As always, I enjoy Cindy Sample's fun Laurel McKay cozy mysteries. However, with this one I am removing a star because we are in the fifth book of the series wherein Laurel, our protagonist, proves to be more competent, then the Placerville sheriffs department. This would be fine except for the fact that Tom, lieutenant detective and her beau, and new sheriff deputy Ali Reynolds still completely dismiss her information and theories as ridiculous, and are headstrong in their own incorrect hunches.
While I know that is part of integral part of the plot, it does disappoint me that the dialogue written for Tom does not acknowledge Laurel's success in the last four instances in which the sheriff's department has arrested the wrong person and she has caught the right one. Additionally, there's no reflection of how wrong this town sheriffs department consistently is! Even after arresting the wrong person twice, with no bail, there is no remorse or apology to Laurel (or the arresstee) for insisting they were right when they were wrong.
I would not expect the plot to necessarily change. But after four - now five - books, it's a little weird that Tom still dismisses Laurel's insights without acknowledging the pattern of the sheriff's department being completely incorrect. Equally disappointing is the fact that Laurel doesn't bring this up in her dialogue with Tom, and is only obedient and admiring. While Tom might be successful in the field and out of the book's scope, it is hard to respect Tom's competency from what we see in this series.
I hope that the next book, number six, has a little bit more development on that front, or at least acknowledges this pattern and dynamic. Without showing Tom's verifiable good instincts - or ability to move away from wrong initial arrests without any further detective work - it's hard to keep rooting for his relationship with Laurel.