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The Journey Begins

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This is a story of a wolf called Ana and the beginning of her journey. A young wolf Ana loses everything when her family dies, and now with the help of a special friend must find a way to survive the world.

50 pages, Paperback

Published October 24, 2014

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January 31, 2025
Actual rating 2.5/5

Bullet review:
+A concept for a story that works.
+A certain degree of creativity from the author.
-Characters are very bland and forgettable.
-LOTS of errors such as punctuation, formatting and grammar mistakes. This book is not a finished product and needed several more drafts and edits before being published.
-Not a lot of of unique things are done with the plot. It's a very straightforward "defeat the evil pack".
-Character descriptions are far too elaborate and not delivered in an unobtrusive way.
-Main character isn't very proactive until the final book.

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