 0 effort on any of the SPOON FED opportunities she’s given . Crikey . Also she’s a terrible Mother ( also the point of the book but it seems Lowkey titf ?? Like seriously ) CHARLOTTES character then takes a giant swerve from little to no build up . She just has sex with Nicholas , dumps her kids and leaves for Perth . Like it truly wasn’t really built up at all , we don’t see any of her thoughts leading to this , we get like one sentence after the sex scene and then she’s packing. It’s so sudden and it’s just a roller coaster of a whirlwind from there , I’ll get into that later ....
Here we go , now here’s some word on the Husband. After finishing a court of mist and fury , we have a bit of a chanel vs Walmart situation. It’s almost cruel to compare our fave bub rhysand to Henry , but that’s the risk of choosing what book to read next after ACOMAF. hahahah blessup
Henry is ,, something . He forces his family to move across to Australia , cool . And yes it’s the 60s and he’s English with Indian ethnicity, we love diversity !!! But that’s only addressed like once , subtly, its not a huge driving part of the story since we need to make sure we keep checking back to Charlotte’s wonderful mood so often. It’s a complicated thought to unpack but really , when you’re writing a book you make creative choices that serve purpose to the narrative, and you really could have swapped Henry to be of any ethnic background and it really wouldn’t have mattered that much, aside from very randomly chucked in scenes from India which really were just there to justify the choice of Henry. It’s tough to express but yeah , divesity for the sake of diversity Perhaps??? I think this would have been a personal choice? maybe to justify 'the why' behind the time period idk i just vibe that. Anyway, He’s a writer but never gets anything done ... same. And yeah he only mentions that his mother is dying in Delhi in the last like 70 pages, so that was a bit of an obvious ran out of ideas thing OR it’s the cliche of , ‘once the Husband is gin, the Wife can finally cheat!1!!!!!11’ . The Mother is not metioned even once before he runs off.. it’s all Very very sudden and abrupt. It disrupts the entire flow of the book and it spirals from there, yes more on this later . Henry is a bit controlling, very demanding and means well I suppose. They shouldn’t have married in the first place which is the point of the story , too many differences, the marriage was doomed from the start. Which I guess is intresting but its mostly irritating but again, the purpose of the book i guess :D
Now let me tell you . The . Ending . Was. SOMETHING . WOWIE. It just became a different book ?? It was so bad . In like 2 pages Charlotte just becomes a hotel cleaner? or at the universty??? And then Henry meets her at the hotel because she starts stealing his things ?? Sorry what ???? God this Charlotte chic is an absolute nightmare I mean , I feel no empathy for her at all . I know I should and the author wants me to because that’s her profound point ™️ but???? Like I felt nothing the entire book . Anyway so basically she becomes like some spy type thing and she goes to see the kids then leaves again and that’s the end . Like no closure, no answers there’s just an abrupt ending . I suppose you’re supposed to ponder ‘the hardships of marriage ‘ or ‘ the powerlessness of being a Mother ‘ or even ‘the purpose of home’ but look I feel like this isn’t Achieved well at all. LIEK throughout the whole thing I get what’s being put forward, I get the message , cool , but it’s not ??? Good ??? Like,, the book isn’t enjoyable.
-there’s little to no plot
-there was almost 0 point to writing this in the 60s , this couldn’t have taken place at any time anywhere , why have that time period ? It didn’t really impact any of the story except technology and means of travel
- Charlotte is unlikeable , no one is likeable
-I can’t name one scene that made me feel anything / was fun to read about
-Nicholas was random and was literally an ex macenna for when anything went sideways .
- carol did 0 for the plot
-there are a lot of scenes that just serve no purpose and add nothing to the story , maybe they’re suppose to build setting or express insightfulness , this doesn’t hit the mark really for me
- the need to move overseas to Australia was very random like no consequences of Australian life really mattered in the greater scheme of things , besides showing Charlotte that Henry is a dicky guy that will do as he pleases, but really it could have just as easily all taken place in England , and we’d wind up the same way in the end
- NOTHING REDEEMABLE , where is the enjoyment for anyone ???? Who would pick up this book ???? Maybe somebody with pregnancy experience might ? Maybe connect with what Charlotte feels buttheactualwritingofthebookdragssohard.
Look this book wasn’t for me at all , and I feel bad for bashing it but I just want to remember my thoughts for when exams roll around x cya later Charlotte it’s acowar time .