This is my first book by E.G. Patrick and I can honestly say I have no idea what to think, don’t get me wrong the story is great, Violet is amazing but I’m not sure about the rest of it. For example, when I was reading through I noticed that sometimes there wasn’t enough context to fill in with each scene. When creating a story, you need to make sure that when you are filling in the scenes that all the right details are included otherwise it won’t work to its full potential, it just seemed like there was always something lacking. Another example is that the lead guy character Adam, I just couldn’t find myself loving him as much as I loved Violet. I get that his life is so different from hers and that he’s grown used to the way he’s built his life. However, the way he repeats himself at times, I just don’t see the need for it, you can only say the same thing so many times before you start to get tired of seeing it. I also understand the fact that he is slowly adapting his lifestyle for Violet, yes, that’s such a big step for him, but I honestly think he could give her a bit more of a break. All Violet has done, is be there for him, be understanding and do as he asks, yet he still carries on making life seem impossible for her.
There does seem to be a few unanswered questions that leave you wondering what is actually happening, For example, twice during the book you read that Violet gets a message from an unknown sender, yet she presumes these are advertising people. Yet, I don’t seem to get why she doesn’t mention anything to Adam because surly these messages are about him considering he is the only other guy she seems to be spending time with. Yet the fact she doesn’t shocks me as if this was happening to myself, then the first thing that I would do is mention it to the guy I’m seeing and see what he thought about it as honestly, it’s not exactly normal to receive chilling messages like these about someone. There are a few others that I could bring up but honestly, I feel like I could be here for a while.
At times, it did seem like this book was rushed and it did show sometimes through the writing, it’s a shame because this book could have been done really well and been really amazing, more amazing than it is now.
Bearing in mind, I do have to give E.G. Patrick some credit because she did write an intriguing plot/ story which did keep me reading until the end. I am interested to see what happens next as I can see that this series has potential.