I’m thinking low four. Maybe I’m rating this a little high. Kinda iffy on some of the stories. Yet I’m giving props for originality (perhaps more accurately, an age focus that is outside my usual wheelhouse) and the fact that one of these stories was adapted into a favorite movie of mine, “Angus”!
Apparently said short, “A Brief Moment in the Life of Angus Bethune,” is the only one that Crutcher did not expand from an already existing novel. In the forward to this piece, he says he wrote it for a friend who was collecting short stories for a YA anthology. This was in 1988, and the YA marketplace was significantly different than it is now. The fantasy resurgence hadn’t taken off full throttle yet.
All of the stories in this collection are contemporary, taking place in small town, “flyover country” America, with a teenage boy at the center, and of course some connection to sports. With Angus, he’s a fat kid who plays football. This is also true in the movie. What didn’t make it to the transition to the silver spring was the fact that Crutcher gave him two sets of gay parents. :o (His biological parents divorced after he was born and each married a same sex partner.)
Honestly, it felt more like a gimmick than anything else. Maybe it’s not surprising that the parts of this story I liked the most were the ones that mapped closely to the movie. Angus gets some witty lines in narration, which make it to voiceover on film. Thematically there’s a lot to do with “having your moment” (the climax of the story revolves around Angus attending a dance as winter king with the winter queen aka his crush, Melissa.) Even more importantly, there’s this metaphor about how it’s outsiders like Angus, not indestructible forces like Superman, who are brave. Angus’s stepdad gets the speech in the book where his grandfather gets it in the movie.
I think a couple of the other stories were gimmicky, too, like “The Other Pin.” In it, high school wrestler Petey Stropshire, has to wrestle a girl from another team, Chris Byers. Her actual gender is a shocker reveal for when Petey and his friends unknowingly run into her at the mall. It ends with them both being uncomfortable and acting out some caveman goof at the match, and I didn’t think any of it was necessarily true to what it would be like for a girl to be on a boy’s wrestling team. Or if it rang true for a girl to be on a boy’s wrestling team.
This is the ’80s, after all, a less socially acceptable time for feminism and diverse expression. In another story, “Telephone Man,” Crutcher attempts to take a deep dive into racism. “The Telephone Man,” aka Jack Simpson, a high schooler who wears telephone equipment on his hip (because he likes to fix telephones?) and has a running, racist commentary in his head, especially against Black people. This comes from his dad, apparently, a racist fencer. The point of the story boils down to a Black school administrator and a fellow student helping Jack out (the latter when Jack is being bullied by a gang of Chinese kids, which both boys call “China men.”) I guess the point is that racism is bad…but also common and used against all non-white groups? I didn’t really get why Jack had this running commentary in his head anyway. I suppose it had to do with some beef with his dad, which wasn’t really developed in the story.
The final kinda “meh” story in the collection was “Goin’ Fishin’.” The main character, Lionel aka Lion’s family was all killed on a lake when a drunk high school swimmer cut their family boat in two (Lion saw impending doom and jumped in the water.) A few years later, the perpetrator, Neal, is dying and strung out on drugs, and there’s a question about whether Lion will forgive him. I mean, it wasn’t bad, but it felt a little melodramatic, and what was with Lion being allowed to live alone at 14 anyway? Maybe this is a commentary on social services in small rural towns? I mostly appreciated how he turned to swimming for solace.
Finally, to end with we have the strongest two stories. I liked “The Pin,” where the antagonism between father and son was definitely laid out. Protagonist Johnny Rivers is a wrestler who gets the chance to publicly wrestle his very fit and antagonistic father. It ends with a rumination on what we today would call toxic masculinity.
But number one in my book is “In the Time I Get,” which handles gay themes with care. Main character at footballer goes to his summer job and is confronted by his boss’s gay nephew, 25-year-old Darren who has returned home to die from AIDS. Louie, of course, starts the story as homophobic as most of the rest of the characters, but he slowly and authentically grows to see Darren as a person. I’m glad something like this could be written during the AIDS epidemic, when homophobia was far more widespread.
So yeah—these YA boys’ stories from the ‘80s…not my usual! “Angus” was filmed in the mid-90s, when I was heading into middle school, so I do sorta think it “speaks” to my generation (there’s also more universal themes. Plus subplots and such that couldn’t be fleshed out in a short story.) I’m glad I gave it a go, and I guess I’m not surprised by my final thoughts about story vs adaptation. A little *shruggy* over all, but with a couple of standouts.