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61 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 29, 2014





😈 Substituting the violent noncon 🤜 scene for instead some dubcon 👋 f#cking. I definitely prefer the new version. The old scene was shocking, for obvious reasons, but moreso because it not only contributed to heighten the claustrophobic ambience but it drove in some very unsettling ambiguity that somehow tainted my full enjoyment of the last half of the serial (more on this on the 3rd point below).
😈 Switching the brand on the forehead to a permanent ring around the clït (not a piercing!)... Hmm interesting choice. I think the change is sexy, but I do wonder about the feasibility of the thing in real life. I mean how small could the thing be? And how would it hold at all times? And assuming it held, it would become painful at the critical moment? 😅
😈 Switching the second dubcon sex scene in favour of a soul relinquishing contract (signed in blood!). As much as the original scene was hot, I get why it had to be eliminated. In the original serial, one very disturbing element was the ambiguity in the relationship between Marathin and Selma. In the first three parts, it was not clear that Marathin was not the H of the serial. At times, Marathin appeared cruel and manipulative, while at others, he seemed in love with Selma and caring/possessive of her (albeit creepily). Selma also seemed inconsistent: she desperately wanted to flee Marathin because she feared him, but at the same time, even without the brand influence, she was flattered that he never slept with other patients and at one point even seemed to accept to be with him on her own will. In this rewritten version, things are much more clear: Selma only submitted to pleasure with Marathin because of the ring and when the effects were off, she was clearly resentful with the dubcon situations and all she wanted was trick him until she could escape. Even Marathin was portrayed as more wanting to possess her as a rare find than as a mate he was one-sidedly enamored with. So yeah, ambiguity eliminated. I am not sure I love the contract element but will like to see its impact in Book 2.











