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Watching
“Do you like to watch?” He whispers this question into my ear as he tugs my thong to the side.
I don't answer him, but stay there in the shadows, and watch the couple in the VIP room. I can't look away. Watching them is turning me on more than anything ever has before.
Do I like to watch?
Yes…
** This book is intended for mature readers due to language and adult situations. Also, Watching is a novella and is approx 92 pages in print format.
I don't answer him, but stay there in the shadows, and watch the couple in the VIP room. I can't look away. Watching them is turning me on more than anything ever has before.
Do I like to watch?
Yes…
** This book is intended for mature readers due to language and adult situations. Also, Watching is a novella and is approx 92 pages in print format.
70 pages, Kindle Edition
Published October 24, 2015
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December 17, 2017
"God, I want him. I want to strip right down to nothing in the parking lot and ride him like my life depends on it."
DNF at 22%
I am mad.
I am fucking furious.
I don't think I have ever 'hated' a book much like I do this one.
If a young girl picked this book up and learn't that everything inside it was okay.
If you picked this book up and thought that fucking objectification of women was okay.
If anyone, in the 21st century fighting for women's equality picked this damn book up.
The system would collapse.
So I am mad, you guys.
I am so so mad.
_________________
Why Alex's Ears Are Blowing Fire
→Here's the thing about 'being sexy':
I 100% agree that consent falls under 'being sexy'.
If anyone participating in sex does not give consent - it is rape, and a violation of basic human rights.
→Here's another thing about 'being sexy':
I read a lot of dark romance, and yes. I read the trigger warnings about rape, and abuse etc. All themes that violate basic human rights. Moreover, sometimes I do give those books high ratings.
THIS DOES NOT GO TO SAY THAT I CONDONE RAPE.
Far fucking from it. I will only ever give a high rating to a book that touches upon rape, if that said book grows from it. If it teaches the reader that it is not okay, that it is in fact a violation of basic human rights.
→Here's the thing about Watching:
There is no rape in Watching.
It is all consensual sex. The girl was attracted to the guy, and wanted him. And the other way around.
But there are a myriad of ways that one can cover up consensual sex, and really it's something much more fucking gruesome.
A Timeline
Now, I only read to the 22% mark, because anything after, I shit you not - I would have killed my poor kindle and let's be honest... that's never going to happen. But I'm going to walk you through a timeline of some of the statements made through this book.
Please ask yourself, if you had/have a daughter or a son - or if you yourself at a young age would allow to read this book. If you would want someone saying this to them.
1) "He shakes his head, a small grin playing at his lips. “If you worked for me, I’d be facing a sexual harassment suit day one.”
2) “I’ve been picturing you in my bed since this morning. I’m attracted to you. I think you’re attracted to me. Why play games?”
3) "His lips are on mine before I have a chance to react. All day I’ve worried over seeing him again, over being so attracted..."
4) “I’m not asking you to dinner. I’m not saying I never will, but right now, after thinking about filling you with my dick all day, and after that kiss, fuck.”
5) "His eyes lower back to between my legs and I flatten my hands against his car to hold myself upright. “Tomorrow night, this pussy is mine.” I gasp. “What?”
I'm also going to add this little tidbit in here:
This was all after they have known each other for around 5 hours.
Misc.
There are also a plethora of other reason's why this book didn't work for me. However, I feel like the above should be reason enough. Nevertheless, since this is a review of the book. I feel obliged to talk about the other elements that lead to me disliking this book further.
- There was little to no character development. It felt very static
- It sounded like a teenager was narrating, which made the above situation very easy for me to gag.
- She gulps more times than she speaks
- Very rarely can authors pull off first person, present tense. This one did not.
I ensure to write my reviews with respect towards the author and anyone involved in the love towards the book. I apologize if I couldn't for this one. I really can't get myself to.
DNF at 22%
I am mad.
I am fucking furious.
I don't think I have ever 'hated' a book much like I do this one.
If a young girl picked this book up and learn't that everything inside it was okay.
