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We’ve all made a wish we’ve regretted, but what if you’ve asked an archdemon like Belphegor to grant it?

When Ella agrees to help fellow student Jonathan Trent with his audition into a mysterious magic, she never thought she’d fall in love with him. Nor did she ever conceived the three freakish judges named Hellmouth, Brimstone and Blackheart were actual demons, sent by Belphegor to recruit Jonathan.

Seduced by the lure of riches, his own Vegas show and not having to care for his aged grandparents, Jonathan enters into Belphegor’s service, and despite her own reservations Ella goes with him, in return for Belphegor making her disabled sister walk.

Then when Jonathan starts to behave like the ‘The Demon Magician’ offstage and Ella learns the true price of his gruesome magic tricks, she knows she has to stop him, but what can she do? Jonathan, has the power of Hell on his side and all she has is Matthew, her mum’s hunk of a gardener, who has no idea the demon world exists.

236 pages, Kindle Edition

Published October 29, 2015

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Profile Image for Vicki.
1,206 reviews178 followers
November 24, 2016
Although this is out of my normal genre, I read it because of Indie Author day and I have to say I was surprised that I was reading such an intelligent and filling story. There were moments where I was frustrated that Jonathan was so easily led and then moments where I was proud of the choices that Ella made.

Such good writing made me enjoy a story that was a little out of my usual pick. This book would be an excellent choice for people that enjoy a good fantasy book with characters that mature and grow through the book.
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927 reviews78 followers
November 10, 2018
The plot definitely deserves a huge credit for bringing in something new that had so many layers and plot twists that least the book stands apart in its genre in terms of plot and the core theme.

The demon Magician didn’t resonate with me for two things. One that the book almost starts abruptly without giving us a full background on the characters and situations that culminated into the events from where the book opens to. So while you can understand everything that is being said and happening in a particular instance, you actually dont have a clue about the bigger picture. Only just the events that is taking place and i personally don’t feel comfortable with that because without being able to see the before and after of a particular scene, you can’t fully immerse yourself into the story. Technically i understood everything that happened in the plot but not the plot in its exact form. I am not sure of the characters as to where did they come from and most importantly how things landed in the place from where the book starts.

Second part is the lack of proper depth into each scenes but then that can be overlooked. But i did wish that there was a bit more stagnancy to each scene so that a proper comprehension of the scene was possible and giving time to know and understand each of these characters more perfectly and in alignment to the plot.

The plot had so much potential to it. I loved the basic theme and story plot. All i wished more for the book was a bit introduction to the plot before it almost starts with the crux of the plot and leaving us bereft of the background details that could make all the difference.Secondly a bit more depth and layers to the plot would have made a huge difference. 

The demon Magician can be a good pick for you if you have been going through repetitive plots and are looking for something that is different to read. The only problem is that the book can be all about the surface. What you read is what you get. Nothing in terms of background or added attributes that could give a bit more clarity for the events and the characters. Then again the book is perfect to break the monotony of usual plots because the book definitely has a plot that keeps you guessing.



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233 reviews7 followers
May 24, 2020
2.5/5

*I was provided with a copy of this book by the publisher, in exchange for my honest opinion.

I didn't really have any expectations going in to this and so I wasn't that disappointed that I happened not to like it too much. The premise was intriguing and while it did deliver what it said it would in the synopsis, I couldn't help but feel that it didn't reach its full potential. Firstly, I wasn't that crazy about the writing, it didn't really offer anything to the story for me, it was just okay. The writing also made this seem like the target audience was a bit younger than I thought it was going to be. I also wasn't that keen on the world that the author crafted. The whole demon and angel thing felt slightly childish at times, Johnathan's number plate was literally 'DEM0N1'...
and it wasn't the way I thought that this was going to be executed.

The main character, Ella, was also only okay. I completely didn't like her at first, because she was quite shallow and rude, but she changed a lot after the time shift in the book. Although she changed, I still felt a bit indifferent towards her, I wouldn't say I liked her or hated her. I did feel sorry for her though, because of the way Johnathan treated her, but not in the way I would for a character I cared for. One thing that really irks me, is when characters constantly make stupid decisions and I feel like Ella made quite a few of those. Her relationships were also very questionable, everyone seemed so quick to turn their backs on her, her mum, sister and best friend, Suzanne. She simply couldn't catch a break with her family, her mum in particular is constantly lecturing her, “You’ve got what you deserve, my girl,”, it seemed so unnecessary.

