"Are you going to be a good boy and do as you're told?" Scott has never been a ladies' man. When he finally starts lifting weights to get the body he's always wanted, his trainer, Gina, takes control and teaches him more about pleasing women than he ever bargained for. The only catch–Scott has to do exactly as he's told. This story contains adult sweet, seductive female domination and BDSM.
Even back in my playground days, I was more interested in tying up my playmates than jumping rope. Today I enjoy translating those fantasies of dominance and control into erotic romances that feature women on top and the men who enjoy bending to their will.
I'm very excited at the opportunity to share my stories with the world. I have a vivid imagination and wide-ranging tastes, so there's something for everyone. If you have any feedback on my writing, please let me know.
Firstly as far as writing ability goes, I'd give this story 3-4 stars. There's a fair amount of telling, I barely got to know the characters but that's the nature of short stories.
The erotic content started out fine but things quickly moved to the ICK factor for me. I've read numerous femdom stories and encountered many kinks but I'll never, ever find some things erotic! No mater the gender of characters or power dynamic.
I don't normally like to give away possible spoilers but had I been forewarned I never would have one clicked this book, free or not.
SPOILERS AHEAD.
This story contains rimming, something I can only just stomach at the best of times. But what nearly killed me was the character being made to suck a phallas clean after it had been up his ass! How that can be seen as erotic or sanitary is totally beyond me. He had no time for an enema first so there would have been fecal matter in his passage. Did I say UGH :/
I realise everyone has different kinks (and triggers) so if you are into rimming, cum chewing, dildo sucking and ass play this short story will not disappoint.
The blurb states this story contains light female domination, which I suppose is open to interpretation!!
It's difficult to find books featuring a Domme that's not a latex-clad fantasy showing off in some swanky club. Not that there's anything wrong with that! But this quick read is a nice change, with a take-charge personal trainer who takes the logical next step to get her student in shape. The pegging scene is also incredibly hot. Recommended to those who enjoy realistic Femdom stories.
This book is something of an *explicit* romance, as well as having explicit erotica and sex scenes. It's also got developed characters, some conflict, and a unforeseen twist in the story, which adds complexity.
I usually am no fan of the romance genre, but I loved this book.
Surprisingly sweet and altogether too short. The story is well edited and the sex scenes are hawt. I enjoyed the pegging as well as the female trainer over powering the male. Would be interested to read a follow up.
I almost loved this. I guess for me, some things are just gross and not erotic as it puts the character at a serious health risk.
But I loved the idea of a personal trainer, training men (as this used to be my old career to put me through school) and helping them with their new way of living. I loved that concept as men change as they train just as women do and it's such a great thing to be a part of and a fun idea to watch unfold on page. I liked her and I even liked him, it just took a bad turn that has me gagging instead of salivating for more.
Plus I love short stories! Love love! So I wish this enticed me more.
The writing style was good, enough detail to allow you to form a mental picture but not too much as to take away from your own images. Many might think the premise of the story is too far fetched but I think similar situations between trainers and clients are more common than you think. Overall, a quick nicely written read.
well, I really liked it, I have to say that I really identified with this book, I go to the gym, but I'm not an instructor, although I often imagine myself giving lessons to some boys!
Gina is Scott’s trainer and we start out with him in the gym with Gina instructing him as to proper form for a bench press. Scott has been skinny and weak all his life. Gina goes home with Scott to see what kind of food he is eating. She sends him to the grocer’s with a list. He will be cooking for both of them and she will teach him. While he is gone, she takes a nice long hot shower. When he returns, he finds her there to his relief. He cooks dinner and Gina serves him dessert.
What Scott had to do was give his best effort doing as Gina told him to do and nothing more.
Gina will be training him in more than just weight lifting.
This is a sensual femdom story and quite wonderfully-imagined.
A good story and a short one hence I think the passivity of the man. No time for resistance. I believed the woman involved as a true strong,modern-day woman,which was amplified by her weightlifting. I got the sense also that a relationship was being contemplated and she lovingly looked out for his well-being while mounding him for her own desires and intentions.
So, if you like fem/dom erotica and a quick read … you can’t go wrong. This is 18 pages and hits all the notes. It has a plausible story and two characters I liked. They did a lot of femdom stuff in a short amount of time. I took a star off for… Well.. I will just say hygiene. Some stuff I just.. no thanks.
4 Stars A really good femdom erotica book, great descriptive words from the author and good events just wish it became a longer series. Pros Great description on words and scenes Good story with good characters
Cons Could of went longer or made into an actual series, like other then gym what else was she really training him for?
Boy would I liked to be trained by this temptress hope there is a follow up could really get into this story. So many possibilities to take this forward. A definite praise for a good start more please.
wholly molly did this make a bitch (me) uncomfy. i didn’t like it. idek how to explain it except i was be scared to meet the woman main character if this wasn’t fiction because she giving major rapist vibes.