If you picked this book up and thought that fucking objectification of women was okay.
If anyone, in the 21st century fighting for women's equality picked this damn book up.
The system would collapse.
So I am mad, you guys.
I am so so mad.
_________________
Why Alex's Ears Are Blowing Fire
→Here's the thing about 'being sexy':
I 100% agree that consent falls under 'being sexy'.
If anyone participating in sex does not give consent - it is rape, and a violation of basic human rights.
→Here's another thing about 'being sexy':
I read a lot of dark romance, and yes. I read the trigger warnings about rape, and abuse etc. All themes that violate basic human rights. Moreover, sometimes I do give those books high ratings.
THIS DOES NOT GO TO SAY THAT I CONDONE RAPE.
Far fucking from it. I will only ever give a high rating to a book that touches upon rape, if that said book grows from it. If it teaches the reader that it is not okay, that it is in fact a violation of basic human rights.
→Here's the thing about Watching:
There is no rape in Watching.
It is all consensual sex. The girl was attracted to the guy, and wanted him. And the other way around.
But there are a myriad of ways that one can cover up consensual sex, and really it's something much more fucking gruesome.
A Timeline
Now, I only read to the 22% mark, because anything after, I shit you not - I would have killed my poor kindle and let's be honest... that's never going to happen. But I'm going to walk you through a timeline of some of the statements made through this book.
Please ask yourself, if you had/have a daughter or a son - or if you yourself at a young age would allow to read this book. If you would want someone saying this to them.
1) "He shakes his head, a small grin playing at his lips. “If you worked for me, I’d be facing a sexual harassment suit day one.”
2) “I’ve been picturing you in my bed since this morning. I’m attracted to you. I think you’re attracted to me. Why play games?”
3) "His lips are on mine before I have a chance to react. All day I’ve worried over seeing him again, over being so attracted..."
4) “I’m not asking you to dinner. I’m not saying I never will, but right now, after thinking about filling you with my dick all day, and after that kiss, fuck.”
5) "His eyes lower back to between my legs and I flatten my hands against his car to hold myself upright. “Tomorrow night, this pussy is mine.” I gasp. “What?”
I'm also going to add this little tidbit in here:
This was all after they have known each other for around 5 hours.
Misc.
There are also a plethora of other reason's why this book didn't work for me. However, I feel like the above should be reason enough. Nevertheless, since this is a review of the book. I feel obliged to talk about the other elements that lead to me disliking this book further.
- There was little to no character development. It felt very static
- It sounded like a teenager was narrating, which made the above situation very easy for me to gag.
- She gulps more times than she speaks
- Very rarely can authors pull off first person, present tense. This one did not.
I ensure to write my reviews with respect towards the author and anyone involved in the love towards the book. I apologize if I couldn't for this one. I really can't get myself to.
October 23, 2017
4.25 Captivating Stars!
Dirty, Sexy Hot,
An chance encounter, becomes a Senual
Exploration, Jack has awakened Celia's hidden
desires.... sexually descriptive, tingle inducing..
And Oh So Hot...a bedtime read!
on to the next book... ;)
"Do you like to Watch"
Dirty, Sexy Hot,
An chance encounter, becomes a Senual
Exploration, Jack has awakened Celia's hidden
desires.... sexually descriptive, tingle inducing..
And Oh So Hot...a bedtime read!
on to the next book... ;)
"Do you like to Watch"
November 15, 2015
In this gripping story, two couples play an erotic game of voyeurism/exhibitionism and find out why it's such a sexy rush. Each person's excitement amplifies the other's arousal. But how far they go to satisfy their sexual fetiche that's fuelled by their sexual fantasies?
They say a voyeur and an exhibitionist are a match made in fetishism heaven. One loves to watch, the other loves to be watched. Sharing intimacy and fantasies is such a big turn on and these two couples get to know how voyeurism fuels their sexual engines.
I liked it, it wasn't super deep in plot but it was short and very erotic. I just wanted a bit more of emotional interaction between them. The idea of watching others have sex and guide them how to perform...have to get book 2.