A few things in here seemed unrealistic, random or repetitive. Ella's initial attraction to Johnathan came on extremely fast and it was weird to see her behave like it hurt to not be right next to him. She says such wildly in love things and it's only a second after she realises that he's actually not in fact hideous, which was unrealistic to me. One of the issues that I had with the writing, was how random and repetitive it was. The first time Ella likens Matthew to the sun, it was cute, but it kept coming up. There were even some strange descriptions like, 'his jacket that smells of grass and sunshine'. It wouldn't of been so weird if the rest of the writing had been of this nature, but it was so out of place. Ella also believes that Matthew might be her guardian angel, and so she goes on about it a lot! It got annoying after a while, because it was so repetitive, like the sun thing.

Matthew was nice, but I didn't care for him either and there wasn't anything special about his relationship with Ella. It got boring very quickly, when he kept popping up every time she needed help and it all became quite predictable. The thing that he opened up to Ella about didn't have any impact on me, as it felt quite random and rushed. I liked Johnathan at first, but as the novel progressed, I ended up disliking him a lot, which I guess was the aim. But because I really liked him before, it was sad to see what he'd become.

There were two other things that niggled at me in this book. Suzanne is described as having 'an afro of wild brown hair' and the only other description we get is of 'her big fat hippy bum', so I still have no idea whether she's a person of colour or not... There's also a game show scene were the fact that someone was born a man is shared with the whole world, which was so wrong.

Sadly, I didn't enjoy this that much, but I do believe that the premise had massive potential. I just wasn't a fan of the writing, characters or how it was executed as a whole. To be honest, I also felt like the book was far longer than it needed to be. The overall ending of this book wasn't my favourite either. All things considered, I can't see myself recommending it.
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806 reviews23 followers
September 28, 2018
I received a copy from the publisher, The Red Telephone, via netgalley in exchange for an honest review.

Ella is popular, pretty and pretty full of herself, so she is reluctant to help Jonathan, a nerdy outcast who does magic tricks, when he asks for her help to make a great performance for an audition to become a part of an elite, underground club for magicians. She states he's not allowed to talk to her in public, text or call her in public, acknowledge her at all in public, and he is definitely not allowed to tell anyone that she's agreed to help him with his magic show. She soon finds herself really getting to know the quiet boy she brushed off, and finds herself becoming attracted to him. The day of the audition roles around and she finds herself a bit terrified of the three people Jonathan has to impress to be a part of this club. The audition turns out to be nothing more than a ploy, they're not interested in his show, they're interested in his soul. Jonathan ends up selling his soul and putting himself in servitude to the demon Belphagor. Catapult into the future a few years and Jonathan is The Demon Magician, and Ella is his girlfriend and trusty assistant. When Jonathan signs a deal that she just can't stomach, it's a race against the clock to try and find a way out of it, without losing her soul or putting the people she cares about in danger.

Wow, I was pleasantly surprised by this book. I've had it sitting in my TBR for a while now, and decided I should read it. This wasn't at all what I was expecting, and I'm glad. I was originally thinking that this would've been a pretty mediocre story, but I was wrong. It was actually pretty deep when I think about it. I really felt for Ella, and the author did a fantastic job of making you feel just how trapped she became. The whirlwind of emotions between Ella wanting to do the right thing, wanting to try and save Jonathan and hoping that he wasn't completely lost to her, and also wanting to save Matthew once he got involved.

I feel like it also kinda of illustrated the run of a lot of relationship, if you take the demons and the magic out of it of course. Jonathan no longer puts Ella first, everything he does is for his demon master, and all he cares about is fame, fortune and immortality. Ella felt pushed aside, and I believe that can happen in long term relationship, when the couple get comfortable, they tend to take for granted the things that they lived for at the beginning.

