I received a kindle copy of this book through a giveaway and am giving an honest review of the item in return.
I went into this book expecting something entirely different from what I got. I expected it to be all about a girl who wants to get in shape and look good for her high school reunion while falling in love with her trainer.
What I got was a romance between supporting characters that I ended up liking more than the main couple and a bit of a twist that I actually liked and didn't see coming. The ending kind of made the book for me and the secondary romance between Missy and Hawk really held my attention. Also, there was some humor to the book, creative little quips here and there. The "he's a grouch," line made me smile because I thought it was clever. Those are the pros of this book.
The Cons: the main characters are annoying until the end. Tara jumps to conclusions a bit too many times. Jake basically sexually harasses Tara for the whole beginning of the book and the reader is supposed to think its cute or flirtatious. Had I been Tara in this book I would have hightailed it out of the gym quickly, end of book. I had also gone into this expecting to see some kind of slow progress for Tara, more detail in her workouts and how she makes changes in her diet. Instead, the book jumps around by weeks and really only focuses on all the lust that comes over the characters whenever they see each other, which isn't a bad thing usually. Except I really wanted to see the other side of that with love scenes sprinkled here and there. I didn't mind it but I definitely think Missy and Hawk should've had their own book and that the author would have fleshed out Tara and Jake getting together and working together to get reunion ready. Also, while the humor was a pro, it was also a con. There was too much slapstick comedy in this book and I felt a lot of the time that the author couldn't describe it well enough for me to understand it. Lastly, I found a tiny amount of grammatical errors in the book, a missing word occasionally.
In all, the book was okay. I like the premise as I understand wanting to be reunion ready and doubting yourself, but I think the story could've been told a little better.