Complimentary copy kindly provided by the author in exchange for a fair review.
They say a voyeur and an exhibitionist are a match made in fetishism heaven. One loves to watch, the other loves to be watched. Sharing intimacy and fantasies is such a big turn on and these two couples get to know how voyeurism fuels their sexual engines.
I liked it, it wasn't super deep in plot but it was short and very erotic. I just wanted a bit more of emotional interaction between them. The idea of watching others have sex and guide them how to perform...have to get book 2.
Complimentary copy kindly provided by the author in exchange for a fair review.
November 17, 2015
Holy Hell this was a steaming hot read. Yeah, it's short and sweet, but it's also amazingly HOT! Super freaking sexy Jack introduces sweet innocent Celia to a bit of voyeurism in the nightclub he manages,
Jack was quite the filthy talker too (my favorite), and I couldn't get enough of his dirty words. I was totally in love with this story from the first page. Loved every second of this story and I cannot wait to get my hands on the sequel as soon as it comes out.
October 25, 2015
Warning, do not read this book if you are sitting in line of the carpool lane waiting for you kids to get out of school. You will be panting hard and parents will notice. True story!
Watching is the story of Celia and Jack. Celia is waiting in line for her coffee at the local coffee house when it is robbed and someone gets hurt. Coming to Celia's aid is Jack. The chemistry is instant and wasting no time Jack lets Celia know he wants to see her again.
Jack is the sexy manager of the hot trendy club Boom. Inviting Celia to see him at Boom, their attraction explodes and alot can happen in the V.I.P room.
This is one hot panty melting read! The relationship between Celia and Jack happens fast and you can't help but get swept up. This book hits on desires that many want but are too afraid to feel. I love that Celia trusted Jack enough to let go of her insecurities and explore her sexuality. Jack was just as obsessed with Celia, he didn't play it cool and try to control her. He was supportive of Celia stepping out of her comfort zone. I loved this book and can't wait to read Vol 2.
Nikki
Watching is the story of Celia and Jack. Celia is waiting in line for her coffee at the local coffee house when it is robbed and someone gets hurt. Coming to Celia's aid is Jack. The chemistry is instant and wasting no time Jack lets Celia know he wants to see her again.
Jack is the sexy manager of the hot trendy club Boom. Inviting Celia to see him at Boom, their attraction explodes and alot can happen in the V.I.P room.
This is one hot panty melting read! The relationship between Celia and Jack happens fast and you can't help but get swept up. This book hits on desires that many want but are too afraid to feel. I love that Celia trusted Jack enough to let go of her insecurities and explore her sexuality. Jack was just as obsessed with Celia, he didn't play it cool and try to control her. He was supportive of Celia stepping out of her comfort zone. I loved this book and can't wait to read Vol 2.
Nikki
May 22, 2018
all I can say is.....HOT.......HOT.......HOT
July 10, 2024
Will review later
Celia
Jackson (Jack)
Drew
Whatever that other girl name was (Emily? Emilia? What was that girl’s name)
It’s Elle’s
What I want to talk about:
The writing
The dialogue
The characters
Pacing (I thought I’d seen worse)
Reads like a wattpad story but not a good way)
Quality over quantity
Boring main characters
Sex scenes were whatever🤷🏽♀️
Cringy nicknames 😔
Cover
Do I have a watching kink when reading⁉️
Prescott would’ve loved this 😭
Celia
Jackson (Jack)
Drew
Whatever that other girl name was (Emily? Emilia? What was that girl’s name)
It’s Elle’s
What I want to talk about:
The writing
The dialogue
The characters
Pacing (I thought I’d seen worse)
Reads like a wattpad story but not a good way)
Quality over quantity
Boring main characters
Sex scenes were whatever🤷🏽♀️
Cringy nicknames 😔
Cover
Do I have a watching kink when reading⁉️
Prescott would’ve loved this 😭
Read
January 27, 2016ARC provided by Enticing Journey Book Promotions for review
Jeeeeeeeeeesus Christ! This serial: Watching, Watched & Watch, was so ridiculously freaking sexually intense that if your girlie parts weren't screaming for attention while you read it, you might wanna get yourself checked out ... just sayin.