I believe this story also raised moral questions. Ella's sister Jenny was wheelchair bound for her whole life, we're told this in the beginning, and this is basically the first thing Jonathan fixes. It raises the question of, if you could help someone you love, at any cost, would you do it? No one can deny that they'd do anything to help their loved ones, even if sometimes it seemed wrong. Ella finds that yes, she has all the money and material possessions in the world, and she can do and say whatever she wants, but at what cost? People are dying, losing their souls, and she gets to go and buy a new dress? She realises this, and even though she can't make up for what she has done in the past, she wants to be a better person going into the future. I feel that this touches on not judging people by their past actions and mistakes, and to give them a chance to prove themselves. Even after she knows that she's lost Jonathan, she still tries to appeal to his 'human' side, hoping that he'll do the right thing. She accepted that she'd lost him eventually, but she still gave him a chance.

I loved the way that this was written, it had a great flow and pace, and really engaged the reader. It was an easy read and I found myself needing to know what happened next. It kept me on the edge of my seat, I kept telling myself 'one more chapter', and I'd find myself 6 chapters later still saying 'just one more chapter'. As stated above, I was incredibly surprised at how deep this book actually was, I was expecting a light superficial read, and I got the complete opposite. The characters were relatable, though I really hated Ella's mum, she's constantly bagging her out for things without listening to Ella's side of the story at all, this annoyed me so much.

All in all, a super enjoyable read, I'm looking forward to reading more by this author!
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113 reviews29 followers
November 9, 2018
I received a free copy of this book through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.

First of all, i really enjoyed this book. I absolutely loved Ella as a protagonist and was rooting for her throughout the whole story. The antagonist was also great, you really saw the shift in personality and increase of violence from them that made them such a threat.

The story was really good - the plot was easy to follow and the dialogue flowed. The arguments and concerns the characters voiced and the way they talked to each other seemed realistic. I didn't find any part of the story to feel cliche or cheesy - i thought it felt like a more authentic take on how you would act or speak to the others around you if you couldn't tell them the truth about such a situation, about awful things that kept happening and how it relates to demons and magic.

This was a good read because story was engaging, the main character always had a new conflict to solve, and the characters and their personalities really stood out.

I rated this book 4 out of 5 stars because although i enjoyed this book i felt like it could have done with more intense scenes to really grip the reader in moments where the character is scared, or needed to include moments where the reader is creeped out by what might happen next in a horror novel.
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1,412 reviews18 followers
September 1, 2017
Uncaged Review: Jonathan wants to be a magician so badly that he’s willing to make a deal with actual demons. It’s up to Ella - his assistant to stop him before things get out of hand. This is my favorite book by Alex Dunn so far. Filled with creepy demons, magic tricks and more. Be careful what you wish for. Reviewed by Jennifer
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September 19, 2025
hey Alex ! , this is shyama . ordering this book asap , oh and we lost contact also feeling bad about that !
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Author 8 books74 followers
March 30, 2016
Reviewed by Carla Trueheart for Readers' Favorite

The Demon Magician by Alex Dunn follows teen Ella as she falls in love with the wrong guy, then the right guy, and ends up in a difficult situation because one of those guys happens to be involved with demons. Ella first finds amateur magician Jonathan repulsive, but after making him over into The Demon Magician persona, she becomes attracted to him and falls in love. But Jonathan has some problems at home that lead him to become involved with menacing demons, and Ella goes along for the ride. Things are fine at first—the demons make it so that Ella’s crippled younger sister Jenny can walk again, and Jonathan’s act as The Demon Magician is really taking off. But soon Ella realizes that both she and Jonathan are in over their heads. Luckily, she is smart enough to back out, even as Jonathan gets sucked in further. When she falls in love with angelic and handsome gardener Matthew, however, she finds she can never leave behind her life as magician’s assistant. Jonathan and the demons just won’t allow that.

