Abby spills coffee on a sexy stranger, and later discovers that he’s her new boss, Nolan. She doesn’t offer to pay for his dry cleaning, which I think is a little bad mannered, and is a pretty good indicator of what type of person she is.
Her original boss, Liza, is Nolan’s sister and she’s off on maternity leave so Nolan is taking over the office. Abby and Nolan check each other’s sexiness out, and Abby does vague PA jobs finding files and setting up meetings and Nolan does vague business work reading files and going to meetings.
They stare at each other’s naughty bits for a couple of chapters, and then go up to Nolan’s cabin for a weekend of blunt sex. They have some good times, have a few laughs, and admire each other’s prettiness and smarts. It’s all going great, and then Nolan’s dad, who had a heart attack just before the dirty weekend, dies.
And this is by far the most interesting development in the book: because Abby is then stuck not knowing where she stands. Does she offer emotional support as a girlfriend, or was the weekend just a weekend and she’s back to her role of employee? To complicate it even further, she’s jetting off to spend Christmas with her family in St Kitts, and at the funeral, Nolan’s ex-wife is all over Nolan to the extent that Abby is no longer sure just how ‘ex’ she actually is. Abby’s phone isn’t working properly, so she can’t get messages, and it doesn’t even occur to her that she could call/text Nolan herself.
While Abby does have a legitimate amount of confusion over the status of their relationship, she comes off as petulant and self-centred in the face of Nolan’s family tragedy.
Nolan makes a speedy recovery from his grief because he’s discovered that his hated brother-in-law is attempting to steal a significant chunk of family property, and Nolan’s ex-wife has been named as co-inheritor, with Nolan, of 50% of Nolan’s father’s assets. He sets this aside for the moment to focus on exposing the brother-in-law.
And this exposes a big plot flaw, because Nolan now has a big plot adventure that has absolutely nothing to do with Abby, or with romance and sorting out relationships. Even more tellingly, why is the brother-in-law Nolan’s villain, and not his sister’s? The whole plot arc goes down like a procedural, with sections time-stamped, and Nolan investigating leads, and confronting sub-villains and gathering evidence. It’s only after the fact that Nolan visits his sister, cuddles his tiny new nephew and is all ‘by the way, your husband tried to steal from us and had affairs with two women, so probably you should divorce him.’
At least Abby in St Kitts is having romance-related adventures around deciding what she wants from Nolan and from life in general.
So, once Nolan has wrapped up his first villain, his ex-wife strikes. She’s his actual villain, so that whole brother-in-law plot could have been completely left out. The ex has decided that she will force Nolan to love her again by threatening to sell off her shares, thereby destabilising the family business, unless Nolan agrees to end his budding relationship with Abby. Nolan reluctantly agrees.
So when Abby gets back to work, Nolan tells her it’s over and Abby quits and moves to a new city to start a new life in her dream job.
By the time Nolan sorts out his ex-wife’s threat and reunites with Abby, I’d have been happy for this book to end. Instead: the plot reasserts the villain’s additional villainy with the discovery that he murdered Nolan’s dad.
And then it gets even more frustrating, because we’re back to time-stamped sections, and a completely new character, a cop, is introduced to investigate the murder. It’s all set out from the cop’s point of view, and I don’t care about him, and I thought the murder was an unnecessary detail (it’s there to prove that Nolan’s first instinct was correct).
While it’s ‘sensible’ that a cop would investigate a murder, rather than one of the existing characters, it’s a really clunky way of telling a story and added absolutely nothing to the romance.
I never really recovered enough liking for Abby. I’m all for characters having a recognisable human failing, like failing to offer emotional support because they don’t know where they stand, but this wasn’t addressed in the book. Instead, Abby is encouraged to follow her dreams, which has the unfortunate effect of piling self-centredness on self-centredness.
While Nolan is more active in solving his own problems, the situation with his ex-wife sends him into a passive-aggressive role and he comes across as weak. I’d have far preferred him to work through an actual romance ambiguity, where he struggled because he thought a romance with Abby meant he had to sacrifice some long-held view or plan, and then ultimately realised being with her was more than worth it.
Finally, ‘sedition’ is absolutely the wrong word to use in the title of this book, because it has nothing to do with anything in the book. There’s enough early promise for me to leave this book at a three star review, but the whole thing really goes off the rails at around the halfway mark.