I am SO fortunate to have been able to receive all three of these episodes at once. I have no idea how anyone read these with a pause. I jumped from one to the other straight thru without a single pause. They aren't lengthy, so I was able to do it in one sitting, but I can tell you right now that even if they were lengthy, I wouldn't have stopped!! #TRUTH
Watching: Volume 1
This is an introduction of sorts. Our heroine learns she is a voyeur with the help of our hero and his club. I can't say there's much more than frikkin hot sex going on in this episode, but it doesn't matter because more will come ...
Watched: Volume 2
This episode begins right where we left off ... But the tables get turned...The watchers now become the watched. And holy frikking shit it gets hotter!
Watch: Volume 3
The conclusion, if you will, of this incredible little piece of literary deliciousness was so perfect, that I'm finding it hard to tell you about it. Our heroine has a decision to make about her sexuality and needs and it could possible blow up in her face ... or not :) ~~ You're gonna have to read to find out!
I cannot stress enough the importance of knowing that these three stories do not stand on their own. Their episodes that when put together make up a scorching hot read. If you're looking for a quick, sexy, dirty and satisfying read ... look no more #TRUST
Jeeeeeeeeeesus Christ! This serial: Watching, Watched & Watch, was so ridiculously freaking sexually intense that if your girlie parts weren't screaming for attention while you read it, you might wanna get yourself checked out ... just sayin.
I am SO fortunate to have been able to receive all three of these episodes at once. I have no idea how anyone read these with a pause. I jumped from one to the other straight thru without a single pause. They aren't lengthy, so I was able to do it in one sitting, but I can tell you right now that even if they were lengthy, I wouldn't have stopped!! #TRUTH
Watching: Volume 1
This is an introduction of sorts. Our heroine learns she is a voyeur with the help of our hero and his club. I can't say there's much more than frikkin hot sex going on in this episode, but it doesn't matter because more will come ...
Watched: Volume 2
This episode begins right where we left off ... But the tables get turned...The watchers now become the watched. And holy frikking shit it gets hotter!
Watch: Volume 3
The conclusion, if you will, of this incredible little piece of literary deliciousness was so perfect, that I'm finding it hard to tell you about it. Our heroine has a decision to make about her sexuality and needs and it could possible blow up in her face ... or not :) ~~ You're gonna have to read to find out!
I cannot stress enough the importance of knowing that these three stories do not stand on their own. Their episodes that when put together make up a scorching hot read. If you're looking for a quick, sexy, dirty and satisfying read ... look no more #TRUST
November 3, 2015
"Do you like to watch?"
Hell yes.
I couldn't put this down. It is a fast read, but it packs a punch with the steam factor.
Christ on a cracker I need to get my hands on "Watched". Jack and Celia are smoking hot and I cannot wait to peek back in on them!
Hell yes.
I couldn't put this down. It is a fast read, but it packs a punch with the steam factor.
Christ on a cracker I need to get my hands on "Watched". Jack and Celia are smoking hot and I cannot wait to peek back in on them!
October 31, 2015
I recently got this one. Not something I usually read, but I wanted to give it a chance.
It deffinietly was interesting, and hot. Made me want to read the next one.
If you are looking for a quick, steamy read - I definitely recommend this one.
It deffinietly was interesting, and hot. Made me want to read the next one.
If you are looking for a quick, steamy read - I definitely recommend this one.
January 20, 2016
This was hot, dirty and short. Loved every minute of it.
Read
January 30, 2016DNF at 65% My brain couldn't take anymore
November 2, 2015
Hot quick sexy read!
Stopping by her favorite coffee shop on her way to work, Celia witnesses a robbery. Realizing one of the employees has been shot, she's obviously upset and basically shuts down. When a handsome stranger comes to her aid, she's unsure whether he's real or her imagination. The chemistry between Celia and Jack is not only instant, but intense. He offers to drive her to work and then asks if she'll meet him the next night at the night club he manages. Things heat up rather quickly and Jack and Celia start a hot, steamy romance.