What struck me most about The Demon Magician was the interesting concept. Jonathan, like many others who have difficulties in life, takes the easy way out by attaching himself to a world where anything is possible if you give up enough of yourself to attain it. The scenes where Jonathan is doing his Demon Magician acts were the most engaging, and I really would have liked to see more of this, especially in the beginning so I could understand the full depth of Ella’s attraction to him. The magic shows were imaginative, particularly as they grew darker and darker as the book went on. The man who wished to be Elvis Presley and how he received that gift will stay with me for a long time! Author Alex Dunn writes Matthew’s character as the exact opposite of Jonathan, and Ella’s attachment to him shows her growth. I can’t include spoilers, but I will say the ending was done spectacularly. The book is recommended to fans of horror novels and edgy teen reads.
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April 11, 2024
“The Demon Magician” definitely deserves a better cover, because the book is way more cool and beautiful inside than outside. So please, don’t judge this book by its cover. Just dive right into the reading.

I won’t retell you the plot, because you can read it in the annotations. Also, I’ll try my best to not spoil the plot, because it’s so so interesting. I really couldn’t put the book away, because of all the plot’s twists. At a few moments, I thought: “Yeah, I know how this one would end”, but the author kept surprising me. “The Demon Magician” is about demons (mostly) and angels, and with this plot, you’d suppose that author would moralise you about what is good and what is bad. But no, she didn’t! And that’s the best part of it. You can support and sympathise with whomever you want. No one is too bad or too good, everyone has different sides and motives to do what they do.

Also, I liked that there wasn’t any unnecessary descriptions or events in the book. Like at the beginning of the book, where we jump over a few years. Yeah, the author could have described them, but what for? And that’s why “The Demon Magician” is a real page-turner, you just don’t have time to get bored. Something is always happening.

There was one description I loved so much I want to share it with you. We all have books, movies, TV shows, and music we love. And it’s always exciting for me to find a part of what I love in the work of others. So, it was such a nice surprise when Alex Dunn made a comparison of the shop in the book with the Tardis from Doctor Who! It felt like we are on the same wavelength.

I do recommend this book to all YA readers! It’s not scary, by the way. It’s a loss for Horror lovers, but a gain for all others. And though I liked the plot, I wasn’t as much fond of the author’s writing. Not that it was bad, it was just a bit simple for my taste (or maybe it was an effect of reading Donna Tartt just before). But without a doubt, I will read other Alex’s books, because she is definitely a promising author.
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154 reviews5 followers
February 12, 2019
Thank you NetGalley and Red Telephone Books for allowing me to read this book for my honest opinion.
What would you do for a loved one if you were able to make one wish? That is what Jonathen the Demon Magician is allowing people to do. You can make one wish. However, you truly need to watch how you word your wish because that does matter.
For instance if you wish to be a rock star, you will be an actual star shaped rock. Or you wish that you could be like Marylin Monroe, you will be a corpse because that is exactly how she is at this very moment. It is all in the verbiage of the wish.
Ella helps Jonathen become the Demon Magician but he wants more and she wants out. He makes a deal with the devil and life changes.
This story keeps your attention from page one right to the end. There are twists and turns but you are constantly rooting for Ella. No matter what, you are rooting for her to win the battle between good and evil.
You just know that good has to prevail in this case. It has to. Right?
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6 reviews
April 19, 2017
As a practitioner of white magic, this book was well researched. I found that it created a world that a witch's nightmare or quest can finally be seen. I did feel that white magic wasn't that represented in the book, but other than that I have no complaints. It scared me to my core but made me safe all at once when Johnathon used magic. Which is how magic feels all the time. I am recommending this book to anyone who wants to step into or just see how magic can feel.
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251 reviews5 followers
March 6, 2019
I loved Crazy For Alice so I was absolutely excited about reading this book. This book was seriously just as good. It was really fast paced and enjoyable. I didnt really care for Ella in the beginning but she grew on me for sure.
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September 4, 2018
I actually was pleasantly surprised at how much I got into this book. The Demon Magician by Alex Dunn, reads like a little more mature version of R.L. Stein, "Goosebumps".
Jonathan is high school student with a lot of responsibilities. His passion and dream is magic and he has found a sure fire way to achieve greatness, but with a catch - involves dealing with demons, which is never a good idea.
Jonathan enlists the help of fellow student Ella, and despite her reservations if it all, agrees as she has a wish of her own - to heal her sister.
But with everything comes a price and sure enough, Jonathan's come's due. Can Ella save him and everybody else?
The Demon Magician is a fun read with interesting characters, a smooth and stead pace and an all around entertaining plot.
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