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272 pages, Paperback
First published September 4, 2008
Although it is rarely presented as such, this kind of circular reasoning—X succeeded because X had the attributes of X—pervades commonsense explanations for why some things succeed and others fail. For example, an article on the success of the Harry Potter books explained it this way: “A Cinderella plot set in a novel type of boarding school peopled by jolly pupils already has a lot going for it. Add in some easy stereotypes illustrating meanness, gluttony, envy, or black-hearted evil to raise the tension, round off with a sound, unchallenging moral statement about the value of courage, friendship, and the power of love, and there already are some of the important ingredients necessary for a match-winning formula.” In other words, Harry Potter was successful because it had exactly the attributes of Harry Potter, and not something else. [emphasis mine]
* Is the scene in verse or prose? Or both? If both, why does it switch from one to the other?
* If it’s verse, is it regular iambic pentameter, or does the metre jump around all over the place? If it’s irregular, what might that be saying about a character’s state of mind?
* Are the speeches complicated or simple – i.e., are there mid-line endings, shared or short lines of metre?
** If there are mid-line endings, what kind of emotions might be making the characters interrupt themselves?
** If there are shared lines of metre, what does that say about the characters’ relationship?
** If there are short lines of metre, what might the character be doing or thinking in the gap?
* Do the characters use thou/you to each other? If they do, do they switch between the two? If they switch, why do they switch?
* Are there any characters in the scene that don’t speak? Why are they there? How does it help the story to have them there?