In addition to Jack and Celia, let's not forget his sexually adventurous friends. Yep - hot.
This was volume one of a series. I'm not sure how many more there will be or when the next one will be released, but I'm looking forward to spending more time with these two and seeing where their relationship goes.
Stopping by her favorite coffee shop on her way to work, Celia witnesses a robbery. Realizing one of the employees has been shot, she's obviously upset and basically shuts down. When a handsome stranger comes to her aid, she's unsure whether he's real or her imagination. The chemistry between Celia and Jack is not only instant, but intense. He offers to drive her to work and then asks if she'll meet him the next night at the night club he manages. Things heat up rather quickly and Jack and Celia start a hot, steamy romance.
In addition to Jack and Celia, let's not forget his sexually adventurous friends. Yep - hot.
This was volume one of a series. I'm not sure how many more there will be or when the next one will be released, but I'm looking forward to spending more time with these two and seeing where their relationship goes.
March 15, 2016
Hooolleeee Freakin Hell, this book was everything it said it was going to be and so much more. The Sex in this book is Incredibly erotic.
It was beyond Smokin hot from the front cover to the Dedication this book delivered. Yes Jack was the epitome of Hotness and yes Celia was the self confessed good girl/gone bad but together they were off the charts.
Once Celia meets Elle and Drew she is transported to a place she never knew. Celia is on a journey if learning things she never knew about herself and Jack is more than willing an able to take her on this journey. Where will it lead Celia and Jack, can this new self discovery take them to new heights in every way possible or will it drive a wedge between them???
It was beyond Smokin hot from the front cover to the Dedication this book delivered. Yes Jack was the epitome of Hotness and yes Celia was the self confessed good girl/gone bad but together they were off the charts.
Once Celia meets Elle and Drew she is transported to a place she never knew. Celia is on a journey if learning things she never knew about herself and Jack is more than willing an able to take her on this journey. Where will it lead Celia and Jack, can this new self discovery take them to new heights in every way possible or will it drive a wedge between them???
February 25, 2016
*****3 1/2 STARS*****
This is an erotica novella. I enjoyed most of this story and especially the ending but for some reason it didn't grab my attention completely. I didn't have a problem putting it down and coming back. I'm not sure if it's because it was an erotica I preferred to read it when I was alone or if it's because the book I read prior to this one still impacted me. It's hard to tell. If you are looking for an erotica than this is a good book to pick up.
This is an erotica novella. I enjoyed most of this story and especially the ending but for some reason it didn't grab my attention completely. I didn't have a problem putting it down and coming back. I'm not sure if it's because it was an erotica I preferred to read it when I was alone or if it's because the book I read prior to this one still impacted me. It's hard to tell. If you are looking for an erotica than this is a good book to pick up.
October 23, 2015
I received an arc of this book. I would call this a short story rather than a book. While I'm ok with erotica as long as there is a story to support it there really was not much of anything other than sex. No real character development. Not sure if I even like the two main characters since all they do is have sex or watch their friends have sex.
November 12, 2015
5 scorching hot, dirty stars!
Well I wasn't sure whether I would like this type of story but wow how wrong I was! This author doesn't mess about it's a great quick read. I found it hot and dirty and probably not one you want to read at work or even in Public! Great debut and I look forward to the next instalment!!!
Well I wasn't sure whether I would like this type of story but wow how wrong I was! This author doesn't mess about it's a great quick read. I found it hot and dirty and probably not one you want to read at work or even in Public! Great debut and I look forward to the next instalment!!!
October 19, 2015
Oh. My. God. This book is everything I expected and needed. It's oh so hot and steamy! I can not wait to see what happens next! ** I received this book in exchange for an honest review. **. So good I could not put it down.
November 7, 2015
So erotic
Hot..a quick ride on the wild side. Left me wanting more. Panting and breathless. Left me on a cliff. What will happen next?
