Has potential, but...
I wanted to like this book, as the premise was interesting and I wanted to see how it played out. However, if you are going to use a speech-to-text tool to write and then skip the professional (or any) copy editing, your debut novel is not the one to use as a guinea pig. Applause "ceases," it does not "seize." A man of the cloth is a "Reverend," not a "Reverent" (which is an adjective, by the way). Another mistake of new writers is also rampant in this book, namely excessive descriptive phrases rather than actions to define characters and scenes.
That said, Prim and Sage were actually likeable, believable characters. I actually felt vested in their outcomes despite the meager amount of the book I was willing to finish. I'd be happy to see a revised and proofed version and be able to update this review. The author has talent and a creative mind; with more discipline and perhaps professional guidance, this could be a good book.