Oh my.
I've read a lot of HPs in my time, and even more romance novels. Not all authors are created equal. There are those who excel at plot. There are those who excel at research and setting. There are those who are excellent at creating believable characters complete with backgrounds and drama. And there are those who are great writers.
Some, like Lynne Graham, are the Twilight writers. I don't say this to denigrate Twilight. C'mon, it takes a certain amount of brass to carry on such a long drawn-out love triangle through that many books. Without sex. Lynne Graham churns out masses of HPs all drawn to the same characters. She's now 60, and man, I wish she would stop writing sex scenes, because they are abhorrent to wade through. Her sex scenes are numerous and repetitive. There's a lot of fierce plunging, which makes me cringe. But her books are always heavy on the romance: most of her heroes are men who have been in love with the heroine since prehistoric days and every cheek crease and grim glance reflect this. She's by no means the best writer in the business; as I've said before, her repetitive adjectives and adverbs are slightly cringeworthy.
But Sally Wentworth. Now, not all of her books are great. But every so often, I run across one of hers that's so fast-paced and action-packed that all you can do is smack your lips and drool:
Purdey is a 19y/o girl who works at a casino seven nights a week and goes to college simultaneously, mostly to help her mom earn money for Purdey's brother, who was premature and blind as a result. A costly procedure is now available for him, but runs to the amount of 65,000 pounds. Purdey is a mature, practical girl because of the trials in her life, and dates, very casually, a 21y/o Alex Nash who came to the casino one night with his friends and fell for Purdey. Alex is the grandson of a Lord Nash and will in turn inherit wealth and holdings. He is a fun, innocent, sweet guy that Purdey likes but is not in love with. One night Alex's uncle, 31y/o Jared, comes into the casino, apparently with friends but also at Alex's mother's behest to check up on Alex. He takes one look at the heavily made-up (club rules) Purdey and instantly classifies her as Grade A gold-digger. Ergo, he sets in place a plan to get rid of her ASAP. He tries to buy her off with 2000 pounds, and when that doesn't work, gets her fired from work. Then, a really angry Purdey decides to make him really sweat for it and raises the amount to 65,000 pounds. That, of course makes him really think lowly of her, but she gets the money and she does as he asks and leaves. There ends chapter 1.
Most authors would drag out that bit for any number of chapters, but good ol' Sally Wentworth's not one of those authors.
Chapter 2 picks up when Purdey has graduated from college and is the first female junior executive at her company, a hotel conglomerate. She is being chatted up by a flirty executive when she feels her thumbs pricking, and soon enough, the villain reappears in her life. It's Jared, and he's there to make sure she's not out to extort money out of anyone else. He thinks badly of her and wants to know why she's at the hotel. By the next day, though, their chance meeting is revealed to be a worse blow for Purdey: Jared's one of the finance directors of her company, and she had to give a report the next day to the higher-ups.
Shenanigans ensue. Purdey tries hard to stay out of his way. Unlike other HP heroines, she seems to actually have a job and comes up with proposals and needs to follow through on them. Like most of Sally Wentworth's heroines, she's intelligent, spirited but not bad-tempered. She knows when she's beaten and doesn't keep hitting her head against a brick wall. And like most of SW's books, it's a well-done third-person limited and there are glimpses into the hero's state of mind - confusion and bewilderment. Sally Wentworth isn't one for long, drawn-out, purple sex scenes, thank goodness.
There was a good rejection punch-in-the-nose from Purdey to Jared, and then she turns the tables around and asks him to marry her when she felt like it. Good for you, awesome heroine you. Per SW MO, there's not a prolonged grovel scene: she's fast-paced even to the finish. As soon as the conflict's resolved, the book's finished. For me, a well-done book doesn't need excessive rehashing.