Hot..a quick ride on the wild side. Left me wanting more. Panting and breathless. Left me on a cliff. What will happen next?
November 11, 2015
Whoa, very hot little story! Believable instalove and I surprisingly connected from the beginning which is odd for a novella. I can't even explain how much I loved Jack! Can't wait to read Watched.
March 31, 2016
Great quick read. Quick as in a 1.5 hour hot sexy read.
January 27, 2016
Wow.... Just wow
April 26, 2016
4.25 Stars
So far, so good...Not much plot, but steamy sex scenes. I think it's hilarious that the author dedicated the book to her two favourite male porn stars.
So far, so good...Not much plot, but steamy sex scenes. I think it's hilarious that the author dedicated the book to her two favourite male porn stars.
December 14, 2016
3.5 stars. I liked this one but felt a bit rushed with no actual plot. Still, the ending made me purchase book 2 instantly.
August 8, 2017
Wish I hadn't have jumped in with both feet and bought the entire series - there's no storyline, just a lot of (repetitive) sex.
May 5, 2023
This book was a great short story. Once again I found myself sat giggling and coy at a book.
The storyline wasn't strong, there wasn't character development but honestly that isnt why I chose to read this book. However I do think there could have been a bit more around how they met and them as people. Nothing crazy, just a bit more detail. I feel like I don't really know much about the characters.
The sex scenes were incredible. The dancing and office scene are the first to really get you into the idea of how the rest of the book is going to go. I love the idea of her just bumping into this guy and suddenly having a whirlwind life with him. The development of their relationship isn't realistic but it's hot.
The final scene of the book is wonderful, the setting, the people involved, the equipment. Total fantasy.
Overall happy with the book, it was exactly what I wanted. If it was to be a bigger book you could expect a lot more character development, learn more about them and their friends as people. I think it has potential to be a bigger book with more indepth storyline BUT I do love it as it is. A nice short smut book to slot inbetween my thriller/detective go to genres.
The storyline wasn't strong, there wasn't character development but honestly that isnt why I chose to read this book. However I do think there could have been a bit more around how they met and them as people. Nothing crazy, just a bit more detail. I feel like I don't really know much about the characters.
The sex scenes were incredible. The dancing and office scene are the first to really get you into the idea of how the rest of the book is going to go. I love the idea of her just bumping into this guy and suddenly having a whirlwind life with him. The development of their relationship isn't realistic but it's hot.
The final scene of the book is wonderful, the setting, the people involved, the equipment. Total fantasy.
Overall happy with the book, it was exactly what I wanted. If it was to be a bigger book you could expect a lot more character development, learn more about them and their friends as people. I think it has potential to be a bigger book with more indepth storyline BUT I do love it as it is. A nice short smut book to slot inbetween my thriller/detective go to genres.
August 24, 2022
Book was far to short, to fast paced, and kinda cringy. You barraly learn about the characters, the interactions seemed forced and not realistic. Honestly the book felt rushed and I found it disappointing. I saw some good reviews for it but it it did not live up to expectations. The characters are one-dimensional they were essentially cookie cutter characters. The characters seemed to have nothing going for them and there interactions just felt fake. I dont expect much from the other books in this series but due to the fact that they average about 70 pages per book I will read them but very low expectations for the next two books
August 3, 2017
This very short novella was extremely hot. A robbery brings two unlikely people together & the very hot relationship begins with direct honesty as to what Jack wants with Celia. It doesn't seem possible for their relationship to get any hotter but as they move forward in it they're chemistry just heats up even more. This book was written well & kept your temperature raised throughout. If your looking for a quick very hot read.....this is it. Recommended.
July 10, 2021
I am still not sure what to think about the kink but damn, overall this novella is spicy hot! This author sure knows how to write erotica. I'd definitely give her that. If you are in the mood for just the sexy, erotic parts, then this book is for you.
May 2, 2018
Wow what a hot story couldn’t put it down and can’t wait to see what happens next.
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